读后续写-100+英亩山林迷路记：黑暗中那束光的奇迹+(1)+讲义 高二下期期末模拟质量检测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Icanwalkthepathtothelakenearourhouseinthedarkwithoutaflashlight—myfeetknowtheway.Aroundmyfamily’scottageinOntario,therearemorethan100acrestoexplore,crossedbycreeks(小溪)andvalleys.I’vebeenhikingupthemountains,crossingthosecreeksonthatlandforthepastthirtyyears,soitwasashockwhenIgotlostlastwinter.Lateonebright,afternooninFebruary,Iputonmysnowshoesandheadednorthwestfromthehouse.Whilemakingmywayupthelong,gradualslope,Istoppedtoappreciatethebeautyofnature.Finally,Iarrivedatthetopofthemountain.Withtoweringtreesthatseemedtotouchtheskyandcolorfulwildflowersundermyfeet,Itookadeepbreathandyelledattheremotemountain.Iwastotallycarriedawaybythebeautyofnature.Asthesunset,myfeetandfingersstartedtofeelcold.Idecidedtoheadback.Ididn’tturnbackthewaythatIhadjustcome.Ichangedmydirectionandchosethesteepsideofthehill.Ihadageneralsensethataheadwasthecreekthatledtothevalley,soIwalkedslowly,trustingthatthecreekwouldleadmetotheroadtomycottage.Imademywaydownthehillside.Alongtheway,Ipickedupsticksandexploredmywaythroughthisstrangewoods.Iusedmyphonetophotographthetrees,mountains,andanythingthatcaughtmyeyes.Asitwasgraduallygrowingdark,Ibegantodoubtthisroute.Wherewasthecreek?HadIwalkedinthewrongdirection?Ipulledoutmyphonetocheckmylocation,butitdiedinmyhand.Thatsenseofdoubtnowfeltmorelikepanic:Ididn’tevenhaveanyfoodoraflashlight.Itwasgettingdarkeranddarker.Iwascompletelyalone,lostinthewilderness.Iwalkednervously,trippingoverthingsinmypathandfeelingfrightenedwitharacingheartbeat.IthoughtIwasgoingtodiehereinthewoods.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Butthen,IwasabouttogiveuphopewhenIsawaweaklightinthedistance._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thehouse’sownerwelcomedmeinside._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意作者对自家位于安大略的小屋周边环境十分熟悉，在这片超过100英亩、遍布小溪和山谷的土地上已徒步三十年，闭着眼都能走到附近的湖边。去年二月一个阳光明媚的下午，作者穿上雪鞋向西北方向登山，山顶的美景让其陶醉。日落时，作者决定返程，没有走原路，而是选择了陡峭的山坡，想着顺着小溪就能回到小屋。下山途中，作者拍照留念，天色渐暗时，却发现没找到小溪，怀疑走错路，拿出手机查看位置，结果手机没电。此时孤身一人身处荒野，既无食物也无手电筒，作者满心恐惧，以为自己要命丧于此。故事山分析开端：作者在熟悉的土地上向西北方向登山，享受美景。发展：作者决定返程，选择不同路线，途中拍照，天色渐暗开始怀疑路线。高潮：手机没电，作者意识到迷路，身处荒野，极度恐慌。结局（待续写）：作者看到远处灯光并前往，得到帮助。尾声（待续写）：作者在房子主人的帮助下安全回家，感悟这段经历。伏笔以及在续写中的回应作者对周边环境熟悉，暗示即使迷路也有找到出路的可能，续写中可体现凭借以往经验判断方向前往灯光处。提到天色渐暗，为后文手机没电、陷入恐慌做铺垫，续写中可回应在黑暗中朝着灯光艰难前行的困难。作者选择陌生的陡峭山坡下山，是迷路的原因，续写中可体现对这条错误路线的反思，以及在寻找灯光过程中因地形困难而遭遇的阻碍。未携带食物和手电筒，加剧困境，续写中可体现到达有灯光处时因饥饿和寒冷对屋内温暖与食物的渴望。