06 书面表达30篇（浙江名校期中真题）-2023-2024学年八年级下册期中满分突破

书面表达30篇（浙江名校期中真题）1．（八年级下·浙江台州·期中）假如你是林海，你在朋友Allan的微博上看到他发的帖子抱怨学业繁重、学习压力大：Asastudent,myschoollifeisboring.EverydayIhavetodothesamethings,suchashavinglessons,takingexamsanddoingexercises.ButmyhobbyisplayingbasketballandIalwaysplaybasketballwheneverI’mfree.IalwaysforgettofinishmyhomeworkandIamnotdoingaswellasothers.MyparentsareangrywithmeandIamworriedaboutmystudy.WhatcanIdo?ShouldIstopplayingbasketball?请你给Allan写个回帖，分析他的情况，谈谈你的看法，并结合自己的学习生活为他提出几条合理的建议。要求：(1)开头部分已经写好，你只需接着写就可以；(2)文章必须与上面的内容呼应；(3)词数：80词左右。HiAllan,Iknowyoufeelboredwiththeschoollifeandyouspendallyourfreetimeplayingbasketball.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LinHai【答案】HiAllan,Iknowyoufeelboredwiththeschoollifeandyouspendallyourfreetimeplayingbasketball.Icanunderstandyourfeelingsverywell.Inordertomakeasuccessintheexam,Ithinkit'simportantforyoutorelax.Butit'snotgoodtoforgettofinishyourhomeworkbecauseofplayingbasketball.Infact,wecandosomethingtomakeourlifemorecolorful.Herearesomepiecesofadviceforyou.Firstly,wecandosomesportstomakeushealthy.Secondly,it'susefulforustodosomereadingorwatchTVafterschool.Lastbutnotleast,wecanspendsometimetalkingwithourfamilyorfriends.Theywillbringushappiness.Ihopemyadvicewilldoyousomehelp,andyoucanenjoyyourschoollifebetter.Yours,LinHai【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如spendtimedoing，playbasketball，inorderto，makeasuccess，intheexam，keephealthy，forgettodo，becauseof，infact，makeourlifemorecolorful，somepiecesofadvice，listentomusic，dosomereading，afterschool等。而固定句型Ithinkit'simportantforyoutorelax./it'snotgoodtoforgettofinishyourhomeworkbecauseofplayingbasketball./it'susefulforustodosomereadingorwatchTVafterschool.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Firstly,…/Secondly,…/Lastbutnotleast,…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2．（22-23八年级下·浙江·期中）心理健康(mentalhealth)对每个人都很重要。正处于青春期的我们应该怎么保持心理健康呢？假如你是学校的心理健康知识宣讲员，请根据下面的内容提示写篇短文，发表在校刊上。学校学会和他人相处融洽；多交益友，和他们分享悲伤和快乐；可向老师求助，也可向同学倾诉；学校应该多开设心理健康课；家庭家长需培养孩子的独立性；不能只和孩子谈成绩；多沟通；个人帮助自己是最有用的；在空闲时，多阅读，适当运动；要求:1）要点齐全，语句通顺，逻辑连贯，可适当发挥；2）词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)Mentalhealthisveryimportantforallofus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Mentalhealthisveryimportantforallofus.Wecandomanythingstokeepmentalityhealthy.Atschool,weshouldlearntogetalongwellwithothers.Weshouldmakemorefriendsandsharesadnessandhappinesswiththem.Wecanaskourteachersforhelportalktoourclassmateswhenweareintrouble.Ourteachershavemoreexperienceandwecandependonthem.What’smore,theschoolshouldhavethecoursesforthestudentstokeepmentalityhealthy.Athome,theparentsshouldcommunicatemorewiththeirchildren,andthegradesshouldn’tbetheonlything.Parentsneedtocultivatetheirchildren’sindependence.It’sthemostimportantthingforustohelpourselvesonourown.Ithinkitismostusefultohelpmyself.Inourfreetime,we’dbetterdosomeexercisetokeephealthyandreadmorebooks.Themoreweread,thebetterourmindwillbe.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtakeupagoodhobby.Agoodhobbycanhelpusrelax．【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，根据所给提示，谈谈如何保持心理健康。[亮点词汇]①mentalityhealthy心理健康②getalongwellwithsb.与某人相处得很好③introuble陷入困境④dependon依靠⑤course课程⑥independence独立⑦lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的[高分句型]Themoreweread,thebetterourmindwillbe.(the+比较级…,the+比较级…句型)3．（22-23八年级下·浙江绍兴·期中）在上周的英语课上，同学们就“孩子是否应当在家做家务”为主题组织了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，将讨论的结果整理成文。赞成观点反对观点1.培养独立能力，学会照顾自己；2.懂得公平合理性的理念；1.来自学校的压力太大；2.浪费时间，没有必要现在做家务，长大了自然会做；3.提供一个干净、舒适的环境是父母的事。你的观点：……注意：①词数：80词左右（短文的开头已写好，不计入总词数）；②短文须包括表中所有内容要点，并阐明自己的观点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。Nowadaysmanychildrendon’tlikedoingchores.Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutit.Herearetheresults.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Nowadaysmanychildrendon’tlikedoingchores.Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutit.Herearetheresults.Somestudentsthinkchildrenshoulddochoresathome.First,doingchoreshelpschildrendeveloptheirindependenceandteachesthemtolookafterthemselves.Italsohelpsthemtounderstandtheideaoffairness.Atlast,everyoneshouldtakepartinkeepingtheenvironmentcleanandtidy.However,othersdon’tthinkchildrenshoulddochores.Theythinkthesedayschildrenalreadyhaveenoughstressfromschool,anddoinghouseworkisawasteoftime.It’snotnecessarytolearnitnowbecausetheycandoitwhentheygrowup.What’smore,it’sparents’jobtoprovideacleanandcomfortableenvironment.Inmyopinion,theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏表格所给要点。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍同学们针对“孩子是否应当在家做家务”有不同的观点。第二步，具体阐述同学们针对“孩子是否应当在家做家务”发表的不同观点和理由。第三步，介绍自己针对“孩子是否应当在家做家务”发表的观点和理由。[亮点词汇]①dochores做家务②helpsb.dosth.帮某人做某事③lookafter照顾④takepartin参加⑤growup长大

