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Unit2NoRules,NoOrder第五课时(写作课)SectionB(2a—2b)本课学习目标本节课结束时,学生能够:1.
能够基于写作目的和要求,在教师的指导下有效开展写作准备,梳理给予Eric建议的结构,列出建议信内容要点;2.
能够将本单元所学的词汇、目标结构、句型以及各类功能表达迁移应用到自己的写作之中;3.通过自评和互评,不断改进自己的作品,使之完善,改进初稿的结构、内容和语言。按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
也(副词)__________ 2.训练(动词)___________3.工作日(名词)__________ 4.糟糕的(形容词)__________5.变成(动词)__________ 6.较好的(形容词)__________7.人(名词)__________ 8.创建(动词)___________9.我们需要专注于学习。___________________________10.你可以在周末和朋友闲逛。_______________________11.规则帮助使世界更好。___________________12.我也在课上禁止使用手机。
________________________________________eitherpractiseweekdayawfulbecomebetterpersonbuildWeneedtofocusonlearning.YoucanhangoutwithfriendsatweekendsRulescanhelptomaketheworldbetter.Imustn’tusemyphoneinclasseither.上节要点回顾Workintwoandshareyourideas.domyhomework.......familyruleswatchTVhangoutwashdishesIcan't...Imust...Ihaveto...Mymomsays,“Don't....”BrainstormWorkintwoandshareyourideas.arrivelateschoolrulesruninthehallwaysfightlistentomusicIcan't...Imust...Ihaveto...Myteachersays,“Don't....”BrainstormWritingtask(写作任务)
Eric在生活中遇到了许多困扰,他在家里和学校都需要遵守许多规则,这让他感到十分压抑和无趣。现在,请你以“DrKnow”的身份,给埃里克写一封回信,给予他一些实用的建议,帮助他更好地应对生活中的这些挑战。写作要点:1.理解Eric的困扰,并给予建议;2.强调积极态度的重要性并鼓励Eric。注意事项:1.文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。可以适当发挥。字数要求:约80词左右。CompletethelettertoDrKnowusingcan,haveto/must,orcan’t/mustn’t.DearDrKnow,Canyouhelpme?I_________followtoomanyrulesathomeandatschool.I_____________cleanmyroomeveryday,andI____________letmydeskgetuntidy.Atschool,I_____________wearmyownclothes.I______wearmyfavouritecapeither.Afterschool,I_______watchTV,
mustn’t/can’tmust/havetomustn’t/can’thavetocan’tcan2aCompletethelettertoDrKnowusingcan,haveto/must,orcan’t/mustn’t.butonlyafterIfinishmyhomework,walkthedog,anddolotsofotherthings!Ican’tevenrelaxatweekends,becauseI_____________practisetheviolineveryday!Ineverhavefun.What______Ido?Yours,Ericmust/havetocan2a
Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.·Whyiseachruleimportant?·Whatisyouradviceforeachrule?2b
Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.Rule:Imustcleanmyroomeveryday.Whyisthisruleimportant?Cleaningone'sroomeverydayisimportantforkeepingahealthyandnicelivingenvironment.Ithelpsmakeyouhappy.Whatismyadviceforthisrule?Youcouldplaymusicwhilecleaning.Besides,Ericcouldsharehouseworkwithhisfamilymembers.2b
Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.Rule:Ican'twearmyownclothesatschool.Whyisthisruleimportant?Ithelpsustobuildschoolspiritandgivesuslessfashionpressure.Whatismyadviceforthisrule?Hecouldjoinschoolclubsoractivitiesthatallowhimtoshowhispersonality.2b
Choosethreeimportantrulesfrom2a.Discussthequestionswithapartner.Rule:Ihavetopractisetheviolineveryday,evenatweekends.Whyisthisruleimportant?Ithelpsustogetbetteratplayingandbuildsdiscipline..Whatismyadviceforthisrule?Practicewithafriend,setgoals,orplayfavoritepiecesasareward.2bWriteareplytoEricasDrKnow.Givehimsomeadvice.以百事通博士的名义给埃里克写一封回信。给他一些建议吧。