Unit 6 Rain or Shine.（话题写作指导）（学生版）

Unit6RainorShine.(话题写作指导）【话题分析】本单元的话题为“天气”，要求能围绕这一话题写一篇有关天气情况、人们正在进行的活动和人们感受的短文。在写作过程中，首先要能准确使用描述天气的形容词及句型，并要能正确使用现在进行时描述人们正在进行的活动。常用句型：How'stheweatherin...?What'stheweatherlikein...?It's...Theweatherin...is......am/is/aredoingsth.Now...arehavingagoodtime.【写作实例】“一轮皎洁月当空，佳节团圆欢笑多”。假如你是李华，Jane是你的笔友。今天是中秋节，请写一封信告诉Jane你如何度过中秋节，并根据以下提示完成本文。内容包括：1.天气情况；2.中秋节所做的事情；3.你的感受。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】【教材典句】1、Climbingishard...(SB,1b)2、I’msunbathingatthemoment!(SA,2a)3、...manypeopleherearestillinhighspirits.(SB,1b)4、IstheweathermakingGrandpaSad?(SA,1c)【经典范文】DearJane,TodayisourtraditionalMid-AutumnFestival.Gettingtogetherwithourfamilyisreallyexciting!It'sacoolautumnnight.Themoonisshininginthesky.Weareeatingabigdinnernow.Mygrand-parentsarelookingatthemoon.Myparentsaretalkingwitheachother.Myyoungerbrotheriseatingmooncakesatthemoment.Heisinhighspirits!WhenitisMid-AutumnFestival,everyoneisenjoyingtheirwonderfultime!TheMid-AutumnFestivalmakeseveryonehappy.Yours,LiHua【亮点点评】①用动名词(短语)作主语概述中秋节的特点。②用现在进行时结构bedoing和时间状语atthemoment描述中秋节活动。③用beinhighspirits描述“我”的弟弟的情绪状态。④"makesbadj."描述中秋节给大家的感受。【同步检测】1．假如你是魏华，你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息，给你上海的同学李涛写一封信，不少于60词。WhereWeatherActivitiesFeelingsCanadacold;snowingvisitmyaunt;ski;makeasnowmanrelaxed;haveagoodtimeDearLiTao,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WeiHua【答案】DearLiTao,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’mvisitingmyauntinCanada.It’swinterherenow.It’scoldandit’ssnowingreallyhard.Whatabeautifulwhiteworlditis!Theweatherhereisjustrightforplayingwithsnow.SoIamskiingandmakingasnowmanwithmycousins.Wearehavingagoodtimeinthesnow.Wearereallyrelaxed.What’stheweatherlikeinShanghai?Areyoustudyinghardorhavingfun?Pleasewritebacktomesoon.Yours,WeiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给出的词汇或短语，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，向同学问好，说明自己所在的地方及活动；第二步，阐明天气情况，正在进行的活动及内心的感受；第三步，询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况，并请他尽快回信。[亮点词汇]①snowhard下雪下得大②bejustrightfor正适合……③really确实[高分句型]Whatabeautifulwhiteworlditis!(感叹句)2．假设今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文来描述你们的活动。提示：1.Whatareyourfamilydoing?2.Whatdoyouthinkofrainydays?要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑；2.包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。TodayisSunday.It’sfiveo’clockintheafternoonnow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayisSunday.It’sfiveo’clockintheafternoonnow.It’srainingoutside,andallofmyfamilyareathome.Myfatherisusingthecomputertodohisworkinhisstudy.Mygrandparentsareplayingchessinthelivingroom.MybrotherDaleismakingamodelplaneinhisroom.Helikesmakingthingsverymuch.Mymotheriscookinginthekitchenforus.AndI’mwatchingTVwithmysisterSusaninthebedroom.Ilikerainydaysbecausewecanhaveagoodtimestayingathometogether.【总体分析】①题材：本文为材料作文，描述自己的家人正在做的事情；②时态：现在进行时；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生不要遗漏要点；可适当添加语句，使文章连贯。【写作步骤】第一步，描述家庭成员们各自正在做的事情；第二步，描述自己对下雨天的看法。【亮点词汇】①rain下雨②all所有的③playchess下棋④verymuch非常⑤watchTV看电视⑥because因为【高分句型】①Myfatherisusingthecomputertodohisworkinhisstudy.(usesth.todo使用某物做某事)②Ilikerainydaysbecausewecanhaveagoodtimestayingathometogether.(because引导的原因状语从句)3．假设你是李华。上周Anna给你写了一封信。Anna在信中介绍了她的家乡并希望收到你的回信。请根据以下表格内容提示，给网友Anna写一封e-mail，向她介绍广州冬天的情况以及你和家人过春节的活动和感受，并邀请她来广州。天气不冷，从不下雪，有时会下雨活动爬白云山，逛花市，喝早茶感受请自行补充要求：1.字数：不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）；2.文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；3.条理清楚，语句还顺，意思连贯，书写规范。DearAnna,Iwashappytohearfromyoulastweek.Winteriscoming.Inwinter,Guangzhouisabeautifulcity._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua【答案】DearAnna,Iwashappytohearfromyoulastweek.Winteriscoming.Inwinter,Guangzhouisabeautifulcity.It’snotcoldhere.Itneversnowshere,butitrainssometimes.WeclimbedBaiyunMountain,visitedtheflowermarketandhadmorningtea.Duringthisfestival,peopleinChinagettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Inmanyplacespeopleliketosetofffirecrackersandfireworkstocelebrateit.Anddumplingsarethemosttraditionalfoodduringthefestival.ItismyfavoritefestivalbecauseIdon’thavetogotoschool,andIcangetsomenewclothes,eatalotofdeliciousfood,getsomeredenvelopes,too.I’mveryhappy.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.Bestwishes,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据提示材料介绍广州冬天的情况以及春节的活动。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍广州冬天的天气。第二步，介绍春节的活动。第三步，介绍自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①setofffirecrackers放鞭炮②alotof许多③lookforwardtodoingsth期待做某事[高分句型]①Inmanyplacespeopleliketosetofffirecrackersandfireworkstocelebrateit（动词不定式作宾语）②ItismyfavoritefestivalbecauseIdon’thavetogotoschool,andIcangetsomenewclothes,eatalotofdeliciousfood,getsomeredenvelopes,too（because引导原因状语从句）4．请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。要求：1.认真观察图画，把观察到的内容写成一段通顺的话。2.可以给图中人物起名字，展开合理的想象。3.作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。4.不少于五句话，注意规范书写。

