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2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能2.11热点话题表达微技能1(校园故事+描写学习场景)素材积累素材积累1学习场景描述必备词汇第一组freeeducation免费义务教育(在新西兰)compulsoryeducation义务教育(在中国)publicschool/councilschool公立学校privateschool私立学校kindergarten幼儿园primaryschool/elementaryschool小学juniorhighschool/secondaryschool中学seniorhighschool高中college/university大学keyuniversity重点大学teacherscollege/normalschool师范学校admissionsoffice招生办公室,招生办tuition学费semester学期schooldiscipline校纪,学校纪律assistantship助学金scholarship奖学金schooluniform校服headmaster校长dean(大学的)学院院长,系主任professor教授associateprofessor副教授tutor导师teachingassistant助教,教师助理monitor班长classmate同学youngpioneer少先队员,红领巾teachingbuilding教学楼dormitory宿舍gymnasium体育馆readingroom阅览室library图书馆lecturehall学术报告厅thestudentcanteen学生食堂students’union学生会schoolyard校园campus(尤指大学的)校园playground操场platform讲台blackboard黑板chalk粉笔blackboarderaser/boardrubber/chalkboarderaser粉笔擦examinationn.考试take/haveanexam考试cheat作弊tocheatonexams考试作弊impostor冒名顶替者compulsorycourse必修课electivecourse选修课theArts文科theSciences理科textbook教科书Chinese语文mathematics/math数学English英语Physics物理Chemistry化学History历史Geography地理Biography生物Politics政治assignment/homework作业diploma毕业证书freshman大一学生sophomore大二学生第二组中、小学校长headmaster/headmistress;principal大专院校校长president;chancellor教务长deanofstudies(系)主任chairman;chairperson副主任vice-chairman教授professor副教授associateprofessor客座教授visitingprofessor;guestprofessor讲师lecturer助教assistant专职教师full-timeteacher兼职教师part-timeteacher辅导员assistantforpoliticalandideologicalwork教研室/组teachingandresearchsection/group教学组teachinggroup教员休息室staffroom;commonroom母校AlmaMater校友alumnus;alumna学生会students'union/association高年级学生upper/highergradepupil/student;pupil/studentinseniorgrades低年级学生lowergradepupil/student;pupil/studentinjuniorgrades走读生daystudent;non-residentstudent住宿生boarder旁听生auditor研究生graduatestudent;post-graduate(student)应届毕业生graduatingstudent/pupil;thisyear'sgraduates听课tovisitaclass;tositinonaclass;toattendalecture公开课openclass课程course;curriculum必修课required/compulsorycourse选修课elective/optionalcourse基础课basiccourse专业课specializedcourse课程表schooltimetable课外活动extracurricularactivities课外辅导instructionafterclass课外阅读outsidereading课堂讨论classdiscussion(大学的)研究小组;讨论会seminar教学大纲teachingprogram;syllabus教学内容contentofcourses学习年限periodofschooling学历recordofformalschooling学年school/academicyear学期(school)term;semester学分credit分数mark;grade五分制the5-grademarkingsystem百分制100-marksystem学习成绩academicrecord;schoolrecord成绩单schoolreport;reportcard;transcript毕业论文thesis;dissertation毕业实习graduationfieldwork毕业设计graduationceremony毕业典礼graduationceremony;commencement毕业证书diploma;graduationcertificate毕业鉴定graduationappraisal授予某人学位toconferadegreeonsb.升级tobepromotedtoahighergrade留级torepeattheyear'swork;tostaydown补考make-upexamination升学togotoaschoolofahighergrade;toenterahigherschool升学率proportionofstudentsenteringschoolsofahighergrade奖学金scholarship(国家)助学金(state)stipend/subsidy领取助学金的学生agrant-aidedstudent学费tuition(fee)伙食费boardexpenses伙食补助foodallowancejuniorstudent大三学生seniorstudent大四学生undergraduate大学生,本科生postgraduate研究生master硕士doctor博士post-doctor博士后bachelor’sdegree学士学位master’sdegree硕士学位ontime按时leave(school)early早退belateforclass迟到truancy逃学,旷课askforleave请假obedient服从的,顺从的studious用功的,勤奋的slack马虎的,不勤奋的workhard(动词短语)努力学习/工作harkwork(名词短语)努力学习/工作学习场景描述用语1.表达学英语困难Therearethousandsofwordsanditistoohardtoremember.ThepeoplearoundusarenotEnglishspeakersandthereisnochancetouseEnglish.ThewayEnglishspeakersthinkinistotallydifferentfromours.Eventhoughwehavealreadykeptalargenumberofwordsandsentencesinmind,werspeechlesswhenwemeetsomeforeigners.TheaimwelearnEnglishforistopasstheexam,howcanwebeasuccessfulEnglishlearnerwhilewehaveawrongbeginning?2.关于学习的句子Youneverknowwhatyoucandotillyoutry.除非你亲自尝试一下,否则你永远不知道你能够做什么。

