高考英语复习读后续写练习：为家人她选择了另一份奖品

高考英语读后续写语篇练习为家人，她选择了另一份奖品1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Theteacherhadjustannouncedthatshewasgoingtogiveasmallgifttotheboyorgirlwhoansweredthemostquestionscorrectlyintheteststheyweregoingtohavethatday.Whatitwas,shewouldn’tsay,exceptthatitwasverynice,verypretty,andverytasty.Ofcoursethatlastwordseteverybody’smouthwatering.“Somethingtasty!”saidTadao.“Icouldusethatrightnow.”“AndsocouldI,”saidEnrica,whosemotherhadbeensobusythatmorninglookingafterhertwolittlesistersandherbabybrotherthatshehadforgottentomakeherlunch.4续写原文Thenthetestsbegan,andhoweveryoneworked!Whentheteacheraskedthequestionsaloud,handsflashedupallovertheroomandwavedaboutliketreesinahighwind.Whentheanswershadtobewritten,therewasanunusualsilence.Itwaslotsoffun,andeveryonehadhighhopesofwinningtheprize.Slowlythehoursdraggedby,andpoorEnricagothungrierandhungriereveryminute,imaginingwhatshewoulddowiththeprizeifshewon.Atlastthetestswereallover,theanswersallchecked,andthefinalgradesalltotaledup.“Now,”saidtheteacher,“I’mreadytotellyouthewinneroftheprize-Enrica,beatingReneebyjustonepoint.”5续写原文Atthismomenttheteacheropenedherdeskandtookoutabigchocolateegg,tiedwithapieceofwideblueribbon(丝带).“Howlovely!”criedeverybody.“Nowjustamoment,”saidtheteacher.“Ihaveasecondprize.It’sinthisbox.”Everyonelookedandsawfourlittlechocolateeggs.Theylookedgood,too,butnotasattractiveasthebigoneintheblueribbon.Enricacameforwardtoreceiveherprize.Shehadlookedatbothprizesandwasthinkinghard.“Please,”shestammered(结结巴巴地说),“would-wouldyoumindifIhadthesecondprizeinstead?”6段首句Paragraph1：Theteacherwassosurprisedthatshehardlyknewwhattosay.Paragraph2：Enricajustranhomewiththesecondprizeboxforhersistersandbrother.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9老师宣布要给当天测试中答对题目最多的学生一份既好看又美味的小礼物。同学们都踊跃参与测试，埃丽卡因为妈妈忙碌没做午餐，一直饿着肚子，还在想象赢得奖品后的场景。测试结束后，埃丽卡以一分优势战胜蕾妮赢得奖品。但老师拿出一大一小两份奖品时，埃丽卡却出人意料地选择了小份的那份。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Theteacherwassosurprisedthatshehardlyknewwhattosay.老师听到埃丽卡的请求后，十分惊讶，嘴巴微张，眼睛瞪大，愣在了原地。过了好几秒，她才缓过神来，温柔地看着埃丽卡问道：“亲爱的，能告诉老师为什么吗？毕竟大的巧克力蛋看起来更诱人呀。”埃丽卡有些不好意思地低下头，小声说：“老师，我妈妈今天忙着照顾弟弟妹妹，忘记给我做午餐，我现在虽然很饿，但我更想把这些巧克力蛋带回去给弟弟妹妹们吃，他们肯定会很开心。”老师听后，眼眶微微泛红，被埃丽卡的善良深深打动，她摸摸埃丽卡的头，说道：“你真是个好孩子，老师为你骄傲。”11续写思路分析Para2：Enricajustranhomewiththesecondprizeboxforhersistersandbrother.埃丽卡紧紧抱着装有四个小巧克力蛋的盒子，一路小跑回家。到家后，她气喘吁吁地推开家门，大声喊道：“弟弟妹妹们，快来看我带什么回来啦！”正在客厅玩耍的弟弟妹妹们听到声音，像小炮弹一样冲向埃丽卡。她笑着打开盒子，弟弟妹妹们看到巧克力蛋，眼睛瞬间亮了起来，兴奋地欢呼着。埃丽卡给每个弟弟妹妹都分了一个，看着他们吃得津津有味，脸上露出满足的笑容。尽管自己没有吃到大巧克力蛋，但此刻，她心里却比吃了蜜还甜。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Enricaclutchedtheboxwiththefourlittlechocolateeggstightlyandranallthewayhome.Assoonasshearrived,shepushedthedooropenbreathlesslyandshouted,"Sistersandbrother,comeandseewhatI'vebroughtback!"Hersiblings,whowereplayinginthelivingroom,rushedtowardsherlikelittlerockets.Withabigsmile,sheopenedthebox.Atthesightofthechocolateeggs,theireyessparkledwithexcitement,andtheycheeredloudly.Enricadistributedonechocolateeggtoeachofthem.Watchingthemenjoythetreatswithrelish,acontentedsmilespreadacrossherface.Eventhoughshedidn'tgetthebigchocolateegg,atthismoment,shefelthappierthaneverbefore.14范文呈现Weeksaftermypromise,Ifounditincreasinglyhardtocontinuemyhorriblework.EverytimeIapproachedtheworkbenchfilledwiththematerialsforcreatingthefemalemonster,asenseofrevulsionwelledupinsideme.AsIlookedatthosecomponents,Icouldvividlyimaginethetwomonsterscausingchaosanddestructionintheworld.IwasacutelyawarethatwhatIwasdoingwaslikeplayingwithfire,butthefearofthemonster'srevengeonmyfamilyheldmeback.Thisconflictedfeelinghauntedmedayandnight.Ipacedrestlesslyintheworkshop,constantlyonthevergeofgivingup.However,thethoughtofmyfamily'ssafetyforcedmetokeepgoing,eventhougheverystepfeltlikeIwaswalkingonbrokenglass,filledwithpainandhesitation.15升级版范文呈现Theteacherwassosurprisedthatshehardlyknewwhattosay.Afteramomentofshockedstillness,sheregainedhercomposureand,lookingtenderlyatEnrica,inquired,"Dear,whatpromptsyourchoice?Thelargechocolateegg,afterall,seemsfarmoretempting."Blushingandloweringhergaze,Enricarepliedsoftly,"Teacher,mymom,occupiedwithmylittlesistersandbabybrother,overlookedmakingmylunchtoday.Despitemyhunger,I'meagertobringthesechocolateeggshomeforthem.Theirjoywillbemyreward."DeeplymovedbyEnrica'sselflessness,theteacher'seyeswelledup.StrokingEnrica'shair,shesaid,"You'reanextraordinarygirl,andI'mtrulyproudofyou."16升级版范文呈现Clutchingtheboxoffourlittlechocolateeggs,Enricasprintedhome.Uponarrival,breathlesslypushingopenthedoor,sheexclaimed,"Sistersandbrother,comequickly!LookwhatI'vegot!"Hersiblings,engrossedinplayinthelivingroom,dashedtowardsher.Withabeamingsmile,sheopenedthebox.Instantly,theireyeslitupwithexcitement,andcheersfilledtheroom.Enricahandedeachofthemachocolateegg.Asshewatchedthem