Unit 3 Keep Fit .（话题写作指导）（教师版）

Unit3KeepFit.(话题写作指导）【话题分析】运动与健康本单元的话题是“运动与健康”，与此相关的写作任务是描写自己或他人进行的运动或锻炼以及对健康的好处。写作时，常先介绍所进行的运动或锻炼，然后介绍运动或锻炼对健康的好处，最后号召大家积极参加运动或锻炼。通常使用一般现在时，人称以第一人称或第三人称为主。常用句型：Myfavouritesportis...Howoftendo/doessbplay...?Itcankeepusfit/healthyandhelpus..It'sfun/importanttodo...Ithinkeveryoneshouldtryit.【写作实例】从2009年起，每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”。为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的“运动与健康”栏目正在以“Let'sDoExerciseTogether”为题，向广大中学生征文。内容提示：锻炼的重要性锻炼的时间与方式·保持健康·使生活丰富多彩·.......·日常步行或骑自行车到学校·上体育课时做各种锻炼(跑步、打篮球···)·周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等·.......要求：1.须包含以上提示信息，并进行适当补充；2.词数在80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现个人真实姓名和校名。Let'sDoExerciseTogetherAugust8thisFitnessDayinChina.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】【教材典句】1、It'sfuntoswimandplaywithmyfriendsinthewater.(SB,2a)2、...becauseitkeepsusfitandhelpsusplaybetter.(SB,1b)3、Swimmingisgoodformebecauseitkeepsmehealthy.(SB,2a)【经典范文】Let'sDoExerciseTogetherAugust8thisFitnessDayinChina.Forallofus,it'sveryimportanttodoexercise.Doingexercisecankeepusfitandhelpusmakeourlifecolourful.What'smore,doingexercisehelpsusstudybetter.Wecandoexercisewhenwewant.Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.InPEclasses,wecandoallkindsofexercise,likerunning,jumping,playingbasketballandsoon.Onweekends,wecanclimbmountainsorgoswimmingwithfriends.Also,wecangohikingduringthevacations.Let'sdoexerciseandhaveahealthylifetogether!【亮点点评】①用“It’s+形容词+todosth.”句式说明锻炼的重要性。②用“keepsb+形容词”和“helpsbdosth”结构说明锻炼的益处。③用begoodfor短语说明步行或骑自行车上学对我们有益。④用“Let'sdosth.”结构发出倡议——进行锻炼，过健康的生活。【同步检测】1．每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”。为了让运动更加深入人心，你校英语角组织了“运动与健康”活动，并以“Let’sDoExerciseTogether”为题，向广大中学生征文。请根据以下提示写一篇短文。提示：1.What’stheimportanceofexercise?2.Whenandhowdoyouexercise?要求：1.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥，语句通顺，行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；3.词数70左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Let’sDoExerciseTogetherIt’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sdoexerciseandlivehappilytogether!【答案】Let’sDoExerciseTogetherIt’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.Doingexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.Itcanalsohelpusmakemorefriends.What’smore,itishelpfultoourstudy.Ialwaysgotoschoolonfootorbybike.InPEclasses,Ioftendodifferentkindsofexercise,suchasrunning,jumping,playingbasketballandsoon.Onweekends,Igoswimmingwithmyfriends.Also,Itaketripsduringtheholidays.Let’sdoexerciseandlivehappilytogether!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍锻炼的重要性；第二步，介绍自己何时怎样锻炼。[亮点词汇]①keephealthy保持健康②What’smore而且③suchas比如[高分句型]Doingexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.（动名词作主语）2．一个健康的身体是每个人工作和学习的根本保证，怎样才能保持健康的体魄呢？请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，内容可以适当发挥。提示：1.健康对我们很重要；2.注意饮食，吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品；3.经常锻炼。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthisimportanttous.Howtokeephealthy?Letmesharemyideaswithyou.Firstly,keepagooddiet.Eatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforourhealth.Weshouldn’teattoomuchmeat.Don’teatjunkfood,suchasicecreamandhamburgers.Theyarebadforus.Secondly,doingexerciseeverydayisimportant.Itcanhelpuskeepfit.Finally,weshouldhaveagoodlifestyle.Weshouldsleepforabout8hoursatnight.Weshouldn’tworktoolate.Gotobedearlyandgetupearly.Ifyouwanttohaveastrongbody,doliketheabove.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，整体说明健康对我们很重要；第二步，介绍如何才可以保持健康；第三步，最后总结。