Whenasmallmindbecomesbecomebehavior,canbecomeahabit;thusformingcharacter,andcharactertodeterminethesuccessorfailureofyourlife.当一个小小的心念变成成为行为时,便能成了习惯;从而形成性格,而性格就决定你一生的成败。

Whenapersonfirstfromhisheartbegantostruggle,heisamanofvalue.当一个人先从自己的内心开始奋斗,他就是个有价值的人。

Todefeattheirownfarmorethantheothers.自己打败自己的远远多于比别人打败的。

Thosewhosowintearswillreapasmile.含泪播种的人一定能含笑收获。

Successneedcost,timeisalsoakindofcost,valueoftimeiscostsavings.成功需要成本,时间也是一种成本,对时间的珍惜就是对成本的节约。

Repentanceissomethingthatenervatesourspirit,causingagreaterlossthanlossitselfandmakingabiggermistakethanmistakeitself,soneverregret.后悔是一种耗费精神的情绪,后悔是比损失更大的损失,比错误更大的错误,所以不要后悔。

Noconfidence,onlybyconstantlycultivateconfidence.没有天生的信心,只有不断培养的信心。

Lifeisbeautifulforsomepeople,thesepeople’slivesareforagoal.生命对某些人来说是美丽的,这些人的一生都为某个目标而奋斗。

Don’tdawdleawayyourtime,ortheyoungheadwillsoonturnwhite.Thenitwillbeinvainforyoutomoanandmournforthis.莫等闲,白了少年头,空悲切。

Desiretoenhancetheenthusiasm,perseverancerubdownalp.欲望以提升热忱,毅力以磨平高山。

Aslongastheroadisright,thatisfaraway.只要路是对的,就不怕路远。

Alwaysbearinmindthatyourownresolutiontosucceedismoreimportantthananyonething.要随时牢记在心:决心取得成功比任何一件事情都重要。

Afterthehopeless,butsomethingtolookforwardto.苦想没盼头,苦干有奔头。

Activelypushyourselfbelieveonlycanpromoteworld,justpushyourselfcanpromoteworld.积极者相信只有推动自己才能推动世界,只要推动自己就能推动世界。

Actionisgoodmedicinetocurefear,hesitation,delaywillcontinuetonourishthefear.行动是治愈恐惧的良药,而犹豫、拖延将不断滋养恐惧。

