2025【寒假伴学营】高三英语专项专题14读后续写八步成文法含答案及解析

专题14读后续写八步成文法

【三大步】三步核心：审题

构思

润色审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。最后，务必整洁地写在答题卡上。

【八小步】情绪：消极情绪2.细节：进一步解释描写3.转折：个人的努力或借助外界4.转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰5.失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题6.新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）7.结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折8.总结：点题，呼应前文读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict，solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：第1步:消极情绪awaveof...=afeeling/senseof+情绪名词floodedover阵...的情绪涌上心头。sb=sweptoversb情绪名词fear,terror,fright,panic害怕happiness,joy,delight开心gratitude,appreciation感激sadness,sorrow悲伤anger,rage,fury愤怒anxiety,stress,nervousness紧张,不安surprise,amazement,shock震惊guilt,regret后悔,内疚Sbfeltsbwasfloatinginanoceanof+情绪名词某人感到自己漂浮在...的海洋中.第2步：细节(动作刻画)：进一步解释描写描写与head有关动作noddedone'shead点头shookone'shead摇头描写“看”这一动作词:saw看见spotted发现recognized认出observedsbdoing/dosth注意到某人正在做/做过短语:staredat盯着看glaredat怒视glancedat瞥一眼带“eye”的表达:lookedsbintheeye直视某人的眼睛带“sight”的表达看得见:sb/sthbeinmysight/cameintomysight/sb.caughtsightofsth看不见:sb/sthbeoutofsight/fadedaway哭/笑:burstintotears/laughter(大哭/大笑)couldn'thelpcrying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)tearswelledupintheeyes眼泪涌出cheeks/face泪水落下描写“说”温和地说，补充道，坚持说，抽泣着说，耳边轻声说saidgently/added/insisted/sobbed/whispered与arm(手臂)有关的动作描写wavedhisarms.挥手grabbedherleftarm抓住她的左臂puthisarmsaroundher他搂着她描写与hand有关的动作tookout取出/拿出heldone'shand抓住某人的手shookhandswith与...握手handinhand手拉手raisedone'shand举手heldoutone'shand伸出手tookone'shand牵某人的手Herhandsshook/trembled/shivered她的手颤抖着屏住呼吸:Sbheldone'sbreath.深呼吸:Sbtookadeepbreath.心里想:Aninnervoicetoldsbthat内心的声音告诉某人...细节描写:笑看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.(3)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.(4)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface/eyes.细节描写:哭Alumpcametohisthroat.他哽咽欲哭。Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的双眼哭得通红。Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.她的眼里满含泪水。Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。细节描写:害怕我感到很害怕。Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.(4)Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(5)Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.(6)Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror,mypalmssweating细节描写:高兴激动当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。(1)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.(2)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(3)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.(4)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,awildexcitementtookholdofher.(5)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.(6)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasovercomewithexcitement.情绪描写:生气愤怒felt/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury;eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm/sayangrily;sthmakessbbloodboil;sthmakessbextremelyangry;claspone'sfists/teeth;speechless细节描写:生气愤怒Sam感到非常生气。Samfeltveryangry.Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.第3步：转折：个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。1.Withouthesitation/Withouteventhinking,sbdidsth.鼓起勇气;他人的鼓励pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo...)毫不犹豫sbcouldhardlywaittodosthwithoutasecondthoughtwithouteventhinkingwithoutdelaywithouthesitation第4步：转机：--事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。似乎Itwaslikedoingsth(2)Itseemedasif/that希望(1)1hopingthat...see/feelaglimmerofhopetryinghardtodosth欣慰...breathedasighofrelief=sighedwithrelief松了(awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversbtoone’srelief,..使人欣慰的/放心的是……第5步：失望：问题还未解决或出现了新问题但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型是:不幸的是;不知道做什么;消极情绪不幸的是:1.Sbdidsth,butinvain/butwithout.../butnousesuccess不知道做什么1.wonderingwhattodonext.2.notknowingwhattodonext.3.unsureofwhattodonext.消极情绪:afeeling/senseof...floodedoversb第6步：新的想法：面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。某人想到/明白...;有了主意1.Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat从句=Ithitsbthat从句=Itstrucksbthat从句=Itdawnedonsbthat从句在这黑暗而绝望的时刻,某人突然想到..."Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametosb.在这黑暗和无助的时刻,某人突然想到一个绝妙的主意。第7步：结局--皆大欢喜：在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折:不久：notlongafterthat,...-beforelong,.=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore从何=Ittooksometimebefore从句在某人的帮助下:Withtheaid/helpofsb,sbapproached/solvedtheproblemfinally.在...的帮助下,某人最终解决了问题。有了结果:Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat+从句Butonsecondthoughts(3)Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.(4)Toone'ssurprise/delight,itturnedoutthat从句令某人惊讶/高兴的事,结果证明..感到欣慰:Toone'srelief,.使人欣慰的/放心的是Awaveofrelieffloodedoversb.某人感到如释重负。感谢:Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢感动:Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感动得说不出话来).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.刹那间，我热泪盈眶，被感动得说不出话来。我觉得很温暖，好像有九个太阳在我的胸膛。第8步：总结：点题，呼应前文第8步:最后总结，点题（1）直到……才意识到1.倒装句:Notuntil+时间状语+didsbrealize/noticethat+从句2.强调句:Itwasonly+时间状语+thatsbrealizedthat+从句（2）还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中1.One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.2.One'swords/voice/songlingered/whisperedinone'smindhead.(3)经历与教训1.One'sheadwasstillfullof...2.Whata/anvaluable/useful/great/painfullessonsbtaughtme/sblearnedfromsb!3.Whata/anenjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettablememorable/interesting/valuableexperiencesbhad!在某人的内心深处(3)Downdeepinone'sheart,...“八步法”实战应用：高考真题讲解【典例分析1】故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