[亮点词汇]①toomuch太多②suchas比如③keepfit保持健康[高分句型]Ifyouwanttohaveastrongbody,doliketheabove.（条件状语从句）3．健康是最重要的一笔人生财富，而健康的生活方式是我们保持健康的保障，请你以“Goodhealthisoverwealth(财富)”为题，结合以下要点写一篇英语短文。1.你对该谚语的理解；2.介绍一下你的生活方式（饮食、锻炼……）；3.谈谈你的感受和想法。注意事项:1.短文须包括提示中所有要点内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.词数不少于80个，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。Goodhealthisoverwealth“Goodhealthisoverwealth”means____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Goodhealthisoverwealth“Goodhealthisoverwealth”meansmoneycanbuymanythings,butitcannotbuyhealth.It’simportantforustohaveahealthylifestyle.I’mhappytosharemylifestylewithyou.First,Ihavehealthyeatinghabits.Ilikeeatingvegetablesandfruit.It’sgoodformyhealth.Second,Ioftendosomeexercisetokeepfit.Ilikerunningandswimming.Ithinkahealthylifestylecanmakeusstrongandhelpusstudywell.Weshouldnotonlyhavehealthyeatinghabits,butalsohavegoodexercisehabits.Also,enoughsleepisveryimportant.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态主要为一般现在时态；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯，无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步，点明主题，总体解释谚语的基本含义，简述个人对健康的理解；第二步，展开阐述个人平时的生活习惯包括饮食习惯和体育锻炼，并说明饮食和锻炼对身心的益处；第三步，书写结语，号召大家要有好的饮食习惯，还要有好的锻炼习惯和足够的睡眠。[亮点词汇]①behappytodosth很高兴去做某事②begoodfor对……有好处③likedoing喜欢做某事[高分句型]①Ithinkahealthylifestylecanmakeusstrongandhelpusstudywell.（宾语从句）②Weshouldnotonlyhavehealthyeatinghabits,butalsohavegoodexercisehabits.（notonly...butalso句型）4．你班准备举办以“MyLifestyle”为话题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。提示问题：Whatdoyouhaveformealseveryday?Howoftendoyoudoexercise?Whatareyoursuggestionsabouthowtokeepfit?注意：1.要求不少于70词；2.短文中不能出现真实的学校名称和学生姓名；3.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。MyLifestyleIt’simportantforustokeephealthy._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyLifestyleIt’simportantforustokeephealthy.I’mhappytosharemyhealthylifestylewithyou.First,Ihavehealthyeatinghabits.Ilikeeatingvegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodformyhealth.Idon’teaticecreamafterdinnerbecauseIdon’twanttobefat.Second,Iplaysportstokeephealthyeveryweek.Ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.Ioftenplayitwithmyfriends.Ialsolikerunningandswimming.Ithinkit’sveryimportanttoliveahealthylifestyle.ItcanmakeusstrongandhelpusstudywellWeshouldnotonlyhavehealthyeatinghabits,butalsohavegoodexercisehabits.Inaddition,

enoughsleepisalsoimportant.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章需要包含三个方面的信息，即每天的饮食、运动的频率以及关于保持健康的建议。同时，要确保文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰，并能够准确、生动地表达个人的生活方式。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，强调保持健康的重要性，并表达愿意分享自己的生活方式；第二步，详细介绍个人的饮食习惯、运动习惯、运动的频率等；第三步，给出关于如何保持健康的建议，强调健康生活方式的重要性。[亮点词汇]①keephealthy保持健康②havehealthyeatinghabits有健康的饮食习惯③inaddition另外[高分句型]①Ithinkit’sveryimportanttoliveahealthylifestyle.(省略引导词的宾语从句)②Weshouldnotonlyhavehealthyeatinghabits,butalsohavegoodexercisehabits.(notonly...butalso...结构)5．健康的生活方式对我们的生活有很大的好处。请以“Howtokeephealthy”为题，根据所给信息写一篇短文。注意：1．包含所有要点，并适当发挥；2．词数70左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HowtokeephealthyHealthylifestylesmakeabigdifferencetoourlife.Whatcanwedotokeepourselveshealthy?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifwedolikethat,we’llhaveahealthylife.【答案】

HowtokeephealthyHealthylifestylesmakeabigdifferencetoourlife.Whatcanwedotokeepourselveshealthy?First,Ithinkweshouldhaveahealthydiet.Alwayseathealthyfood.AnddrinkmorewaterandmilkinsteadofCokeorjuice.

Second,exerciseisimportanttous.Wecanjogeveryday.Don’tspendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorplayingcomputergames.

