【创新设计】2021高考英语(浙江专用)大二轮总复习-第5部分-写作专题-专题1-短文改错

Ⅰ.体验高考(2022·浙江)IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong，atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket，whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket­ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed，theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.答案IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong，atraininspectortocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket，whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromowner.Thepersonwhofoundticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Ⅱ.仿真、模拟Passage1WhatDoesaCreditCardBringUsiswrittenbyEilltonHenley.It'sabrieforexcellentarticleaboutcreditcards.Theauthorexplainswhatcreditcardswork.Andhealsopointsoutthepositiveandnegativeaspectforhavingit.Americanconsumersaremostlylikelytousecreditcards.However，theuseofcreditcardsareexpandingintoalmosteverycountryinworld.Thekeypointmakingbytheauthoristhatusersshouldpayfortheamountinfullwhenabillissentfromthecreditcardcompany.Thisprotectedalltheadvantagesandavoidsallthedisadvantagesofusingcreditcards.答案Passage2Afterwatch“EnglishTV”lastSundaymorning，Iphonedtomyclassmateandtoldhimtogotoseeafilmintheafternoon.Beforethefilmwasover，wereturnedtoschooltodoourlessons.Whilewearehavingarestinthecorridor，IsawMrLiu，myChinateacher.HetoldmethatwehadmadesomeprogressesinEnglish，butmyChineselaggedbehind，especiallymyChinesecomposition.HesuggestedIshouldreadmoreandkeepingadiaryeveryday.Intheeveningmyfathertoldmethatreadingnewspaperswoulddomewellforimprovingcompositionwriting.Thatwasreallygoodidea!Whattheysaidwasquiteright，andIshouldfollowtheiradvice.答案Passage3I'mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweekago.Ihavebeenthinkingaboutaquestionyouaskedme.Inmyopinion，youshouldcomebackafterfinishyourstudiesabroad.Foronereason，thatyouarestudyingisbadneedednowadaysinourcountry.Itwillbequiteeasyforyoufindagoodjob.Infact，Iknewafewbigcompaniesinourcityhopetohirepeoplelikeyou.Foranotheronereason，Ithinkitwillbemoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsbuttheyaregettingold.Butthisisonlymypointofview.Itisupforyoutomakearightchoice.答案Passage4ThismorningIfoundredwalletonthecampus.Girlsusuallikered，soIbelievedthewalletwasbelongedtoagirlstudent.Iopenedit，trytofindoutwhoseitwas.Therefore，Ifoundnothingbut300yuaninit.IwaswonderingwhattodowithitwhilesuddenlymyclassmatesChenYangpassedby.ShesuggestedsheputupaLostandFoundnoticeandIdidso.Iwrotedownmytelephonenumberandasktheownertocallmeaftershesawit.Later，agirlcametoclaimiton3o'clockthisafternoon.答案Passage5LastSaturday，ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren，aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys，tochildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgiveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.Thatday，eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp；forreturn，theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.答案Passage6IaswellasmyfamilyaregoingtoNewYorkCitythisweekend.Ihadbeenlookingforwardtogothereforalongtime.Itisoneofthemodernestcityintheworld.Therehavealsoalotofmuseumswhereyoucanlearnsomethingyoucan'tlearnitinschool.I'dalsoliketoseetheStatueofLibertyan