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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Emilywasstrugglingtomakeendsmeet,workingtwojobsjusttoaffordatinyapartmentintheheartofthecity.Despiteherefforts,sheoftenfoundherselffeelingoverwhelmedbythehardshipofcitylife.Onecoldevening,asEmilygothomefromhersecondjob,shenoticedahomelessmanonthestreetcorner,shakingunderathinblanket(毯子).Hiseyes,filledwithamixtureofhopelessnessandtiredness,methersbrieflybeforeheloweredhishead.Withoutasecondthought,Emilyapproachedthemanandofferedhimherscarf.“Here,youmustbecold,”shesaidsoftly,puttingthescarfaroundhisshoulders.Themanlookedupather,hiseyeswideninginsurpriseatthisunexpectedactofkindness.“Thankyou,”hesaid.Fromthatdayon,Emilymadeitahabittostopandchatwiththehomelessman,whosenameshelearnedwasGreg.Shebroughthimhotmeals,blankets,andsometimesevenbookstopassthetime.Inreturn,Gregsharedstoriesofhispast—alifeoncefilledwithloveandlaughter,nowlosttothecoldstreets.Asthedayspassedby,Emilyfoundherselflookingforwardtotheirdailyencounters(相遇).InGreg,shefoundasimilarspirit—agentlesoulbeatbylife’shardshipsbutstillresilient(坚韧的).AndinEmily,Gregfoundalightofhope—areminderthateveninthedarkestoftimes,therearestillpocketsoflighttobefound.Oneevening,asEmilysatbesideGregonthecoldstreet,shenoticedsomethingunusualinhiseyes.“Whatisit,Greg?”sheasked,sensinghisunspokenthoughts.Greghesitatedforamomentbeforespeaking,hisvoiceshakingwithemotion.“Iwanttochangemylife,Emily,”hesaid.“Iwanttoleavethesestreetsbehindandstartanew.”注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Ibelieveinyou,Greg,”Emilysmiled,withprideforherfriend.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnesunnyafternoonGregwenttothesamestreetcorner.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意

Emily生活艰难，打两份工维持生计。一天，她遇到无家可归的Greg，从此经常帮助他，两人成为朋友。Greg渴望改变生活，Emily决定帮助他。Emily联系提供工作培训项目的庇护所，为Greg注册，还借钱给他买面试服装，每天鼓励他。最终，Greg成功找到工作，生活向好，他们的友谊彰显了善良的力量。伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔1：Emily经常帮助Greg，如给他送热饭、毯子和书。回应：在Greg想要改变时，Emily毫不犹豫地继续帮助他，体现她一贯的善良。伏笔2：Greg讲述自己过去的生活，表明他有对美好生活的向往。回应：这成为他努力改变，想要离开街头的动力，最终成功找到工作。伏笔3：Emily觉得Greg是个坚韧的人。回应：Greg在培训中努力学习新技能，打磨简历，体现了他的坚韧。伏笔4：Emily和Greg每日的相遇，增进了彼此的感情。回应：Greg找到工作后第一时间来和Emily分享，凸显他们之间深厚的友谊。伏笔5：Greg眼中流露出不同寻常的神情，表明他有想法。回应：他向Emily表达了想要改变生活的决心。续写要点（两段）第一段：主要围绕Emily如何具体帮助Greg展开。可以描述她在帮助过程中遇到的小困难，以及Greg面对困难时的坚持，展现两人为改变共同努力的过程。第二段：重点描绘Greg成功后的场景。比如他在工作中的出色表现，以及他和Emily的友谊进一步升华，如何一起去帮助更多像他曾经一样的人。情感线

从最初Emily对Greg的同情，到两人成为朋友后的相互支持，再到Greg想要改变时Emily的全力帮助，以及Greg成功后两人的喜悦与感恩，情感层层递进，展现出温暖积极的情感发展脉络。主旨升华句Kindnessislikeabrighttorch,lightingupthedarkpathsofthoseinneed.（善良就像明亮的火炬，照亮那些需要帮助的人黑暗的道路。）Asmallactofpassioncantriggerachainreactionofpositivechangeinsomeone'slife.（一个小小的同情之举可以在某人的生活中引发积极改变的连锁反应。）Truefriendshipisforgedinthefireofadversity,supportingeachothertoriseabovedifficulties.（真正的友谊在逆境的火焰中铸就，相互支持以克服困难。）Whenwereachouttootherswithlove,wenotonlychangetheirlivesbutalsoenrichourownsouls.（当我们用爱向他人伸出援手时，我们不仅改变了他们的生活，也丰富了自己的灵魂。）Thepowerofkindnessknowsnobounds,capableoftransformingeventhemostdesperatesituationsintohopefilledjourneys.（善良的力量无穷无尽，能够将最绝望的境遇转变为充满希望的旅程。）两篇写作示范

写作示范一“Ibelieveinyou,Greg,”Emilysmiled,withprideforherfriend.SheintroducedGregtosomeofhercolleagues,hopingtheycouldofferadviceorevenpotentialjobleads.EmilyalsohelpedGregimprovehismunicationskills,practicingmockinterviewswithhim.Gregwasaquicklearner,andhisdeterminationshonethrougheverypracticesession.Astimepassed,Greg'sconfidencegrew,andhebecamemoreandmorereadyforthejobmarket.OnesunnyafternoonGregwenttothesamestreetcorner.Hewasacpaniedbyhisnewboss.HisbosswantedtomeetthepersonwhohadinspiredGreg'stransformation.ThebosswassoimpressedbyEmily'skindnessthathedecidedtosponsoralocalshelter,providingmoreresourcesforthehomeless.GregandEmily,handinhand,continuedtospreadkindness,believingthateverysmallactcouldmakeadifferenceintheworld.写作示范二“Ibelieveinyou,Greg,”Emilysmiled,withprideforherfriend.ShestartedtoscourtheinternetforjobopportunitiessuitableforGreg.Everyeveningafterwork,shewouldsitwithGreg,goingthroughjobdescriptions,andhelpinghimtailorhisapplicationletters.Despitefacingnumerousrejectionsatfirst,Gregdidn'tloseheart,inspiredbyEmily'sunwaveringsupport.Theyattendednetworkingeventstogether,whereGreggraduallybuiltconnections.OnesunnyafternoonGregwenttothesamestreetcorner.HewasholdingasmallbouquetofflowersforEmily.Withahugesmile,heannouncedthathehadbeenpromotedatwork.Hishardworkhadpaidoff.Theydecidedtousetheirbinedstrengthtostartasmallcharity,aimingtohelpotherhomelesspeopleturntheirlivesaround.Theirstorybecameaninspirationinthemunity,showingthatwithkindnessandperseverance,anythingwaspossible.【答案】Onepossibleversion:“Ibelieveinyou,Greg,”Emilysmiled,withprideforherfriend.Sheplacedahandonhisshoulder.“AndI’llbeheretosupportyoueverystepoftheway.”WithEmily’ssupport,Gregstartedanewjourney.Heworkedinlocalshelterstorebuildhislifefromthegroundup.Later,