2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从误解到关爱：杰森与流浪老人的故事+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从误解到关爱：杰森与流浪老人的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Mom,I’mreadytogo,”calledJason.EverySaturday,JasonlookedforwardtogoingtoChinatowntoshopforfoodbecausehismomlethimpickhisfavoritesnacks:roastporkbunsandbubbletea.ThestreetsinChinatownwerecrowdedwithcarsandpedestrians.Hismothercouldnotfindthesameexoticvegetablesinthelocalsupermarkets,sotheyalwayscameheretoshop.WhatfascinatedJasonwastastyroastpork,eventhewholepigshangingonbighooksinthewindows,theirskinsroastedtoaglisteningbrown.Jason’smouthwouldwaterjustlookingatthem.4续写原文AstheypassedthenewsstandcarryingChinesenewspapersandmagazines,Jasonspottedanoldmansittingonthesidewalk.Hishairwaslong,white,andmessy.Thefacebeneathwaslined,dirty,andunshaven.Frayedandtornclothingwrappedaroundhisthinframe,andinthiskindofcoldweather,heevenworesandals,hisfeetbluewithcold.Hebangedanemptycanagainstthesidewalk.AsJasonwalkedby,hecouldsmellamustyodorandpinchedhisnostrilstogether.TheoldmanreachedoutandtouchedJason’sleftleg.Instinctively,Jasongatheredallhisstrengthtojerk(猛拉)hislegawayandkicktheoldman’shandheavily.Frightened,hehurriedtocatchupwithhismotherwithoutlookingback.“Mom,theoldmantouchedme,”hecried,“Hetouchedmewithhisdirtyhands.It’sdisgusting!Andhesmelledtoo.”5续写原文Jason’smotherglancedbackatthemanwithalookofunderstandingandsaidgently,“Jason,hecan’thelpit.He’shomeless.Hedidn’tmeananyharm.”Mom’swordsmadeJasonlookbackattheoldmanwithregret,whonowwaslookingupatotherpassersby,stillbanginghiscan.Ontheirwayhome,Jasonasked,hisvoicefilledwithconcern.“Whyisthatoldmanhomeless?Wheredoeshesleep?”“Idon’tknow.It’stoughtobehomeless,especiallyinthiscoldweather.Hedidlookquiteweak,”hismotherreplied.Mom’swordsmadeJason’sregretdeepened.Heconfessedhisheavykicktohismother,whoremindedhimthatitwascrucialtoacknowledgehismistakeandtrytomakeupforit.6段首句Paragraph1：Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Paragraph2：Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9每周六杰森都期待和妈妈去唐人街买食物，他喜欢那里的小吃。一次去唐人街，杰森遇到一位流浪老人，老人碰了他的腿，他出于本能踢了老人。妈妈告诉他老人无家可归并非有意冒犯，杰森心生悔意。回家路上他向妈妈询问老人的情况，愧疚感加深。妈妈提醒他要承认错误并弥补。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.第二天，在妈妈的帮助下，杰森决定做点什么。他和妈妈一大早就来到了超市，精心挑选了厚实的袜子、保暖的手套，还买了面包、热汤等食物。杰森还特意让妈妈帮忙装了一大杯热气腾腾的咖啡。一切准备就绪后，他们再次来到了唐人街昨天遇见老人的地方。杰森的心跳不由自主地加快，内心充满了紧张和愧疚。他深吸一口气，紧紧地攥着手中的袋子，一步一步慢慢地走向老人。当老人那布满沧桑的眼睛看到他们时，眼中闪过一丝惊讶。杰森鼓起全部的勇气，微微颤抖着双手把袋子递向老人，声音小却坚定地说：“爷爷，对不起，这是给您的。”11续写思路分析Para2：Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.听到这话，老人泪眼汪汪地看着他们。他那瘦骨嶙峋、满是污垢的手颤抖着接过袋子，嘴唇不停地抖动，似乎有千言万语却难以说出口。过了许久，他才用沙哑得几乎听不清的声音说道：“谢谢你们，你们真是好人。”杰森看着老人，眼眶也不禁红了起来，他深刻地意识到自己曾经的行为是多么的鲁莽和错误。而此刻，能为老人做些力所能及的事，让他的内心充满了温暖。从那以后，杰森每次来到唐人街，都会特意来看望这位老人，给他带来生活所需，老人脸上的笑容也渐渐多了起来，他们之间也建立起了一种特殊的情谊。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Earlyinthemorning,heandhismotherwenttothesupermarket.Theycarefullyselectedthicksocks,warmgloves,andalsoboughtsomebread,hotsoupandotherfood.Jasonalsoaskedhismothertohelphimfillalargecupofsteamingcoffee.Aftereverythingwasready,theycametotheplaceinChinatownwheretheymettheoldmanyesterdayagain.Jason'sheartwaspoundingandhewasfilledwithnervousnessandguilt.Hetookadeepbreath,tightlyheldthebaginhishand,andwalkedslowlystepbysteptowardstheoldman.Whentheoldman'seyesfullofvicissitudessawthem,therewasaflashofsurpriseinhiseyes.Jasonsummonedupallhiscourage,hishandstremblingslightlyashehandedthebagtotheoldman.Hesaidinasoftbutfirmvoice,"Grandpa,I'msorry.Thisisforyou."14范文呈现Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.Histhin,dirtyhandstrembledashetookthebag.Hislipswereshaking,asifhehadalottosaybutcouldn't.Afteralongtime,hesaidinahoarsevoicethatwasalmostinaudible,"Thankyou.Youarereallykind-heartedpeople."Jasonlookedattheoldmanandhiseyesalsobecamered.Hedeeplyrealizedhowrecklessandwronghispreviousbehaviorwas.Atthismoment,beingabletodosomethingfortheoldmanmadehisheartfullofwarmth.Fromthenon,everytimeJasoncametoChinatown,hewouldspeciallycometovisittheoldmanandbringhimdailynecessities.Thesmileontheoldman'sfacegraduallyincreased,andaspecialfriendshipwasalsoestablishedbetweenthem.15升级版范文呈现Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Atthebreakofdawn,Jasonandhismothermadetheirwaytothesupermarket.Theymeticulouslypickedoutthicksocks,warmgloves,alongwithbread,hotsoupandotherprovisions.Jasonevenaskedhismothertopreparealargecupofsteamingcoffee.Onceeverythingwasinorder,theyreturnedtotheveryspotinChinatownwheretheyhadencounteredtheoldmanthepreviousday.Jason'sheartracedwildly,andhewasovercomewithamixofnervousnessandguilt.Takingadeepbreath,heclutchedthebagtightlyandedgedclosertotheoldman,stepbycautiousstep.Astheoldman'sweather-beateneyesfelluponthem,aflickerofsurpriseflashedacrosshisface.Summoningallhiscourage,Jasonextendedthebagwithslightlytremblinghandsandsaid,inasoftyetresolutevoice,"Grandpa,I'msorry.Thisisforyou."16升级版范文呈现Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwitheyesbrimmingwithtears.Hisemaciated,dirt-cakedhandsquiveredasheacceptedthebag.Hislipstwitched,asifstrugglingtogivevoicetoamultitudeofemotions.Afteralongmomentofsilen