DearEric,Iknowitcanbediffculttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbegoodforus…2cDearEric,Iknowitcanbedifficulttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbegoodforusbecausetheyhelpusliveinastructuredandorderlyway.Let'slookatyoursituationandseeifwecanfindabalance.Firstly,Acleanandtidyroomcanmakeyoufeelmorerelaxedandfocused.Myadviceistosetasideaspecifictimeeachdaytotidyupyourdesk,andperhapsuseorganizersorcontainerstokeepthingsinplace.Regardingtheschooluniform,Iknowitcanfeelrestrictivenottobeabletowearyourownclothes.Butuniformshelpcreateasenseofequalityandbelongingamongstudents.UnderstandingThefirstadviceThesecondadvice2cWriteareplytoEricasDrKnow.Givehimsomeadvice.AsfornotbeingabletowatchTVafterschooluntilyoufinishyourothertasks,thisruleisactuallyquitebeneficial.Mysuggestionistosetasideaspecifictimeeachdayforleisureactivities,likewatchingTVorplayinggames,afteryouhavecompletedyourtasks.Practicingtheviolineverydayisagreatwaytodevelopyourmusicalskillsanddiscipline.ButIunderstandthatitcansometimesfeellikeachore.Myadviceistofindwaystomakepracticingfun,suchassettingsmallgoalsforyourself,playingduetswithafriend.Intheend,trytofindthejoyinthethingsyoudo,eveniftheyarerulesorresponsibilities.Lifeistooshorttobeunhappy,andthere'salwaysawaytomakethingsbetterTakecare,Dr.KnowThethirdadviceThefourthadviceEncouragement2cWriteareplytoEricasDrKnow.Givehimsomeadvice.Person(人称)02030405060701Tense(时态)Initial(首字母)Spelling(拼写)Complete(完整性)Punctuation(标点符号)SkillsDiscussingroups:PresenttenseICapitallettercorrectCompleteUsecorrectlyHandwriting(书写)PresenttenseStandard(规范)3cStructureWriteareplytoEricasDrKnow.Givehimsomeadvice.如何给予他人建议结尾:升华主题,鼓励他人There’resomewaystosolveproblems.开头:引出话题Iunderstandhowyoufeel—××.建议二:Ithinkit’sbettertodosth...中间:详细介绍段落布局建议三:Youcould...建议四:It’simportanttodo...建议一:Ithelpsyou...Writingtask(写作任务)
Eric在生活中遇到了许多困扰,他在家里和学校都需要遵守许多规则,这让他感到十分压抑和无趣。现在,请你以“DrKnow”的身份,给埃里克写一封回信,给予他一些实用的建议,帮助他更好地应对生活中的这些挑战。写作要点:1.理解Eric的困扰,并给予建议;2.强调积极态度的重要性并鼓励Eric。注意事项:1.文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。可以适当发挥。字数要求:约80词左右。Self-checkandpeer-check.Let’sproofreadcheckCheckformistakes:spellinggrammarpolish□你分段了吗?□你的每一段都有主旨吗?□你包含介绍的基本信息了吗?□
你有拼写错误吗?□
你有语法错误吗?□
你使用连词and了吗?Let’sevaluateLet’sedit评分原则本题总分15分,按各档次给分。评分时先根据文章的内容、语言质量初步确定档次,然后以档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分;评分时应考虑:内容要点是否完整;时态,语态及人称是否正确;词汇和句式的多样性以及语言的准确性;上下文的连贯性;如书写较差,影响表达,应视其影响程度,降低一到两个档次;英美两种拼法及词汇用法都可接受;内容要点可用不同方式表达,应紧扣主题,可适当发挥。Exchangeandcorrect(交换批改)Revise(修改)
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DearEric,Iknowitcanbedifficulttofollowmanyrules.Butrulescanbegoodforusbecausetheyhelpusliveinastructuredandorderlyway.Let'slookatyoursituationandseeifwecanfindabalance.Firstly,Acleanandtidyroomcanmakeyoufeelmorerelaxedandfocused.Myadviceistosetasideaspecifictimeeachdaytotidyupyourdesk,andperhapsuseorganizersorcontainerstokeepthingsinplace.Regardingtheschooluniform,Iknowitcanfeelrestrictivenottobeabletowearyourownclothes.Butuniformshelpcreateasenseofequalityandbelongingamongstudents.2cWriteareplytoEricasDrKnow.Givehimsomeadvice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
AsfornotbeingabletowatchTVafterschooluntilyoufinishyourothertasks,thisruleisactuallyquitebeneficial.Mysuggestionistose
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