高考英语复习读后续写练习+4岁女孩与老人的温暖邂逅

高考英语读后续写语篇练习4岁女孩与老人的温暖邂逅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Mommy,canwegetsomecupcakesformybirthday?Please!”4-year-oldNorahsaid.IhesitatedaboutgoingtothegrocerystoreonaTuesday,SeniorCitizenDiscountDay.WehadalreadycelebratedNorah’sbigday.HertwoeldersisterswerealsoborninSeptember,sowehadonebigcelebrationforallofthem.ButtodaywasNorah’sactualbirthday.HowcouldIsayno?”Okay,“Isaid，thinkingoftheseniorswhowouldcrowdtheaisles(过道)inthestore.“Butwehavetobequick.AtthestoreIputNorahinoneofthecartsshapedlikeacaranddidmybesttomoveittothebakeryquickly.Ipickedupapackageofcupcakes,swungtotheotherpartofthestoreforbirthdayballoonsandthengotdistractedbysaladdressings.4续写原文Fromthecornerofmyeye,IsawNorahstandingupinthecartwavingexcitedly.“Hi,oldperson!It’smybirthdaytoday,”shesaidcheerfully.Anelderlymaninhis80sstaredatusstone-faced.BeforeIcouldexplainthat“oldperson”isn’texactlythebestwaytoaddresssomeone,themanhadalreadyopenedhismouthtoreplytoher.“Well,hello,littlelady,”hesaid.“Howoldareyoutoday?”“I’mfour,”Norahsaid,holdingupherfingers.Thenwechattedbriefly,longenoughforhimtotellmethathewasDanandthatheusuallytriedtoavoidthegrocerystoreonSeniorCitizenDiscountDayaswell.5续写原文Wewentourseparateways.Severalminuteslater,Norahasked,“CanItakeaphotowiththeoldmanformybirthday?”Ifeltkindofstrangeaboutaskingacompletestrangertotakeaphotowiththiskidwhohadjustcalledhim“oldperson”.“Let’sseeifwecan,”Isaid.WewentbackandspottedMr.Danbythedairysection.“Thereheis!”Norahpointed.Hishairwasuncombed(乱的),andhewasdressedinaplaidshirt,jeansandsneakers.“Askhim,Mommy!”Norahsaid.“Okay,okay,I’llask,honey,”ItoldNorah,andthenapproachedtheoldman.6段首句Paragraph1：“Excuseme,Mr.Dan,”Isaid.Paragraph2：“Mywifepassedawaymonthsago,”Danexplained.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了四岁的诺拉在生日当天请求妈妈去杂货店买纸杯蛋糕。在店里，诺拉兴奋地和一位八十多岁的老人丹打招呼，称其为“老人”。尽管一开始丹表情严肃，但很快就和诺拉愉快聊起来。分开后，诺拉想和丹合影。妈妈虽有些犹豫，还是去找丹询问。之后，丹向妈妈解释妻子几个月前去世，今天对他来说很难熬，而诺拉的问候让这一天变得特别。诺拉的纯真善良不仅为自己生日增添色彩，也给孤独的丹带来慰藉。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：“Excuseme,Mr.Dan,”Isaid.妈妈怀着忐忑的心情走向丹，礼貌地说道：“打扰一下，丹先生，诺拉特别想和您拍张照片来庆祝她的生日，自从遇见您，她就一直念叨着这事。”丹先是愣了一下，随后脸上露出了和蔼的笑容，点头答应了。诺拉开心得蹦蹦跳跳，快速跑到丹身边，紧紧挨着他站好。妈妈拿出手机，调整好角度，此时周围的顾客也被这温馨的一幕吸引，纷纷投来善意的目光。伴随着“咔嚓”一声，照片定格下了诺拉灿烂的笑容和丹慈祥的面容，这一刻，整个杂货店都仿佛充满了温暖。11续写思路分析Para2：“Mywifepassedawaymonthsago,”Danexplained.拍完照后，丹的神情突然变得有些落寞，缓缓开口：“我的妻子几个月前去世了，今天对我来说，本是个充满悲伤回忆的日子。”妈妈和诺拉听后，心中满是同情。诺拉伸出小手轻轻拉着丹的大手。丹看着诺拉，继续说道：“但是这个可爱的小姑娘的出现，让今天变得不一样了，她的笑容就像一束光，照亮了我心里灰暗的角落。”妈妈感慨地说：“诺拉的纯真总能给身边的人带来惊喜和温暖。”随后，大家又聊了一会儿，分享着生活中的点滴趣事。分别时，诺拉给了丹一个大大的拥抱，丹也紧紧回抱她，眼中满是不舍。诺拉和妈妈离开后，丹站在原地，望着她们离去的背影，脸上露出了欣慰的笑容。