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高考英语读后续写语篇练习打破对拉德克先生院子的恐惧之规1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ruleoneandtheonlyrule:IfthefootballgoesintoMr.Radtke’syard,leavetheball,runhomeandthekidresponsibleforsendingtheballintotheforbiddenzoneshouldtoleratethelifelongscorn(蔑视)ofalltheplayers,”saidBengravely.Therulethathisbestfriend,Ben,toldhimagainandagainpuzzledJoeyalot.Helookedattheyardinfrontofhim,nothingspecial—alonelyhousewithahighfenceallaroundandatreeeventallerthanthefencebytheclosefrontgate.“ButBen,wewouldn’tbeharminganything.Ifourballshouldgooverhisfence,I’mgettingit.”“Goodluckwiththat.OldmanRadtkeistheugliestguyinthisneighbourhood.Noonedarestogointohisyard.”“What’ssoscaryabouthim?”Joeyasked,stillconfused.4续写原文“Bigscarsonhisface,onlyoneeye,andhalfofhisteetharemissing.Anuglyguylikethatisdefinitelyabadguy.”“Butmyfathertoldme,neverjudgeabookbyitscover.”“Whatever.Let’splayfootball.”Bensaid,seeminglyimpatient.Hearingthis,Joeytemporarilytookthedoubtoffhismindandjoinedtheboys.Theypassedtheballtoeachotherandmostofthetimeranaftertheballinthefieldlikethewind.Butsuddenly,Joeykickedtheballtoohard,anditsoaredoverthefenceandlandedinRadtke’syard.Seeingthis,alltheothersranhomedesperately,leavingonlyJoeyandBengluedtothespot.“Getoutofhere,rightnow,”Benurged.“Perhaps,I—I—Icangetitback,withoutdis—disturbingMr.Radtke,”Joeyhesitatedinalowvoice.“Buthow?”returnedBen.5段首句Paragraph1:WhenJoey’seyefellonthetreebythegate,anideaflashedintohismind.Paragraph2:HearingJoey’sscreamofpain,Radtkerushedout.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了本告诉乔伊一条规则:如果足球踢进拉德克先生的院子,就别要球了,赶紧跑回家,而且踢球的人要承受所有球员的终生蔑视。乔伊对此十分不解,他觉得拉德克先生的院子没什么特别。在踢球时,乔伊把球踢进了拉德克先生的院子,其他人都跑了,只有乔伊和本留在原地。乔伊不甘心放弃球,本却劝他离开。此时,乔伊看着院子门口的树,想到了一个主意。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:WhenJoey’seyefellonthetreebythegate,anideaflashedintohismind.当乔伊的目光落在门口的树上时,一个主意在他脑海中一闪而过。他觉得可以爬上树,然后翻过围栏去拿回球。于是,他毫不犹豫地开始攀爬。这棵树的树枝粗壮结实,这让他爬起来相对轻松一些。随着他越爬越高,已经能看到自己的球躺在院子的地上。然而,当他试图跳到围栏上时,意外发生了。他的脚突然一滑,整个人从树上掉了下来,重重地摔在坚硬的地面上,疼得他大声尖叫起来。这突如其来的变故,让乔伊有些惊慌失措,不知道接下来该怎么办。10续写思路分析Para2:HearingJoey’sscreamofpain,Radtkerushedout.听到乔伊痛苦的尖叫声,拉德克先生冲了出来。乔伊心里害怕极了,心想自己肯定闯了大祸,脑海中不断浮现出本描述的拉德克先生可怕的样子。但出乎他意料的是,拉德克先生看起来一点也不生气,相反,脸上满是担忧。他快步走到乔伊身边,关切地询问发生了什么事。乔伊带着一丝恐惧,结结巴巴地把球的事情告诉了他。拉德克先生不仅没有责怪乔伊,还扶起他,让他不要害怕,甚至走进院子帮他把球捡了回来。乔伊这才发现,拉德克先生根本不像本说的那么可怕。他感激地向拉德克先生道谢,然后跑回本那里,告诉本他们误会了这位老人。从那以后,他们再也不把不能进拉德克先生院子的规则当回事了。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现WhenJoey’seyefellonthetreebythegate,anideaflashedintohismind.Hethoughtthatclimbingthetreeandthenjumpingoverthefencewouldbeagoodwaytoretrievetheball.Withoutasecondthought,hebeganhisclimb.Thetreebranches,whichwerethickandstrong,providedhimwitharelativelyeasyascent.Ashegotnearertothetop,hecouldclearlyseehisballlyingonthegroundintheyard.However,whenheattemptedtoleapontothefence,disasterstruck.Hisfootslipped,andhetumbledfromthetree,landinghardontheground.Painshotthroughhisbody,andheletoutaloudscream.Joeywasinapanic,notknowingwhattodonext.13范文呈现HearingJoey’sscreamofpain,Radtkerushedout.Joeywasfilledwithdread,thinkinghewasinserioustroubleandimaginingtheterrifyingappearancethatBenhaddescribed.Buttohisastonishment,Radtkedidn'tlookangryatall.Instead,therewasconcernwrittenalloverhisface.HequicklymadehiswaytoJoeyandaskedhimwhathadhappened.Joey,stillabitscared,stammeredoutthestoryabouttheball.Radtkenotonlydidn'tblameJoeybutalsohelpedhimstandup,tellinghimnottobeafraid.Then,hewentintotheyardandpickeduptheballforJoey.JoeyrealizedthatRadtkewasnotasscaryasBenhadmadehimouttobe.HethankedRadtkegratefullyandranbacktoBen,tellinghimthattheyhadmisjudgedtheoldman.Fromthenon,theynolongerregardedtheruleofnotgoingintoRadtke'syardassomethingtobefollowed.14升级版范文呈现WhenJoey’seyefellonthetreebythegate,anideaflashedintohismind.Convincedthatclimbingthetreeandthenjumpingoverthefencewasthesolutiontogettingtheballback,hestartedclimbingwithouthesitation.Thetree,whosebrancheswerethickandsturdy,facilitatedhisclimb.Asheapproachedthetop,hecaughtsightofhisballlyingonthegroundintheyard.However,ashetriedtojumpontothefence,hisfootslipped.Downhefellfromthetree,landingheavilyonthehardground.Painsurgedthroughhisbody,andhecouldn'thelplettingoutascream.Panic-stricken,Joeywasatalossastowhattodonext.15升级版范文呈现HearingJoey’sscreamofpain,outrushedRadtke.Filledwithfear,Joeythoughthewasinbigtrouble,recallingthefrighteningimagethatBenhadpainted.Butmuchtohissurprise,therewasnoangeronRadtke'sface;instead,worrywasevident.HeswiftlycametoJoeyandinquiredwhathadhappened.Joey,stillabitfrightened,stammeredoutthestoryabouttheball.NotonlydidRadtkenotscoldJoey,buthealsohelpedhimstandup,reassuringhimnottobeafraid.JoeyrealizedthatRadtkewasfarfromthescaryfigureBenhaddescribed.Hethan
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