八步法思路1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情绪）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（细节详述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（转折：个人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（转机：成功，希望来了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.（衔接句：新问题来了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”

Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失败)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了办法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（开始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,Uncle

Paulcouldn’twaittoaskedus,

“Wherehaveyoubeen?Iamjustcalling911.”（幽默对话）7.“ToAlice’sWonderland”

myfatheranswered,winkingatmewithabiggrin.8.Whatanunforgettableexperiencewehad!【典例分析2】故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,

Jane

andherhusband,

Tom,

haddriventhreehoursto

camp

overnightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthe

lake,

JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"and

walked

away.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbed

toahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoa

stream.

Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janehearda

helicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellow

blouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain._______________________________________________________________Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._________________________________________________________________________第一段：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)读后续写续写1.A

waveofterrorsweptoverher.一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。1.情绪2.Her

heartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldherthat

shehadtofindasafeplace.她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。2.细节：详述情绪3.Tired

andterrifiedasshewas,Janepluckedhercouragetofeeltheway.虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。3.转折∶

个人努力4.Luckily,

itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.5.

Sighingwithrelief,shefeltaglimmerofhope.sayingto

herself."Tomorrowisanotherday."4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。

对自己说。

“明天又是新的一天。”转机：成功、希望来了。With

that,shewenttosleep,inwhosedreamherhusbandkepthercompany.说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。衔接句第二段：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。读后续写续写1.Hungry

anddisappointed,shefoundnotanyhelicopteroverhead,atalosswhattodo.1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。再度失望（出现新问题）2.It

suddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.3.

Havinggobblingdownsomeblackberries,shecan'twaittosetoff.4.

Afterwhatseemedacentury,suchanareadidcomeintosight.1.

Herfacebrightenedup.2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。3.

