2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：跨国寻主：小狗蜘蛛的坎坷归程+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习跨国寻主：小狗蜘蛛的坎坷归程1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IwaseightyearsoldwhenmyfamilymovedfromTowoombatoEnglandin1950.MymotherwassufferingfromararediseaseandhadtotaketreatmentinLondon.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,Fathersenthisfive-year-oldredheeler(Australiancattledog),Spider,whowaslovedbyusall,tohisfriendSandy,asSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas.Wedidn’tknowhowlongmymother’streatmentwouldtakeorhowlongwewouldbeaway.Sixweekslater,anairletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwoweeksafterwehadsailed.Iwillalwaysremembermyfather’sfaceashereadthisnews.MymotherandItriedtocomforthim,knowinginourheartshowuselessthiswas.4续写原文Sandyhadadvertisedconstantlyonthemedia.Despitemany“sightings”,thedogwasneverfound.ItseemedSpiderjustkeptrunningandsearchingforus.Myfatherworriedhewouldbeshotordeadfromstarvation.ButourfamilythoughtthatFatherheldasecrethopethatSpiderwasstillalive.WesailedbacktoAustraliatwoyearslaterandmyfatherimmediatelybeganhisownsearchforSpider.Herepeatedcallstothepeoplewhohadsaidtheyhadseenhisdog,butitturnedouttobeclueless.5续写原文Onecoldwinter’sSaturdaymorning,eightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromGinGin,375kilometersfromToowoomba.Anelderlyladylivingonherownwasputtingfoodout“foraveryoldyellowdog”.Thishadbeengoingonforafewweeks.Immediatelywesetoff.Fiveandahalfhourslater,wefoundtheoldhousebesidethebush(灌木丛).Sadly,theladytoldmyfatherthatthedoghadn’tbeenaroundforafewdays.Myfatherhadanupsetlookinhiseyes.HeputtwofingerstohismouthanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.6段首句Paragraph1:Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Paragraph2：Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析91950年，8岁的“我”一家因母亲治病从澳大利亚的图文巴搬去英国，临行前将5岁的红毛牧牛犬蜘蛛托付给朋友桑迪。六周后得知蜘蛛在他们走后两周就跑丢了。尽管桑迪多方寻找，仍一无所获。两年后一家人回国，父亲继续寻找。一次听说375公里外有疑似蜘蛛的踪迹，一家人前往寻找，在一位老妇人家附近，父亲吹起特殊口哨。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.突然，灌木丛中传来一阵声响。起初，那声音很微弱，像是有什么东西在小心翼翼地挪动。紧接着，一个身影缓缓从灌木丛中钻了出来。那是一只瘦骨嶙峋、脏兮兮的狗，身上的毛杂乱地纠结在一起，走路也摇摇晃晃。但当它听到父亲那熟悉的口哨声时，原本黯淡的眼睛瞬间亮了起来，耳朵也竖了起来。父亲激动地轻声唤道：“蜘蛛？”仿佛是听到了久违的呼唤，那只狗虚弱地叫了一声，便跌跌撞撞地朝我们奔来。每一步都显得那么艰难，却又充满了急切。近了，我们才看清，真的是蜘蛛！它历经了无数个日夜的漂泊，终于再次回到了家人身边。11续写思路分析Para2：Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.一回到家，我们便轻柔地为它清洗。我们用温水小心地冲洗着它身上的污垢，慢慢梳理着打结的毛发，每一个动作都充满了心疼。清洗之后，那只熟悉的红毛牧牛犬的模样渐渐显现出来。蜘蛛依旧很瘦，肋骨都清晰可见，但它的眼神里却透着一种劫后余生的欣喜与活力。我们给它准备了一些易消化的食物，一小口一小口地喂它，看着它一点点恢复体力。在接下来的日子里，蜘蛛在我们的悉心照料下，逐渐找回了往日的生机，它时刻跟在父亲身边，仿佛生怕再次与家人分离。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Atfirst,itwasafaintandindistinctnoise,asifsomethingwasmovingstealthily.Then,afiguregraduallyemergedfromthethickbushes.Itwasadog,extremelythinanddirty,withitsfurallmatted.Itsstepswerewobbly,showingitsweakness.However,themomentitheardmyfather'sspecialwhistle,itsearsperkedupimmediately,anditseyes,whichhadbeendull,sparkledwithaglimmerofhope.Myfathergaspedinexcitementandmurmured,"Spider?"Asifinresponsetothislong-awaitedcall,thedogbarkedweaklyandstumbledtowardsus.Everystepittookseemedarduous,yetfullofeagerness.Asitgotcloser,wecouldclearlyseethatitwasindeedSpider.Aftercountlessdaysandnightsofwandering,itfinallyfounditswaybacktoitsfamily.14范文呈现Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.Weusedwarmwatertocarefullywashawaythedirtonhisbodyandslowlycombedthroughhisknottedfur,everymovementfilledwithloveandpity.Afterthecleaning,thefamiliarappearanceoftheredheelergraduallyemerged.Spiderwasstillverythin,withhisribsclearlyvisible,buttherewasakindofvitalityandjoyinhiseyes.Wepreparedsomeeasily-digestiblefoodforhimandfedhimlittlebylittle,watchinghimregainhisstrengthbitbybit.Inthefollowingdays,withourmeticulouscare,Spidergraduallyreturnedtohisformervitality.Hefollowedmyfathereverywhere,asifhewasafraidofgettingseparatedfromhisfamilyagain.15升级版范文呈现Suddenly,asoundemanatedfromthebush.Initially,itwasafaint,almostimperceptiblerustling,asifsomecreaturewasstealthilymakingitswaythroughtheundergrowth.Gradually,afigureemergedfromthethicket.Itwasadog,emaciatedandfilthy,itsfurmattedinatangledmess.Itsgaitwasunsteady,atestamenttoitsweakenedstate.However,uponhearingmyfather'sdistinctivewhistle,itsearsshotup,andasparkofrecognitionignitedinitspreviouslydulleyes.Myfather,unabletocontainhisexcitement,gasped,"Spider?"Asifinanswertothislong-awaitedsummons,thedogletoutafeeblebarkandstaggeredtowardsus.Eachstepittookwaslabored,yetdrivenbyanunmistakableeagerness.Asitdrewnearer,therewasnomistakingit–itwasSpider,who,afterenduringcountlessdaysandnightsofwandering,hadfinallyfounditswaybacktoitsfamily.16升级版范文呈现Oncehome,wesetaboutgentlycleaninghimup.Warmwaterwascarefullyappliedtowashawaytheaccumulateddirt,andwepainstakinglycombedthroughhisknottedfur,everygestureimbuedwithtendernessandcompassion.Post-cleaning,thefamiliarvisageoftheredheeler