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图2__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayisSunday.It’ssunny.Iamplayingintheparkwithmyfriends.Look!MaryisplayingtheviolinandKateissingingsongs.Peteristakingpicturesoftrees.Lilyisridingherbike.MikeandSarahareplayingrole-play.Mikeisactingthedoctor.Sarahisactingthepatient.Weareallhappy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；②时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主，注意时态的正确使用。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍今天是星期日，天气很好；第二步，具体描绘公园里每个人正在做些什么；第三步，最后进行总结，今天很开心。[亮点词汇]①inthepark在公园②takepicturesof拍……的照片③rideone’sbike骑自行车[高分句型]Look!MaryisplayingtheviolinandKateissingingsongs.（and并列句）5．现在是晚上八点钟，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正给你的朋友写一张明信片，介绍下今天的天气，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60个词左右。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMei【答案】DearJim,

It’s8:00pm.Anditisrainingheavilyoutside.Weallstayathome.MygrandparentsarewatchingTV.Theyarelaughinghappily.Myfatherisreadingnewspaperinthelivingroom.Mymotherisdoingthedishesinthekitchen.WhatamIdoing?Ofcourse,Iamwritingtoyou.Weallhappyandrelaxedatthismoment.Whatwillyoudoonarainyday?Yours,LiMei【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。写信给Jim告知家人的活动。2.写作指导：本文主要采用现在进行时。先介绍此时的天气，紧接着描述家人的活动信息，最后表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。【真题链接】（21-22七年级下·河北唐山·期末）下面是公园一角人们的活动场景。请你根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友Jane和人们的活动。提示：(1)How’stheweathertoday?

(2)Whatarepeopledoing?(3)WhatdoesJanelooklike?(4)WhatisJanedoing?要求:（1）短文须包含所有提示内容。（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数不少于60词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）ItisSundaytoday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ItisSundaytoday.It’ssunnyandwarm.Therearemanypeopleinthepark.Look,someboysareplayingbasketball.Someareplayingsoccer.Theyareplayinghappily.Thereisamanandtwowomenstandingunderthetree.Theyarewatchingboysplayingbasketball.WhereismyfriendJane?Canyoufindher?Shehasbigeyesandshortcurlyhair.Oh,Iseeher.Sheiseatinganappleandsheistalkingwithaboyrightnow.NexttoJane,agirlisreadingabook.Howhappytheyare!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友Jane和人们的活动。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先从今天的天气入手；其次描写人们在公园里的活动；接着描述简的外貌和活动。保证行文连贯，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。2．（20-21七年级下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假如你是来自澳大利亚的Alice，暑假期间你正在哈尔滨旅游，请向你的妈妈介绍一下你在哈尔滨的情况，并向她介绍你的新朋友。写作要点：1.现在哈尔滨是夏天。2.介绍今天的一些情况：(1)今天天气晴朗但有风；(2)你正在公园里踢足球；(3)一个女孩正在拍江边的照片、一些男孩正在江里游泳。3.介绍你的新朋友王莹（外貌、衣着、爱好等）。写作要求：1.内容完整、合理；语句正确；行文连贯；2.字迹工整、书写规范；3.60词以上；4.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。DearMom,Howareyou?IaminHarbinnow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!