她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。5.她的脸变亮了。突然有了办法6.Whatacoincidencethatmeanwhile,a

helicopterwasflyingtowardsher.7.Uponitslanding,outdashedherhusband

whohuggedJanetightly,tearswellingupintheirheart.6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜8.Itwasatthemomentthattheydecided

nottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtocompromise.8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协（总结）Writing01【广东省六校2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考】Inourcozylittlehousenestledattheendofaquietstreet,mysisterOscarandIwerebustling(忙碌的)about,filledwithanticipationforMother’sDay.OurmotherClarewastheheartofourfamily.Shewasthetypeofmomwhoalwaysputourneedsfirst,sacrificingherowndesiresforourhappiness.Growingup,weestablishedabeautifultraditionthateachyear,wewouldsurpriseherwithaspecialgifttoshowourgratitudeandlove.Thisyear,Oscarcameupwithabrilliantidea:“Whatifwemadeheralongandbeautifuldress?”sheexclaimed,hervoicefilledwithexcitement.AsIrecalled,sincethedaywewereborn,Momhadn’tboughtherselfabeautifulnewdress,soIknewwehadtomakethisyear’ssurprisetrulyspecial.Withthatthoughtinmind,wesettowork.Igrabbedmydrawingbookandbegantodesign,mypencildancingacrossthepage;whileOscarwithherperfectsenseofmeasurementandloveforsewing.shegotdowntohandlingthecloth.Hereyesshonewithconcentration,whileIfocusedonthebeautifulpatternsonthedress.Soon,thedressbegantotakeshape—itwassuchamagnificentlongdress,andwecarefullywrappeditingiftpaper.Butthencamethequestion:wheretohideitforthesurprisetoberevealedatdinner?Weputourheadstogether,brainstormingtheperfecthidingspot.“Nobodywouldthinktolookinmybedroomcloset.”IsuggestedOscargiggled,noddinginagreement,butwebothneglectedthefactthatourtwoplayfulcatscouldbeaproblem.Finally,themomentarrived.Afterdessert,IexchangedaknowinglookwithOscar.Itwastimetounveilourcreation!Wedashedtoourbedroomtogether,myheartpoundinginmychestasIflungopentheclosetdoor.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“NO”Iyelled,seeingourcatsdashedoutofthecloset.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Wheredidyougetsuchabeautifulscarf?”Momasked.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Writing02【2025届河南省信阳市高三第一次教学质量检测（一模）】InMaplewoodHighSchool,honestywasaprincipleoftendiscussedbutnotalwayspracticed.Amongthestudents,EmmaTurnerwasknownforherhonesty.Shewasdiligent,alwayscompletedherhomeworkontime,andwastrustedbyherpeers(同龄人)andteachersalike.Shewasalsoamodelstudent,oftenhelpingotherswiththeirhomeworkandorganizingstudygroups.Herreputationforhonestyandhardworkmadeheranaturalleaderinherclass.Oneautumnday,theentireschoolwasexcited.Theannualsciencefairwasapproaching,andthestudentswerebusyperfectingtheirprojects.Posters,models,andexperimentsfilledtheclassroomsaseveryoneworkeddiligently.Emmahadspentweeksonherprojectaboutrenewableenergy.Shedevotedherselftovarioussustainable(可持续的)energysources,conductedexperiments,andcreatedadetaileddisplaytoshowcaseherfindings.Shewasconfidentitwouldimpressthejudges.Herbestfriend,Max,however,hadstruggledtocomeupwithanidea.