[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkchildrenshoulddochoresathome.（省略that的宾语从句）②It’snotnecessarytolearnitnowbecausetheycandoitwhentheygrowup.（because引导的原因状语从句）③Inmyopinion,theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.（the+比较级，the+比较级）4．（22-23八年级下·浙江丽水·期中）劳动节即将到来，在你校“劳动教育月”期间，校英语报发起了“AHelper”主题征文活动。请结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的劳动、你的收获以及你对学生参加劳动的看法。内容要点提示如下：WhatyouoftendoWhatyouhavelearnedathomedothedishes…·lifeskills·responsibility·……atschoolsweepthefloor…incommunitycleanupthecitypark…注意：1.根据表格中的内容提示进行写作，可适当发挥；2.80词左右（文章的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3.字迹工整，书写规范、正确，语句通顺，注意单词的大小写和标点等；4.不得出现真实姓名和班级信息。AHelperAsateenager,it’simportanttobeahelperinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AHelperAsateenager,it’simportanttobeahelperinlife.Athome,Ioftenhelpdothedishesandcookmealsformyfamily.Atschool,Ioftenhelpteacherssweepthefloorandcleantheblackboard.Inthecommunity,Iusuallyhelpcleanupthecityparksandhandoutleaflets.Theybringalotoffuntoourlife.Bydoingthese,wecannotonlyimproveourlifeskills,butalsoimproveoursenseofresponsibility.Theyalsohelpusunderstandtheideaoffairness.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，表述清晰。[写作步骤]第一步，从在家、学校和社区讲述经常参加的劳动；第二步，介绍自己的收获及对参加劳动的看法。[亮点词汇]①helpdosth帮助做某事②cleanup清理③handout分发[高分句型]Bydoingthese,wecannotonlyimproveourlifeskills,butalsoimproveoursenseofresponsibility.(notonly...butalso“不仅……而且”)5．（22-23八年级下·浙江台州·期中）WildlifeProtectionSociety(野生动物保护协会)在ChinaDaily上发布了一个招募志愿者的公告。假如你是李平，请你用英文给协会主席写一封信，申请成为志愿者，要点如下：要求：1）必须包含所有要点，省略号处适当补充；2）词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearChairperson,IwouldliketojointheWildlifeProtectionSociety.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiPing【答案】例文DearChairperson,IwouldliketojointheWildlifeProtectionSociety.Iamkindandalwaysreadytohelpothers.I’mgoodatwritingandcommunicatingwithpeople.Iloveanimals,takingpicturesandtravelling.I’mveryinterestedinwildlife.However,alotofwildanimalsareindanger.Thenumberofsomeanimalsisgettingsmallerandsmaller.Theydon’thaveenoughfoodtoeatandtheyarelosingtheirhomes.Ithinkallofusshoulddosomethingtohelpthem.Icanhelptobuildmorenaturereservesandwritearticlestotellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingwildanimals.SoIhopeIcanbeamemberofyou.Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己的性格，能力和爱好；第二步，介绍你想加入的原因以及你会做的事情；第三步，期待对方的回复。[亮点词汇]①bereadytodo乐意做②indanger在危险中③helptodo帮助做④lookforwardtodoing期待做[高分句型]Ithinkallofusshoulddosomethingtohelpthem.（宾语从句）6．（22-23八年级下·浙江杭州·期中）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连接完整。Hithere,LiPing!How’severythinggoing?I’mnotfeelingwellthesedays.Myparentsaregivingmetoomuchpressureaboutschool.I’munhappywiththem.Also,Ikeepworryingaboutgettingbettergradesthanmyclassmates,soI’mstressedoutallthetime.WhatshouldIdo?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply!JohnDearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing【答案】例文DearJohn,Thankyouforyourletter.Everythingisfinewithmehere.Maybeyoushouldhaveadeepconversationwithyourparentstoexpressyourrealfeelings.Justbehonestandbravetotellthemyouaretootired,notlazy.Theywillunderstandyou.Astoyourgradesatschool,it’snoneedtocomparewithothers.Lifeshouldn’tjustbeaboutgoodgrades.Freetimeactivitiesareimportant,too.Theseactivitiesaregoodforbothhealthandstudy.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou!LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇邮件；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：需注意时态，根据邮件内容完成写作，可适当发挥，保证语句通顺，意思连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，回答邮件中的问候；第二步，针对邮件中的问题，给出相关建议；第三步，期待收到回信。[亮点词汇]①comparewith与……比较②lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Justbehonestandbravetotellthemyouaretootired,notlazy.（祈使句）②Astoyourgradesatschool,it’snoneedtocomparewithothers.（it固定句型）7．（22-23八年级下·浙江温州·期中）假如你是李华，一个英语游学团要来学校，学校需要一些志愿者，你想成为其中的一员。请根据以下要求写一封应征邮件：内容：1.个人爱好；2.学英语经历及英语能力；3.推荐一个旅游胜地并说明理由；4.可适当发挥。DearAndrew,I’mLiHua.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearAndrew,

