高考英语复习读后续写练习：爱的坚守：用一生编织的善意+“谎言”

高考英语读后续写语篇练习爱的坚守：用一生编织的善意“谎言”1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Aliheardhersingwhensheplayedthepiano.Andhesawhisgrandmotherdiagnosedwithdisabilitywassingingtogetherwithhim.Hewasabsolutelyshocked.Thediseasetookherlegsawayaslongashecouldremember.Hisgrandmotherevendancedtothemusic,totallyattractedbythepieceofmusic.Outofcuriosity,heaskedhisgrandmotherwhathadhappenedonearth.Shegiggledandbeganherstory.4续写原文Oh,dear,letmeshareastorywithyou.Whenyourgrandfatherwentfishingontheboat,Iwassoafraidoflosinghim,andIwassoafraidthathewouldnevercomeback.TheonlywayIcouldstaycalmwastodance.Ipretendedtofeelgood.However,frommybottomofmyheart,Iexperiencedthepainofnotknowingwhethermylovewouldcomebacksafely.EverydayIwenthome,excitedbutfrightenedtoreadhisletters.Healwaysendedhisletterswith“IloveyouwithmylifeandGodblessesyougoodhealth.”Andthenonedaycamealetteronlywiththreesentences,“Ihavelostmyarms.Igiveyoubackyourfreedomandyoudeserveabetterone.”Thinkingforalongtime,ImadeadecisionthatIwouldpretendIwasdisabledtoo.Iboughtastickandawheelchairmyself.ItoldmyfriendsandfamiliesaswellashimthatIgotacaraccident,losingbothofmylegs,unabletodanceanymore.ThenIwenttoseeyourgrandfather.Itoldhim“youarethebetteroneIshoulddeserve;andwearethesame,withoutfeelingsorryforourselves.”Ileanedforwardandshowedhimaweddingdress.“Nowshowmeyouarestillaman,”Isaid,“Iwon’taskagain.”Hefinallysmiledandmanageditonme,walkingtowardsmeandgivingabighug.5续写原文Lookingatgrandmotherforawhile,Aliwasdeeplyinspiredbyher.“YouareanangelandIwillloveyouforever.”Alimurmuredquietly.6段首句Paragraph1：GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.Paragraph2:Afewyearswentbyandsixmonthsaftergrandmother’sfuneral,Alifoundgrandpasittingingrandma’susualchairbyaccidentandsobbingsadly.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9阿里听到有人弹钢琴时，惊讶地发现患有残疾的奶奶跟着歌声一起哼唱，甚至还能随音乐舞动。出于好奇，他询问奶奶缘由，奶奶便笑着讲述了自己的故事。原来，爷爷出海捕鱼时，奶奶害怕失去他，跳舞成了她缓解焦虑的方式。每天奶奶都怀着激动又忐忑的心情盼着爷爷的来信，而爷爷的信总是以“我爱你，愿上帝保佑你健康”结尾。直到有一天，爷爷来信说失去了双臂，要给奶奶自由，让她去寻找更好的人。经过深思熟虑，奶奶决定假装自己也残疾了，她买了拐杖和轮椅，向亲朋好友包括爷爷谎称遭遇车祸失去双腿，不能再跳舞了。之后奶奶带着婚纱去见爷爷，鼓励爷爷，最终爷爷露出了笑容，为奶奶穿上婚纱，两人紧紧相拥。阿里听后深受触动，轻声呢喃奶奶是天使，会永远爱她。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1：GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.奶奶微笑着看着阿里，让他承诺在她去世前都不要把这件事告诉爷爷。阿里看着奶奶那充满爱意与期待的眼神，重重地点了点头，认真地说道：“奶奶，您放心，我一定会遵守承诺的。”从那以后，阿里时常想起奶奶的故事，心中对奶奶的敬佩之情愈发浓烈。他更加珍惜和奶奶相处的时光，总是陪伴在奶奶身边，听她讲述过去的点点滴滴。而奶奶也依旧像往常一样，和爷爷过着平淡而温馨的生活，两人相互扶持，相互照顾。阿里看着爷爷奶奶恩爱的模样，心中满是温暖，他知道，这份爱来之不易，是奶奶用一生的坚守换来的。在奶奶的影响下，阿里也变得更加懂得珍惜身边的人，对待感情更加认真和执着。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Afewyearswentbyandsixmonthsaftergrandmother’sfuneral,Alifoundgrandpasittingingrandma’susualchairbyaccidentandsobbingsadly.几年过去了，在奶奶葬礼结束六个月后，阿里偶然发现爷爷坐在奶奶常坐的椅子上，悲伤地抽泣着。阿里的心中一阵刺痛，他轻轻地走到爷爷身边坐下。爷爷抬起头，满脸泪痕，声音颤抖地说：“孩子，我好想她，没有她的日子，我真的不知道该怎么过。”阿里看着爷爷痛苦的样子，犹豫了一下，最终还是决定把奶奶的秘密告诉爷爷。他深吸一口气，缓缓说道：“爷爷，其实奶奶她……”阿里将奶奶为了不离开爷爷而假装残疾的事一五一十地告诉了爷爷。爷爷听后，瞪大了眼睛，脸上露出难以置信的神情。他沉默了许久，泪水再次夺眶而出。过了一会儿，爷爷缓缓地说：“我就知道，她怎么会这么轻易地离开我。她是那么爱我，为了我，她什么都愿意做。”从那以后，爷爷虽然依旧沉浸在失去奶奶的悲痛中，但他的眼神中多了一份释然和感激。他常常会对着奶奶的照片讲述自己的生活，仿佛奶奶从未离开过。而阿里也明白了，真正的爱情是经得起时间和磨难考验的，爷爷奶奶之间的这份深情，将永远留在他的心中，成为他人生中最宝贵的财富。