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现"Excuseme,Mr.Dan,"Isaid,withabitofnervousnessinmyvoice.IexplainedthatNorahwasextremelyeagertotakeaphotowithhimforherbirthday.Sincetheirencounter,Norahhadbeenconstantlytalkingaboutit.Atfirst,Mr.Danseemedabitsurprised,butsoonakindsmilespreadacrosshisfaceandhenoddedinagreement.Norah,filledwithexcitement,skippedhappilytowardsMr.Danandstoodcloselybesidehim.Itookoutmyphone,carefullyadjustingtheangle.Atthatmoment,thesurroundingcustomerswerealsoattractedbythiswarmsceneandcastfriendlyglances.Witha"click",thephotocapturedNorah'sbrightsmileandMr.Dan'skindface.Atthismoment,thewholegrocerystoreseemedtobefilledwithwarmth.14范文呈现Aftertakingthephoto,Mr.Dan'sexpressionsuddenlyturnedabitsad.Heslowlybegantospeak,"Mywifepassedawaymonthsago,andtoday,forme,isadayfullofsadmemories."NorahandIfeltdeepsympathyuponhearingthis.NorahreachedoutherlittlehandandgentlyheldMr.Dan'sbighand.LookingatNorah,Mr.Dancontinued,"Buttheappearanceofthislovelylittlegirlhasmadetodaydifferent.Hersmileislikeabeamoflightthathasilluminatedthedarkcornerofmyheart."Isaidwithemotion,"Norah'sinnocencealwaysbringssurprisesandwarmthtothosearoundher."Then,wechattedforawhilelonger,sharinginterestingbitsandpiecesofourlives.Whenitwastimetopart,NorahgaveMr.Danabighug,andMr.Danhuggedhertightlyinreturn,hiseyesfullofreluctance.AfterNorahandIleft,Mr.Danstoodthere,lookingatourdepartingfigures,witharelievedsmileonhisface.15升级版范文呈现"Excuseme,Mr.Dan,"Isaid,myheartpoundingwithabitofnervousness.IexplainedthatNorah,whowasbrimmingwithexcitementeversincetheirchancemeeting,wasdesperatetotakeaphotowithhimtomarkherspecialday.Instantly,awarm,kindsmile,whichcouldmeltanyone'sheart,spreadacrossMr.Dan'sfaceashereadilyagreed.Withjoyradiatingfromeverypore,Norahskippedmerrilytowardshimandnestledcloselybesidehim.Takingoutmyphone,Icarefullyadjustedtheanglewhilethesurroundingcustomers,drawnbythisheartwarmingscene,castfriendlyglancesourway.Witha

"click",thephotoimmortalizedNorah'sradiantsmileandMr.Dan'sbenevolentvisage.Atthatverymoment,theentiregrocerystoreseemedtobesuffusedwithanirresistiblewarmth.16升级版范文呈现Afterthephoto-taking,Mr.Dan'scountenancesuddenlycloudedoverwithsadness.Hebegantospeakslowly,hisvoicetingedwithsorrow,"Mywifepassedawaymonthsago,andtoday,forme,isadaysteepedinmelancholymemories."NorahandIwerefilledwithprofoundsympathy.Norah,withhercharacteristicinnocence,reachedouthertinyhandandgentlyclaspedMr.Dan'slargeone.LookingtenderlyatNorah,Mr.Dancontinued,"Butthearrivalofthisadorablelittlegirlhastransformedtoday.Hersmile,likeabrilliantrayofsuns