读后续写+丰收节门票引发的抉择+讲义 高三上学期10月质量检测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ihadanimpossibledilemmalikethat!MinestartedwhenmytwobestfriendsandIwereskateboardingintheparknearmyhouse.“Hey,lookatthatposter,”Olliesaid,slidingtoastop.“TheHarvestFairsoundscool.”“Yes!But50dollarsaticket?”Isaid.“That’salot.”“It’snotyouraveragefair,”saidMareya.“Itwillbebigger,featuringdeliciousfoodanddelicatecrafts.Mostimportantly,ourfavoritebandEagleDazeisplaying!”Weallsighed.ThenIsuggestedtakingarestatmyparents’market.Aswegotclose,theHarvestFair’sposteronthewindowofmyparents’storecaughtoureyes.IrushedinsideandaskedmyDadwhytherewassuchaposter.Dadturnedtomeandexplainedthatabusinessmanwhowasgoingtoproduceaneventattheparkrequestedpermissiontohangaposterhere.Andasareward,thebusinessmanofferedtwofreetickets.Dadhandedmethetwoticketsbeforeoccupyinghimselfwithhisbusinessagain.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Lyinginmyhandweretheexactticketsthatweweredreamingof.Butittookmeexactlyonesecondtogofromveryhappytoveryconfused.“Iwanttogo!”saidMareya.“SodoI!”Olliefollowedeagerly.Staringatthetwotickets,Iwasatalosswhattodowiththeextraticket.TherewasnowayIcouldchooseonefriendwithouthurtingtheother’sfeelings.Finally,weagreedtothrowacointohelpusmakethechoice.ItwasthenthatMrs.Nishikawa,alonely80-year-oldneighbor,approachedus.“Ijustsawtheposteronyourwindow,”shesaid.“HowIusedtolovegoingtofairs!Butit’shardformetogetaroundalonenow,andticketscostsomuchthesedays.”Shesighed,withregretswrittenalloverherwrinkledface.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。OllieandMareyaexchangedglancesandtheywhisperedsomething.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthedaycame,IbroughtMrs.NishikawatotheHarvestFair.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意“我”和两个好朋友奥利、马雷娅在公园滑板时看到丰收节海报，因票价昂贵而叹息。随后在“我”父母的商店，“我”得知爸爸因允许商人在店张贴海报，获赠两张免费门票。可三人只有两张票，正当打算通过抛硬币决定谁去时，80岁孤独的邻居西川夫人表示自己虽热爱集市但因独自出行不便和票价贵而无法前往，这让“我”陷入两难。故事山分析开头：以三人滑板时看到海报引出丰收节，点明门票贵，为故事制造冲突，引发读者兴趣。发展：讲述在“我”父母商店获得两张免费门票，却面临三人如何分配的难题，进一步推进矛盾。高潮：西川夫人出现并表达自己对集市的渴望，将矛盾推向顶点，“我”陷入艰难抉择。结局（续写部分）：通过对奥利和马雷娅反应及“我”带西川夫人去丰收节的描述，解决矛盾，展现人物的善良与成长。伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔：三人对丰收节充满期待但门票昂贵。回应：两张免费门票的出现解决了门票价格问题，推动故事发展。续写中可以体现因为免费门票，大家才更积极地想办法解决去的人选问题，也让帮助西川夫人成为可能。伏笔：“我”陷入不知如何分配两张票的困境。回应：奥利和马雷娅的交流以及后续的决定是对这一困境的解决尝试。续写中可以详细描述他们交流后想出的办法，以及这一办法对解决“我”的困境起到的作用。伏笔：西川夫人提到自己难以独自前往且门票贵。回应：这促使“我”和朋友们重新思考门票分配，可能会改变原本抛硬币的决定。续写中可以写大家因为她的话，决定把票让给她，或者陪她一起想办法去参加丰收节。伏笔：丰收节有美味食物、精致手工艺品和喜欢的乐队演出。回应：续写中可以描述“我”带西川夫人参加丰收节时，一起体验这些特色活动，展现丰收节的魅力，也突出帮助他人带来的快乐。伏笔：爸爸给“我”两张门票后忙于生意。回应：说明爸爸没有参与到门票分配的讨论中，“我”和朋友们需要自行解决问题。续写中可以体现大家在没有大人干预的情况下，如何成熟地处理这个复杂的情况。续写要点（两段）第一段：重点描写奥利和马雷娅交流后的想法和决定。他们可能会提议把票让给西川夫人，或者想出其他兼顾朋友和邻居的办法。要详细描述他们的神情、语言，体现出善良和友爱。第二段：讲述“我”带西川夫人去丰收节的过程。描述丰收节热闹的场景，以及西川夫人的反应，如她看到美食、手工艺品和乐队表演时的兴奋，同时体现“我”和朋友们帮助他人后的满足感。情感线起初，三人因门票贵对丰收节感到失望，获得免费门票后又陷入分配的纠结与困惑。西川夫人出现后，大家产生同情。奥利和马雷娅交流时，流露出善良的本性，决定做出让步。“我”带西川夫人去丰收节时，充满热情与期待，看到她开心，“我”和朋友们收获了满足与快乐，情感从纠结困惑逐渐转变为温暖与美好。故事线丰收节信息引出线：从看到海报知晓丰收节，到了解其特色及门票价格。门票获取线：在“我”父母商店获得两张免费门票。门票分配矛盾线：三人面临两张票如何分配的难题。邻居求助线：西川夫人表达想去丰收节但有困难。解决方案形成线：奥利和马雷娅交流后提出解决办法。帮助邻居实现愿望线：“我”带西川夫人参加丰收节。主旨升华句Truefriendshipisnotonlyaboutsharingjoysbutalsoaboutmakingsacrificesforothers,aswedidforMrs.Nishikawa.

