高考英语复习读后续写练习：别样圣诞：在爱与奉献中找寻温暖与快乐+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习别样圣诞：在爱与奉献中找寻温暖与快乐1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ADifferentChristmasItwasalmostChristmas,butDiegowasn’tfeelingveryexcited.ThiswasthefirstChristmassincehisparentsgotdivorced.Andnothingfeltthesame.Heandhisbrother,Samuel,wouldn’tevengettoseeMomthisChristmas.“Everything’sdifferent,”DiegosaidtoDad.“Iknow.”Dad’seyesweresad.“Sometimesthingschangebeforetheygetbetter.”Hewasquietforabit,thensmiled.“Christmaswillbedifferentthisyear,butthatdoesn’tmeanwewon’thavesomegoodtimes.We’llstillbecelebratingthebirthoftheSavior.”Diegonodded.ItwouldbehardnotseeingMom,butmaybeChristmascouldstillbegood,justasDadsaid.DiegowantedtohelpmakethisChristmasahappyone.4续写原文Hewenttohisroomtothink.SometimesforChristmastheydidafamilyserviceproject.Whatcouldtheydothisyear?Diegolookedaroundhisroom.Hesawatoycarhedidn’tplaywithanymore.Hepickeditupandspun(使快速旋转)thewheels.Itwasstillreallygood.MaybeheandDadandSamuelcouldgivesometoystokidswhodidn’thaveany!Hefoundafewothertoysandputtheminabagwiththecar.WhenDiegofinished,hetookthebagtoSamuel’sroom.“CanIhelpyoucleanyourroom?”heasked.“It’sasurpriseforDad.”5续写原文Samuellookedupfromthepicturehewasdrawing.“Sure.”TheboysworkedtogethertocleanSamuel’sroom.Diegotoldhimabouttheplan.TheyfoundafewtoysthatSamueldidn’tplaywithandaddedthemtothebag.Whentheyweredone,theycarriedthebagdownstairs.“Dad,”Diegosaid,“wefoundsometoyswedon’tplaywithanymore.Canwegivethemtokidswhodon’thaveanytoys?”Dadlookedsurprisedandhappy.“That’sagreatidea!Let’stakethemtothehomelessshelterthisafternoon.”Visitingtheshelterwasfun.DiegoandSamuelgottoplaywithsomeofthekidswhileDadtalkedtothegrown-ups.6段首句Paragraph1：Onthewayhome,DadaskedwhatelsetheycoulddotomakethisChristmasspecial.Paragraph2:Attheendoftheday,Diegowastiredbuthappy.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9圣诞节即将来临，然而迭戈却兴奋不起来，因为这是父母离婚后的第一个圣诞节，一切都不一样了，他和弟弟塞缪尔甚至在这个圣诞节都见不到妈妈。迭戈向爸爸倾诉，爸爸安慰他事情有时在变好之前会先发生变化，虽然今年的圣诞节会有所不同，但他们依然可以过得很开心，依然可以庆祝救世主的诞生。迭戈想让这个圣诞节变得快乐，他回到房间思考，想起有时他们会在圣诞节做家庭服务项目，于是他决定和爸爸、弟弟一起把自己不玩的玩具送给没有玩具的孩子。他和弟弟整理出一些玩具，爸爸非常赞同他们的想法，并带他们下午去了收容所。在收容所里，迭戈和塞缪尔还和那里的孩子们一起玩耍。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:Onthewayhome,DadaskedwhatelsetheycoulddotomakethisChristmasspecial.在回家的路上，爸爸问他们还能做些什么让这个圣诞节变得特别。迭戈和塞缪尔陷入了沉思，他们的脑海里飞快地转动着各种想法。突然，迭戈眼睛一亮，兴奋地说：“爸爸，我们可以给妈妈做一张圣诞贺卡，把我们对她的思念和祝福都写在上面，然后寄给她，这样妈妈也能感受到我们的爱。”塞缪尔听了，也连连点头，觉得这是个很棒的主意。爸爸微笑着表示赞同，他说：“这真是个温馨的想法，妈妈一定会非常开心的。”回到家后，迭戈和塞缪尔立刻行动起来。他们找出彩色卡纸、彩笔和剪刀，开始精心制作贺卡。迭戈在贺卡上画了一个大大的圣诞树，树上挂满了各种各样的礼物，树下是他们一家人手牵手的温馨画面。塞缪尔则用稚嫩的笔迹写下了对妈妈的祝福：“妈妈，我们好想你，希望你圣诞节快乐，我们永远爱你。”他们小心翼翼地把贺卡装进信封，贴上邮票，打算第二天一早就去邮局寄出去。做完贺卡后，迭戈又想到可以和爸爸、弟弟一起装饰屋子，营造出浓厚的圣诞氛围。于是，他们一起拿出家里的圣诞装饰，把屋子装扮得焕然一新，还在门口挂上了大大的圣诞花环。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Attheendoftheday,Diegowastiredbuthappy.一天结束了，迭戈虽然疲惫，但却满心欢喜。他回想起今天发生的一切，心中充满了温暖和满足。上午他们去了收容所，给那些没有玩具的孩子们带去了欢乐，看到孩子们脸上洋溢的笑容，他觉得自己做了一件非常有意义的事情。下午他们一起制作贺卡，把对妈妈的爱都倾注在了贺卡里，想到妈妈收到贺卡时的惊喜表情，他的心里就甜滋滋的。晚上一家人一起装饰屋子，整个过程充满了欢声笑语，让他感受到了久违的家庭温暖。虽然这个圣诞节没有妈妈在身边，但他们通过自己的努力，让这个圣诞节变得格外特别。他明白了，即使生活发生了变化，只要心中有爱，并且愿意付出行动，就依然可以创造出美好的回忆。他躺在床上，看着装饰一新的房间，带着满满的幸福进入了梦乡，期待着新的一天的到来，也期待着妈妈能收到他们的贺卡，感受到他们浓浓的爱。