Hehadprocrastinated(拖延),unsureofwhattopictochoose,andnowthedeadlinedrewnear.MaxadmiredEmmaandfeltguiltyfornotbeingprepared.Inamomentofdesperation,Maxdecidedto“borrow”anoldercousin'sprojectandpresentitashisown.MaxwassurethatnooneatMaplewoodwouldknow.Thedayofthesciencefairarrived,andthegymwasfilledwithcolorfuldisplays,excitedstudents,andcuriousparents.Theairwasthickwiththesmellofposterpaintandanticipation.Emma’sdisplayattractedalotofattention.Teachers,students,andevenalocalnewsreporterstoppedbytoaskquestionsaboutherinnovativeideas.Shefeltasenseofprideandaccomplishment.Asshemadeherroundstoviewotherprojects,shenoticedMax’sproject.Herheartsankwhensherealizedshehadseenitbeforeatadifferentfairyearsago.注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Emmafacedadifficultsituation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EmmatookadeepbreathandapproachedMax.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Writing03【重庆市南开中学2024-2025学年高三上学期第二次质量检测】Havingrecentlytransferredtothehighschool,Emilyfeltlikeaghostdriftingthroughthehallways—unseenandunheard.Strugglingtoadapttohernewenvironment,shefoundherselfisolated.Agroupofpopulargirls,ledbyJessica,frequentlymadefunofher.Theyeventhrewinsultsatherintelligence,asifexcellinginschoolwassomethingtobeashamedof.Toavoidaddingmorestresstoheralreadyoverworkedparents,Emilybottledupherfeelings,swallowingthedailysufferinglikebittermedicine.Onegrayafternoon,afterthefinalbellhadrungandthelastechoesofchatterhadfaded,Emilyfoundherbooksandnotebooksscatteredinadirtybin.Withembarrassmentburninghercheeks,tearswelledupinhereyes,blurringhervisionassheknelttogatherherbelongings.Justthen,Lily,aclassmatewhohadalwaysnoticedEmily’sstrugglesbutneverintervened,approachedandkneltbesideher.“They’rejusttryingtofeelbetterbymakingothersfeelworse,”Lilysaidsoftly,hervoicelikeagentlebreezeonasuffocatingday.Then,shehandedEmilyhernotebooks,offeringanunderstandingsmile.ThoughtouchedbyLily’skindness,Emilystillfelttheshadowhangingoverher.JessicaandherfriendstrippedEmilyinthehallways,pushedherinthelunchline,andevenhidhergymshoes,laughingasshecrazilysearchedforthem.EachincidentaddedtotheweightpressingdownonEmily’schest.Shebeganpretendingtobesick,hopingtoescapethetorturethatturnedherschoollifeintoadailynightmare.InanEnglishclass,theteacherassignedanessaytitled“MyWish”.Emilypouredherheartintotheassignmentandwroteaboutherlongingforatruefriendandthepainoffeelinglikeanoutsider,baringhersoulonthepage,exposingtherawwoundsandthebullyingshehadendured.Theteacher,noticingtheweightofherwords,realizedwhatEmilyhadbeengoingthrough.Theschoolrespondedswiftly,takingmeasurestoaddresstheeffectsofbullyingandorganizingcounselingsessionstohelpEmilyrebuildherconfidence.Throughoutthistime,LilystayedbyEmily’sside,becomingherpillarofstrength.注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Emily’srecoverybegantoshowsignsofprogresswithLily’ssupport.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Also,theschool’sbanonbullyingmadeJessicaandherfriendsreflect.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

