进阶练17 书信写作（模考满分范文10篇）-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1PAGE2进阶练17书信写作（最新模考满分范文10篇）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________一、书信写作1．（2023·上海嘉定·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊，在信中你必须：1.简要介绍此次“国宝展”；2.给出理由再次劝说王磊同往。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearWangLei,I’msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasureExhibition.ThisexhibitionhasdisplayedthenationaltreasuresofthemainlandandTaiwan,whichisavaluableopportunity.AlotoffamousChinesetraditionalpaintingbytopartistswillbeexhibitedthere.YoucanseesomefamouspaintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,whichIthink,willcertainlyattractthevisitors’eyes.IthinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyourunderstandingofChina.Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊。【详解】1.词汇积累拒绝：turndown→refuse宝贵的：valuable→precious机会：opportunity→chance加强：enhance→strengthen2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：IthinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyourunderstandingofChina.拓展句：Ithinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibition,whichfurtherenhanceyourunderstandingofChina.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasureExhibition.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.(运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)2．（2023·上海·上海中学校考模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到好友王磊的邮件，信中提到他对如何选择大学专业感到非常困惑。回复王磊一封邮件，内容须包括：1.你对选择专业的建议；2.你的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearWanglei,Hearingthatyouhavetroubledecidingwhichmajoryoushouldchoosewhenyouentertheuniversity,I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.AndIhopetheywillgiveyouahand.Firstofall,it’sadvisablethatyouchooseonethatisfitforyourowninterestbecauseinterestisthebestteacher.Whenanobstaclearises,youwillhavetheenthusiasmtocrackitinsteadofgivingitup.Also,pickamajoryouaregoodat.Sufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetterconsiderthecareerprospectssinceyouwillhavetotakeadvantageofwhatyou’velearntincollegetofindyourselfajob.Whenchoicesaremultiple,youwillhavemorechances.Hopemyadviceisworthytakingandyoucanfindyouridealmajor!Yours,LiMing【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李明的身份写邮件给好友王磊，对他将来如何选择大学专业提出建议并给出理由。【详解】1.词汇积累决定：decide→determine建议：suggestion→advice擅长：begoodat→dowellin机会：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Also,pickamajoryouaregoodat.Sufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.拓展句：Also,pickamajoryouaregoodatbecausesufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstofall,it’sadvisablethatyouchooseonethatisfitforyourowninterestbecauseinterestisthebestteacher.（运用了that引导的主语从句、that引导的定语从句和because引导的状语从句）【高分句型2】Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetterconsiderthecareerprospectssinceyouwillhavetotakeadvantageofwhatyou’velearntincollegetofindyourselfajob.（运用了since引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句，不定式作目的状语）3．（2023·上海·模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到英国笔友Mike的邮件，其中提到因为父母工作原因，他们举家搬迁，他也转学到了一所新的学校，但是他因为换了一个环境感到不太适应。回复一封邮件，内容须包括：1)分析导致他不适应的原因；2)给他提出建议。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike,Iamsorrytohearthatyou’rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.Iunderstanditishardtogetusedtoyournewschool.Actually,anyoneenteringastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.Thereaosnisthatwearefarawayfromourfamiliarsurroundings.Besides,wearenotsurewhetherwearepopularinthenewschoolandwhetherournewclassmatesareeasytogetalongwith.However,youshouldnotworrytoomuchaboutthese.

