塑料珍珠项链续写分析讲解与写作+课件-2025届高三下学期英语一轮复习专项

塑料珍珠项链续写

分析讲解

5W1H原则when:确定文章的主体时态where:确定发生地点，激活环境词汇who:用第几人称叙述，确定“入戏”人物what:根据以上要素确定事件内容，找准核心why:根核心内容或矛盾的原因how:思考故事该如何发展，怎样解决矛盾原文线索分析讲解

①Jenny

wasaprettyeight-year-oldgirl.

②

Onedaywhensheandhermotherwere

shopping

atthe

store,Jennysawa

beautifulplastic(塑料）necklace.Howeagerlyshewantedit!Butwhenshesawtheprice,

herheartsankalittle.She

gathereduphercourage

andaskedhermotherifshewouldbuyitforher.Hermothersaid,“Well,itisa

prettynecklace,butitcostsanawfullotofmoney.Icanbuyyouthenecklace,butwhenwegethome,weshouldmakeupalistofhouseworkthatyoucandotopayforthenecklace.”Jennyagreedimmediately,

feelingaburstofjoy.Sohermotherboughtthepearlnecklaceforher.Jennyworkedonherhousework

determinedlyandearnestly

everyday.SoonJennypaidoffthepearls.WHOWHOWHEN核心事件的背景：塑料项链的由来，Jenny对它的喜欢程度以及为之付出的努力。WHEREWHAT原文线索分析讲解

③Jennyhadavery

lovingdaddy.WhenJennywenttobed,hewouldreadJenny

herfavoritestory.

Onenightwhenhe

finished

thestory,hesaid,“Jenny,doyouloveme?”“Oh,yes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirlsaid

delightedly,

withabroadsmileonherface.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”

Hearingthat,

Jennyfrozethere,ananxiousexpressiontwistingherface.

“Oh!Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRosy,myfavoritedoll.Rememberher?Yougavehertomelastyearformybirthday.Okay?”“Ohno,darling,that’sokay.”Herfather

brushedhercheekwithakiss,gentlyandcalmly.“Goodnight,littleone.”

WHOWHEREWHENWHATCLUECLUE核心事件的矛盾：爸爸向Jenny要塑料项链，她不给，找其他东西作掩护，爸爸不介意。原文线索分析讲解

④Aweeklater,herfatheronceagainaskedJennyafterherstory,“Doyouloveme?”“Ohyes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirl

murmuredsoftly,tryingtoescapefromherfather’seyes.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”“Oh,Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRibbons,mytoyhorse.Doyourememberher?Sheismyfavorite.”Thelittlegirlbegged.“No,that’sokay,”herfathersaid,smilingbroadlyandsweetlyandbrushedhercheekagainwithakiss.“Godblessyou,littleone.Sweetdreams.”WHENWHENWHATCLUECLUE矛盾重演：爸爸又向Jenny要塑料项链，她还是不给，又找其他东西作掩护，爸爸还是不介意。所给句子分析Paragraph1：

Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiously

forhimonthebed.________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefather

took

outabluebox.________________________________________________________________相同的时间、地点、人物、矛盾WHYHOW

5W1H原则when:晚上睡觉前where:卧室who:Jenny和她的爸爸what:爸爸向Jenny要塑料珍珠项链，她不给why:Jenny辛辛苦苦努力得来的,非常喜欢how:根据原文线索和所给句子提示，解决矛盾

思路梳理思考：1.Jenny为什么anxious？她是不是很坚定？她爱不爱爸爸？2.爸爸要项链的目的是把女儿心爱的东西拿走吗？3.爸爸爱不爱女儿？要走项链的根本目的是什么？3.最后Jenny有没有给爸爸项链？主动给还是被动给？4.bluebox是空的还是里面有什么东西？为什么给Jenny?5.故事围绕什么升华？

思路梳理Paragraph1：1.爸爸像往常一样讲故事

3分2.Jenny无心听故事，一直在想着要不要给爸爸项链4分3.

读完故事，主动把项链给爸爸，因为她更爱爸爸4分Paragraph2：1.打开盒子，里面是一条漂亮的真的珍珠项链6分2.Jenny非常惊讶，兴奋，父女的对话或表情、动作3分3.爸爸给Jenny戴上项链，两人高兴流泪拥抱在一起也可以升华:围绕爱

2分

Paragraph1：

Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.

①Herfather,asusual,readthestorydelightedlywithabroadsmileonhisface.

②Holdingtheprettypearlnecklacetightlyandfirmly,Jennyseemedtobetotallyabsentmindedtoherfavoritestory,tryingtoescapefromherfather'seyes.

③Whenthestorycametoanend,unexpectedly,Jennygathereduphercourageandofferedherbelovednecklacetoherlovingfather,sayingsoftly,“daddy,youknow,

Iloveyoumorethanthenecklace,hereyouare

.”

Withthis,

shebrushedherfather'scheckwithakiss,thenecklaceslidingintoherfather’shands.续写答案赏析

Paragraph2：

Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefather

took

outabluebox.

①MuchtooJenny'samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,②whichsetherheart

racingviolently.Seeingthat,Jennyfrozethere,an

excitedexpression

twistingherface.Beforeshewasabletosaysomething,herfatherbrushedawarmkissonherfaceandgatheredherintohisarms.③Wearingthegenuinepearlnecklace,Jennywassurethatshewasthehappiestgirlintheworld,tearswellinguphereyes.续写答案赏析

eagerlyadv.渴望地，急切地gathereupone’scourage鼓起勇气

aburstofjoy一阵喜悦determinedlyandearnestly坚定并认真地payoff

付清，获得成功abroadsmileonherface脸上有着灿烂的微笑brushone’scheekwithakiss轻轻地吻了一下某人的脸颊Godblessyou！上帝保佑你！Good