话题拓展话题拓展2一、续写表达升级词汇[第一组]1.absentadj.缺席的,缺勤的2.accustomedadj.习惯的,惯常的3.activityn.活动4.celebratevt.庆祝celebrationn.庆祝;庆祝活动5.compositionn.作文;作曲6.concentratev.聚精会神;集中(注意力)7.subjectn.科目8.favouriteadj.特别喜爱的9.excellentadj.优秀的10.praisevt.表扬11.dormitoryn.学生宿舍,寝室12.exercisen.锻炼,做操;练习13.contestn.比赛,竞赛14.achievesuccess获得成功15.askforleave请假[第二组]16.conceptn.概念17.confidentadj.自信的18.crazyadj.着迷的;疯狂的19.curiousadj.好奇的;奇特的20.debatev.&n.辩论21.determinationn.决心22.discussv.讨论23.eageradj.渴望的;热切的24.scholarshipn.奖学金25.mistaken.错误26.lecturern.讲师27.schedulen.时间表28.coursen.课程29.beabsentfrom缺席……30.beabsorbed/buried/occupiedin全神贯注于……二、读后续写源语篇阅读必备词汇[第三组]31.encouragevt.鼓励encouragementn.鼓励32.followv.跟随;理解33.graduationn.毕业;毕业典礼34.accomodationn.住宿;膳宿35.comprehensionn.领悟,理解36.moraln.道德;品行37.criticismn.批评38.potentialadj.有潜力的39.flexibleadj.灵活的40.aspectn.方面,方向41.barriern.妨碍(物);屏障42.cafeterian.自助餐厅43.bestrictwith对……要求严格44.catchupwith赶上45.cheatintheexam考试作弊三、续写表达高分词汇[第四组]46.academyn.专科学院;(美)私立学校47.agendan.(会议)议程表;议事日程48.calculatev.计算49.certificaten.证书50.compulsoryadj.强制的,必须做的51.curriculumn.课程52.efficientadj.有效率的53.geometryn.几何学54.intervaln.间隔;间歇55.schoolingn.学校教育四、续写表达高分句式储备1.Themoreastudentisencouraged,theharderhewillworkathislessons.学生被鼓励得越多,他学习就会越努力。2.Withallmyattentionconcentratedonmyhomework,Ievendidn’tnoticemyteacherstandingbyme.我的注意力都集中在作业上,我甚至没有注意到老师站在我旁边。3.Seldomdoweknowwhatishappeningbothathomeandabroad,letalonewhatwecandoforourcountry.我们很少关注国内外正在发生的事情,更别说为我们的祖国做些什么了。4.Thereareavarietyofafter-classactivitiesinourschool,whichbenefitusalot.我们学校有丰富多彩的课外活动,这些活动对我们很有益。5.Wecan’thaveanyonegettingawaywithcheatingintheexams.我们不能让任何在考试中作弊的人逃脱惩罚。实践强化实践强化31.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使其构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。ThewholeclassburstoutlaughingasMohirushedintotheclassroom.Hewasastrangesight.Hishalf-buttonedwhiteshirtrevealedaredstripedpajama(睡衣)topunderneath,andinsteadofwhiteschoolshoes,hehadonapairofbrightgreensandalsthatweretwosizestoobig.Thephysicsteacher’shandfrozeinthemiddleofwritingaformulaontheblackboard.Mohimurmured,“Sorry,teacher,”andrushedtohisseat.Mr.Tanglaredattherestofthestudents.Thechuckles(咯咯笑)quicklydieddown.Mohi’sclassmatesalwayslookedforwardtoMondays.Ninetimesoutoften,theywouldbeentertainedbyMohi’slatearrivalandhisoddappearancewhichusuallyincludedinappropriateclothing.Thatday,itwasthepajamatopandgreensandals.Mohilivedjustastreetawayfromtheschool.Hewalkedtoschooldaily.Studentspassingbyinbuseswouldyellhisnameatthesametimejusttoseehimjumpandstopsuddenly.Whenhespottedthemerrycrowdinthebus,hewouldwavegood-naturedly.AlthoughMohiwaslikable,hewastoolostinhisownthoughtstomakefriends.Hisclassmatesfoundhimamusingbuttheyignoredhimmostofthetime.OnlyHamed,whosatnexttoMohi,triedtobehisfriend.ThefollowingMonday,Mohididnotturnupatschool.Hisclassmateswerealittledisappointedbutquicklyforgotabouthim.Afterschool,HameddecidedtowalkovertoMohi’shousetocheckonhim.Asheapproachedthegate,hecouldhearviolinmusic.“Mohimustbelisteningtomusic,sincehehadneverplayedmusicatschool.”Hamedthought.HecalledMohi’snameafewtimesbuttherewasnoresponse.Thegatewasnotlocked.Hamedlethimselfin.Themusicplayedon.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AsHamedlookedcloselythroughawindow,hiseyeswidenedinsurprise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenTeacher’sDaycamearound,HamedconvincedtheclasstoletMohiperform.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】AsHamedlookedcloselythroughawindow,hiseyeswidenedinsurprise.Inthemiddleofthelivingroom,Mohiwasplayingtheviolin.His

eyeswereclosedinconcentration

ashedrewthebowoverthestrings

expertly.He

playedflawlessly

somuchsothatitsoundedlikearecording.