I’mwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice.Firstly,Irecommendthatyousignupforextra-curricularactivities,whichcanhelpyoumakemorenewfriends.Inthiswayyouwon'tfeellonelyandyourschoollifewillbecomecolorfulandinteresting.Secondly,youshouldmakeagoodscheduleandfocusonimprovingyourstudy.Asateenager,itisourresponsibilitytostudywell.Ihopemysuggestionswillbesuitableforyou.Ihopeyoucanadaptquicklytothenewenvironment.Yours,LiHua【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求回复笔友邮件，分析他不适应新学校的原因并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累适应：adjustto→adaptto此外：besides→what’smore确定的：sure→certain建议：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Actually,anyoneenteringastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.拓展句：Actually,anyonewhoentersastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iamsorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Irecommendthatyousignupforextra-curricularactivities,whichcanhelpyoumakemorenewfriends.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）4．（2023·上海·模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim要在暑假来沪旅游,有人给他推荐了两个旅游主题供他选择:“文化上海”或“摩登上海”。Jim来信希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你推荐的旅游主题;2.你推荐该主题的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】onepossibleversion:DearJim,I’mgladtohearthatyouaregoingtomakeatriptoShanghai.Ihighlyrecommendthatyouchoose“CulturalShanghai”asyourtraveltheme.Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,reflectingtheintegrationofChineseandWesterncultures.Here,youcannotonlylearnabouttheearlyShanghaiculture,butalsolearnabouttheuniqueShanghaiculturewithWesternstyle.Besides,Shanghaialsohasmanyfolkcustoms,whichnotonlyenrichtheculturalheritageofShanghai,butalsoattractmanyoverseastouriststocometoappreciateandexperiencethem.Lastbutnotleast,manysnacksinShanghaiarealsoveryfamous.Amongthem,XiaolongBaoandShengJianBaorepresentthebestfoodcultureandflavor,whichisalsooneoftheculturalcharacteristicsofShanghai.IhopeyoucanenjoyyourselfandlearnmoreaboutShanghai.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友约翰写信邀请他周末看电影，表示对他给予你的帮助的感谢。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→pleased建议：recommend→suggest此外：besides→what’smore著名的：famous→well-known2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,reflectingtheintegrationofChineseandWesterncultures.拓展句：Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,whichreflectstheintegrationofChineseandWesterncultures.【点睛】【高分句型1】Here,youcannotonlylearnabouttheearlyShanghaiculture,butalsolearnabouttheuniqueShanghaiculturewithWesternstyle.（运用了notonly…butalso…连接两个并列结构）【高分句型2】Amongthem,XiaolongBaoandShengJianBaorepresentthebestfoodcultureandflavor,whichisalsooneoftheculturalcharacteristicsofShanghai.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）5．（2023·上海·南洋中学校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.学校大力推进劳动敎育，打算开辟校园农场组织学生进行果蔬花卉种植实践。假设你是校学生会干部李华，负责老师Helen委托你了解同学们对此项活动的看法。经了解，你发现有些同学缺乏种植经验，不敢尝试；有些学生担心种植成果没有实用价值，兴趣不大。请你写封信给Helen1.反映同学们的想法；2.提出建议并说明理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearHelen,Asforthepracticalactivityoffruit,vegetableandflowerplantingorganizedbythecampusfarm,afterinvestigation,Ifoundthatsomestudentslackedplantingexperienceanddarednottryit.Somestudentsarenotinterestedbecausetheyareworriedthattheplantingresultshavenopracticalvalue.Inviewofthesephenomena,Iwouldliketoputforwardsomeideasofmyown.Firstofall,weshoulddoagoodjobintheearlypublicityandmobilizationwork.Letstudentsknowthemeaningandvalueofthisactivity.Secondly,letthestudentsknowtheinformationoffruits,vegetablesandflowersthroughvariouschannels,andunderstandtheappearance,growingenvironmentandprocessofthecrops.Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial.Inthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.Abovearesomeofmysuggestions.Ihopeouractivitieswillbeasuccess.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校大力推进劳动敎育，打算开辟校园农场组织学生进行果蔬花卉种植实践。假设你是校学生会干部李华，负责老师Helen委托你了解同学们对此项活动的看法。经了解，你发现有些同学缺乏种植经验，不敢尝试；有些学生担心种植成果没有实用价值，兴趣不大。请你写封信给Helen，反映同学们的想法；提出建议并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累调查：investigation→inquiry担心的：worried→concerned了解：know→learn成功：beasuccess=besuccessful2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial.Inthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.拓展句：Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial,becauseinthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.【点睛】[高分句型1]Somestudentsarenotinterestedbecausetheyareworriedthattheplantingresultshavenopracticalvalue.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ihopeouractivitieswillbeasuccess.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句和抽象名词具体化)6．（2023春·上海·高三校联考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你的班级将要组织高考倒计时100天的主题班会，班长正在征集主题班会活动方案，请你给班长写封邮件，内容须包括：1.活动流程及理由;2.需要做哪些准备。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertostimulatestudents’enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswillholdaclassmeetingwiththethemeof100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.NowIwouldliketointroducemyclassmeetingactivityplanasfollows.First,ourheadteacherwillgiveanopeningspeech,explainingthepurposeandsignificanceoftheclassmeeting.Afterthat,thesong“MyFutureisnotaDream”isplayedtocreateaclassatmosphere.Thenitisarrangedthatthestudentswilltalkabouttheirgoalsandhowtospendthenext100days.Finally,everyonewilltakeacollectiveoathtostimulatethepassionoflearning.Inaddition,beforetheclassmeeting,studentsshouldpreparethelyricsof“Myfutureisnotadream”andthecontentoftheirspeech.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一个以高考倒计时100天的主题的班会课活动方案，其中包括活动流程及原因以及需要做的准备。【详解】1.词汇积累激励：stimulate→motivate方案：plan→scheme目标：goal→aim此外：inaddition→what’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inordertostimulatestudents’enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswillholdaclassmeetingwiththethemeof100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.拓展句：Inordertostimulatestudents’enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswillholdaclassmeetingwhosethemeis100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.【点睛】【高分句型1】First,ourheadteacherwillgiveanopeningspeech,explainingthepurposeandsignificanceoftheclassmeeting.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）【高分句型2】Thenitisarrangedthatthestudentswilltalkabouttheirgoalsandhowtospendthenext100days.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）7．（2023·上海崇明·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，你校的英文报向即将毕业的高三学生征文，给高中三年来最值得你感谢的一个人或一件事表达感谢。你有意投稿，内容包括：描述这个人或这件事；表达感谢，说明感谢的理由。注：文中不得提及真实姓名或学校。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMs.Zhang,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.Youaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhennecessary.Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.WhenIwasataloss,asmyheadteacher,youaskedmetogotoyouroffice.Insteadofblamingme,youcomfortedmeanddiscussedwithmethereasonsformyfailingintheexam.Moreunforgettably,youmanagedtohelpmewithmystudyandinspiredmefromtimetotime.Ms.Zhang,I’mmorethangratefulforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth.Yours,XuJing【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，你校的英文报向即将毕业的高三学生征文，给高中三年来最值得你感谢的一个人或一件事表达感谢。【详解】1.词汇积累感谢：gratitude→appreciation帮助：givesb.ahand→dosb.afavor害怕的：afraid→scared鼓励：inspire→encourage2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.拓展句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,IwasnervousandinlowspiritsbecauseIwasafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.【点睛】[高分句型1]Youaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhennecessary.(运用了who引导的定语从句和when的省略句)[高分句型2]Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.(运用了with的复合结构和现在分词作状语)8．（2023·上海·上海中学校考模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在进行主题为“如何应对压力”的征文，你有意参加，写一篇短文，内容须包括：1)你对如何应对压力的建议；2)用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Psychologisttellusthatstressisastateofworrycausedbytheprobleminlife,suchastoomuchworkorstudy,heavyresponsibilities,andquickenedpaceoflife.Ithinktherearelotsofthingswecandotosolvetheseproblems.Asweknow,musicisthemostbeautifullanguageintheworld.Ithinkit'shelpfultolistentosomemusicwhenweareundertoomuchpressure.Itwillmakeusforgetallourproblemsandrecallsomegoodmemories.Orwecouldreadsomejokesandaburstoflaughterhelpsalot.Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems.It'snotonlygoodforourhealthbutalsoourmood.Havingworkedout,wewillfeelverytiredphysically,whichhelpsustofallfastasleepandhaveagoodsleep.WhenIfailedthelastexaminJuniorschool,stressbegantomount.Iwasinlowspiritsandcouldn'tconcentrate.Luckily,oneweekend,mybestfriendpulledmetothewood,wherewehikedandjoggedforthewholemorning.Sweatingthoroughly,andmountainsofloadgone,Ifeltconfidentaboutmyentranceexam.Last,wecantalkaboutourproblemswithourteachersorbestfriends,whomayhelpustogetoverit.Inaword,everythingdependsonourattitude.Itisimportanttostayhappyallthetime,isn'tit?Themoremeaningfulthingswedo,thehappierwewillbe.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文给校英语报进行的主题为“如何应对压力”的征文比赛投稿。内容须包括：1)对如何应对压力的建议；2)用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：stress→pressure此外：besides→what’smore/furthermore/additionally情绪低落的：down→depressed/inlowspirits增长：increase→accumulate/mount2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems.It'snotonlygoodforourhealthbutalsoourmood.拓展句：Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems,whichisnotonlygoodforourhealthbutalsoourmood.【点睛】【高分句型1】Sweatingthoroughly,and