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Alice【答案】DearMom,Howareyou?IaminHarbinnow.Iwillintroduceyoutomylifehere.NowHarbinisinsummer.Theweatherisfinetoday,butwindy.Ifeelverycomfortable.Iamplayingfootballinthepark.Iseeagirltakingpictures.Someboysareswimmingintheriver.Imakeanewfriendhere.HernameisWangYing.WangYinglooksverybeautiful.Sheiswearingayellowdress.Shelikestosing.Iamfinehere,youdonotneedtoworry.Bestwishes!Yours,Alice【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干提示向妈妈介绍自己在哈尔滨的旅游情况以及自己交到的新朋友，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。第一段进行总述；第二段描述天气、今天的活动以及介绍自己的朋友；第三段告诉妈妈自己很好，不用担心。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。3．（20-21七年级下·河北石家庄·期中）假设你正在和你爸爸妈妈，妹妹在三亚度假，你在朋友圈晒的旅行照片被你的美国朋友Jim看到。他对你去的地方很感兴趣，发微信让你给他简单介绍一下，要求包括以下内容：天气晴朗，有风时间暑假(summervacation)地点Sanya活动画画，唱歌，游泳，做游戏等观点……（你认为你的旅游怎么样?）要求：1．条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；2．词数：80词左右。3．可适当发挥。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,Jim!IamonsummervacationinSanyawithmyparents.Wearehavingagreattimehere.LetmetellyousomethingaboutSanya.Theweatherhereissunnyandwindy.It’scomfortabletotravelhere.Nowwearetakingawalkandwecangoswimmingintheafternoon.SometimesIdrawpicturesonthebeach.Andmymothersingssongswithothertourists.Therearemanypeopleonthebeach.Wecanalsoplaygamestogether.IlikeSanya.It’sreallybeautifulandrelaxing.Ithinkmysummervacationiswonderful.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己暑假在三亚旅游的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。4．（21-22七年级下·河北邯郸·期末）在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。注意事项：(1)80词左右。(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’ssummernow.Theweatherinmyhometownisveryhotandrainy.Soitisverywet.Peoplearewearingsunglassesandcoolclothes.Inthepark,myclassmatesandIarehavingagoodtime.Somegirlsaresinginganddancing.Someboysareplayingsoccer.IamswimminginariverandmybestfriendTomistakingphotos.Alittleboyiseatinganicecream.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。[亮点词汇]①haveagoodtime玩得开心②takephotos拍照[高分句型]IamswimminginariverandmybestfriendTomistakingphotos.（and连接并列句）5．（23-24七年级下·山东烟台·期末）假如你是李华，你和你的美国朋友Helen正在网上聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么，请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。要求：1.内容须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥。2.60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.不得出现真实校名、班名及姓名。4.有卷面分。爷爷在公园散步奶奶在客厅浇花爸爸在客厅读报纸妈妈在厨房洗碗妹妹在卧室做作业提示词组：watertheflowersHi,Helen,goodevening.Now,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi,Helen,goodevening.Now,mygrandfatherisn’tathome.Heistakingawalkinthepark.Mygrandmotherlikesflowersverymuch,andsheiswateringtheflowersinthelivingroom.Myfatherisinthelivingroom,too.Heisreadinganewspaper.Mymotheriswashingthedishesinthekitchen.Mysisterisdoingherhomeworkinourbedroom.Shealwaysstudieshard.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“现在进行时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍家人现在正在做什么；第二步，具体介绍家人现在正在做什么；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①athome在家②verymuch非常③readanewspaper读报纸④studyhard努力学习[高分句型]①Heistakingawalkinthepark.(运用现在进行时)②Mymotheriswashingthedishesinthekitchen.(介词短语作地点状语)6．（22-23七年级下·山东烟台·期末）请根据表格中的信息，进行场景描述，字数不少于50，可适当扩展。时间周日下午地点公园天气晴朗，有点热人物王华一家场景爸爸与哥哥在树下下棋；王华和弟弟在踢球；妈妈在拍照。心情快乐________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayisSunday.Itissunnyandabithot.Intheafternoon,WangHua’sfamilygototheparknearhishousetoplay.Hisfatherandhiselderbrotherareplayingchessunderthetree.Hisfatherplayschessverywell.Hisfatheroftenteacheshiselderbrotherhowtoplaychess.WangHuaandhislittlebrotherareplayingfootball.ThisisWangHua’sfavoritesport.Whatishismotherdoing?Oh,hismotheristakingphotos.Shelikestakingphotosandshealwaystakessomebeautifulphotos.Theyareallveryhappy.Theyallhaveagreattime.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍周日的天气情况并引出主题；第二步，具体介绍王华一家人