读后续写指导americangirl学画中国画课件高三英语一轮复习

ContinuationwritingAmericangirllearningChinesepainting主题人与自我人与社会人与自然自我发展亲情朋友、同学、师生邻里陌生人好动物坏动物自然环境Let’sanalyzethe

plot.Walkingacrossthecampus,Ilookedaroundmeinsearchofafriendlyface,asmile,anything.ButIwasquitedisappointed.AndI,inturn,feltsomewhatfoolish,wearingafalsesmileonmyfacealongtheway.Iwassimplyattemptingtofollowtheadvicemymotherhadgivenmeyearsbefore:whereveryouare,asmilewillalwaysbeunderstood.Smileisuniversal.Atthatverymoment,however,Ifeltmymother'sadvicedidn'twork.Mymindwasracingwithquestionsandconcernstypicalofany13-year-oldonthefirstdayofschool:wherewouldIsitatlunch?WhowouldItalkto?Nottomention,howwouldImakefriendswhenIdidn'tevenspeakthelanguage?Myheartbeatquickened,andIfeltnervous.WhentheteacherintroducedmetotheclassasthefirstAmericantoattendtheschool,10setsofhandsimmediatelyshotup.Somestudentshadquestions,otherswantedtopractisetheirEnglishwithme.BecauseIdidn'tspeakmuchChineseyet,IcommunicatedwiththeotherstudentsthroughhandmotionsmixedinwithbrokenEnglishandChinese.Thencamethefirstclass—Chinesepainting.Theteacherinstructedustodrawsomebamboosstepbystep,whichseemedquiteeasy.Whentheteacherfinished,thestudentsstartedpaintingconfidentlyandsmoothly,whileIwasrootedtothespot,totallyataloss.However,unwillingtofallbehindothers,Idecidedtohaveatry.Ipickedupthebrush,dippedintotheinkanddrewabranch,which,asexpected,turnedoutadisaster.AsIburntwithgreatembarrassment(尴尬),LiHua,mydeskmate,gavemeawarmsmile.________________________________________Activity2Beginning:Walkedacrosscampus,feelingdisappointed,concernedandnervousDevelopment:Gotintroducedtotheclass,feelingunsureClimax:triedtopaintabamboobranch,butfailedEnding:____________________________________________FinishedpaintingwiththehelpofLiHua,appreciatinghis/herhelpandfeelingrelievedTheme:________SmileAsIburntwithgreatembarrassment,LiHua,mydeskmate,gavemeawarmsmile.Principle“ARE”AsIburntwithembarrassment,LiHua,mydeskmate,gavemeawarmsmile.Actionof__________Responseof________Emotionof_______Actionof__________Responseof________Emotionof_______LiHuamemeAsIburntwithgreatembarrassment,LiHua,my

deskmate,gavemeawarmsmile.Ismiledbackather.Shetaughtmehowtopaint.(A)Ifinishedmypaintingsuccessfully.(R)Ithankedher.(E)Smilewashelpful.(T)动作描写+心理描写+环境描写Translation:作为回应，我对她报以微笑。她用流利的英语主动提出帮我。她耐心地握着我的手，引导它在纸上移动，画了一些树枝和树叶，教我如何使用毛笔，慢慢地缓解了我的焦虑。在她的指导下，我终于完成了我的第一幅中国画。在其他同学为我欢呼的同时，我脸上挂着灿烂的笑容，对她的帮助表示衷心的感谢。从那时起，她成了我的好朋友，在她的帮助下，我学会了更多的中文，并逐渐融入其中。事实证明，我母亲是对的。是微笑起了作用。AsIburntwithgreatembarrassment,LiHua,my

deskmate,gavemeawarmsmile.Ismiledbackather.Shetaughtmehowtopaint.(A)Ifinishedmypaintingsuccessfully.(R)Ithankedher.(E)Smilewashelpful.(T)Translation:Inresponse,Imanagedaweaksmilebackather.WithsurprisinglyperfectEnglish,sheofferedtohelpme.Patiently,sheheldmyhand,guidedittomoveacrossthepaperanddrewafewbranchesandleaves,whichshowedmehowtousethebrushandslowlyrelievedmyanxiety.Underherguidance,IfinallysucceededinfinishingmyfirstChinesepainting.Withotherstudentscheeringforme,Iexpressedmysincereappreciationforherhelp,withabrightsmileonmyface.Fromthenon,shebecameaclosefriend,withwhosehelpIlearnedmoreChineseandgraduallyfitin.Itturnedoutthatmymotherwasright.Itwassmilethatdidthetrick.AsIburntwithgreatembarrassment,LiHua,my

deskmate,gavemeawarmsmile.Ismiledbackather.Shetaughtmehowtopaint.(A)Ifinishedmypaintingsuccessfully.(R)Ithankedher.(E)Smilewashelpful.(T)IwasworriedaboutexplainedpresentedhispaintingWiththeteacherapplaudingreachedouttomeWithmyheartfilledwithgratitudelentahelpinghanddidmeafavorcametomyrescueAsIburntwithgreatembarrassment,LiHua,whowasnexttome,gavemeawarmsmile.Ismiledbackawkwardly.Shecameoveranddemonstratedhowtousethebrush.Thebrushmovedacrossthepaper,andalivelybambooappeared!Withherhelp,Ifinallycompletedthetask,althoughitwassuchanuglyone.Afterthat,webecamegoodfriends.ShetaughtmeChinesewhileItaughtherEnglish.Webothmadegreatprogressinourstudies.Yes,mymotherwasright.Asmiledidmakeadifference.Appreciate：AsIburntwithgreatembarrassment,LiHua,whowasnexttome,gavemeawarmsmile.Heseemedtounderstandmyawkwardsituation,soheturnedtomeandcarefullyexplainedwhatIshoulddowithfluentEnglish.Underhispatientguidance,ImanagedtofinishmyfirstChinesepainting!Si