ThenanideahitHamed.Itwasthetraditionoftheschooltohaveaconcertfortheteachers.Everyclasshadto

contributeanitem.ItwasagoodchanceforMohitoshowhistalentandbeacceptedbyhisclassmates.

Thinkingofthat,Hamedleftquietly.WhenTeacher’sDaycamearound,HamedconvincedtheclasstoletMohiperform.Shortofideas,theclassagreed.Onthedayoftheconcert,boththeteachersandstudentsweresurprisedtoseetheschool’s

clumsiest

studentwalkingonstagewithaviolin.Whenhestartedtoplay,theaudiencefellsilent.

Jawsdropped.Asthelastnoteended,

therewasamomentofsilence.Then

theaudienceeruptedintothunderousapplause.Mohi

becameasensation

andhadmanyfansinhisfinalyearofschool.MohiandHamedbecamethebestoffriendseventually.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了笨拙且不修边幅的Mohi一直是同学们的笑料,但好友Hamed发现了Mohi小提琴天赋,在Hamed举荐下,Mohi教师节音乐会上进行了表演,Mohi得到了同学们的认可并成了轰动一时的名人。1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“Hamed透过窗户仔细看了看,惊讶地睁大了眼睛。”可知,第一段可描写Hamed发现Mohi拉小提琴拉得完美无瑕,Hamed想出一个主意,让Mohi展示他的才华。②由第二段首句内容“当教师节来临的时候,Hamed说服全班同学让Mohi表演。”可知,第二段可描写Mohi的表演大获成功,得到同学们的认可。2.续写线索:发现秘密——推荐表演——技惊四座——轰动一时3.词汇激活行为类①突然意识到:hit/strike/occurto②展示他的才华:showhistalent/demonstratehistalent③开始做某事:begintodo/starttodo情绪类①专心地:inconcentration/intently②沉默:silence/quiet【典型句式】[句型1]Hiseyeswereclosedinconcentrationashedrewthebowoverthestringsexpertly.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)[句型2]Whenhestartedtoplay,theaudiencefellsilent.Jawsdropped.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文SaraandVivianhaddifferentattitudetostudies.SaratookstudiesseriouslywhiteVivianneverconsideredstudiesimportant.ItwasMondaymorningandthestartoftheirtermassessments(评估)Asusual.Saragotupearly,freshenedupandafterbreakfast,sheleftforschool,Sarawasconfidentaboutherpreparationsasshehadstudiedthewholeweekend,butabitnervouslikeeveryoneduringtheexamtime,Ontheotherhand,Vivianwasn'tpreparedforherexamsandwascarelessasever.Shehadspentthewholeweekendwithherfamilyatthebeach.Shereallyhadfunandsoshewasexcitedtotellthistoherfriends.Thatdayalso,Viviangotuplateandthereforedideverythinginahurry.SherushedtotheschooltogetaseatbesideSaraoranyothergoodstudentintheclasssothatshecouldaskthemtoshowhertheanswersheet.Luckily,shefoundanemptychairbesideSaraintheexaminationroom.ShegaveasmiletoSaraandaskedinalowvoiceifshecouldshowhertheanswersheet,Tohersurprise,Sararefusedatonce.Vivianwasverysurprisedbecauseshehadn'texpectedthat.Whentheexamstarted,Viviantriedtopeak(偷看)atsara'spaperwhileSarakepthidingheranswers.ButitwasimpossibleforSaratokeephidinganswerswhilestillwriting.Thusforgettingherpeepingfriend,shecompletedherpaperandleftthealasroom.ViviancopiedalmostniltheanswersfromSaraandwasexpectinggoodgraded.Saradidn'tlikevivian'sattitudeandwasangrywithher.Shedidn'tspeaktoherafterthat.Afteroneweek,theresultswereannouncedandthepaperswerehandedbacktothestudents.SaragotfirstplaceintheexamwhileVivianfailed.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.Vivianwassurprised.