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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Fifteen-year-oldCameronandtwelve-year-oldBartonlivedinatowninTaxco.Theirparentsworkedtirelesslydayinanddayout,yetstillstruggledtomakeendsmeet.CameronandBarton,bothinmiddleschool,witnessedtheirparents’hardworkandanxietyanddecidedtotakeactionandoffertheirassistance.Assummervacationbegan,whileotherchildrenwereenjoyingtheircarefreetime,CameronandBartonhadadifferentplan.Theystartedthechallengingjourneyofseekingpart-timejobs.Theirfirstattemptwasatalocalrestaurant.Filledwithhope,theystoodbeforethemanagerwithaneagerexpression.However,themanagerlookedatthemcriticallyandsaid,“Youtwoaretooyoung!”Theirheartssankinstantly.Cameronfeltasenseofdeepdisappointment,thinking,“Howcanweproveourselvesifnoonegivesusachance?”Barton’sfacefellasheaskedhisbrother,“Willweeverfindajob?”Notdiscouragedbytherejection,theythenwenttoastorenamedThompson’sGrocery,hopingtobecomeassistants.“Hello,youmustbeMr.Thompson.We’reheretoapplyforthejob,”Cameronsaid.Bartonstoodontiptoeandhandedacardfromtheirschool’shelp-wantedboardtoMr.Thompsonbehindthecounter,whowastheownerandseemedtobeakindperson.However,beforetheycouldsaymore,heshookhishead.“Thisjobistoohardforyoukids,”hesaid.“Ineedsomeonebigandstrong.”“Letusgiveitatry,andifyoudon’tlikeourwork,don’tpayus,”Cameronbegged.Hestaredatthebrothers,whoweresosincere,thennodding.Next,heledthemtothewarehouse(仓库)ofthestore.Thefloorwaspiledwithboxesofdifferentsizesandallkindsofobjectsatrandom,fillingeverycorner.Thevariousitemsweremixedupchaotically.Itseemedasiftheyhadneverbeensortedorcleaned.CameronandBartonwereassignedtoclearawaytheitems.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。“It’satoughjob.Justdoasmuchasyoucan,”Mr.Thompsonsaid.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CameronandBartonaskedMr.Thompsontocomeaftertheyfinished.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________关于兄弟俩找工作故事的续写续写要点第一段:着重描绘兄弟俩工作过程中的具体行动和相互协作。可添加遇到的困难,如箱子过重、物品杂乱难以分类等,以及他们克服困难的细节。第二段:突出Mr.Thompson看到仓库变化后的反应,除了惊讶,还可描述他对兄弟俩工作能力的夸赞。讲述兄弟俩被正式雇佣后的喜悦,以及这份工作对他们家庭和自身成长的意义。情感线(150字)起初,兄弟俩因多次求职被拒而失落,但仍怀揣希望来到Thompson’sGrocery。面对仓库艰巨任务,他们虽感压力,却因彼此支持、对梦想的憧憬,坚定投入工作。过程中,疲惫未击退他们。当Mr.Thompson看到成果时,兄弟俩满心期待。得到认可并被雇佣,他们从失落走向自豪,体会到努力带来的成就感,更坚定为家庭分担的决心,对未来充满信心。故事线(6条)兄弟俩在Thompson’sGrocery申请工作,Mr.Thompson起初因工作难度拒绝,后在兄弟俩恳请下同意让他们尝试。兄弟俩开始清理仓库,先按大小整理箱子,小个子Barton清理狭小空间物品,大个子Cameron搬运重箱。工作中遭遇困难,如箱子过重、物品分类复杂,但兄弟俩相互鼓励,通过聊天缓解疲惫。历经一天努力,兄弟俩完成仓库清理。Mr.Thompson看到整洁仓库大为惊讶,对兄弟俩工作成果赞不绝口。Mr.Thompson决定永久雇佣兄弟俩,兄弟俩因得到认可和工作机会而自豪,也明确了自身价值。主旨升华句(英文)Thisexperiencevividlydemonstratesthatnomatterhowdifficultthesituationmayseem,perseveranceandapositiveattitudecanalwaysleadtosuccess.ThestoryofCameronandBartonshowsthatageisneverabarrierwhenitcomestotakingresponsibilityandmakingadifference.Throughtheirhardworkinthewarehouse,thebrothersnotonlyearnedajobbutalsolearnedthetruevalueofdeterminationandcooperation.Theirjourneyfromjob-seekingsetbackstoachievingsuccessservesasaninspiration,remindingusthateveryeffortcountsinthepursuitofabetterlife.Thebrothers'storyteachesusthatinthefaceofchallenges,thecouragetotryandthewillingnesstoworkhardcanopendoorstounexpectedopportunities.写作示范一(160字)“It’satoughjob.Justdoasmuchasyoucan,”Mr.Thompsonsaid.CameronandBartontookadeepbreathandplungedintothetask.Astheystartedsorting,theyfoundsomeboxesweresoheavythatCameronhadtostruggletoliftthem.Barton,withhissharpeyes,noticedsomefragileitemshiddenamongthemess.Theycarefullyseparatedthem,usingsoftmaterialstocushionthebreakables.Despitethedustmakingthemcoughandthetirednessintheirmuscles,theypressedon,sharingjokesandstoriestokeeptheirspiritshigh.CameronandBartonaskedMr.Thompsontocomeaftertheyfinished.Whenhesteppedintothewarehouse,hewasspeechlessforamoment.Theplacewastransformed.“Youtwoareremarkable!”hefinallysaid.“Yourhardworkandattentiontodetailareimpressive.”Heimmediatelyofferedthemlong-termjobs.CameronandBartonwereoverjoyed.Thisjobnotonlybroughtthemincomebutalsotaughtthemtheimportanceofnevergivingup.写作示范二(160字)“It’satoughjob.Justdoasmuchasyoucan,”Mr.Thompsonsaid.CameronandBartonnoddedfirmlyandgotdowntobusiness.Theysoonrealizedthatsomeitemsweresooldandmixedupthatitwasarealchallengetocategorizethem.Buttheydidn'tbackdown.Bartonclimbedonladderstoreachhigh-upboxes,whileCameronclearedtheground-levelclutter.Asthesunmovedacrossthesky,theirhandsgotdirtyandtheirbacksached,buttheirdeterminationneverwavered.CameronandBartonaskedMr.Thompsontocomeaftertheyfinished.Mr.Thompsonwasstunnedbywhathesaw.Thewarehousewasinperfectorder.“I’veneverseensuchagreatjobdonebyyoungladslikeyou,”hepraised.“Youarehiredpermanently.”CameronandBartonfeltasenseofprideswellingintheirchests.Thisjobwasmorethanjustawaytoearnmoney;itwasaproofoftheirabilitytoovercomedifficulties.参考答案“It’satoughjob.Justdoasmuchasyoucan,”Mr.Thompsonsaid.Indeed,thetaskseemedsodemanding.Notlongaftertheystartedworking,theheatanddustmadethemuncomfortable.Cameron’sarmsachedfrommovingheavyboxes,andBarton’sbackwassorefrombendingove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