高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：平凡之日我成为+“电影式”+英雄

高考英语读后续写语篇练习平凡之日，我成为“电影式”英雄1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ilikewatchingmovies.Inthemovies,kidsarealwayssospecial.Theyareusuallyreallysmart.Ortheyareneverscaredofanythingfrightening.Ortheyhavemagicpowerandcanhelpthoseingreattroubleout.Whyhasn'tthiseverhappenedtome?Iamnotassmartasthekidsinthemovies.Ihavenevermetwithanythingscary.AndIamnotpowerfulenoughtohelpsomeoneoutoftrouble.ButIdohopeIcanbecomesuchaheroasthoseinthemovies.Mymothersaystheheroesinthemoviesdon'texistinreallife,addingthatbeingaheroisreallygood,butIamtooyoungtobecomeone.ItwasMonday.Nothingseemedspecial.Itwassunny,withbirdssinginginthesky.IwaswalkinghomefromschoolalongtheusualstreetwhenInoticedanoldwomanontheothersideofthestreet.Shewaswalkingveryslowly,slidingherhandalongthefence.Shelookedlikeapersonleftbehindbythesubway;everyonewasracingpasther.Deepdowninmyheart,Isensedthatsomethingwasnotright.Outofcuriosity,Idecidedtocrossthestreet.4续写原文Isqueezed(挤)intothecrowdandapproachedherfromtheside.“Areyouokay?”Iasked.Shemadenoanswer.“Excuseme,”Isaidalittlelouder.“Areyouokay?”“Canyougivemeyourhand,littleboy?”askedthewoman,lookingsad.Withouthesitation,Igavehermyhand.ThenIsawherfacelitup.ItwasthenthatIrealizedthatshewasblind.“Whereareyougoing?”Iaskedher.“Tomydaughter’shome,”shereplied.“It’sherbirthdaytoday.Ibringheragift.”5段首句Paragraph1：Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.Paragraph2：“Youarehere!”thedaughtersaidindisbelief.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8“我”喜欢看电影，渴望像电影中的孩子一样成为英雄。一个周一，“我”放学回家途中，看到街道对面一位老妇人行动迟缓，似乎与周围匆忙的人群格格不入。出于好奇，“我”上前询问，发现她是盲人，要去女儿家送生日礼物。老妇人告知“我”她女儿的地址，“我”决定送她过去。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.老妇人告诉了我她女儿的地址，我心里估算了一下，距离还挺远。但我没有丝毫犹豫，我紧紧握住她的手，轻声说：“奶奶，您放心，我送您去。”我们慢慢走进熙熙攘攘的街道，人群来来往往，十分拥挤。我一边在前面艰难地开路，一边不断回头告诉奶奶小心脚下的路。遇到过马路时，车水马龙，喇叭声此起彼伏。我仔细观察路况，等车流稍缓，便迅速而稳健地带着奶奶穿过马路。一路上，我还跟奶奶聊起她女儿，奶奶脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容，我也因能帮助她而感到开心。10续写思路分析Para2：“Youarehere!”thedaughtersaidindisbelief.“您真的到了！”女儿不敢置信地说道。她眼中满是惊喜与感动，连忙把我们迎进屋里。她紧紧握住我的手，不停地说着感谢的话：“小朋友，太感谢你了，要不是你，真不知道我妈还要在路上耽搁多久。”老妇人也满是欣慰地看着我，对我说：“好孩子，你真是帮了大忙。”我有些不好意思地挠挠头说：“这是我应该做的。”看着她们母女团聚的温馨场景，我心里像吃了蜜一样甜，那一刻，我觉得自己就像电影里的英雄，做了一件特别有意义的事。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.Aftermakingaquickmentalcalculation,Ifounditwasquitealongway.However,Ididn'thaveasecondthought.Iheldherhandfirmlyandsaidsoftly,"Grandma,don'tworry.I'lltakeyouthere."Thenwesteppedintothebustlingstreet.Thecrowdwascomingandgoing,makingitverycrowded.Itriedtomakeawaythroughthepeopleinfront,andatthesametime,IkeptturningbacktoremindGrandmatowatchhersteps.Whenwecametotheroadcrossing,therewasastreamofcarswithhornsblaring.Icarefullyobservedthetraffic.Assoonasthetrafficflowsloweddownabit,IquicklyandsteadilyledGrandmaacrosstheroad.Ontheway,IchattedwithGrandmaaboutherdaughter,andahappysmilespreadacrossherface.Ifeltdelightedtobeabletohelpher.13范文呈现“Youarehere!”thedaughtersaidindisbelief.Hereyeswerefilledwithsurpriseandgratitude.Shequicklywelcomedusintothehouse.Sheheldmyhandtightlyandsaidwordsofthanksrepeatedly,"Littlefriend,thankyousomuch.Ifitweren'tforyou,Idon'tknowhowlongmymomwouldhavebeendelayedontheroad."Theoldwomanalsolookedatmewithgreatreliefandsaid,"Goodboy,you'vereallydoneabigfavor."Iscratchedmyheadshylyandsaid,"It'swhatIshoulddo."Lookingatthewarmsceneofthemother-daughterreunion,Ifeltassweetaseatinghoney.Atthatmoment,Ifeltlikeaherointhemovies,havingdonesomethingreallymeaningful.14升级版范文呈现Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.Aquickmentalcalculationrevealedthatitwasaratherdistantlocation,yetwithouthesitation,Iclaspedherhandfirmlyandmurmuredsoftly,"Grandma,restassured.I'llaccompanyyouthere."Wethenmadeourwayintothebustlingthoroughfare,wherethecrowdsurgedtoandfro,creatingacongestedscene.Pushingthroughthethrongahead,IconstantlyglancedbacktocautionGrandmaabouthersteps.Uponreachingthecrossroads,astreamofvehicleswithhonkinghornspresentedachallengingsituation.Iattentivelymonitoredthetraffic,andtheinstanttheflowslackenedslightly,IdeftlyandsteadilyguidedGrandmaacross.Enroute,engaginginconversationwithGrandmaaboutherdaughter,Iwitnessedaradiantsmileilluminatingherface.Helpingherthusfilledmewithaprofoundsenseofdelight.15升级版范文呈现“Youarehere!”thedaughterexclaimedindisbelief,hereyesbrimmingwithamixtureofsurpriseandgratitude.Swiftly,sheusheredusintothehouse.Graspingmyhandtightly,sheshoweredmewithastreamofthanks,"Littlefriend,you'retrulyalifesaver.Haditnotbeenforyou,Ishuddertothinkhowlongmymotherwouldhavebeenstrandedontheway."Theoldwoman,beamingwithrelief,echoed,"Goodlad,you'verenderedinvaluableassistance."Scratchingmyheadsheepishly,Ireplied,"It'smypleasure."Gazingattheheart-warmingreunionofthemotheranddaughter,aswee