真正的友谊不仅在于分享快乐，还在于为他人做出牺牲，就像我们为西川夫人所做的那样。Sometimes,thegreatesthappinesscomesfrombringingsmilestothefacesofthoseinneed,justlikeouractofkindnessattheHarvestFair.

有时候，最大的幸福来自于给那些有需要的人带来笑容，就像我们在丰收节的善举一样。Inthefaceofadilemma,choosingtobekindcanturnadifficultsituationintoabeautifulmemory,asweexperiencedwiththetickets.

在困境面前，选择善良可以将困难的局面变成美好的回忆，就像我们在门票问题上的经历一样。Thisexperiencetaughtusthatthevalueofafestivalliesnotonlyinitsattractionsbutalsointhekindnessandlovewesharewithothers.

这次经历让我们明白，一个节日的价值不仅在于它的吸引力，还在于我们与他人分享的善良和爱。ByhelpingMrs.Nishikawa,welearnedthatsmallactsofkindnesscanhaveabigimpactandcreateamorecaringcommunity.

通过帮助西川夫人，我们明白了小小的善举可以产生巨大的影响，并创造一个更有爱心的社区。写作示范一OllieandMareyaexchangedglancesandtheywhisperedsomething.Then,Ollielookedupatmewithawarmsmileandsaid,“Hey,IthinkweshouldgivetheticketstoMrs.Nishikawa.Sheseemssolonelyanditwouldmeantheworldtoher.”Mareyanoddedinagreement,adding,“Yeah,wecanalwaysfindotherfunthingstodotogether.Makingherhappyismoreimportantnow.”Theirwordsfilledmewithpride.IimmediatelyturnedtoMrs.Nishikawaandsaid,“Don'tworry,Mrs.Nishikawa.Youcanhavethesetwotickets.WewillaccompanyyoutotheHarvestFair.”Shewassosurprisedthathereyeswidened,andthentearsofjoywelledupinthem.Whenthedaycame,IbroughtMrs.NishikawatotheHarvestFair.Thefairwasbustlingwithactivity.Colorfulstallsdisplayedallkindsofdeliciousfoodanddelicatecrafts.Asweentered,Mrs.Nishikawa'sfacelitupwithexcitement.Shewalkedaround,marvelingateverything.WhenthebandEagleDazestartedplaying,sheclappedanddancedalong.Seeinghersohappy,Ifeltasenseofcontentment.OllieandMareyajoineduslater,andweallsharedthiswonderfuldaytogether,knowingthatwehadmadetherightchoice.写作示范二OllieandMareyaexchangedglancesandtheywhisperedsomething.Afteramoment,Mareyasteppedforwardandsaid,“Ithinkweshouldpoolourpocketmoneyandbuyonemoreticket.ThenwecanallgotothefairwithMrs.Nishikawa.”Olliechimedin,“That'sagreatidea!Itmightbeabittight,butit'sworthit.”Iwastouchedbytheirgenerosity.Wequicklycountedourmoneyandfoundthatwecouldaffordanotherticket.WetoldMrs.Nishikawaourplan,andshewasoverjoyed.Shethankedusrepeatedly,herfaceflushedwithhappiness.Whenthedaycame,IbroughtMrs.NishikawatotheHarvestFair.Theatmospherewaselectric.Thesmellofpopcornandroastednutsfilledtheair.WeguidedMrs.Nishikawatodifferentstalls,tryingvariousfoodsandadmiringthebeautifulcrafts.Shetoldusstoriesaboutthefairssheusedtoattendwhenshewasyoung.Attheconcertarea,weallswayedtothemusicofEagleDaze.Itwasadayfilledwithlaughterandnewmemories.Wenotonlyenjoyedthefairbutalsostrengthenedourfriendshipandmadeanoldwoman'sdreamcometrue.【答案】OllieandMareyaexchangedglancesandtheywhisperedsomething.Thentheyturnedtomewithsmilesontheirfaces.“WethinkMrs.Nishikawashouldhavetheticket,”Olliesaid.“Wecanhavefuns