高考英语复习读后续写练习：峡谷绝境：登山者的生死挣扎与求生之路+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习峡谷绝境：登山者的生死挣扎与求生之路1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ItstartedoutasasimplehikeintheUtahcanyon(峡谷)landsonawarmSaturdayafternoon.ForAronRalston,atwenty-seven-year-oldmountaineerandoutdoorsman,awalkintotheremoteBlueJohnCanyonwasachancetogetabreakfromawinterofsoloclimbingColorado’shighestandtoughestpeaks.He'dearnedthisweekendvacation，andthoughhemettwootherclimbersalongtheway,byearlyafternoonhehadfinallyfoundhimselfinhiselement:alone,withjustthebeautyofthenaturalworldallaroundhim.Itwas2:41pm.Eightmilesfromhistruck,inadeepandnarrowslot(狭缝)canyon,Aronwasclimbingdownawedgedboulder(巨石)whentherocksuddenlycameloose.Beforehecouldgetoutoftheway,thefallingstonepinnedhisrighthandandwristagainstthecanyonwall.4续写原文Andsobegan4daysofsufferingforAronRalston.Withlittlewaterandfood,nojacketforthepainfullycoldnights,andtheterribleknowledgethathe'dtoldnoonewherehewasheaded,hefoundhimselffacingalingeringdeath-trappedbyan800-poundboulder100feetdowninthebottomofacanyon.Asheeliminated(淘汰)hisescapeoptionsonebyonethroughthedays,Aronfacedthefullhorrorofhissituation:Bythetimeanypossiblesearchandrescueeffortwouldbegin,he'dmostprobablyhavediedofdehydration(脱水),ifaflashflooddidn'tdrownhimbeforethat.Whatdoesonedointhefaceofalmostcertaindeath?Usingthevideocamerafromhispack,Aronbeganrecordinghisgratefulgood-byestohisfamilyandfriends,thinkingbackoveralifefilledwithadventure,anddocumentingalastwillwiththehopethatsomeonewouldfindit.5段首句Paragraph1:Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.Paragraph2:NowI'vehadthemostincredibleandsatisfyingreportingcareer.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析827岁的登山爱好者阿隆・拉斯顿在一个温暖的周六下午前往犹他州的峡谷徒步，本想借此从冬季独自攀登科罗拉多高峰的疲惫中解脱出来。下午2点41分，在距离他的卡车8英里的狭窄峡谷中，他在攀爬一块楔入的巨石时，巨石突然松动，将他的右手和手腕死死地压在了峡谷壁上。接下来的4天，阿隆饱受折磨，他缺水少食，夜晚寒冷难耐，而且无人知晓他的行踪，面临着死亡的威胁。他一一排除了可能的逃生方法后，意识到自己可能会因脱水而死，或者在那之前就被山洪淹死。面对几乎确定的死亡，阿隆用背包里的摄像机开始记录对家人和朋友的告别，回顾充满冒险的人生，并留下最后的遗嘱，希望有人能找到。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.阿隆的身体状况随着时间的推移每况愈下，他的嘴唇干裂，舌头肿胀，连说话都变得十分艰难。他的意识也开始变得模糊，眼前常常出现一些虚幻的景象，一会儿是家人温暖的笑容，一会儿是曾经攀登过的壮丽山峰。但求生的本能让他始终保持着一丝清醒。他不断地尝试着各种方法想要摆脱困境，用石头砸巨石，用身体拼命地扭动，但巨石却纹丝不动。他的体力在一次次的尝试中迅速消耗，身上的伤口也因为长时间的挤压而开始溃烂，散发出阵阵恶臭。在极度的绝望中，阿隆突然想到了一个极其残忍的办法——切断自己被压住的右臂。这个想法一出现，他的内心充满了恐惧和挣扎，毕竟这是要亲手斩断自己的肢体。但随着时间的流逝，他知道如果不这样做，等待他的只有死亡。经过一番痛苦的思想斗争，阿隆终于下定了决心。他用随身携带的小刀，颤抖着开始切割自己的手臂。每一下切割都伴随着钻心的疼痛，豆大的汗珠从他的额头滚落，但他咬紧牙关，没有发出一声惨叫。终于，在经历了无数次的切割后，他成功地切断了右臂，摆脱了巨石的束缚。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:Luckily,therescueteamfoundAron.幸运的是，救援队找到了阿隆。原来，在阿隆失踪几天后，他的家人发现联系不上他，又得知他独自去峡谷徒步，便立即报了警。警方组织了一支专业的救援队，在峡谷中展开了大规模的搜索。经过几天几夜的努力，救援队终于在峡谷的深处发现了阿隆。此时的阿隆已经极度虚弱，他的脸色苍白如纸，右臂处缠着简陋的绷带，上面还渗着鲜血。救援队迅速将他抬上担架，送往附近的医院。在医院里，医生们对阿隆进行了紧急救治，经过长时间的手术和精心的护理，阿隆的伤势逐渐好转。这次经历让阿隆深刻地认识到了生命的宝贵，他也成为了人们心中的英雄。出院后，阿隆开始用自己的经历去激励更多的人，告诉他们无论遇到多大的困难，都不要放弃生的希望。他还继续坚持自己热爱的登山运动，虽然失去了右臂，但他依然凭借着顽强的毅力和对登山的热爱，征服了一座又一座的山峰。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.Hislipswerecrackedandhistonguewasswollen.Itwasextremelydifficultforhimtoevenutteraword.Hisconsciousnessstartedtofade,andheoftenhadhallucinations.Sometimeshesawthewarmsmilesofhisfamily,andsometimeshesawthemagnificentpeakshehadclimbedbefore.However,theinstinctforsurvivalkepthimabitawake.Heconstantlytriedvariouswaystogetoutofthepredicament.Hesmashedtheboulderwithstonesandtwistedhisbodydesperately,buttheboulderdidn'tmoveatall.Hisphysicalstrengthwasrapidlyexhaustedintherepeatedattempts,andthewoundonhisbodybegantofesterduetothelong-timecompression,givingoffafoulsmell.Inthedepthsofdespair,Aronsuddenlycameupwithanextremelycruelidea-tocutoffhistrappedrightarm.Assoonasthisthoughtcametohismind,hisheartwasfilledwithfearandstruggle.Afterall,itmeantcuttingoffhisownlimbwithhisownhands.Butastimewentby,heknewthatifhedidn'tdothis,deathwastheonlythingwaitingforhim.Afterapainfulideologicalstruggle,Aronfinallymadeuphismind.Hetookoutthesmallknifehecarriedwithhimandstartedcuttinghisarmwithtremblinghands.Eachcutwasaccompaniedbyexcruciatingpain,andbeadsofsweatrolleddownhisforehead,buthegrittedhisteethanddidn'tletoutasinglescream.Finally,aftercountlesscuts,hesuccessfullycutoffhisrightarmandgotridoftheboulder'srestraint.13范文呈现Luckily,therescueteamfoundAron.ItturnedoutthatafewdaysafterArondisappeared,hisfamilycouldn'tgetintouchwithhim.Whentheylearnedthathehadgonehikinginthecanyonalone,theyimmediatelycalledthepolice.Thepoliceorganizedaprofessionalrescueteamandcarriedoutalarge-scalesearchinthecanyon.Afterseveraldaysandnightsofhardwork,therescueteamfinallyfoundAroninthedepthsofthecanyon.Atthistime,Aronwasextremelyweak.Hisfacewasaspaleaspaper,andhisrightarmwaswrappedwithasimplebandage,withbloodstilloozingout.Therescueteamquicklycarriedhimonastretcherandsenthimtothenearbyhospital.Inthehospital,thedoctorscarriedoutemergencytreatmentonAron.Afteralong-timeoperationandcarefulnursing,Aron'sinjurygraduallyimproved.ThisexperiencemadeArondeeplyrealizethepreciousnessoflife,andhealsobecameaheroinpeople'shearts.Afterbeingdischargedfromthehospital,Aronbegantousehisownexperiencetoinspiremorepeople,tellingthemthatnomatterhowgreatthedifficultiesare,theyshouldnevergiveupthehopeofsurvival.Healsocontinuedtosticktohisbelovedmountaineering.Althoughhelosthisrightarm,hestillconqueredonepeakafteranotherwithhistenaciousperseveranceandloveformountaineering.14升级版范文呈现Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.Hislipswereparchedandcracked,histongueswollentothepointwhereeventhesimplestofwordswereastruggletoform.Hisconsciousnesswasfadinginandout,plaguedbyvividhallucinations.Attimes,hesawthetendersmilesofhislovedones,andatothers,themajesticpeakshehadonceconquered.Yet,theprimalinstinctforsurvivalkepthimclingingtoathreadofawareness.Hemadecountlessattemptstofreehimself,smashingtheboulderwithwhateverstoneshecouldfindandwrithinghisbodyinadesperatebidforfreedom,butthemassiverockremainedimmovable.Hisstrengthwasrapidlydwindlingwitheachfailedeffort,andthewoundonhisbody,duetotheprolongedcompression,begantofester,emittinganauseatingstench.Inthedepthsofhisdespair,acruelyetseeminglyinevitablethoughtemerged:hehadtocutoffhistrappedrightarm.Theveryideafilledhimwithdreadandinnerturmoil.Afterall,itmeantmutilatinghisownbody.Butasthehoursturnedintodays,heknewthatwithoutthisdrasticmeasure,deathwasimminent.Afteraheart-wrenchinginternalbattle,Aronfinallysummonedthecourage.Withatremblinghand,hetookouthissmallknifeandbegantheagonizingprocessofseveringhisarm.Eachcutwasaccompaniedbysearingpain,sweatpouringdownhisforehead,butheclenchedhisteeth,refusingtoletoutasinglecryofpain.Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,hemanagedtofreehimselffromtheboulder'sgrip.15升级版范文呈现Luckily,therescueteamfoundAron.Itwasafewdaysafterhisdisappearancewhenhisfamily,unabletoreachhimandawareofhissolocanyonhike,immediatelyalertedthepolice.Thepolicewastednotimeinorganizingaprofessionalrescueteam,whichlaunchedanextensivesearchoperationinthevastcanyon.Afterdaysandnightsofrelentlesseffort,theyfinallylocatedAronintheremotedepthsofthecanyon.Bythen,hewasonthevergeofcollapse.Hisfacewasashen,hisright