高考英语读后续写专题之助人类-雪中暖意：意外的善意+讲义

1.【解读文本】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Whenmymomannouncedthatmydadhadfixedtheoldcarinhisgarage,Ifeltexcited--Ihadwheels!IcalledmyfriendStephandmadeplanstohavedinneratherhousethenextday.Thefollowingmorning,Iwokeupearlyandputonablackskirtandjacket.“Aren'tyoudressedtoolightly?”Momasked.“There'sasnowstormcoming."“I'llbeinside,"IrepliedasIheadedout.AsIbegantheforty-minutedrive,Iwasinhighspirits.However,halfwaythereitstartedtosnowlikemad.Carsslowed.ThesoundofasirenannouncedtheapproachofanambulanceandIpulledasidetoletitpass.AsIinchedbackintomylane,thetrafficlightaheadturnedred.Istopped.Whenthelightturnedgreen,1pressedonthegas,buttheoldcardied.Itriedtostartit.Oneclick,thennothing.BeforeIcoulddoanythingelse,twoyoungmenracedoverfromthenearbysidewalk.Irolleddownmywindowalittle.“Giveusasecond,”oneofthemsaid,“We'llhelpyououtofhere.”Soon,theybeganpushingthecar.Withtheirguidance,1steeredintoaparkingspotinfrontofagrocerystore."You'llbefinenow,"theysaid,andbeforeIcouldeventhankthem,theywalkedintothegrocerystore.Thesnowwasfallingfasternow.IcalledStephonmycellphonetocancelourplan.Next,Icalledmyparentstocomeandgetme.NowallIhadtodowaswait,butIwasveryhungryandcold.Isighed,regrettingnottakingmymom'sadvice.JustasIsatwaitinginthecar,Inoticedamanwalkingtowardsme.Itwasoneofthemenwhohadjusthelpedme.Irolleddownthewindowatonce.注意：1.续写词数应为80字左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afterabriefgreeting,hetoldmethiswashisparent’sstore.___________2.【突破词汇】wheels汽车，fixed修理，announced宣称，广播，lightly少，replied回应道，inhighspirits兴高采烈，theapproachofsth某物接近，pulledaside靠边停车，inchedback慢慢地回到，thegas油门，racedover跑过来，steeredinto驾驶到，cancelourplan取消计划，sighed叹息，regrettingnot后悔没有，rolleddown摇下来运用sixelements(5W1H)方法Who:I,myparents,theyoungmanandhisparentsWhen:OnemorningwithheavysnowstormWhere:myhouse---ontheroadwithsnow---agrocerystoreWhat:Idroveanoldcar,whichwasfixedbymyfather,wenttomeetmyfriend.Whenthecardied,itsnowedlikemad.Thereappearestwoyoungmenwhohelpedmesteerintoaparkingspot,justinfrontofagrocerystore.Iwashungryandcold,thentheyoungmancameuptome.Why:Theyoungmanhelpedmegooutoftrouble.How:Thestoryfollowsatimeorder.3.【构思情节】结合三大原则，运用sixpoints构思情节三原则：Action---Response原则，Conflict---Solution原则，Negative---Positive原则Sixpoints:whattodo,whattosee,whattofeel,whattosay,whattohear,whattosmell。结合首句，Afterabriefgreeting,hetoldmethiswashisparent’sstore.考虑Action---Response原则，学生们可以提出以下问题：WhatdidIfeel?WhatdidIdo?Whatdidtheyoungman’sparentsdo?WhatdidIfeel?WhatdidIdo?学生尝试一边回答这些问题，一边构思情节。4.【下水作文】Afterabriefgreeting,hetoldmethiswashisparent’sstore.Halfdelighted,halfdoubtful,Igotoffthecar.Thewindwithsnowwascold,soIpulledmythinjacketaroundme.Followinghim,Ienteredthestore.Knowingmysituation,hisparentscomfortedme,offeredmeathickblanketandservedmesomefinefoodassoonaspossible.Aftersweepingawayallfood,Ifeltwarmer.Justthen,myparentswentintothestore.Whattheysawmadethemthanktheownerfromthebottomoftheirhearts.Theyoungmanandhisparentsrepondedwithbrightsmiles.Sincethen,Iandtheyoungmanbecameclosefriends.5.【名著语句】(1)Halfdelighted,halfdoubtful（HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone）(2)Thewindwascold,andhepulledhisthincoataroundhim.（Soapy'sChoice）(3)AgreatfeelingofhappinesssweptovertheZuckermansandtheArables.（Charlotte’sWeb）(4)Iwanttothankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforallyou'vedoneforme.(GreatExpectations)6.参考答案Afterabriefgreeting,hetoldmethiswashisparent’sstore.HeofferedtobringmesomehotchocolateandsnackstohelpmestaywarmwhileIwaitedformyparents.Gratefulforhiskindness,Iaccepted.Hereturnedafewminuteslaterwithasteamingcupofhotchocolateandabagofsnacks.“Thankyousomuch,”Isaid,feelingawaveofwarmthandappreciation.Hesmiledandsaid,“Noproblem.We’regladtohelp.”