Third,wecanhavegoodhabits.Washourhandsbeforeeatingthingsanddon’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.Finally,weshouldtrytobehappy.Changeourthinkingwhenwefeelangryorsad.

Ifwedolikethat,we’llhaveahealthylife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的三个要点等，可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，引出如何保持健康的主题；第二步，从四个方面具体介绍如何保持健康；第三步，收尾，总结全文，呼吁大家健康生活。[亮点词汇]①insteadof代替②trytodo努力……[高分句型]①Don’tspendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorplayingcomputergames.(spend的用法)②Washourhandsbeforeeatingthingsanddon’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.(and并列句)【真题链接】1．（24-25七年级上·吉林长春·期末）教育部已把体育加入中考科目，大家体育锻炼以及如何保持健康更加重视了。同学们，你们有良好的体育锻炼和饮食习惯吗？假如你是Jack，请给你的笔友Tom写一封信，简单介绍一下你在体育以及饮食方面的喜好。要点如下：1.你一天的食谱，包括早中晚三餐；2.你课后的体育锻炼，如打篮球，踢足球等。要求：①短文须包含要点中的所有信息，可适当增加细节；②词数：80-100词左右。DearTom,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourfriend,Jack【答案】DearTom,IthinkIhaveahealthyeatinghabitandIdosportsoften.Letmesharethemwithyou.Forbreakfast,Ihavetwoeggsanddrinkaglassofmilk.Theyaregoodformybody.Forlunch,Ihavesomevegetables,chickenandfruitsalad.Fordinner,Ieatbeefandbananas.Ilikethemverymuch.Inevereatjunkfood.Doingsportsregularlyisnecessaryforteenagers.IgetupearlyandIrunfor30minutesbeforegoingtoschool.Ioftenwalktoschool.Ialsoplayallballgameswithmyclassmates.Ilikeplayingbasketballbest.Ioftenplayitafterschool.Goodhabitshelpmeliveahappylife.Howaboutyourhabits?Yourfriend,Jack【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己有健康的饮食习惯；第二步，根据题干中给出的要点，详细介绍自己的一日三餐；第三步，介绍自己也做体育锻炼，并收尾。[亮点词汇]①dosports做运动②begoodfor对……有好处[高分句型]IgetupearlyandIrunfor30minutesbeforegoingtoschool.（and表并列）2．（23-24七年级下·山东烟台·期末）每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的“运动与健康”栏目正在以Let’sDoExerciseTogether为题，向广大中学生征文。内容提示：运动的重要性运动的时间与方式●保持健康●丰富生活●……●日常步行或骑自行车到学校●上体育课时做各种锻炼(跑步、打篮球……)●周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等●……写作要求：(1)须包含以上提示信息，并进行适当补充。(2)词数在80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。(3)文中不能出现个人真实姓名和校名。Let’sDoExerciseTogetherAugust8thisFitnessDayinChina._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Let’sDoExerciseTogetherAugust8thisFitnessDayinChina.It’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.Doingexercisecannotonlyhelpuskeepfit,butalsohelptoenrichourlife.What’smore,doingexercisehelpsustostudybetter.Wecandoexercisewheneverwewant.Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.InPEclasses,wecandoallkindsofexercise,suchasrunning,jumping,playingbasketballandsoon.Onweekends,wecanclimbmountainsorgoswimmingwithourfriends.Also,wecangohikingduringthevacations.Let’sdoexerciseandhaveahealthylifestyletogether!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍运动的重要性；第二步，根据提示介绍运动的时间与方式；第三步，最后呼吁大家一起锻炼身体，拥有健康的生活方式。[亮点词汇]①notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……②helpsb.dosth.帮助某人做某事③allkindsof各种各样的[高分句型]①Wecandoexercisewheneverwewant.（whenever引导的让步状语从句）②Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.（固定句型Itis+adj.+forsb.+todosth.）3．（23-24七年级下·河北保定·期末）每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”。为了让运动更加深入人心，你校英语角组织了“运动与健康”活动，并以“Let’sDoExerciseTogether”为题，向广大中学生征文。请你根据以下内容写一篇短文。TheimportanceofexerciseWhenandhowtoexercise★Keephealthy★Makefriends★...★Walkorridebikestoschool★DodifferentkindsofexerciseinPEclass★Swimwithfriendsonweekends★...要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数80左右。（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Let’sDoExerciseTogetherIt’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sdoexerciseandlivehappilytogether!