读后续写练习+寻回的幸运：亲情比硬币更珍贵 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习寻回的幸运：亲情比硬币更珍贵1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Papabuiltbighousesinfarawayplaces.HecamehomeonlyonceduringtheChineseNewYearandstayedonlythreedays.Itwasthedaysthatweanticipatedsomuch.OnthatdayMamaandIwouldwokeupearlyandwaitedforPapaatthegateway,withananxiousbutlightheart.WewaitedandwaitedanditwasnotuntilatduskthatIfinallynoticedafigurefromthedistance.It’sPapa!Herushedoverandsweptmeupinhisarms,prickling(刺;戳)myfacewithhisbeard.“LookwhatI’vegotforyou!”Paparummaged(乱翻)inhisbigsuitcaseandtookoutagift—ooh,whataprettyhat!4续写原文Makingstickyriceballstogetherwasaritual.Thatnight,Papaburiedacoininastickyriceballandsaid,“Whoeverfindsthecoinwillhavegoodluck.”ThatnightIliedbetweenPapaandMamaandfellasleep,drowsilyhearingthemwhisperingandfirecrackersoutside,withloveandwarmthenvelopingme.Earlythenextmorning,Papafedmestickyriceballswithaspoon.Suddenly,Ibitonsomethinghard.“It’sthefortunecoin!”Iyelled.“Quick,putitinyourpocketsothegoodluckwon’tescape!”Mamahelpedmeintoabrand-newjacketandweweregoingNewYearVisiting.5续写原文Ontheway,ImetmyfriendDachunwhogotabigredenvelopfromhisPapa.“Well,howaboutthis?”Itookthecoinoutofmypocketproudly.“Ihaveafortunecoin!Mypapaburieditinastickyriceball,andIfoundit!”Onthesecondday,itsnowedreallyhard!Whenitfinallystopped,Dachungotmetoplayandwehadasnowballfighttillitwasgettingdark.Onthewayhome,Ifeltinsidemypocketand…Icouldn’tfindthecoin!Myfortunecoinwasgone!Irushedbacktothecourtyardandsearched,butinvain.Wherewasmyfortunecoin?“Don’tcry,sweetie.I’llgiveyouanotherone.Look,it’sexactlythesame!”Papascoopedanothercoinoutofhispocket.“Idon’twantthisone—Iwanttheotherone!”Ibawled(放声痛哭).6段首句Paragraph1：Intheevening,Icreptintobed,miserable(痛苦的).Paragraph2：Thatnight,Isleptverysoundly(香甜的)andIknewDadwouldleavetomorrow.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9常年在外的爸爸过年回家，一家人团聚。爸爸在汤圆里藏硬币，“我”幸运吃到。可“我”玩耍时弄丢硬币，万分难过。晚上爸爸安慰“我”，说家人在一起才是真正的幸运。“我”入睡后，第二天醒来，看到爸爸留的硬币，领悟到硬币的价值不在于带来好运，而是承载着父母的爱。爸爸准备离开时，“我”带着理解与爱，微笑着挥手告别，明白了亲情才是最宝贵的财富。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

Intheevening,Icreptintobed,miserable(痛苦的).晚上，“我”怀着满心的失落爬上床，脑海里全是丢失的硬币。“我”觉得自己失去了最重要的东西，眼泪止不住地流。这时，爸爸轻轻走进房间，坐在床边。他什么也没说，只是温柔地抚摸着“我”的头，让“我”感受到他的关爱。过了一会儿，爸爸轻声说：“宝贝，真正的幸运不是那枚硬币，而是我们一家人能在一起。”爸爸的话让“我”逐渐平静下来，虽然还是有些难过，但心里没那么难受了。爸爸的安慰就像冬日里的暖阳，慢慢驱散了“我”心中的阴霾。11续写思路分析Para2：Thatnight,Isleptverysoundly(香甜的)andIknewDadwouldleavetomorrow.夜里，“我”睡得很安稳。第二天醒来，一睁眼就看到爸爸慈祥的面容。他微笑着看着“我”，“我”发现床边放着昨天爸爸给的那枚硬币。刹那间，“我”明白了，真正珍贵的不是硬币，而是爸爸妈妈对“我”的爱。“我”拿起硬币，紧紧地抱住爸爸。爸爸准备离开时，“我”微笑着向他挥手道别，因为“我”知道，无论爸爸在哪里，我们之间的亲情永远不会变，这才是最珍贵的幸运。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Intheevening,Icreptintobed,extremelymiserable.Thoughtsofthelostcoinhauntedmeconstantly.Ifirmlybelievedthatallmygoodfortunehadvanishedalongwithit.Hiddenunderthequilt,Iweptsilently,mybodyshakingwithgrief.Sensingmydeepsorrow,Papaquietlyenteredtheroomandsatontheedgeofmybed.Withoutsayingawordatfirst,hegentlystrokedmyhair,tryingtooffermesomecomfort.Afterawhile,hesaidsoftly,"Honey,therealgoodluckliesinourfamilybeingtogether."Hiswordswerelikeawarmcurrent,graduallyseepingintomyheart,makingmefeelabitbetter.AlthoughIwasstillsad,thepaininmyheartwasnotasintenseasbefore.14范文呈现Thatnight,Isleptsoundly.WhenIwokeupthenextmorning,thefirstthingthatcaughtmyeyewasPapa'skindface.Hewassmilingatme.Besidemypillow,Inoticedthecoinhehadgivenmethepreviousday.Suddenly,itdawnedonmethatthetruevaluedidn'tlieinthecoinitself,butintheloveandcaremyparentshadforme.Ipickedupthecoin,heldittightly,andgavePapaabighug.Ashepreparedtoleave,Iwavedhimgoodbyewithabigsmile,fullyawarethattheloveamonguswasthegreatestfortuneofall.NomatterhowfarPapawasaway,ourfamilybondwouldalwaysremainstrong.15升级版范文呈现Intheevening,Icreptintobed,awaveofmiserywashingoverme.Thelostcoinoccupiedmyeverythought,andIwasconvincedthatallmygoodfortunehadslippedthroughmyfingers.Concealedbeneaththequilt,Isobbedquietly,mybodyquiveringwithdespair.Sensingmydistress,Papa,likeasilentguardian,quietlytookaseatontheedgeofmybed.Withoututteringawordinitially,hetenderlycaressedmyhair,histouchasoothingbalm.Afteramoment'spause,hemurmuredsoftly,"Honey,thegenuinegoodluckisourfamily'stogetherness."Hiswords,likeraysofsunlightbreakingthroughtheclouds,graduallypermeatedmyheart,bringingamodicumofrelief.Althoughsorrowstilllingered,thesharpnessofmypainhadbeendulled.16升级版范文呈现Thatnight,Islumberedsoundly.WhenIopenedmyeyesthenextmorning,whatgreetedmefirstwasPapa'saffectionatevisage.Awarmsmilegracedhislipsashelookedatme.Besidemypillowlaythecoinhehadgivenmethepreviousday.Inaninstant,itstruckmethatthetrueworthdidnotresideinthecoinitself,butintheloveandcaremyparentshadlavisheduponme.Igraspedthecointightly,pullingPapaintoatightembrace.Ashereadiedhimselftodepart,Iwavedhim