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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onewarm,sunnymorning,Marshajumpedrightoutofbed.Todaywasthefirstdayofsummervacationandalsothelastdayshe’dbespendingwithTanya,herverybestfriend.Tanyawasgoingtocampinanotherstate.She’dbegoneallsummer.MarshaandTanyaalwaysspenttheirsummerstogether.Thisonewouldbenofunwithouther!Marsha’smomcamein.“What’sthematter,Rabbit?”shesaid.“ImissTanyaalready.Isn’tthatsilly?”Marshasaid.“No,”hermothersaidsoftly.“Missingabestfriendisn’tsillyatall.”Marsha’seyeswerewet.“Iknowhowyoufeel.”“Youdo?”askedMarsha.Marsha’smomnodded.“IhadabestfriendwhenIwasyourage.Andshewentawaytocamp,too.”“Ifeltprettysad,”Marsha’smomsaid.“Iwantedmybestfriendtothinkaboutme.SoIgavehersomething.”“What?”askedMarsha.“Igavehermybestnecklace,”hermomsaid.“Youdid?”askedMarsha.“Well,Iwantedhertohaveit,”Marsha’smomsaid,“MaybeyoucouldgiveTanyaoneofyourfavoritethingstotaketocamp.Howaboutadoll?Thenshewillneverforgetthatyouareherbestfriend.”Marshawipedhereyes.“Mom,that’sagreatidea!”shesaid.“AreyougoingtogiveTanyayourGlendaGlitterdoll?”saidMarsha’smom.“Yes,Mom,”shesaid.“ThisistheoneIwanthertohave.ButnowI’mgoingtogetGlendaallniceandclean.”Soon,GlendaGlitterlookedjustlikenew.Nextitwastimetodressthedoll.Marsharantoherroom.Inaflashshewasback.Herhandswerefullofdoll’sdresses.“ThisistheoneIlikebest,”shesaid.“AndIknowTanyalikesitbest,too.”“Let’ssee.IthinkIcanfixthislittlerip(口子).”Marsha’smomwasgoodatfixingthings.Thedolldresssoonlookedgoodasnew.“Look,Mom!”shesaid.“Glendalooksbeautiful.”“Youknow,Kitten,”saidMarsha’smom,“Tanyawilllikethispresentsomuch.”“Tanyawillbeleavingsoon,”shesaid.“Webetterhurryup.”MarshaandhermomwalkedovertoTanya’shouse.Theyrangthebell.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Marshahidthedollbehindherback.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写Marsha与Tanya的故事续写要点第一段:重点描写Marsha将藏在背后的娃娃送出时的细节,包括她的表情、动作、心理活动,以及Tanya看到礼物瞬间的反应,如惊讶、感动等。第二段:着重刻画两人交换礼物后的互动,如交流对礼物的感受,表达对彼此的不舍,以及对未来相聚的期待等。情感线起初,Marsha因好友Tanya即将远行而满心不舍,在送礼物时紧张又忐忑,担心Tanya不喜欢。Tanya收到礼物后,惊喜与感动溢于言表,Marsha的紧张瞬间消散。当Tanya回赠礼物时,Marsha心中满是温暖,两人都为这份真挚的友谊动容,从不舍到坚定对友谊长存的信念。故事线Marsha带着藏在背后的娃娃来到Tanya家,准备送出礼物。Tanya开门见到Marsha十分兴奋,Marsha紧张地拿出娃娃。Tanya看到娃娃后,惊喜不已,对Marsha表示感谢并紧紧拥抱娃娃。Tanya回赠Marsha一个装有自制友谊手链的小盒子。Marsha打开盒子看到手链,立刻戴上,两人紧紧相拥。尽管即将分离,她们坚信友谊会在这个夏天及未来持续深厚。主旨升华句Truefriendshiptranscendsdistance,justlikethebondbetweenMarshaandTanyathatremainsunbreakabledespitethesummerapart.Theirexchangeofgiftssymbolizestheeternalconnectionoftheirhearts,provingthatfriendshipisapreciousgiftthatlastsforever.Theloveandcaretheyshowthroughthesesimplepresentsremindusthattruefriendsarealwaysthere,inspirit,evenwhenphysicallyseparated.AsMarshaandTanyapartwaysforthesummer,theirfriendship,strengthenedbythisgift-givingmoment,becomesabeaconofhope,showingthatdistanceisnoobstacletoalastingfriendship.Thisheart-warmingexchangebetweenMarshaandTanyaisatestamenttothepoweroffriendship,whichcanwithstandthetestoftimeanddistance,bringingwarmthandcomforttotheirhearts.写作示范示范一Marshahidthedollbehindherback.AsTanyaswungthedooropen,herfacebrightenedwithjoy.“Marsha!You’rehere!”shecheered.Marsha,withaslightlytremblingvoice,said,“Tanya,Ihaveapresentforyou.”ShecarefullypulledoutGlendaGlitter.“Thisismydearestdoll.Ihopeitcankeepyoucompanyatcampandmakeyouthinkofme.”Tanya’seyeswidenedinastonishment,andherlipscurvedintoabigsmile.“Marsha,it’samazing!Iloveitsomuch!”TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.Afterexpressinghergratitude,TanyahandedMarshaasmall,delicatelywrappedbox.“Foryou,Marsha.It’saphotoalbumfilledwithourmemories.Soyouwon’tforgetallthefunwehad.”Marshaopenedit,hereyesmistingupasshesawtheirpictures.“Tanya,thisisperfect.I’llcherishitalways.”Theyembracedtightly,knowingthatthoughmileswouldseparatethem,theirfriendship,likethememoriesinthealbum,wouldbeforeverengravedintheirhearts.示范二Marshahidthedollbehindherback.WhenTanyaopenedthedoor,Marshacouldbarelycontainheremotions.“Tanya,”shebegan,hervoicesoft,“Ibroughtyousomething.”Slowly,sherevealedGlendaGlitter.“Thisdollmeanstheworldtome,andIwantyoutohaveitforthesummer.”Tanyawasspeechlessforamoment,thensheexclaimed,“Marsha,thisisthemostwonderfulgiftever!Thankyou!”Shehuggedthedollclose,asifitwereaprecioustreasure.TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.Then,TanyashylypresentedMarshawithahand-paintedwoodenbox.“Imadethisforyou.InsidearelittlenoteswithallthethingsIloveaboutyou.”Marshaopenedthebox,herfingersgentlytouchingthenotes.“Tanya,thisissosweet.I’llreadthemwheneverImissyou.”Theystoodthere,holdingtheirgifts,realizingthatthesetokensweremorethanjustitems;theyweresymbolsoftheirunbreakablefriendshipthatwouldbridgethegapduringtheirtimeapart.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Marshahidthedollbehindherback.Marshaandhermomwentinside.TheysaidhellotoTanyaandhermom.“We’restillpacking,”Tanya’smomsaid.MarshawentovertoTanya.“Ihavesomethingforyou,”saidMarsha.“Wait!”Tanyasaid.“Ihavesomethingforyou,too.”Sheturnedandranoutoftheroom.Tanyawasbackinaflash.Shewasholdingsomethingbehindherback.Marshasti
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