译林版高中英语必修第三册UNIT3 Period6写作(Writing)课件

Period6

UNIT3

Theworldonline主题语境

人与社会

——科技发展与信息技术创新，信息安全图表类调查报告课时学案写作(Writing)图表类调查报告的内容一般包括图表描述和分析，以及得出的结论。图表类调查报告属于应用文。

[基本框架]1．开头——图表内容或者调查报告目的

2．主体——描述图表并分析

3．结尾——得出结论

[常用表达]1．Ascanbeseenfromthechart...如图所示……2．Thereisanincreasein...在……方面出现增长。3．...timesasmanypeoplewentonlineusingmobiledevices数倍于使用移动设备上网的人数4．manyreasonsinvolvedinthissituation这种情况涉及很多原因5．holdtheopinionthat持有……的观点6．havedifferentchoicesonhowtotravel关于旅行出行有不同的选择7．haveremainedthesame保持不变8．theadvantagesanddisadvantagesof……的优缺点下表显示了你对你校学生上网方式的调查结果。

请你用英语写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法。词数80左右。WayspeopleaccesstheInternetbypercentage

UserswhoaccesstheInternetwithoutusingmobiledevicesUserswhoaccesstheInternetusingmobiledevicesFiveyearsago31%69%Now5%95%[审题构思]1．确定体裁：说明文；2．确定人称：第三人称；3．确定时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；4．确定内容：①描述图表背景信息；

②描述图表内容和反应出的问题现象；③个人观点看法。[遣词造句]1．人们上网的方式发生了很大的变化。Therehavebeen______________________peopleaccesstheInternet.2．随着经济的发展，手机和平板电脑等移动设备越来越便宜，使用越来越广泛。_____________________economy，mobiledeviceslikecellphonesandtabletsarecheaperandmorewidelyused.greatchangesinthewayWiththedevelopmentof3．人们更喜欢通过移动设备上网。____________________theInternetthroughmobiledevices.4．我们从表中可以看出，在过去的五年里，使用移动设备上网的用户数量从69%上升到95%。______________________thatoverthepastfiveyears，thenumberofuserswhoaccesstheInternetusingmobiledeviceshasrisenfrom69%to95%.PeopleprefertoaccessWecanseefromthetable5．不使用移动设备上网的用户比例则从31%下降到5%。ThepercentageofuserswhoaccesstheInternet___________________________hasdroppedfrom31%to5%.6．随着移动设备技术的发展，通过移动设备访问互联网的趋势可能会继续下去。Withthedevelopmentofmobiledevicestechnology，_________________________________throughmobiledeviceswillbelikelytocarryon.withoutusingmobiledevicesthetrendofaccessingtheInternet[句式升级]使用as非限制性定语从句以及while表示“对比，对照”的用法改写句4和句5。_________________________，overthepastfiveyears，thenumberofuserswhoaccesstheInternetusingmobiledeviceshasrisenfrom69%to95%，_____thepercentageofuserswhoaccesstheInternetwithoutusingmobiledeviceshasdroppedfrom31%to5%.Ascanbeseenfromthetablewhile[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]TherehavebeengreatchangesinthewaypeopleaccesstheInternet.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy，mobiledeviceslikecellphonesandtabletsarecheaperandmorewidelyused.PeopleprefertoaccesstheInternetthroughmobiledevices.Ascanbeseenfromthetable，overthepastfiveyears，thenumberofuserswhoaccesstheInternetusingmobiledeviceshasrisenfrom69%to95%，whilethepercentageofuserswhoaccesstheInternetwithoutusingmobiledeviceshasdroppedfrom31%to5%.AsfarasI'mconcerned，withthedevelopmentofmobiledevicestechnology，thetrendofaccessingtheInternetthroughmobiledeviceswillbelikelytocarryon.位置与天气状况描写[词块积累]1．clearup放晴2．heavy/violentstorms狂风暴雨3．thesetting/decliningsun落日4．arainyseason多雨的季节5．astormynight暴风雨之夜6．besituated/located/liein/on/at...位于……7．withinastone'sthrowofthebeach离海滨仅咫尺之遥8．inavillageamongthehills在群山环抱的村庄里9．aroomfacingsouth一个朝南的房间10．thethinlypopulatedruralarea人烟稀少的农村地区[佳句积累]1．It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling.现在天黑了，雪还在下着。2．Theheavyrainwasbeatingwildlyagainstthewindows.大雨在狂暴地敲打着窗户。3．Morningsunshinefloodedinthroughtheopencurtains.清晨的阳光透过打开的窗帘涌进来。4．Thereisasmallvillagemidwaybetweenthesetwotowns.在这两个镇的中间有个小村子。5．Thebookstoreiswithinastone'sthrowoftheschool.那个书店就在学校的附近。6．Thelakeislocatedattheeasternendofthemountainrange.这个湖位于山脉最东端。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwentuptotheroofforabreakafterstudyingforanhourandwatchedthe50orsopeopleswimminginthenaturalrockpoolbelowourhouse.Itwasasunnyday—ablue，cloudlessskyoveracalmsea.Butthen，asIlookedinthedistance，Idiscoveredaseriesofthreeorfourbigwavesheadingtowardstheshore.I'dseentheseminitsunamis(海啸)manytimesbefore.Theywereheadingataspeedinthedirectionofthepool.Mostpeopleknewhowtolookoutforthem，butfromthescreamsthatstartedcomingfromthebeach，Icouldtellsomeonewasintrouble.Withoutthinking，Irandownintothestreet，holdingmybodyboard(俯伏冲浪板)ontheway，andshoutedatastrangertogoinsidemyhouseandcallthecoastguard.MyneighbourMoiseshadheardthescreamingaswellandwasalsooutsidewithhisbodyboard，sotogetherwerushedtothestepsthatleddowntothesea.Oncewegotcloser，wediscoveredthewaveshadpulledaboyandagirlfromthepoolandintotheopensea.Iknewthatthenearestboatwouldtakeatleast30minutestoreachus.Waitingforhelpwasn'tachoice.Iwasn'tusedtothissortofemergency—I'dneverbeentrainedasalifeguard—butIdidn'tthinktwiceabouttryingtosavethem.IsupposedinawayIwantedtoimpresseveryone：at19，adeallikethatcanseemlikeagoodopportunitytoshowoff.MoisesandIdivedintothewaterandittookus10minutestogettothem.Whenwefinallyreachedthem，theywerealmostlifelesswithonlytheirheadscominginandoutofthewater.Wecouldtelltheywerestillalivefromtheirsmallbreaths，butitwascleartheywouldn'thavebeenabletostaytheremuchlonger.Iheldtheboyandpulledhimovermyboard.Moisesmovedthegirlontohisboard.Wediscussedpushingthembacktotheshore，butweweretoofarout.Wehadtowait，eagerlyhopingforthearrivalofthesavingboat.Thewindblewwildlyandthefreezingseawaterclappedourbodiescontinuously.Thirtyminutesseemedmuchlongeraswejusthelplesslyfloatedontheboundlesssea.Afteralongtime，alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutwiththeleftenergy.Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.Thatnight，wordcamefromthehospitalthatthetwopeoplewereingoodcondition._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________