【答案】Let’sDoExerciseTogetherIt’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.Doingexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.Itcanalsohelpusmakemorefriends.What’smore,itishelpfultoourstudy.Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.InPEclasses,wecandodifferentkindsofexercise,suchasrunning,jumping,playingbasketballandsoon.Onweekends,wecangoswimmingwithourfriends.Also,wecantaketripsduringtheholidays.Let’sdoexerciseandlivehappilytogether!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，先介绍锻炼的好处，例如帮助我们保持身体健康、交朋友、对学习有帮助等；第二步，具体介绍什么时候该怎么进行体育锻炼，例如步行或骑自行车去学校、在体育课做各种体育活动、周末去游泳等；第三步，书写结语，号召大家进行体育锻炼。[亮点词汇]①What’smore而且②begoodfor对……有好处③helpsb.dosth.帮助某人做某事④suchas例如[高分句型]①Doingexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.(动名词作主语)②Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.(it作形式主语)4．（23-24七年级下·河北保定·期末）运动不仅可以让我们有强壮的身体，还可以让我们感到愉快和轻松。你最喜欢的体育运动是什么?请你以“MyFavouriteSport”为题，根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的体育运动。提示：(1)What’syourfavouritesport?(2)Whydoyoulikeit?要求：(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数60个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Doingsportscanmakeusfeelfunandhealthy.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Doingsportscanmakeusfeelfunandhealthy.Myfavouritesportisswimming.Myfatherisagoodswimmer.Hecanswimfastandwell.WhenIwasalittleboy,heoftentookmetoswimintheswimmingpool.Swimminggavemealotoffun.NowI’molder,andIcandoitaswellasmyfather.Thankstoswimming,Ihavesomenewfriends.Swimmingalsogivesmeastrongbody.What’smore,swimmingmakesmefeelveryrelaxed.Iloveswimmingbest.【详解】[总体分析]题材：本文为一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。引出“MyFavouriteSport”这一话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍最喜爱的运动项目名称、喜欢的原因及进行这项活动的具体情况等；第三步，书写结语。表达对此运动的喜爱。[亮点词汇]①feelrelaxed感到放松②thanksto多亏了……③what’smore另外[高分句型]①WhenIwasalittleboy,heoftentookmetoswimintheswimmingpool.（when引导时间状语从句）5．（22-23七年级下·四川绵阳·期末）假定你是李华，请阅读你的英国网友Mike的邮件，并用英文回复。DearLiHua,Iseverythinggoingwell?Iamwritingtoknowaboutyourfavoritesport.Whatisyourfavoritesport?Whenandwheredoyouplayit?Whomdoyouoftenplayitwith?Whydoyoulikeit?Yours,Mike要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；2.词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.书写工整，字迹清晰。DearMike,Howareyoudoingrecently?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,Howareyoudoingrecently?Iamverygladtotellyousomethingaboutmyfavouritesport.Ilikeplayingfootballbest.I’mamemberofourschoolfootballteam.Ioftenplayfootballwithmyfriendsintheschoolplaygroundafterschool.Weoftentalkaboutfootball.AndwewatchfootballmatchesonTVeveryweekend.LionelMessiismyfavouritefootballstar.Heplaysfootballverywell.Heismyhero.Iusuallywatchfootballmatchestwiceamonth.Playingfootballmakesmefeelgreat.IwanttobeafootballplayerwhenIgrowup.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题，介绍最喜欢的运动；第二步，详细阐述最喜欢的运动，包括时间、地点、人物及喜欢的理由等信息；第三步，书写结语，表明愿望。[亮点词汇]①amemberof……的一员②talkabout谈论③twiceamonth一月两次[高分句型]①Playingfootballmakesmefeelgreat.(动名词短语作主语)②IwanttobeafootballplayerwhenIgrowup.(时间状语从句)6．（22-23七年级下·山东烟台·期中）近几年，为增强学生体质，国家各部门出台了各种制度保障。毫无疑问，运动是保持身体和精神健康的一种重要方式。无论是跑步，还是球类运动都可以起到很好的锻炼作用。请写一篇英文作文，介绍你最喜欢的运动。主要内容包括：1.What’syourfavoritesport?Andwhy?2.Whodoyouexercisewith?3.Whatdoyoulearnfromthesport?要求：1.词数在80词左右。2.包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯。3.作文中不能出现个人真实姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Doingsportsisagoodwaytostayhealthy.Myfavoritesportisbasketball.Iplaybasketballnotonlyforfunbutalsotokeepfit.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesontheplaygroundonschooldays.Wehavegreatfuntogether.Onweekends,Isometimespracticebasketballskillswithmyfatherinthegym.Idon’tplayaswellashedoes,butheencourages