mountainsofloadgone,Ifeltconfidentaboutmyentranceexam.（运用了现在分词和独立主格结构作状语）【高分句型2】Havingworkedout,wewillfeelverytiredphysically,whichhelpsustofallfastasleepandhaveagoodsleep.（运用了现在分词作状语及which引导的非限制性定语从句）9．（2023春·上海·高三上海市建平中学校考开学考试）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.76.你是中学生李明，你所居住的小区(如图)有块常年闲置的空地;最近小区居委会(theresidents’committee)向大家征集开发改造这片空地的建议，请给居委会主任写封信，你的信中必须包括：1.你对空地的开发改造的具体建议；2.你的理由________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DeardirectoroftheResidents’Committee,

ThisisLiHua,amemberoftheResidents’Committee.Knowingthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,I’mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.

Personally,Iholdthebeliefthatabasketballcourtandatenniscourtcanbebuiltthere.Newplacesforsportsandexercisescannotonlyencourageourcommunitymemberstoworkoutregularlyandadopthealthierlifestyles,butalsoserveasexcellentvenuesforfuturecommunityactivitiessuchassportsmeetings,whichwillpromotetheconstructionanddevelopmentofourcommunity.

IhopemysuggestionisusefulandI’dappreciateitifcouldtakeitintoconsideration.Yours,LiMing【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给小区居委会主任写封信，就小区常年闲置的一块空地提出具体的开发改造建议，并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累：建议：advice→suggestion鼓励、激励：encourage→inspire锻炼：workout→takeexercise杰出的、卓越的：excellent→remarkable2.句式拓展：同义句转换：原句：Knowingthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,I’mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.拓展句：BecauseIknowthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,I’mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally,Iholdthebeliefthatabasketballcourtandatenniscourtcanbebuiltthere.（运用了以that引导的同位语从句和情态动词的被动语态。）【高分句型2】Newplacesforsportsandexercisescannotonlyencourageourcommunitymemberstoworkoutregularlyandadopthealthierlifestyles,butalsoserveasexcellentvenuesforfuturecommunityactivitiessuchassportsmeetings,whichwillpromotetheconstructionanddevelopmentofourcommunity.（运用了notonly...butalso..连接两个并列谓语，及以关系代词