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Saralookedatvivian'steapaperandfoundthatVivianhadwritteneverythingwrong.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Vivianwassurprised.ShethoughtabouthowthiscouldhappenwhenshehadcopiedfromSara'sanswersheet.ThenshewenttoSaraandapologizedforwhatshehaddone.NextdaysheaskedSaraifshecouldcheckhertestpaperandtellherwhatshehaddonewrongthatgothersuchpoormarks.Itwasageographypaper.SaralookedatVivian'stestpaperandfoundthatVivianhadwritteneverythingwrong.Insteadof“waterpollutionreducesthesupplyoffreshwater”shehadwritten“Watercleaningreducesthesupplyofdirtywater”;similarly,otheranswerswerewrongtoo.AsViviandidn'tstudybefore,shehadnoideaaboutthemeaningofwhatshewascopyingfromSara'spaperasshecouldn'tseealltheanswers.SarafeltbadforViviansoshehopedherfriendwouldendthiscarelessattitudeandinsteadtakeherstudiesseriously.Vivianwasashamedofcheatingandlosingherbestfriend,soshepromisednevertocheatagainandstudyhardfromthatdayon.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索,讲述了Sara和Vivian两人截然不同的学习态度。Sara认真对待学习,但Vivian从不认为学习很重要。考试中,Vivian以抄袭Sara的方式期望得个好成绩,结果Sara的了第一名,而Vivian不及格。1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“Vivian很惊讶。”可知,第一段可描写Vivian找Sara问清楚具体的原因。②由第二段首句内容“Sara看了Vivian的试卷,发现Vivian写的都错了。”可知,第二段可描写Sara通过看Vivian的卷子来搞清楚具体的原因。2.续写线索:问原因——查明——感谢——内心羞愧——感悟3.词汇激活行为类承诺:promise/declare学习:study/learn减少:reduce/decrease情绪类.糟糕的:bad/awful羞愧的:ashamed/shamed【典型句式】[句型1].NextdaysheaskedSaraifshecouldcheckhertestpaperandtellherwhatshehaddonewrongthatgothersuchpoormarks.(由连接词if引导的宾语从句作asked的宾语)[句型2].AsViviandidn'tstudybefore,shehadnoideaaboutthemeaningofwhatshewascopyingfromSara'spaperasshecouldn'tseealltheanswers.(运用同位语从句)3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsIsatonthebuswaitingtoarriveatschool,thesunshining,Ijustsattherefullofexcitementreadytoenjoythefirstdayofspring.Atlast,thebusstoppedandIstartedmyday.ThewholedayIwaswaitingforonething,noonbreak.Asthedaypassedby,Iheardthebellrangandeveryonerushedoutofthedoor.Ihurriedandatelunchjusttogetoutside.AssoonasIwasout,myclosefriend,Rileycalledmeovertoplaybasketball.Weallstartedplayingandtimeflewbyasweheardthetimekeeperyell,“10moreminutes.”Fromthatpointon,thegamespedup.Scoreafterscore,thecompetitionprocesswasmoreintense.Ipassedittomyteammate,Austin,andhedisheditbackasIpulledupashot.Ifeltasiftheworldaroundmewerebarelymoving,andallIconcentratedonwastheballgoingtothehoop(篮筐).NotknowingIwaspushedbackhard,Ihittheground.Ahugepainenteredmyleftankle.Iwantedtoscream,butIdidn’t,hearingthepeoplearoundmeshoutforhelp.IjustlaythereasRileycameovertopickmeupandAustinfetchedawheelchairfromtheschoolclinic.Bothofthemhelpedmesitonthewheelchair.ItseemedlikethewholeschoolcircledaroundmeasIwasbeingpushedaway.ThemomentweenteredtheclinicwhereIalwaysfeltnervous,Ididn’tthinkmyanklehurtasbadlyasitdidjustnow,soIsaid,“I’mokay.”Thentheyhadtosendmebacktoclasswithoutanytreatment.TherestofthedayIfeltmyankleswelling(肿)upandIthoughtofhowstupidIwastosaythatmyankledidn’thurtintheclinic.“Ishouldhavegonehome.”IthoughttomyselfasIwasthrownthroughthisterriblepain.Afterschool,Iworriedhowtogobackhome.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。JustthenIfoundRileycomeinwithanicepackinhishand.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aswewentout,weweresurprisedtofindAustinholdingsomemedicinaloil.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】JustthenIfoundRileycomeinwithanicepackinhishand.Fromhislook,Icouldeasilyreadhisconcern,whichinstantlybroughttearstomyeyes.Heaskedifmyankleswelled,hisvoiceobviouslyfullofcareandanxiety.Inoddedhelplessly,eyesautomaticallysettlingonmyachingankle.Handingmetheicepack,hetoldmeitcouldhelprelievethepainandreduceswellingattheearlystage.SomovedwasIthatIextendedmyheartfeltgratitudetohim.Hejustsmiled,sayingthatweweregoodfriendsandofferingtosendmehome.Aswewentout,weweresurprisedtofindAustinholdingsomemedicinaloil.“IusuallyusethiskindofoilwhenIgethurtanditdoeswork.Youcanhaveatry.”hesaidwithsincerity.Allofasudden,IfeltIwasthehappiestpersonintheworld.Ihuggedmyfriendstightly,joyfultearsrollinginmyeyes.Blessedwithsuchfriends,IfeltIhadsomuchtobegratefulfor.Jokingaboutmybasketballskill,theysentmehome.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在中午吃完午饭后走出去,好朋友Riley叫作者过去打篮球,比赛很激烈,作者在比赛中被推倒,左脚踝一阵剧痛,Riley过来扶作者,Austin从学校诊所拿了一辆轮椅,把作者推入了诊室,作者认为自己没事,后来脚肿了,作者担心自己该怎么回家。1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“就在这时,我发现Riley手里拿着一个冰袋走了进来。”可知,第一段可描写Riley对作者的关心和帮助。②由第二段首句内容“当我们出门时,我们惊讶地发现Austin手里拿着一些药用油。”可知,第二段可描写Austin给作者药用油以及作者的感想。2.续写线索:关心地询问——给冰袋——给药用油——感想3.词汇激活行为类①询问:ask/inquire②递:handsb.sth./passsth.tosb.③拥抱:hugsb./embracesb.情绪类①感动:moved/touched②感激:begrateful/bethankful【典型句式】[句型1]Fromhislook,Icouldeasilyreadhisconcern,whichinstantlybroughttearstomyeyes.(由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)[句型2]SomovedwasIthatIextendedmyheartfeltgratitudetohim.(部分倒装句)4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mollydidn’tunderstandwhattherewastocelebrate.Shelookedaroundashergraduatinghighschoolclasscheeredwhilestandingandtossingtheircapshighintotheair.Mollytookhercapoffandgrippedittight.Shecranedhernecktolookattherainofblackandwhitegraduationcapscascadingdown.Somecapshadsignaturesontheminpermanentmarker.Someweredecoratedwithglitterandgems.Somehadstickersandshenoticedonewasbeautifullyhand-painted.Shelookeddownatherownwhitecap.White.Blank.Bare.Shedrewitclosetoherchestandheldontight.Todaywasherlastchancetoseeherbestfriends,afterall.Wrenhaddecidedtoheadtothecollegewhereherfatherlivedoutsideofthecountry.Iriswasheadedtocollageontheothersideofthecountry.Mollysatdowninherchairagain.Shewasstuckinthemiddleofhergraduatingclass.Shecouldn’tseeIrisorWrenatthefrontoftheclass.Molly’sonlyfriendatthemomentwasherself.Theceremonywaslongover.Mollystood,tryingtofindsomewayoutofthemessofchairsandpeoplethatblockedherinwhenshenoticedIrisandWrenstandingattheendoftherowshewasin.Mollycrackedasmileandwaved.Shepartedthechairsinfrontofherandwalkedalongtheseatsinthatrowtogettoherfriends.“Canyoubelievethisdayhasfinallyarrived?”Irisexclaimed,clappingherhandstogetherandbouncingonherfeet.Mollycrackedanothersmile.Shestilldidn’tseewhattherewastocelebrate.Sure,shewasexcitedtogooff’tocollegeherself.Shedecidedtogotothelocalcommunitycollegebecauseshewantedtostayclosetohomeandalsobecauseshedidn’tknowwhatshewantedtodoforacareer.BothherfriendshadseemedtoalreadyfigurethatoutandMollyfeltevenmorebackward.Shewasn’tdoinganythingspecial—nostudyingabroad,nolivinginanewcountry,nodecorationsonhergraduationcap.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WrentookMollybythehand.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Irisgrabbedapurplemarker,uncappeditandgottowork.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】WrentookMollybythehand.“Comehere,Iwanttoshowyousomethinginmycar.”ShemotionedforMollytojointhem,whichshedid.Irisgrabbedabagfromthecorneranddumpedoutitscontentswhichwerestickers,gems,andpermanentmarkers.WrentookMolly’scapoffherhead.“IwasgoingtodecorateIris’scap,Iriswasgoingtodecorateyours,andweweregoingtohaveyoudecoratemine.Butyouweren’tfeelingwelllastnightsoIrisandIdecoratedeachother’s.Now,wearebothgoingtodecorateyours.”Irisgrabbedapurplemarker,uncappeditandgottowork.Afterjustafewminutes,thecapwashardtoseethewhite.Theyhadfilleditupsomuchwithsomanywords.“Iris,Molly,andWren;Friendship,Love,Laughter...Whatdoesallofthismean?”Mollyasked.“Wewroteallthesewordsdownbecausetheydescribeourfriendshipperfectly.”Wrenreply.“Andtheseareallreasonstocelebrate.”Irisadd.TherewasamomentofsilenceasMollythought.Thenshestartedtolaughandtheothertwochimedin.Todaywasagooddayforacelebration.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开。正在参加高中毕业典礼的Molly,看着眼前同学们在仪式上的开心和热闹,自己很是不能理解这有什么好庆祝的,于是就更加感到孤独和寂寞。这时她的朋友Wren和Iris及时地出现在她面前,帮她装饰毕业帽子,与她一起分享同学友情,让Molly真切地感受到了温暖,以及这个毕业庆祝是值得的。1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“Wren拉着Molly的手。”可知,第一段可描写Wren把在Molly拉着一起加入庆祝活动,告诉她要帮助她装饰她的毕业帽。②由第二段首句内容“Iris抓起一个紫色的记号笔,打开盖子,开始工作。”可知,第二段可描写Iris如何帮助她装饰她的毕业帽,以及做这些的意义,让Molly真切地感受到了温暖,以及这个毕业庆祝是值得的。2.续写线索:拉手邀请——看装饰帽子的工具——告诉Molly要帮她装饰帽子——开始工作——解释意义——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①示意某人做某事:motionforsb.todosth./signal

sb.todosth.②.抓:grab/holdtightly/takefirmly③.回答:reply/answer/response描述类①.感觉不好:notfeelwell/feeluncomfortable/feeldepressed②.一个好日子:agoodday/apleasantday/abrilliantday【典型句式】[句型1].Irisgrabbedabagfromthecorneranddumpedoutitscontentswhichwerestickers,gems,andpermanentmarkers.(由关系代词which引导的定语从句)[句型2].Wewroteallthesewordsdownbecausetheydescribeourfriendshipperfectly.(由because引导的原因状语从句)5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。ThirdGraderMiyawassittingbythedeskthinkingabouthercomposition.Attheendofeachyear,thestudentswillbegivenawritingtaskabouttheperson(s)he/sheismostthankfulto.Miyacouldremembershewroteaboutherparents,wholovedherandtookcareofheringradeoneandherteacher,whoencouragedhertobebravetoraisequestionsingradet

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