Unit-1-单元话题满分范文必背(牛津译林版2020)

Unit1Backtoschool单元话题满分范文必背1．假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下:1.深表同情；2.提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如:参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)3.希望建议能有所帮助。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】DearBill,Iamsorrytoknowyouarehavingtroublewithyourlifeandstudyhere.However,thesituationiseasytochange.Now,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,joinsomeschoolclubs,whereyoucanmakesomefriends.Secondly,communicatewiththepeoplewhohavethesameinterestwithyou.Maybeitcanhelpyougetridofyourloneliness.Thirdly,dosomeoutdooractivitiesandtheycanmakeyourelaxed.Bydoingallthese,youcangetusedtoyourschoollifeandlivehappily.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下:1.深表同情；2.提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如:参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)3.希望建议能有所帮助。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：havingtroublewithyourlifeandstudyhere（在这里生活学习有麻烦）；joinsomeschoolclubs（参加学校俱乐部）；makesomefriends（交一些朋友）；havethesameinterestwithyou（和你有同样的兴趣）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一封书信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Firstly,joinsomeschoolclubs,whereyoucanmakesomefriends.句中where引导非限制性定语从句；communicatewiththepeoplewhohavethesameinterestwithyou.juzhongqwho引导定语从句；另外，However,Firstly,Secondly,等的运用为文章增色添彩。2．假定你是李华，你的外国好友Lily最近成绩下降明显。请你用英语写封邮件，给她提些建议，内容包括：1.保持良好的心态；2.制定合理的学习计划；3.多向老师和同学求助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearLily,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLily,I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavegottenlowgradesrecently.Butdon’tworryaboutittoomuch.Now,letmesharesomesuggestionswithyou.Firstly,Ithinkit’simportanttohaveapositiveattitudetowardsstudy.Besides,youneedtomakegoodplansforyourstudy,whichwillhelpyouimproveyourgradeslittlebylittle.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldturntoyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpwhenyouhaveanydifficultyinstudy.Idohopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给外国好友Lily写一封邮件，给她提些关于成绩下滑该如何改善的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice/proposal重要的：important→significant/vital提升：improve→promote/elevate困难：difficulty→trouble2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Now,letmesharesomesuggestionswithyou.拓展句：Now,letmesharesomesuggestionsthatIhopewillhelpyou.【点睛】[高分句型1]Besides,youneedtomakegoodplansforyourstudy,whichwillhelpyouimproveyourgradeslittlebylittle.(运用which引导非限定性定语从句。)[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,youshouldturntoyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpwhenyouhaveanydifficultyinstudy.(运用when引导时间状语从句。)3．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。最近你的英国笔友Jim写信告诉你最近他学习压力很大。请你给他回信并提供一些关于如何处理压力的建议。内容包括：1.表示理解和关心；2.提出具体建议(不少于两条)；3.鼓励并表达祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Knowingthatyouhavestressinyourstudy,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Asaseniorhighschoolstudent,noneofusishavinganeasytime,butwestillcandosomethingtosuccessfullygetthroughthenextthreeyears.Themostimportantthingyoushoulddoistotakegoodcareofyourself.Wheneveryoufeeltiredordepressed,sparesometimetohavefunwithyourfamiliesandfriends.Asforstudy,itisessentialtofindoutwhatneedstobedone.Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject.Thatwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.Anyway,don’tpushyourselftoohard.Ihopeyouwillmakeprogressinyourstudy.本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友回信，就如何处理学习压力这一问题表示理解和关心，给对方提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：stress→pressure建议：advice→suggestion照顾：takecareof→lookafter重要的：essential→important2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject.Thatwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.拓展句：Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject,whichwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouhavestressinyourstudy,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.（运用了that引导宾语从句）【高分句型2】Wheneveryoufeeltiredordepressed,sparesometimetohavefunwithyourfamiliesandfriends.（运用了whenever引导时间状语从句）4．假定你是李华，你和李明升入高中后在不同的学校。李明刚入学一段时间，就遇到了一些问题，请根据他所遇到的问题写一封回信并提出相应的建议。问题：1.不适应，感到孤独；2.学习英语有困难；3.经常玩手机。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiMing,I’mgladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopingmyadviceishelpfulforyouandmayyouenjoyyournewschoollife.