读后续写练习+椰林守护与灾难中祖孙的求生+课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习椰林守护与灾难中祖孙的求生1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ten-year-oldSamilovedtovisithisgrandfather’shouse.Thehousewasnearthebeautifulbluesea.Attheseasidestoodthickandtallpalmtreeswithgreencoconutshangingfromthem.Whenthecoconutsfelldown,Samiwouldbreakthemopenanddrinkthecoconutwater.ItwasalwaysgreatfuntospendtheholidaysatGrandpa’splace.Thiswintervacation,Samiwassurprisedwhenhecametohisgrandfather’svillage.Therewerehardlyanytreesleft.Hesawhousesbuiltnearthesea.Peoplehadcutdownmanypalmtreesandtherewashardlyanygreeneryleft.4续写原文Grandpa’shousewasdifferent.Heneverallowedhistreestobecut.Hehuggedeachpalmtreeinhiscourtyard.Healsonamedthetwobigtreesnearthefrontdoor—onewasPetu,andtheotherBetu.Theyweretallandgreenandgavethesweetest,juiciestcoconuts.Onenight,Samiwasawakenedbyastrangesound.Hecouldnotsleep.Hetossedandturned(辗转反侧)inbed.Suddenly,thegroundshookasiftheearthwassplitting.HesatupstraightandthenrantoGrandpa.Heclungto(抓紧)hisgrandpatightly.Grandpacriedout,“It’sanearthquake!”Theyranoutsidethehouse.Suddenly,therewasaloudsound;theearthwasnotsplittingbuttheseawasroaring.Peoplewereshouting,screamingandcrying,“Theseaisrising!”Thevillagersstartedrunningawayfromthebeach.Samiwatchedwithfear.5续写原文Thewaveswererisinghigherandhigher.Samithought,“Howbigthewavesare!”Hewentintothehouseagainandsawwatercominginfromallsides.Hewasscared.Samirememberedhismothertellinghimlongago,“Youmustalwaysgetoutofthehouseifthefloodscometoonear.”HeranoutsidethehousewithGrandpa.Butthewatercamesurging(汹涌)in.Wavesabouttwelvemetershighcamerushingin,drowningeverything.Waterwasallaroundandeverywhere.6段首句Paragraph1：GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.Paragraph2：NowtheywereupinPetu.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9十岁的萨米喜欢去爷爷家，那里靠近大海，椰树成林。寒假时，萨米发现村庄树木被大量砍伐，唯有爷爷家的树得以保留。一天夜里，地震引发海啸，海水咆哮而来。萨米和爷爷匆忙逃出屋子，却遭遇汹涌巨浪。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.爷爷紧紧握着萨米的手，但一个巨浪袭来，将他们冲散。萨米瞬间被卷入冰冷的海水中，他惊恐地挣扎着，拼命呼喊着爷爷，可汹涌的海浪声淹没了他的声音。四周一片黑暗，除了冰冷刺骨的海水，他什么也看不见。萨米感觉自己在水中不断下沉，慌乱中他胡乱地伸手去抓，却只抓到一些漂浮的杂物。此时，他想起了爷爷和家里的大树，心中燃起一丝求生的希望。他努力让自己冷静下来，试图寻找漂浮物来支撑身体。11续写思路分析Para2：NowtheywereupinPetu.此刻，他们爬上了佩图树。萨米用尽全身力气，终于抱住了树干，他的双腿还在颤抖，心也在砰砰直跳。爷爷就在不远处的同一棵树上，大声鼓励着他要坚持住。海浪不断拍打着树干，溅起的水花让他们全身湿透。萨米看着周围被淹没的村庄，心中满是悲伤。但他知道，只要和爷爷在一起，守着这棵大树，就有活下去的希望。他们在树上等待着，盼望着救援的到来，坚信这场灾难终会过去。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.Samiwasimmediatelyplungedintotheicyseawater.Hestruggledfrantically,screamingforGrandpa,butthedeafeningroarofthewavesdrownedouthisvoice.Itwaspitch-blackallaround,andhecouldfeelnothingbutthecoldwaterdragginghimdown.Panicking,heflailedhisarms,tryingtograbontosomething,onlytoclutchatfloatingdebris.Inthatmomentofdespair,hethoughtofGrandpaandthebigtreesathome,whichgavehimaglimmerofhope.Heforcedhimselftocalmdownandstartedsearchingforsomethingbuoyanttokeephimselfafloat.14范文呈现NowtheywereupinPetu.Samimanagedtograspthetreetrunkwithallhismight.Hislegswerestillshaking,andhisheartwaspoundingwildly.Grandpa,onthesametreenearby,shoutedwordsofencouragementtohimtoholdon.Thewaveskeptcrashingagainstthetrunk,splashingthemwithcoldwater.Samilookedaroundatthefloodedvillage,hisheartfilledwithsorrow.ButheknewthataslongashewaswithGrandpaandtheyhadthistreetoholdonto,therewashope.Theystayedinthetree,waitingpatiently,hopingforrescueandbelievingthatthisdisasterwouldeventuallypass.15升级版范文呈现GrandpaheldSami’shandinadeath-grip,yetacolossalwavecamecrashingin,brutallyseparatingthem.Samiwasinstantaneouslyengulfedbythefrigidseawater,hisbodytossedaboutlikearag-doll.Desperately,hethrashedhislimbs,shriekingforGrandpa,butthetumultuousroarofthewavesswallowedhiscrieswhole.Thedarknesswasall-consuming,andtheonlysensationhecouldregisterwastheicywaterdragginghimdeeperintoitsdepths.Inastateofblindpanic,hewildlyflailedhisarms,attemptingtolatchontoanythingsolid,onlytoclutchatbitsoffloatingdebris.Amidstthischaos,memoriesofGrandpaandthesturdytreesathomeflashedthroughhismind,kindlingafaintsparkofhopewithinhim.WithaHerculeaneffort,hewilledhimselftocalmdownandbeganscanningthewaterforsomethingbuoyanttokeephimselfafloat.16升级版范文呈现NowtheywereperchedhighupinPetu.Sami,summoningeveryounceofstrengthhehad,managedtotightlygripthetreetrunk.Hislegstrembleduncontrollably,andhisheartthunderedinhischest.Grandpa,positionednearbyonthesametree,bellowedwordsofencouragement,imploringhimtostaystrong.Waveafterwavesmashedagainstthetrunk,drenchingthemincold,saltywater.Samicasthiseyesaroundatthedevastated,floodedvillage,hisheartheavywithgrief.However,hewasacutelyawarethataslongashewasbyGrandpa'ssideandtheyhadthissteadfasttreeastheirrefuge,therewas