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Onthewayhome,DadaskedwhatelsetheycoulddotomakethisChristmasspecial.DiegoandSamuelfellintodeepthought,theirmindsracingwithvariousideas.Suddenly,Diego'seyeslitup,andhesaidexcitedly,"Dad,wecanmakeaChristmascardforMom.Wecanwritedownallourthoughtsandblessingsforherandthensendittoher.Inthisway,Momcanalsofeelourlove."Samuelnoddedinagreement,thinkingitwasagreatidea.Dadsmiledandsaid,"That'sareallysweetidea.Momwillbeveryhappy."Afterreturninghome,DiegoandSamuelimmediatelygottowork.Theyfoundcoloredcardstock,coloredpens,andscissorsandstartedtomakethecardcarefully.DiegodrewabigChristmastreeonthecard.Thetreewasdecoratedwithallkindsofgifts,andtherewasawarmpictureoftheirfamilyholdinghandsunderthetree.SamuelwrotedowntheblessingstoMomwithhischildishhandwriting,"Mom,wemissyousomuch.WehopeyouhaveahappyChristmas.Weloveyouforever."Theycarefullyputthecardintoanenvelope,stuckastamponit,andplannedtogotothepostofficetosenditoutearlythenextmorning.Afterfinishingthecard,DiegothoughtofdecoratingthehousewithDadandSamueltocreateastrongChristmasatmosphere.So,theytookouttheChristmasdecorationsathometogether,decoratedthehousefromtoptobottom,andhungabigChristmaswreathonthedoor.14范文呈现Attheendoftheday,Diegowastiredbuthappy.Herecalledeverythingthathadhappenedtoday,andhisheartwasfilledwithwarmthandcontentment.Inthemorning,theywenttothehomelessshelterandbroughtjoytothechildrenwhodidn'thavetoys.Seeingthesmilesonthechildren'sfaces,hefeltthathehaddoneaverymeaningfulthing.Intheafternoon,theymadetheChristmascardtogetherandpouredalltheirloveforMomintoit.ThinkingofMom'ssurprisedexpressionwhenshereceivedthecard,hefeltverysweetinhisheart.Intheevening,thewholefamilydecoratedthehousetogether.Thewholeprocesswasfulloflaughterandmadehimfeelthelong-lostfamilywarmth.AlthoughMomwasn'twiththemthisChristmas,theymadethisChristmasveryspecialthroughtheirownefforts.Heunderstoodthateveniflifechanges,aslongasthereisloveintheheartandawillingnesstotakeaction,beautifulmemoriescanstillbecreated.Helayinbed,lookingatthenewlydecoratedroom,andfellasleepwithfullhappiness,lookingforwardtothearrivalofthenewdayandalsolookingforwardtoMomreceivingtheircardandfeelingtheirdeeplove.15升级版范文呈现Onthewayhome,DadaskedwhatelsetheycoulddotomakethisChristmasspecial.DiegoandSamuelsankintoadeepcontemplation,theirmindswhirlingwithcountlesspossibilities.Allofasudden,Diego'seyessparkledwithexcitementasheexclaimed,"Dad,weshouldmakeaChristmascardforMom!Wecanpendownallourthoughtsandwarmwishesforherandthensenditoff.Thatway,Momwillsurelyfeelourlove."Samuelnoddedvigorously,deemingitabrilliantidea.Dadsmiledapprovinglyandsaid,"That'satrulytouchingthought.Momwillbeoverthemoon."Uponreachinghome,DiegoandSamuelsprangintoaction.Theyrummagedthroughtheirsupplies,gatheringcoloredcardstock,vividpens,andscissors,andthensetaboutcraftingthecardwithgreatcare.DiegometiculouslydrewamagnificentChristmastreeonthecard,adornedwithanarrayofcolorfulgifts,andbeneathit,hesketchedaheartwarmingsceneoftheirfamilyholdinghands.Samuel,withhischildlikehandwriting,penneddowntheheartfeltwords,"Mom,wemissyoudearly.WishingyouajoyousChristmas.Weloveyoualways."Theycarefullyslippedthecardintoanenvelope,affixedastamp,andplannedtoheadtothepostofficefirstthingthenextmorning.Aftercompletingthecard,Diegohadanotherbrilliantidea-todecoratethehousewithDadandSamueltoinfusetheplacewiththefestivespirit.So,theyretrievedalltheChristmasdecorationsfromstorageandsettowork,transformingthehouseintoawinterwonderland,andevenhungalarge,beautifulChristmaswreathonthefrontdoor.16升级版范文呈现Attheendoftheday,Diegowasexhaustedyetbrimmingwithhappiness.Ashereminiscedaboutallthathadtranspiredthatday,hisheartswelledwithwarmthandaprofoundsenseoffulfillment.Inthemorning,theirvisittothehomelessshelterhadbroughtsomuchjoytothechildrenwhohadsolittle.Witnessingthebeamingsmilesonthoseyoungfaces,Diegoknewthathehaddonesomethingtrulymeaningful.Intheafternoon,craftingtheChristmascardhadbeenalaboroflove,witheverystrokeandeverywordatestamenttotheirdeepaffection