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLiMing,I’mgladtohearfromyou.I’mreallysorryforyourproblemsyouarefacingnow.Infact,IalsogotintosometroublesbutfinallyIwentoutofthem.SoI’dliketosharesomeideaswithyou.Tobeginwith,youshouldbeactiveandmakefriendswithotherssothatyouwon’tfeellonely.Inaddition,tosolveyourproblemswithEnglish,itwillbehelpfulforyoutocommunicatewithyourEnglishteacherorturntoyourclassmatesforhelp.Sinceyouareplayingsmartphonetoomuch.Iadviseyoutoletyourparentskeepyourmobilephonewhenyouarestudyingatschool.Hopingmyadviceishelpfulforyouandmayyouenjoyyournewschoollife.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就李明升入高中后所遇到的问题写一封回信并提出相应的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累事实上：infact→asamatteroffact想要做某事：wouldliketodosth.→feellikedoingsth.有益的：helpful→beneficial建议某人干某事：advisesb.todosth.→suggestsb.doingsth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inaddition,tosolveyourproblemswithEnglish,itwillbehelpfulforyoutocommunicatewithyourEnglishteacherorturntoyourclassmatesforhelp.拓展句：Inaddition,inorderthatyoucansolveyourproblemswithEnglish,itwillbehelpfulforyoutocommunicatewithyourEnglishteacherorturntoyourclassmatesforhelp.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mreallysorryforyourproblemsyouarefacingnow.(运用了省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Tobeginwith,youshouldbeactiveandmakefriendswithotherssothatyouwon’tfeellonely.(运用了sothat引导的结果状语从句)5．假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友Alice来信想了解你高一上期的学习生活，以及你面临即将到来的高一下期学习生活所做的打算以及你的期待。请你给她写一封回信，要点如下：1.介绍你高一上期的学习生活；2.你对高一下期的学习生活所做的打算；3.你对高一下期的学习生活的期待。词数：100词左右开头已为你写好:DearAlice,Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinseniorone.Letmeintroduceittoyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAlice,Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinthefirsttermofSeniorOne.Letmeintroduceittoyou.ThestudyandlivinglifeinthefirstsemesterofSeniorOneisdifferentfromthatofJunior.WhatIwanttomentionmostisthatthelifeoffirsttermismoreindependent,studyismorechallengingandwehavetolearn9subjects.Withthehelpofteachersandclassmates,IwaswellaccustomedtothelifeofSeniorHigh.Withthenewtermcoming,Imakeupmymindtotryharder.Still,Iwillpaymoreattentiontoformingthestudyhabitofpreviewandreview,whichisofvitalimportancetoimprovestudyefficiency.Lastly,IhaveanexpectancythatmystudyandlivinglifeofthisnewsemesterwillbebothamazingandfulfillingandIcanhavesometimetojoinmyfavoriteclubs.Lookingforwardtoyourletter.BestWishes!Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Alice回信介绍自己高一上学期的学习生活以及下学期的打算和期待。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：happy→delighted帮助：help→assistance习惯于：beaccustomedto→beusedto必须：haveto→must2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinthefirsttermofSeniorOne.拓展句：Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter,inwhichyouaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinthefirsttermofSeniorOne.【点睛】【高分句型1】WhatIwanttomentionmostisthatthelifeoffirsttermismoreindependent,studyismorechallengingandwehavetolearn9subjects.（运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句）【高分句型2】Still,Iwillpaymoreattentiontoformingthestudyhabitofpreviewandreview,whichisofvitalimportancetoimprovestudyefficiency.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）6．假如你是李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。要包括以下内容：1．开始学习高中英语时，觉得比初中英语难得多，几乎丧失信心；2．后来认识到英语的重要性；3．每天努力学习英语；4．向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法；5．现在英语取得了很大进步，对英语越来越感兴趣；6．信的开头结尾已给出。提示：初中juniorhighschool高中seniorhighschool词数：100左右。DearMr.Li,Iamgladtotellyouthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Li,I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudysinceIbecameaseniorhighschoolstudent.WhenIstartedseniorEnglishinthebeginning,IfounditmuchmoredifficultthanwhatwelearnedinjuniorschoolandIalmostlostheart.Later,IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish,soIgotupearlyeverymorning,recitedEnglishwords,listenedtoEnglishtapesanddidalotofexercises.IalsoaskedmyteachersandclassmatesforbetterwaysoflearningEnglish.Now,I’mimprovingmyEnglishgreatly.AndI’mgettingmoreandmoreinterestedinlearningit.Thankyousomuchforyourgreathelpinyourclass.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封信，讲述自己进入高中后的英语学习情况。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→delighted开始：start→begin方法：way→method帮助：help→assistance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thankyousomuchforyourgreathelpinyourclass.拓展句：Thankyousomuchforwhatyouhavetaughtmeinyourclass.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudysinceIbecameaseniorhighschoolstudent.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和since引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】WhenIstartedseniorEnglishinthebeginning,IfounditmuchmoredifficultthanwhatwelearnedinjuniorschoolandIalmostlostheart.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）7．