2024-2025学年高中英语Unit4HelpingpeoplearoundtheworldSectionⅦGuidedWriting教师用书教案牛津译林版选修6

PAGEPAGE1Unit4Helpingpeoplearoundtheworld如何写建议信(2)eq\a\vs4\al([文体指导])建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人——就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法，也可能是写给某个组织或机构——就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写明写信的缘由、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气肯定要和缓。基本结构1．首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简洁介绍自己，留意语气。2．主体段落：提出详细建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。3．尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以接受，问题得以解决的愿望。eq\a\vs4\al([亮点句式])1．开头：I'msorrytoknowthatyouhavesometrouble/difficulty/problemsin...afterreadingyourletter.Youaskedmeformyadviceon...andit'smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice/tips.Thanksfortrustingme.I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...Iamwritingtosharesomeadviceon...withyou.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Hereareafewsuggestions/tipswhichIthinkmaybehelpfultoyou.2．给出建议：Ifeelthatitwouldbemorebeneficial/helpfulifyoucould...Iwouldliketosuggestthat...Inmyopinion，youshould...Itisbetterto...Istronglyrecommendthatyou...Itdoeshelpifyou...Itisagoodideaforyouto...IfIwereyou，Iwould...You'dbetter...3．建议的理由：Thereasonwhy...isthat...Itnotonlycan...butalsocan...Itisbecause...Thereasonforitisthat...4．结尾：Thesearepersonalsuggestions，butIdohopethattheywillbeofsomehelp.Ihopeyouwillmakegreatprogressin...astimegoesby.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsyoucanmakein...Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/thisadviceofsomeuse/help.Iwillbereadytodiscussthismatterinmoredetail.Ifyouhavemoreproblems，pleasedon'thesitatetocontactme.5．常用连接词：(1)firstly/first，secondly/second，lastbutnotleast，tostartwith，finally，intheend；(2)ontheonehand，ontheother(hand)；notonly...butalso；(3)what'smore，inaddition(to)，besideseq\a\vs4\al([写作任务])假如你是李华，请依据下表内容给中国野生动物爱护协会CWCA(ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation)的会长写一封建议信。问题1990年藏羚羊(antelope)的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧削减缘由为了获得藏羚羊的皮毛，牟取暴利，非法捕杀藏羚羊的现象仍旧时有发生建议利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊爱护的宣扬力度；增加用于藏羚羊爱护的资金；建议贵协会派出一些志愿者来帮助爱护藏羚羊留意：词数80左右。eq\a\vs4\al([审题谋篇])体裁建议信时态一般现在时主题建议爱护藏羚羊人称第一、三人称结构第一步：表明写作意图，陈述事由。其次步：提出详细建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。第三步：对提出的建议进行总结。eq\a\vs4\al([遣词造句])Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．wooln． (羊等的)绒，毛2．by_means_of 凭借3．obtain 获得4．illegaladj. 非法的5．as_a_result 结果6．make_a_great_difference 产生大的影响Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．据报道，为了羊毛，大量的藏羚羊正被非法猎杀。It_is_reported_thattoomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirwool.2．自不待言，那些非法捕猎者可以获得大量利润。Clearly，theillegalhunterscan_obtain_great_profits.3．我建议一些志愿者被派往那里帮助爱护藏羚羊。Isuggestthatsomevolunteersshould_be_sent_there_to_helpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.4．但愿我的建议对藏羚羊更好的将来会有重大影响。Ifonlymy_suggestions_could_make_a_big_differencetothebetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.(二)句式升级5．用Itisclearthat...结构改写句2It_is_clear_that_the_illegal_hunters_can_obtain_great_profits.6．用that引导表语从句改写句3My_suggestions_is_that_some_volunteers_(should)_be_sent_there_to_help_protect_the_Tibetan_antelopes.7．用Ihopethat...改写句4I_hope_my_suggestions_could_make_a_big_difference_to_the_better_future_of_the_Tibetan_antelopes.eq\a\vs4\al([妙笔成篇])__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]DearPresident，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ItisreportedthattoomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirwool.Itisclearthattheillegalhunterscanobtaingreatprofitsbymeansofsellingthewool.Asaresult，thenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000,000in1990tolessthan100,000atpresent.Immediatemeasuresmustbetakentosolvethepresentproblem.First，theimportanceofprotectingtheTibetanantelopesshouldbepublicizedthroughyourassociation.Second，wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheconservationoftheTibetanantelopes？Lastbutnotleast，mysuggestionisthatsomevolunteers(should)besenttheretohelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmakeabigdifferencetothebetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua【导读】世界名著《咆哮山庄》是19世纪英国文学的代表作之一。小说全篇充溢剧烈的反压迫、争华蜜的斗争精神，又始终覆盖着离奇、惊慌的浪漫气氛。阅读下面的节选，对比中外文化中对收养弃儿看法的异同。WutheringHeights(EllenDean'sstory—CatherineandHeathcliffaschildren1770．WhenIwasachild，IwasalwaysatWutheringHeights，becausemymotherwasaservantoftheEarnshawfamily.Theyareaveryoldfamilywhohavelivedinthathouseforcenturies，asyoucanseefromtheirnamesonthestoneoverthefrontdoor.IgrewupwithCatherineandHindleyEarnshaw，andwethreeplayedtogetheraschildren.Oneday，theirfatherMr.Earnshawcamebackfromalongjourney.HehadtravelledsixtymilestoLiverpoolandbackonbusiness，andwasverytired.“LookwhatI'vebroughtyou！”hetoldusall，unwrappingsomethinghewasholdingcarefullyinhisarms.CatherineandHindleywereexpectingpresents，andtheyrushedeagerlytoseewhatitwas.Theywereverydisappointedtoseeonlyadirty，black­hairedgipsychild.“IfoundhimallaloneinthebusystreetsofLiverpool，”Mr.Earnshawexplainedtothem，“andIcouldn'tleavehimtodie.Hecansleepinyourroom.”ButHindleyandCatherinewereangrybecausetheyhadnotreceivedanypresents，andrefusedtoletthestrangechildsharetheirroom.HoweverMr.Earnshawinsisted，andlittlebylittletheboybecameacceptedbythefamily.HewascalledHeathcliff，asafirstandlastname.Nooneeverdiscoveredwhohisparentshadbeen.Catherineandhebecamegreatfriends，butHindleyhatedhim，andwasoftencrueltohim.OldMr.Earnshawwasstrangelyfondofthisgipsychild，andfrequentlypunishedhissonforbehavingbadlytoHeathcliff.Hindleybegantobejealousofhisfather'sfeelingsforHeathcliff，andsawthembothasenemies.Thissituationcouldnotlast.AsMr.Earnshawgrewoldandill，Heathcliffbecameevenmorehisfavourite，andHindleyoftenquarrelledwithhisfather.WhenHindleywassentawaytostudy，Ihopedthatwewouldhavepeaceinthehouse.ButthenitwasthatoldservantJosephwhocausedtrouble.Hetriedtopersuadehismastertobestricterwiththechildren，andwasalwayscomplainingthatHeathcliffandCatherinedidnotspendenoughtimestudyingtheBibleorattendingchurchservices.Catherinewasawild，wickedgirlinthosedays.Wehadtowatchhereverymomentoftheday，tostopherplayinghertricksonus.Shewasproud，andlikedgivingorders.Butshehadtheprettiestfaceandthesweetestsmileyou'veeverseen.Icouldforgiveheranythingwhenshecametosayshewassorry.ShewasmuchtoofondofHeathcliff，andtheworstpunishmentwecouldinventwastokeepherseparatefromhim.Herfathercouldnolongerunderstandherorherbehaviour，andCatherinedidnotrealizethathisillnessmadehimlesspatientwithher.AtlastMr.Earnshawfoundpeace.HediedquietlyinhischairbythefireoneOctobereveningin1775.Thenightwaswildandstormy，andwewereallsittingtogetherinthebigkitchen.JosephwasreadinghisBibleatthetable，whileCatherinehadherheadonherfather'sknee.Hewaspleasedtoseehersogentleforonce，andshewassinginghimtosleep.Iwasgladtheoldgentlemanwassleepingsowell.Butwhenitwastimetogotobed，Catherineputherarmsroundherfather'snecktosaygoodnight，andimmediatelyscreamed，“Oh，he'sdead，Heathcliff!He'sdead！”HeathcliffandIstartedcryingloudlyandbitterlytoo.Josephtoldmetofetchthedoctor，soIrantothevillage，althoughIknewitwastoolate.WhenIcameback，Iwenttothechildren'sroom，toseeiftheyneededme，andIlistenedforamomentattheirdoor.Theywereimaginingthedeadmaninabeautifuldistantplace，farfromthetroublesofthisworld.AndasIlistened，cryingsilently，Icouldnothelpwishingwewerealltheresafetogether.咆哮山庄(节选)艾伦·迪恩讲解并描述的故事——凯瑟琳和希斯克利夫的童年1770年，我小时候始终在咆哮山庄，因为我母亲在欧肖家做佣人。欧肖家是一个很古老的家族，在那幢宅子住了好几百年，你能从门前石头上刻着的名字看出来。我是同凯瑟琳和亨德雷·欧肖一起长大的，小时候我们仨都在一起玩儿。一天，他们的父亲欧肖先生出远门回来。他走了六十英里去利物浦办事后又赶回来，特别疲乏。“看我给你们带来了什么！”他对我们大家说，一边打开了怀里当心抱着的东西。凯瑟琳和亨德雷正盼望着是礼物呢，兴冲冲地围上来看究竟是什么东西。当他们只看到一个脏兮兮、黑头发的吉普赛孩子时，大失所望。“我看到他孤零零地待在利物浦繁忙的街头，”欧肖先生对他们说明说，“我总不能让他就那么死了吧。他可以睡在你们的房里。”但亨德雷和凯瑟琳气恼没有得到礼物，不愿让这个野孩子睡在他们的房间。在欧肖先生的坚持下，一家人还是慢慢地接受了这个孩子。大家叫他希斯克利夫，既是名，也是姓。始终没人搞清晰他的父母是谁。凯瑟琳和他成了好挚友，但亨德雷不喜爱