作者以为要命丧于此的绝望，与后文看到灯光形成强烈反差，续写中可体现看到灯光后的惊喜和重新燃起的希望。续写要点（两段）第一段：着重描写看到灯光后的心理变化，如从绝望到燃起希望，以及向灯光处前进的过程，包括途中克服的困难，如被树枝绊倒、雪地难行等。第二段：描述房子主人的热情接待，如提供食物、温暖的环境，以及与主人的交流，最后表达对这次经历的感悟，如对陌生人善意的感激，对自然的敬畏。情感线从迷路时的恐慌、绝望，到看到灯光时的惊喜、希望重燃，再到进入房子后的安心、感激，最后是对这次经历的深刻感悟，展现情感的起伏变化。故事线作者迷路，陷入恐慌。看到远处灯光，燃起希望。艰难向灯光处前行，克服困难。到达有灯光的房子处。受到房子主人热情接待。安全回家，感悟经历。主旨升华句Inthefaceoftheunknowninnature,hopecanalwaysshinethroughthedarkestmoments,justlikethelightinthewilderness.Thekindnessofstrangerscanbeawarmharborinthestormyseaoflife,remindingusofthebeautyofhumanity.Ourexperiencesinnature,whetherfullofbeautyorhardships,arepreciouslessonsthatshapeourunderstandingoflifeandourplaceintheworld.Eveninthemostfamiliarplaces,unexpectedchallengescanarise,teachingustobepreparedandadaptableatalltimes.Amomentofdespaircanturnintoanewbeginning,anditisourperseveranceandthehelpofothersthatleadusoutofthedarkness.写作示范示范一

Butthen,IwasabouttogiveuphopewhenIsawaweaklightinthedistance.Atthatmoment,myheartleapedwithaglimmerofhope.Ignoringthepaininmylegsandthecoldnessthathadseepedintomybones,Istumbledtowardsthelight.Thesnowwasdeep,andeverystepwasastruggle.Brancheswhippedatmyface,butIpressedon.AsIgotcloser,thelightgrewbrighter,guidingmelikealighthouseinthestormysea.Thehouse’sownerwelcomedmeinside.Hequicklybroughtmeawarmblanketandacupofhottea.Shivering,Isatbythefireplace,feelingthewarmthslowlyreturntomybody.TheownerlistenedpatientlyasItoldhimmystory.Hethenofferedtodrivemehome.Onthewayback,Iwasfilledwithgratitudeforhiskindness.Thisexperiencetaughtmetoalwaysbepreparedandtoneverlosehope,nomatterhowdirethesituationmayseem.示范二

Butthen,IwasabouttogiveuphopewhenIsawaweaklightinthedistance.Itwaslikeamiracle,cuttingthroughthethickdarkness.Mydespairwasinstantlyreplacedbyarushofexcitement.Ipickedupmypace,thoughmyfeetwerenumbfromthecold.Thepathwasuneven,andIfellseveraltimes,buteachtimeIgotup,moredeterminedthanever.Thelightseemedtobemyonlysalvation.Thehouse’sownerwelcomedmeinside.Thesmellofwarmfoodhitmynostrils,andIrealizedhowhungryIwas.Hefedmeandletmerestforawhile.AfterIrecovered,hecalledmyfamilytoletthemknowIwassafe.AsIleftthehouse,Ithankedhimsincerely.Thisadventureinthewildernessmademeappreciatethevalueofkindnessandthepowerofhope.Italsomademerespecttheunpredictabilityofnatureevenmore.【答案】Butthen,asIwasabouttogiveuphope,Isawaweaklightinthedistance.AsIcamecloser,thelightgrewbrighter.Itwascomingfromasmallareaintheforest.Inthecenterstoodatinywoodenhouse,itswindowsshiningwar