假定你是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助。内容如下：1.学习热情减退；2.作业太多，疲于应付；3.……注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：减退weaken___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAllen,Howareyou?ThesedaysIamfacedwithsomeproblemsaboutmyEnglishstudy,whichhasconfusedmelong.SoIamwritingthisletterforyouradvice.Firstofall,mywishtostudyhardandgetgoodgradeshasbeenweakenedwithtimegoingby.Moreoften,IfindEnglishsoboringthatIfallasleepinclass.Besides,itseemstohaveendlesshomework,andIhavetocopyothers’tofinishit.What’sworse,Iambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject.IsitnecessaryformetofindatutorwhocanhelpmewithmyEnglish?That’sall.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.Yours,LiHua【导语】这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion首先：firstofall→firstandforemost此外：besides→what’smore无聊的：boring→dull2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：What’sworse,Iambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject.拓展句：What’sworse,becauseIambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject,

Iamveryanxiousaboutit.【点睛】【高分句型1】ThesedaysIamfacedwithsomeproblemsaboutmyEnglishstudy,whichhasconfusedmelong.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】IsitnecessaryformetofindatutorwhocanhelpmewithmyEnglish?（运用了it作形式主语和who引导的定语从句）8．作为一名高一新生,你在学习和生活中遇到一些困难,特别是与新同学的相处,为此你有时会感到很沮丧。请你以日记的形式写下遇到的困难以及克服困难的方法,同时也表达你对未来的学习生活的信心。写作要点：1.学习和生活中遇到的困难；2.如何解决；3.对未来充满信心。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【答案】IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool.ButnowsometimesIsufferalot.Imeetwithsomedifficultiesinmylifeandstudyaswell.Inaddition,astherearesomanyexcellentstudentsaroundme,Ifeelextremelyhorrible.However,Iknowit’snousefeelingsadandworried.Idecidetocountonmyselfandtakesomemeasurestochangethesituation.Firstofall,inordertomakegooduseofmytime,Ishouldmakeascheduleinperson.OnlyinthiswaycanIstudyallthesubjectswell.Besides,Ishouldbeactiveinmakingnewfriendsandgettingalongwellwithmyclassmatesandroommates.Itwilldefinitelyfreemefromlonelinessandhomesickness.【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，作为一名高一新生,你在学习和生活中遇到一些困难,特别是与新同学的相处,为此你有时会感到很沮丧。请你以日记的形式写下遇到的困难以及克服困难的方法,同时也表达你对未来的学习生活的信心。写作要点：1.学习和生活中遇到的困难；2.如何解决；3.对未来充满信心。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为一段。1.学习和生活中遇到的困难；2.如何解决；3.对未来充满信心。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:meetwith，takesomemeasuresto，makegooduseof，inpersongetalongwellwith.第四步：确定较为高级的句子:since引导的时间状语从句IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool.部分倒装句OnlyinthiswaycanIstudyallthesubjectswell.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Inaddition，However，Firstofall，Besides第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:since引导的时间状语从句IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool.部分倒装句OnlyinthiswaycanIstudyallthesubjectswell.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。9．假定你是李华，是一名刚升入高中的高一新生。请你给自己的初中同学Mary写一封信，简要介绍一下自己这三个月的高中生活体会。内容要点：1)之前想念过去的老师和同学;现在适应了高中的生活2)与同学相处很好，交了好多朋友。。3)老师工作认真，尊重他们4)一定努力学习，三年以后考上好的大学。注意：1．词数100左右;2．可适当增加细节，以使行为连贯;3．开头语和结束语己为你写好．不计入总词数DearMary,Howtimeflies!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,YoursLiHua【答案】DearMary,Howtimeflies!Ihavebeeninhighschoolfortwomonths.NowI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.Ifeltalittlelonelyatthebeginning,whichmadememissalltheteachersandclassmatesinJuniorHighschool.Butnow,Ihavegotusedtomynewschoollife.NotonlydoIgetalongwellwithmynewclassmatesbutIhavemademanynewfriends.Besides,theteachersherearestrictwithussothatIlikeandrespectthemverymuch.Inaword,I’llmakegooduseofmytimeandmakeanefforttostudywell,becauseitismydreamtogotoagooduniversityafterthreeyears’hardwork.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.BestwishesYoursLiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的初中同学Mary写一封信，简要介绍一下自己这三个月的作为一名高一新生的高中生活体会。【详解】1.词汇积累习惯：getusedto→becomeusedto与……相处得好：getalongwellwith→getonwellwith总之：inaword→inshort好好利用：makegooduseof→makefulluseof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ihavebeeninhighschoolfortwomonths.拓展句：IthasbeentwomonthssinceIbecameaseniorhighschoolstudent.【点睛】【高分句型1】NotonlydoIgetalongwellwithmynewclassmatesbutIhavemademanynewfriends.(使用了部分倒装。)【高分句型2】Ifeltalittlelonelyatthebeginning,whichmadememissalltheteachersandclassmatesinJuniorHighschool.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)10．假如你叫李华，新学期开学一个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受。交流内容要求包括以下要点：1.校园环境和教学设施；2.老师给你的印象；3.给学校的一点儿建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3.内容可适当发挥，要注意行文连贯。Hello,everyone,I’mhonoredtostandheretotellyousomethingaboutmy