专题14读后续写八步成文法

【三大步】三步核心：审题

构思

润色审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。最后，务必整洁地写在答题卡上。

【八小步】情绪：消极情绪2.细节：进一步解释描写3.转折：个人的努力或借助外界4.转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰5.失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题6.新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）7.结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折8.总结：点题，呼应前文读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict，solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：第1步:消极情绪awaveof...=afeeling/senseof+情绪名词floodedover阵...的情绪涌上心头。sb=sweptoversb情绪名词fear,terror,fright,panic害怕happiness,joy,delight开心gratitude,appreciation感激sadness,sorrow悲伤anger,rage,fury愤怒anxiety,stress,nervousness紧张,不安surprise,amazement,shock震惊guilt,regret后悔,内疚Sbfeltsbwasfloatinginanoceanof+情绪名词某人感到自己漂浮在...的海洋中.第2步：细节(动作刻画)：进一步解释描写描写与head有关动作noddedone'shead点头shookone'shead摇头描写“看”这一动作词:saw看见spotted发现recognized认出observedsbdoing/dosth注意到某人正在做/做过短语:staredat盯着看glaredat怒视glancedat瞥一眼带“eye”的表达:lookedsbintheeye直视某人的眼睛带“sight”的表达看得见:sb/sthbeinmysight/cameintomysight/sb.caughtsightofsth看不见:sb/sthbeoutofsight/fadedaway哭/笑:burstintotears/laughter(大哭/大笑)couldn'thelpcrying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)tearswelledupintheeyes眼泪涌出cheeks/face泪水落下描写“说”温和地说，补充道，坚持说，抽泣着说，耳边轻声说saidgently/added/insisted/sobbed/whispered与arm(手臂)有关的动作描写wavedhisarms.挥手grabbedherleftarm抓住她的左臂puthisarmsaroundher他搂着她描写与hand有关的动作tookout取出/拿出heldone'shand抓住某人的手shookhandswith与...握手handinhand手拉手raisedone'shand举手heldoutone'shand伸出手tookone'shand牵某人的手Herhandsshook/trembled/shivered她的手颤抖着屏住呼吸:Sbheldone'sbreath.深呼吸:Sbtookadeepbreath.心里想:Aninnervoicetoldsbthat内心的声音告诉某人...细节描写:笑看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.(3)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.(4)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface/eyes.细节描写:哭Alumpcametohisthroat.他哽咽欲哭。Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的双眼哭得通红。Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.她的眼里满含泪水。Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。细节描写:害怕我感到很害怕。Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.(4)Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(5)Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.(6)Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror,mypalmssweating细节描写:高兴激动当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。(1)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.(2)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(3)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.(4)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,awildexcitementtookholdofher.(5)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.(6)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasovercomewithexcitement.情绪描写:生气愤怒felt/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury;eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm/sayangrily;sthmakessbbloodboil;sthmakessbextremelyangry;claspone'sfists/teeth;speechless细节描写:生气愤怒Sam感到非常生气。Samfeltveryangry.Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.第3步：转折：个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。1.Withouthesitation/Withouteventhinking,sbdidsth.鼓起勇气;他人的鼓励pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo...)毫不犹豫sbcouldhardlywaittodosthwithoutasecondthoughtwithouteventhinkingwithoutdelaywithouthesitation第4步：转机：--事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。似乎Itwaslikedoingsth(2)Itseemedasif/that希望(1)1hopingthat...see/feelaglimmerofhopetryinghardtodosth欣慰...breathedasighofrelief=sighedwithrelief松了(awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversbtoone’srelief,..使人欣慰的/放心的是……第5步：失望：问题还未解决或出现了新问题但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型是:不幸的是;不知道做什么;消极情绪不幸的是:1.Sbdidsth,butinvain/butwithout.../butnousesuccess不知道做什么1.wonderingwhattodonext.2.notknowingwhattodonext.3.unsureofwhattodonext.消极情绪:afeeling/senseof...floodedoversb第6步：新的想法：面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。某人想到/明白...;有了主意1.Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat从句=Ithitsbthat从句=Itstrucksbthat从句=Itdawnedonsbthat从句在这黑暗而绝望的时刻,某人突然想到..."Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametosb.在这黑暗和无助的时刻,某人突然想到一个绝妙的主意。第7步：结局--皆大欢喜：在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折:不久：notlongafterthat,...-beforelong,.=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore从何=Ittooksometimebefore从句在某人的帮助下:Withtheaid/helpofsb,sbapproached/solvedtheproblemfinally.在...的帮助下,某人最终解决了问题。有了结果:Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat+从句Butonsecondthoughts(3)Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.(4)Toone'ssurprise/delight,itturnedoutthat从句令某人惊讶/高兴的事,结果证明..感到欣慰:Toone'srelief,.使人欣慰的/放心的是Awaveofrelieffloodedoversb.某人感到如释重负。感谢:Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedh