专题09 期中必考热点话题满分范文必背16篇

专题09期中必考热点话题满分范文必背16篇一、话题作文1．TheShanghaiDisneystartedlastyear.Writeatravelguidewithatleast50wordstointroducesomeinterestingplacesinShanghaiDisney.（写一篇至少50个词的旅游指南，介绍上海迪士尼的名胜，标点符号不占格。）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考例文AtravelguideaboutShanghaiDisneyShanghaiDisneyisaninterestingandfunplaceforpeopleofallagestovisit.ItliesinPudongNewAreaofthecity.ItisthefirstDisneythemeparkinChina.Therearesixinterestingareasinthepark.Besidemanyexcitingridesinthepark,youcanvisitthetallestDisneyCastle,theEnchantedStorybookCastle.YoucanalsomeetalltheDisneyprincessesandtakephotoswiththem.Attheentrance,thereistheGardenoftheTwelveFriends.ShanghaiDisneyhassomethingforeveryone.Whynotcomeherethisholiday?【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于话题作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章的话题已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，介绍上海迪士尼乐园的地点位置和特点；第二步，介绍上海迪士尼乐园中的特色景点，可列举具体的事例；第三步，邀请读者前来游玩并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①peopleofallages所有年龄层的人②takephotoswith和……一起拍照③attheentrance在入口处[高分句型]①ShanghaiDisneyisaninterestingandfunplaceforpeopleofallagestovisit.（动词不定式作定语）2．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myfavouritecity”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.(请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的城市”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)Suggestedquestions:(1)Whichcitydoyoulikebest?(2)Whereisit?(3)Whydoyoulikethiscity?(Giveatleasttworeasons)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Shanghaiismyfavoritecity.ItisthebiggestcityinChina.ShanghaiislocatedintheeasternpartofChina.ThereasonswhyIlikeShanghaibestareasfollows.First,itisthecentralcityofourcountry.Itisthecenterofeconomy,technology,industry,financeandtrade.What’smore,Shanghaiisalsoanemergingtouristcity,withprofoundmodernurbancultureandmanyhistoricalmonuments.TouristscanenjoyshoppinginShanghai,andhavinglocalsnacksaswell.ThenightviewsofShanghaiisfantastic,whereyoucanwatchthebeautifullightsandyoucanalsotakeaferrytovisittheHuangpuRiver.【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是哪个；第二步，介绍城市的地理位置；第三步，具体阐述喜欢这座城市的原因，至少两点。【亮点词汇】①finance金融②emerging新兴的③profound深刻的④monument遗址【高分句型】①Shanghaiisalsoanemergingtouristcity,withprofoundmodernurbancultureandmanyhistoricalmonuments.(with+短语，表示伴随)②ThenightviewsofShanghaiisfantastic,whereyoucanwatchthebeautifullightsandyoucanalsotakeaferrytovisittheHuangpuRiver.(where引导的定语从句)3．Writeapassageofatleast50wordsaboutthetopic“Mydreamjob”（请以“我理想的工作”为题写一篇不少于50词的作文，标点符号不计入总词数）（注：作文中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下内容仅供参考）1.Whatisyourdreamjob?2.Whydoyouwanttobea(an)…?Giveatleasttworeasons.（给出至少两个理由）3.Whatshouldyoudotorealizeyourdream?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MydreamjobIhaveagreatdreamtobeateacher.Ithinkteachersknowlotsofthingsandtheyteachusalotofknowledges.Theyareverywarmandkind.Theyspendmosttimeonus.Theyaregreatinmyeyes.What’smore,Ilikechildren.Iamwillingtosharehappinesswiththem.IadmiremyteacherssomuchthatIhopetobeateacher.Itisnoteasytomakemydreamcometrue.Ineedtomakeaplan.Idecidetostudyharderfromnowon.IamsureI’llrealizemydreaminthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“Mydreamjob”为题，围绕题干提示三个要点“你理想的工作是什么；你为什么想成为一名……；你应该做些什么来实现你的梦想”完成一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称、一般现在时写作。书写要围绕主题展开叙述，先阐述自己的理想职业，再说明原因，最后陈述如何实现理想。文句表达力求语法准确、逻辑清楚。4．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Anunforgettableexperience”.(请以“一次难忘的经历”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnunforgettableexperienceInmylife,therearemanyexperienceswhichIcan’tforget.Istillrememberwhathappenedlastyear.ItwasTree-plantingDay.WewenttoplanttreesinLuxunPark.Assoonaswearrived,webegantowork.Somewerediggingholes,otherswereplantingandstillotherswerewatering.Weallworkedveryhardsoastoplatmoretreesbecauseweallknowtreesarethebestpollutionfighters,andtheyareusefultohumanbeings.Whenthesunwentdown,wewentbackhomeunwillingly.Althoughwewereverytired,wefeltveryhappy.Itisunforgettablebecauseit’sthefirsttimethatIhavedonesomethingmeaningfultoprotecttheenvironment.Ihavelearnedfromitthatprotectingtheenvironmentiseveryone’sresponsibility.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“一次难忘的经历”为题写一篇短文，要适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出重点要介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己在生活中遇到的一次难忘经历；第三步，书写结语，表达自己从这次经历中学到了什么。[亮点词汇]①assoonas一……就……②soas以便③beusefulto对……有益④godown下降、下沉[高分句型]①Assoonaswearrived,webegantowork.我们一到，就开始工作。（assoonas一……就……，引导一个时间状语从句；begintodosth表示开始做某事）②Althoughwewereverytired,wefeltveryhappy.虽然我们很累，但我们感到很高兴。（although引导一个让步状语从句从句）二、材料作文5．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Mymodel”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.（请根据提示问题，以“我的榜样”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词标点符号不占格）Suggestedquestions:(1)Whoisyourmodel?(2)Whatdoyouthinkofhim/her?(3)Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MymodelInmyheart,DengYapingismymodel.Asatabletennisplayer,DengwonmanyworldcompetitionsandhelpedmaketheBeijingOlympicsavictoryforworldsupport.Butwhatmovedmemostisthatshebegantostudyabroadafterplayingattheageof24.HerEnglishwasn’tgoodenoughatthattime.Sheworkedhardonceagainlikeaplayer.Shepracticedmoreandsevenyearslater,shecompletedherdoctor’sdegreeatCambridgeUniversity.Ilearnfromher—whatevershedoes,shenevergivesup.SoIwillalsoworkhardformydreamandDengwillalwaysbemymodel.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你体会”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，介绍你的榜样的名字，引出话题；第二步，先说明你如何评价你的榜样，可列举具体的事例；第三步，说明你从榜样那里学到了什么并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①studyabroad在国外留学②attheageof在……岁的时候[高分句型]①Butwhatmovedmemostisthatshebegantostudyabroadafterplayingattheageof24.（what引导主语从句；that引导表语从句）②Ilearnfromher—whatevershedoes,shenevergivesup.（whatever引导让步状语从句）6．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Atripto…”(以“Atripto…”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容仅供参考)1.Wheredidyoutravelinthepast?Howdidyougothere?Whodidyoutravelwith?2.Whatdidyoudoandseethere?Whatdoyouthinkofthetrip?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AtriptotheFarm

LastSundaymyparentsandIwenttothefarm.Wewenttherebybus.Ittookusfiftyminutestogetthere.Whenwegotthere,wesawmanyanimalsand

strawberries.

Thefarmershowedusaroundthefarm.Hetaughtmehowtomilkthecow.Withhishelp,Ilearnttomilkthecow.Afterthat,Irodethehorse.Intheafternoon,Iwentfishingandpickedsomestrawberries.Howhappywewere!

Allinall,wehadagoodtimethere.Iwantedtogothereagain.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中以前你去旅游的地方，怎样去的，和谁去的以及你在旅行中看到和你对旅行的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周六我父母和我去了农场。”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“去农场乘坐的交通工具；在农场所看到的事物和所做的事情；我对旅行的感触”几方面重点介绍我的农场旅行的具体情况；第三步，书写结语。表达“我想要再去那里。”的强烈愿望。[亮点词汇]①bybus乘公共汽车②showsbaround带某人参观[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wesawmanyanimalsand

strawberries.（when当……时候，引导时间状语从句。）②Howhappywewere!（感叹句：How+形容词+主语+谓语动词！）7．OneofyourforeignfriendsiscomingtoChinaforavisitinsummerholiday.Pleasewriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“WelcometoChina”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.（你的一个外国朋友将在暑假到中国访问。请根据提示问题，以“欢迎来中国”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。）Suggestedquestions:(1)What’sChinalike?(2)WhataretheplacesofinterestinChina?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文WelcometoChina

Chinaisaneasterncountry.Today’sChinaisamodernandprosperouscountry.IfyoucometoChina,youwillfindmanyplacesofinterest.TakeBeijingforexample,therearemanyplacesworthvisiting,suchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCity,thePalaceMuseumandsoon.Atthesametime,youcanenjoymanydifferentsnacks.IfyoucometoChina,I’msureyou’llhaveagoodtime.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给问题提示以“欢迎来中国”为题写一篇短文。[写作步骤]第一步，整体说明中国的情况；第二步，介绍中国的一些著名景点。[亮点词汇]①takesthforexample以某事物为例②worthdoingsth值得做某事③atthesametime同时[高分句型]IfyoucometoChina,youwillfindmanyplacesofinterest.（if引导的条件状语从句）8．Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“A/An________trip”（写一篇名为“一次……的旅行”的短文，字数不少于60字，标点符号不占空格。）Thefollowingquestionsareforreference:Whenandwheredidyougoonatrip?Whatdidyoudothere?Whatdidyouthinkofthetrip?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AninterestingtripLastmonth,IwenttoXi’anwithmyclassmates.Onthefirstday,wevisitedsomemuseumsandwesawalotofChinesetraditionalpaintings.Theywerewonderful.Intheeveningwehadsomespecialfood.Itwasdelicious.Thenextday,wewenttosomefamousplacesinXi’an,suchasthebelltowerandthedrumtower.Ofcourse,wetookalotofphotos.

IthinkitwasaninterestingtripbecauseIlearnedalotaboutChinesehistory.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：首先把题目补充完整，讲述自己这次旅行的经历。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己去旅行的时间地点；第二步，具体讲述旅行中的所见所闻等；第三步，收尾，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①suchas比如②Chinesetraditionalpaintings中国传统绘画[高分句型]①Onthefirstday,wevisitedsomemuseumsandwesawalotofChinesetraditionalpaintings.（and连接并列句）②IthinkitwasaninterestingtripbecauseIlearnedalotaboutChinesehistory.（because引导原因状语从句）9．有的人喜欢住在城里，有的人喜欢住在乡下，你呢？请根据以下要点和要求，以“Ilikeliving______________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的相关情况。要点：1.你喜欢住在城里还是乡下；2.为什么你喜欢住在这里；3.你喜欢住的地方有什么美中不足。要求：1.请先将题目补写完整；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；2.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Ilikeliving_______________Differentpeoplelikelivingindifferentplaces.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IlikelivinginthecityDifferentpeoplelikelivingindifferentplaces.Somelikelivinginthecity.Somelikelivinginthecountryside.Forme,Ilikelivinginthecity.Ithinklifeinthecityisbetter.First,therearedifferentkindsofshopsforustobuythingsandmanywaysforustogoout.Second,schoolsinthecityarebigandnew,andit’sgoodforourstudy.It’salittlenoisyandthelivingcostishighinthecity,butIlikelivinginthecity.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍自己喜欢住在哪里，并写出理由。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我喜欢住在农村或城市，并介绍自己的理由；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。10．Writingatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Shanghai—MyHometown(上海——我的家乡)”Suggestions:WhatdoyouthinkofShanghai?WhatisShanghaifamousfor?WhatcantouristsdoinShanghai?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Shanghai—MyHometownWelcometomyhometown!Shanghaiismyhometown.Itisamodernandbusytown.Ithasalonghistory.Therearemanybigsupermarkets,beautifulgardensandgoodfactorieshere.Itisveryeasytogoshopping.Youcanseegreenhills,bigtreesandniceflowers.TherearemanyrestaurantsinHaimen.YoucanenjoyHaimengoat.Ittastesverydelicious.Manyvisitorscomeheretoenjoyit.Therearemanygoodplacestovisit.Thereisaparkandabigshoppingmall.YoucanseefilmsatRenminTheatre.Myschoolisoneofthebestschoolsinmyhometown.Itisverybeautiful.Ihopeyoucancomeandvisitsoon.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所给的三个问题提示，介绍自己的家乡——上海，注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题进行合理发挥。2.写作指导：本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来介绍。写作中内容要包含你对上海的评价；上海有什么有名的地方，以及去上海旅游可以做些什么。写作中注意做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。11．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myfavoritefilmis…”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference（请根据提示问题，以“我喜爱的电影是……”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。）Suggestedquestions:(1)Whatisthenameofthefilm?(2)Whatkindoffilmisit?(3)Whatisthefilmabout?(4)Whydoyoulikethefilmbest?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyfavoritefilmisTheLionKingMyfavoritefilmisTheLionKing.It’sacartoonmovieproducedbyWaltDisneyPictures.ThefilmisaboutalittlelioncalledSimba,whosefatherisaking.Unluckily,hisfatheriskilledoneday.Simbathinksitishisfaultandleaveshisfamily.Hemeetstwofriendsandtheyhelphimtoleadanewlife.Hismotherandotherfamilymembersthinkhehasdied.Oneday,hisfriendNalameetshimbyaccident.Sheaskshimtogethiskingdomback.Hedoesn’tacceptitatfirst,butthenheagreeswiththehelpofamagicalmonkey.Hereturnsandknowsitwashisunclewhokilledhisfather.Hefightsagainsthimandwinsatlast.Hesaveshismotherandotherlionsandbecomestheking.ThemovietellsusthatweshouldbebraveandthatiswhyIlikethismoviebest.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要忘记把标题的内容补全，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点明，介绍你最喜欢的电影名称、电影类型等；第二步，简要介绍这部电影的故事情节，可列举具体的事例；第三步，说明喜欢这部电影的原因并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①leadanewlife过上新的生活②byaccident偶然地③withthehelpof在……的帮助下④fightsagainst与……作斗争[高分句型]①ThefilmisaboutalittlelioncalledSimba,whosefatherisaking.（过去分词作定语；whose引导非限制性定语从句）②Simbathinksitishisfaultandleaveshisfamily.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）③Hereturnsandknowsitwashisunclewhokilledhisfather.（itis…who…强调句型）④ThemovietellsusthatweshouldbebraveandthatiswhyIlikethismoviebest.（why引导表语从句）12．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Mydream”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.(请根据提示问题，以“我的梦想”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)Suggestedquestions:(1)What’syourdream?(2)Howdoyourealizeit?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MydreamMydreamistobeadoctor.Growingupinafamilyofdoctors,Ihavebeenstronglyinfluencedbymyparents.Therefore,Ihavebeendeterminedtoflowtheirfootsteps.OnlyinthiswaywillIbeabletoreducethepaininpatientsorevensavetheirlives.IwilldowhateverIcantomakemydreamcometrue.Fromnowon,IwillspendmoretimelearningmylessonssothatIcangotomyidealuniversity.Meanwhile,Iwillreadsomebooksonmedicine.IamsureIwillachievemydream.Asthesayinggoes,“Ifyoucandreamit,youcandoit.”【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；第二步，介绍自己打算如何实现这个梦想。[亮点词汇]①bedeterminedtodo下定决心做②fromnowon从现在起③spendtimedoing花费时间做④meanwhile同时[高分句型]①OnlyinthiswaywillIbeabletoreducethepaininpatientsorevensavetheirlives.（倒装句的使用）②IamsureIwillachievemydream.（省略that的宾语从句）13．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Happinessfromhelpingothers”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.(请根据提示问题，以“帮助他人的快乐”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)Suggestedquestions:(1)Doyouoftenhelpothers?(2)Whatdoyouusuallydotohelpothers?(3)Howdoyoufeelwhenyouhelpothers?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HappinessfromhelpingothersIenjoyhelpingothersandIoftenhelppeopleinneed.Athome,Iusuallyhelpmymotherdohousework,suchassweepingthefloor,doingsomewashingandsoon.Atschool,Iusuallyhelpmyteachershandoutthepapers.What’smore,Ioftenhelpwithmyclassmatestosolvemathproblems.Ifeelhappyafterhelpingothers.Iwillkeephelpingothersandpassthespiritofhelpingotherstoeveryonearoundme.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己是否经常帮助别人以及通常帮助别人做什么；第二步，介绍自己帮助别人的感受。[亮点词汇]①helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事②inneed需要③suchas例如[高分句型]①Ioftenhelpwithmyclassmatestosolvemathproblems（动词不定式作宾补）②Iwillkeephelpingothersandpassthespiritofhelpingotherstoeveryonearoundme（动名词作宾语）14．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Amodelstudentinmyschool”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.（请根据提示问题，以“我学校的模范生”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。）Suggestedquestions:(1)Whoisamodelstudentinyourschoool?(2)Whydoyouvoteforhim/herasamodelstudent?(3)Whatcanyoulearnfromhimher?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AmodelstudentinmyschoolEveryonewantstobeamodelstudent.IthinkLiuPingisthemodelstudentinmyschool.LiuPingisanicegirl.Althoughshelivesfarawayfromschool,sheisneverlateforclass.Sheiscleverandhard-working.Shealwaysgetsgoodmarks.Althoughmathisnoteasyforher,shenevergivesitup.Sheisaverykindandhelpfulgirl.Althoughsheisn’tstrong,sheoftenhelpsteachers.Althoughshehasalotofthingstodo,shealwayshelpsus.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.IthinkIcanlearnalotfromLiuPing,forexamplebeingalwaysreadytohelpothers.Icanalsolearnhowtostudyfromher.That’swhyIthinkLiuPingisamodelstudent.Ilikeherverymuch!Ithinkshewillalwaysbethemodelstudentinmyschool.Doyouthinkso?【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对学校模范生的介绍以及从中学到了什么。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山直接介绍谁是学校的模范生。第二步，具体阐述喜欢这个模范生的原因。第三步，具体阐述从模范生身上学到了什么。[亮点词汇]①givesitup放弃它②beingalwaysreadytohelpothers总是乐于助人③averykindandhelpfulgirl一个非常善良和乐于助人的女孩④learnalotfromLiuPing从刘萍身上学到很多[高分句型]①Althoughshelivesfarawayfromschool,sheisneverlateforclass.（although引导让步状语从句）②Sheoftenhel