高考英语复习读后续写练习：狗狗相伴开启彼此新生之旅

高考英语读后续写语篇练习狗狗相伴，开启彼此新生之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文SadnesshitmewhenIrealizedthat4p.m.hadgoneunnoticed.Everyday,afewminutesbeforethehour,mycutedog,Jake,wouldstareatme,pushingmetogethisdinner.NowJakeisgone,andthedisappearanceofthecomfortingpacehebroughttomydaysislikeaminute-by-minutereminderofmyloss.FriendscomfortmebytellingmeIsavedhim.Butarescueorganizationdidthat.BythetimeImethim,hehadalreadybeensaved,justnotsettled.TherealstoryisthatJakesavedme.BeforeJake,Iwaslivinginatotalmess,addictedmadlytovideogames.Ilostinterestinanyschoolworkandskippedclassesalot.ElectronicdeviceswerewhatIcaredaboutmost.Myparentsweredeeplyconcernedaboutmebutit’strickytohandleastubbornteenager,takingthewrongway.Shortlyafterwards,Idroppedoutofschool.4续写原文Itfeltsogoodattheverybeginning.Ilockedmyselfinsidemybedroom,lostinviolentgamesandlosingtrackoftimeandmeals.Fightswithparentsoccurredfrequently.Ithoughtmylifewouldbethatforever,butoneday,withoutanytrace,thosegamescouldn’tinterestmeanymore.Isankintoadeepsorrow,feelingeverythinginmylifewasblankandmeaningless.Thatlifelessnessswallowedmewhole.Iwasconsumedwithboredomandemptiness.Iwasseparatedfromtheworldbyasheetofdirtyglass.Meoninside,everythingandeveryoneelseontheother.Iavoidedsocializing.Irarelyreachedout.Iassumedtheworstinpeopleandfiguredtheysawtheworstinme.Myparentswereanxiousandappointedatherapistforme.5续写原文That’swhenIfirstmetJake.IwaswaitingforatrafficlightwhenIspottedanadoptioneventandthenJake,withhisbigeyesdrooping(低垂),inwhichIsawhispain,justashesawmine.Icouldtellhiseyesglitteredwhenapproached.Afterlivingawholeirresponsiblelife,Idecidedtoberesponsibleforsomething.6段首句Paragraph1：Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.Paragraph2：Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9作者因狗狗杰克的离去而悲伤，回忆起相识前自己沉迷游戏、辍学、生活混乱，父母忧心忡忡。偶遇领养活动时，作者看到杰克眼中的痛苦，决定收养它。从此，杰克开启新生活，同时作者也因它发生巨大改变，重新回归学校，积极社交，找回生活的意义。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.我毫不犹豫地收养了它，就此开启了它生命的新篇章。我带着杰克回到家，一路上它乖乖地跟在我身边。到家后，我为它精心布置了一个温暖的小窝，还准备了各种美味的狗粮和有趣的玩具。每天清晨，阳光洒进房间，我会带着杰克去小区的花园散步，它总是兴奋地在草地上奔跑、玩耍。遇到其他狗狗时，一开始它还有些害怕，但在我的鼓励下，它渐渐变得勇敢起来，和小伙伴们愉快地嬉戏。傍晚，我们会一起坐在院子里，看着夕阳西下，杰克会靠在我的脚边，享受这宁静的时光。它的眼神不再是最初的哀伤，而是充满了对新生活的期待和快乐。11续写思路分析Para2：Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.杰克，也见证了我身上巨大的改变。有了杰克的陪伴，我不再沉迷于虚拟的游戏世界。我重新回到了学校，每天认真学习，积极参加各种活动。课堂上，我专注听讲，课后主动完成作业，成绩逐渐提高。我还结交了许多志同道合的朋友，我们经常一起带着狗狗出去玩。杰克就像我的社交名片，让我更容易与他人交流。我不再是那个孤僻、叛逆的少年，而是变得开朗、自信。我学会了承担责任，明白了生活的意义。杰克的存在，让我找到了前进的动力，我的生活变得充实而美好。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.IbroughtJakehome,andduringthejourney,hefollowedmeobediently.Oncewearrived,Icarefullyarrangedawarmlittlenestforhim,alongwithavarietyofdeliciousdogfoodandinterestingtoys.Everymorning,asthesunlightstreamedintotheroom,IwouldtakeJakeforawalkinthecommunitygarden.Hewouldrunandplayonthegrassexcitedly.Whenmeetingotherdogs,atfirst,hewasabitscared.However,withmyencouragement,hegraduallybecamebraveandplayedhappilywithhislittlecompanions.Intheevening,wewouldsitintheyardtogether,watchingthesunset.Jakewouldleanagainstmyfeet,enjoyingthepeacefulmoment.Hiseyes,nolongersadasbefore,werefilledwithanticipationandjoyforthenewlife.14范文呈现Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.WithJake'scompany,Inolongerindulgedinthevirtualgamingworld.Ireturnedtoschool,whereIstudiedhardeverydayandactivelyparticipatedinvariousactivities.Inclass,Ilistenedattentively,andafterclass,Itooktheinitiativetofinishmyhomework,andmygradesgraduallyimproved.Ialsomademanylike-mindedfriends.Weoftenwentoutwithourdogstogether.Jakewaslikemysocialcard,makingiteasierformetocommunicatewithothers.Iwasnolongerthewithdrawnandrebelliousteenager.Instead,Ibecamecheerfulandconfident.Ilearnedtotakeresponsibilityandunderstoodthemeaningoflife.Jake'spresencegavemethemotivationtomoveforward,andmylifebecamefulfillingandwonderful.15升级版范文呈现Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.BringingJakehome,heobedientlytrailedmealltheway.Uponarrival,Imeticulouslyarrangedacozylittledenforhim,stockedwithanarrayofscrumptiousdogfoodandengagingtoys.Eachmorning,assunlightfilteredintotheroom,I'dleadJaketothecommunitygardenforastroll.There,he'dfroliconthegrasswithunbridledexcitement.Encounteringotherdogsinitiallymadehimtimid,yetwithmyencouragement,hegraduallyovercamehisfearandmingledmerrilywithhisfurrypeers.Intheevenings,we'dsettleintheyard,watchingthesunsetasJakenestledcontentedlybymyfeet,hiseyesnowbrimmingwithhopeandjoyforhisnew-foundlife,afarcryfromthesorrowtheyonceheld.16升级版范文呈现Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.WithJakebymyside,Ibidfarewelltothevirtualgamingabyss.Iresumedmyschoollife,whereIimmersedmyselfinstudiesdailyandactivelyengagedindiverseactivities.Inclass,Ihungoneveryword,andpost-class,Iproactivelycompletedassign