高考英语复习读后续写练习：自闭症弟弟引来的意外善意+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习自闭症弟弟引来的意外善意1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文I’musedtopeoplestaringatme:Strangelooksbecauseofthestrangesoundsmybrothermakes.PublicplaceshavebeendifficultplacesformyfamilytodealwitheversinceMyleswasdiagnosedwithautism(诊断为自闭症)attheageoftwo.Ibuiltawallaroundmyheart,ashelltoprotectmyweakestpartsfromotherpeople’sopinionsaboutmyfamily.Ithurttoomuchwhentheydidn’tunderstand,soItoldmyselfitdidn’tmatter.SowhenIfoundmyselfatarestaurantwithmybrother,whostartedscreamingandhittingthetable,Ilookedupwithcautiouseyesatthemiddle-agedwomanapproaching.Herfacewasperfectlypeacefulassheassessedthesituationatthetablewithmybrotherandme.Ireadiedmycomeback.Ifshehadacomplaintaboutmybrother’sbehavior,IwaspreparedtopullthetriggerandgiveherthepieceofmymindIhadheldontobefore.4续写原文“Hi,howareyoudoing?”sheasked,hertonekind,hereyessteady.“I’mfine,”Isaidcarefully.“Ihopeyoudon’tmindmeasking,”shecontinued.“Butdoesyourbrotherhaveautism?”Iwassurprised.“Yeah,hehasautism,”Irepliedtothelady,whowaswaitingpatiently.“Well,Iraisedachildwithautism,”shebegan.Great.Nowshereallyfeltlikeshecouldtellmehowtotakecareofmybrother.Ididn’twanttohearit.“Iknowyoudon’tknowme,butmynameisPam,”shesaid,reachingtotouchMyles’shoulder.“LikeIsaid,Iraisedachildwithautism,andifyoueverneedanyhelp,pleasecallme.”Ilookedatthehandsheoffered,holdingapieceofpaperwithhernameandnumberonit.“Icanhelpyou,”shesaid.“Ifyoueverwantmetowatchhimforyou.Giveyouguysabreak.”5段首句Paragraph1:Icouldn’tspeakbecauseIgotemotionalandwasabouttocry.Paragraph2:Ididcallher,andshebecameascloseasfamilyandtaughtusalot.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了一个因自闭症而面临困扰的家庭故事。作者弟弟迈尔斯两岁确诊自闭症后，公共场所对他们一家充满艰难，旁人异样目光让作者内心筑起防御之墙。一次在餐厅，迈尔斯突然尖叫拍桌，作者正防备他人指责时，一位中年女士帕姆走来。她不仅未指责，还称自己也抚养过自闭症孩子，并主动提供帮助，留下联系方式。这意外的善意深深触动作者，后来作者联系帕姆，她成为家庭亲密一员，给予诸多帮助。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Icouldn’tspeakbecauseIgotemotionalandwasabouttocry.自从弟弟迈尔斯被诊断为自闭症，每次身处公共场所，异样的目光就如芒在背。那天在餐厅，弟弟突然失控，尖叫着用力拍打桌子。我心中一紧，下意识挺直脊背，警惕地看着周围，那些投来的目光仿佛带着刺，让我做好了迎接指责的准备。我深知，在别人眼中，弟弟的行为是如此怪异，而我，必须像个战士一样守护家人。每一次这样的场景，都像一场战斗，让我疲惫又无奈。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:Ididcallher,andshebecameascloseasfamilyandtaughtusalot.就在我满心防备时，一位中年女士缓缓走来。她脸上带着平和的微笑，眼神里没有丝毫嫌弃。我有些诧异，不知她意欲何为。她轻声询问弟弟是否患有自闭症，我犹豫着承认后，她竟说自己也抚养过自闭症孩子，还主动递上写有联系方式的纸条，表示愿意帮忙照顾弟弟，给我们一家喘息机会。那一刻，我心中的防备之墙轰然倒塌，泪水在眼眶中打转，这突如其来的善意，如冬日暖阳，温暖了我长久以来冰冷的心。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现EversincemybrotherMyleswasdiagnosedwithautism,publicplaceshavebeenasourceofgreatdistressforourfamily.Thatdayintherestaurant,Mylessuddenlystartedscreamingandhittingthetableviolently.Ifeltasurgeofpanic.Ilookedaroundwarily,expectingtheusualjudgmentallooksandpossiblecomplaints.Iwasmentallybracingmyselffortheworst,readytodefendmybrotherandfamilyatanycost.Theatmosphereintherestaurantseemedtofreeze,witheveryone'seyesfixedonus,makingmefeelextremelyuncomfortable.13范文呈现JustasIwasonthevergeofanoutburst,amiddle-agedwomanapproached.Herfacewascalmandkind.Sheaskedmesoftlyifmybrotherhadautism.Surprised,Irepliedaffirmatively.Then,tomyastonishment,shesaidthatshehadraisedachildwithautismherself.Shetookoutapieceofpaperwithhernameandnumberonitandofferedtohelp.Shesaidshecouldwatchmybrothertogiveourfamilyabreak.Iwascompletelytakenabackbythisunexpectedkindness.Istaredather,unabletobelievewhatIwashearing.14升级版范文呈现EversincemybrotherMyleswasdiagnosedwithautism,publicplaceshavebeennothingbutanightmareforourfamily.Thatdayintherestaurant,Mylessuddenlyeruptedintoafitofscreamingandviolenttable-hitting.Instantly,Itensedup,myeyesscanningthesurroundingswarily.Theeyesfixedonus,filledwithcuriosityandoftenjudgment,mademefeellikeacorneredanimal,readytofightback.Itwasasifthewholeworldwasagainstus,andIwasdeterminedtoprotectmyfamilyatallcosts.15升级版范文呈现JustwhenIwasonthevergeoflosingmytemper,amiddle-agedwoman,whosefacewasadornedwithawarmandkindsmile,approached.Softly,sheinquiredifmybrotherhadautism.Surprisedbeyondwords,Inodded.Whatfollowedleftmecompletelystunned.Sherevealedthatshe,too,hadraisedachildwithautismand,withagentlegesture,handedmeapieceofpaperwithhercontactinformation,offeringtowatchm