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.Lookingintograndmother'seyesfullofloveandexpectation,Alinoddedfirmlyandsaidseriously,"Grandma,don'tworry.Iwilldefinitelykeepthepromise."Fromthenon,Alioftenthoughtaboutgrandma'sstory,andhisadmirationforhergrewstronger.Hecherishedthetimespentwithgrandmaevenmoreandalwaysaccompaniedher,listeningtohertellthestoriesofthepast.Andgrandmastilllivedaplainbutwarmlifewithgrandpaasusual.Theysupportedandtookcareofeachother.Watchingthelovingrelationshipbetweenhisgrandparents,Alifeltwarminhisheart.Heknewthatthislovewashard-wonandwastheresultofgrandma'slifelongdedication.Undergrandma'sinfluence,Alialsobecamemoreawareofcherishingthepeoplearoundhimandmoreseriousandpersistentindealingwithrelationships.14范文呈现Afewyearswentbyandsixmonthsaftergrandmother'sfuneral,Alifoundgrandpasittingingrandma'susualchairbyaccidentandsobbingsadly.ApangofpainshotthroughAli'sheart.Hewalkedgentlytograndpa'ssideandsatdown.Grandpalookedup,hisfacecoveredwithtears,andsaidinatremblingvoice,"Child,Imisshersomuch.Ireallydon'tknowhowtolivewithouther."Lookingatgrandpa'spainfulexpression,Alihesitatedforamomentandfinallydecidedtotellgrandpagrandma'ssecret.Hetookadeepbreathandsaidslowly,"Grandpa,actuallygrandma..."Alitoldgrandpaeverythingabouthowgrandmapretendedtobedisabledinordernottoleavehim.Afterhearingthis,grandpa'seyeswidenedindisbelief.Heremainedsilentforalongtime,andtearswelledupinhiseyesagain.Afterawhile,grandpasaidslowly,"Iknewit.Shewouldn'tleavemesoeasily.Shelovedmesomuchthatshewaswillingtodoanythingforme."Fromthenon,althoughgrandpawasstillimmersedinthegriefoflosinggrandma,therewasasenseofreliefandgratitudeinhiseyes.Heoftentalkedtograndma'sphotoabouthislife,asifgrandmahadneverleft.AndAlialsounderstoodthattruelovecanwithstandthetestoftimeandhardships.Thedeepaffectionbetweenhisgrandparentswouldalwaysstayinhisheartandbecomethemostprecioustreasureinhislife.15升级版范文呈现GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.Gazingintohisgrandmother'seyes,brimmingwithloveandanticipation,Alinoddedresolutelyandspokewithearnestness."Grandma,restassured.I'llkeepthispromisewithallmyheart."Fromthatmomenton,Alifoundhimselfconstantlyreminiscingabouthisgrandmother'sstory.Hisadmirationforhergrewexponentially,andhecherishedeverymomentspentbyherside.Hewouldalwaysbethere,listeningintentlyassherecountedthememoriesofthepast.Meanwhile,hisgrandmothercontinuedtoleadasimpleyetwarmlifewithhisgrandfather.Theysupportedeachotherthroughthickandthin,sharingeverymomentofjoyandsorrow.Watchingtheiraffectionatebond,Ali'sheartwasfilledwithwarmth.Hewasacutelyawarethatthislovewasapreciousgift,nurturedbyhisgrandmother'sunwaveringdedicationthroughoutherlife.Underhisgrandmother'sinfluence,Alibecamemoreattunedtotheimportanceofcherishingthosearoundhim,approachingrelationshipswithgreatersincerityandcommitment.16升级版范文呈现Afewyearsslippedby,andsixmonthsafterhisgrandmother'sfuneral,Alistumbleduponhisgrandfathersittinginhisgrandmother'scustomarychair,weepinginconsolably.AsharppainpiercedthroughAli'sheart.Hequietlymadehiswaytohisgrandfather'ssideandtookaseat.Hisgrandfatherlookedup,hisfacestreakedwithtears,andhisvoicequiveredashespoke."Child,Imissherterribly.I'matalosswithoutherbymyside."Seeinghisgrandfather'sanguish,Alihesitatedbrieflybutultimatelymadethedecisiontorevealhisgrandmother'ssecret.Takingadeepbreath,hebegan,"Grandpa,actually,grandma..."Alirecountedeverydetailofhowhisgrandmotherhadfeigneddisabilitytostaybyhisgrandfather'sside.Uponhearingthis,hisgrandfather'seyeswidenedinastonishment,andhefellintoalong,contemplativesilence.Tearswelleduponceagain