I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoaskforthepositionasastudentvolunteer.IlikeEnglishverymuch.IusuallywatchEnglishfilmsandlistentoEnglishsongsinmysparetime.Asanoutgoinggirl,Igetalongwellwithmyclassmates.Besides,I’mgoodatEnglishandmyspokenEnglishisexcellent.What’smore,IhelpedmyEnglishteacherinseveralEnglishactivitiesofmyclass.Theyweresuccessful.AndI’dliketorecommendtheGreatWalltoallofyou.Becauseit’snotonlytheeffortoftheworkingpeopleinancientChina,butalsothesymbolofancientChineseculture.Allinall,I’msurethatI’mtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：一般现在时、一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我写信是想申请学生志愿者的职位”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人爱好、学英语经历及英语能力、推荐旅游胜地及推荐原因等”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。表达“期待早日回复”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①inmysparetime在我的业余时间②getalongwellwith与……相处融洽③amgoodat擅长④What’smore另外⑤recommend...to...推荐……给……⑥notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……⑦thesymbolof……的象征⑧Allinall总之⑨Lookingforwardto期待[高分句型]①I’mwritingtoaskforthepositionasastudentvolunteer.（动词不定式作目的状语）②Allinall,I’msurethatI’mtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.（that引导宾语从句；that引导定语从句，that省略）8．（22-23八年级下·浙江杭州·期中）假如你叫Mr.Known。请仔细阅读下列求助信，并作回复。词数80左右。要求：(1)简要分析求助者存在问题的原因，并给出两条及以上可行性建议；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；(3)文中不得出现学校和个人的真实信息。To:Mr.KnownFrom:CryingEricDearMr.Known,IarguedwithmybestfriendEllenthedaybeforeyesterday.Ifoundshetookmynewbooksawaywithoutanywordsyesterday.Idon’tknowwhy.Sincethen,wehaven’ttalkedwitheachotheranymore.Idon’twanttolosethisfriend,butIdon’tknowwhattodo.Ireallyneedyourhelp.CryingEricDearEric,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mr.Known【答案】范文DearEric,Iamsosorrytohearthatyouarguedwithyourbestfriend.Iwouldliketoofferyousomesuggestions,andthereforeIamnowwritingtoyou.Inmyopinion,youshouldbegenerousenough,especiallywithyourbestfriends.Ellenthinksyouaresuchagoodfriend,soshewouldtakeyourbookwithoutaskingyou.Youshouldbuyherasmallgifttorepairyourrelationship.Atthesametime,tellhertoletyouknowifshetakesyourbookagain.IhopeyoucanbegoodfriendswithEllen.Yours,Mr.Known【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信形式；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要求中所需要写的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。通过我对“吵架”事件的惊讶来引出重点内容的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。通过对“吵架”事件的原因分析以及如何解决这个问题两个方面来阐述重点内容；第三步，书写总结。期望Eric跟她的朋友重归于好。[亮点词汇]①arguewith争吵②especially尤其③offer提供④atthesametime同时[高分句型]①Iamsosorrytohearthatyouarguedwithyourbestfriend.（that引导宾语从句）②Atthesametime,tellhertoletyouknowifshetakesyourbookagain.（if引导条件状语从句）9．（22-23八年级下·浙江杭州·期中）假如你是美国来杭州的交换生Leo，现在居住在翠苑社区，你收到了来自翠苑社区居委会主任Tim的来信。请根据来信进行回复。DearLeo,Summerholidayiscoming,sostudentsarewantedtodosomevolunteerworkinCuiyuanCommunity.Whatdoyouthinkofvolunteerwork?Ifyouhaveachancetobeavolunteer,whatkindofvolunteerworkdoyouwanttodo?Besides,canyougivesomeadvicetochildreninourcommunityonhowtospendameaningfulandcolorfulholiday?Wesincerelyhopeyoucanjoinustogether.Yours,Tim注意：1.词数80左右。2.适当发挥，以使行文连贯。DearTim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Leo【答案】例文：DearTim,Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Nowletmeansweryourquestions.Ithinkvolunteerworkmeansalottous.IfIhaveachancetobeavolunteer,IwanttoworkatananimalhospitalbecauseIloveanimals.Inordertospendameaningfulandcolorfulholiday,firstly,youcanhelpoutaroundthehouseanddosomehousework.Secondly,youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizons.Finally,youcanbeavolunteertohelpthoseinneed.Ihopeyouwillhaveagreat,relaxingandstress-freeholiday.Yours,Leo【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏来信中的关键信息，针对对方的问题给出答复。[写作步骤]第一步，问候对方；第二步，谈谈对志愿工作的看法，自己想要做什么志愿工作；第三步，给孩子们一些度过有意义又精彩的假期的建议；第四步，收尾。[亮点词汇]①helpoutaroundthehouse在家里帮忙②thoseinneed那些需要帮助的人③broadenone’shorizons拓宽视野[高分句型]IfIhaveachancetobeavolunteer,IwanttoworkatananimalhospitalbecauseIloveanimals.（if引导条件状语从句）10．（22-23八年级下·浙江杭州·期中）以下是在学生求助网站的一个帖子，假设你是Mr.Helper，请你给他写一封回帖。DearMr.Helper,Ihavesomeproblemsthesedays.First,Ialwaysgetsickrecentlybecausetheweatherchangesoften.Ihaveacoldeasily.Second,I’mverybusywithmyschoolwork,butmyparentsalwaystellmetodomuchhouseworkathome.Third,Isometimesfeellonely.WhatcanIdo?Yours,LookingforHelp注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLookingforHelp,I’msorrythatyouhavesomanyproblems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mr.Helper【答案】例文：DearLookingforHelp,I’msorrythatyouhavesomanyproblems.Butdon’tworry.Letmegiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcoulddomoreexercisetokeephealthier.It’salsoagoodwaytoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Secondly,whydon’tyoucommunicatewithyourparents?Youshouldexplainthatyoudon’tminddoinghousework,butyouaretoobusyonweekdays.Whenyouarefreeonweekends,youwillhelpdosomehousework.Finally,you’dbetterjoinaclubandmakemorefriends.Wheneveryoufeellonely,youcantalkwithyourfriends.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyou.Bestwishes!Yours,Mr.Helper【详解】[总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回帖；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章应该包括求助帖中三个方面的内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。［写作步骤］第一步，开门见山，表达安慰，提供建议；第二步，针对求助帖中的三个方面的问题，分别给出合理的建议；第三步，书写总结与祝愿。［亮点词汇］①communicatewithsb.与某人交流②joinaclub加入俱乐部［高分句型］①It’salsoagoodwaytoeatmorefruitandvegetables.(it作形式主语)②Whenyouarefreeonweekends,youwillhelpdosomehousework.(when引导时间状语从句)11．（22-23八年级下·浙江温州·期中）温州电视台少儿频道策划开办一档向全世界介绍温州的旅游节目(TravelAroundWenzhou)，现来我校公开招聘小记者。假设你叫轩轩，请你给电台导演写一封电子邮件，介绍你的性格、特长、旅游经历，并为该节目推荐一个旅游胜地。100字左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。Deardirector,MynameisXuanxuan.I’dliketobeareporterforyourTVprogramTravelAroundWenzhou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeIwillhavethechancetoworkforyourTVprogram.Yours,Xuanxuan【答案】例文Deardirector,MynameisXuanxuan.I’dliketobeareporterforyourTVprogramTravelAroundWenzhou.I’moutgoingandgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.What’smore,IamtheclassmonitorsothatIknowhowtoworkwithothers.WhatIamproudofismyEnglish.I’vewonmanyprizesinEnglish-speakingandEnglish-writingcompetitions.Iamfondoftravelling.IhavebeentolotsofplacesofinterestaroundChinaandeveninothercountrieswithmyparents.IthinkagoodplacetotravelisYandangMountain,whichislocatedinmyhometownWenzhou.It’samagiclandofmountainsandrocksindifferenceshapes.Withthebirds’singingandthesoundofrunningwater,you’llfeelthatyouareintheheaven.Ithinkforeignerswillloveit. IhopeIwillhavethechancetoworkforyourTVprogram.Yours,Xuanxuan【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己的性格和特长；第二步，叙述自己旅游经历并推荐一个旅游胜地。[亮点词汇]①communicatewithsb和某人交流②beproudof以……自豪③belocatedin位于[高分句型]①What’smore,IamtheclassmonitorsothatIknowhowtoworkwithothers.（目的状语从句）②IthinkagoodplacetotravelisYandangMountain,whichislocatedinmyhometownWenzhou（定语从句）12．（22-23八年级下·浙江温州·期中）一次运动，一场旅行，一个微笑都可能让你难以忘怀。假如，你是陈华，请根据《新英语》报社征文要求，以AnunforgettableExperience为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，描写你的难忘经历并谈谈你的感想。要求：文中不能出现真实的个人身份信息。提示词：风景区scenicspots

感激的grateful

给……留下深刻印象impressAnUnforgettableExperience____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableExperienceIwenttoDalianwithmyparentslastyear.Dalianisabeautifulandmoderncitywhichisworthvisitingagain.Webeganourtravelafterbreakfast.First,wetookthebustotheSeaPark,oneofitsfamousscenicspots.ThereweresomanydifferentkindsoffishesthatIcouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Wealsosawtheshowofdolphins.Itwasfantastic.Thenwehadlunchinarestaurantwhereweenjoyedourselvesalot.Afterlunch,wewentswimming.Theseawasblueandbeachwasgolden.Theyimpressedmedeeply.Thetriphasopenedmyeyestotheoutsideworld.ItwassowonderfulthatIwillneverforgetit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：主要是“一般过去时”；

③提示：描述自己难忘的经历和感想，注意结合自己的经历，描述自己的感受。

[写作步骤]

第一步，根据题目要求，结合自己难忘的经历，进行点题；

第二步，阐述清楚此次经历的过程，务必注意过去时的使用。

第三步，总结自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①oneofitsfamousscenicspots著名的风景区之一

②enjoyedourselvesalot玩得非常愉快③impressedmedeeply让我印象深刻[高分句型]

①Dalianisabeautifulandmoderncitywhichisworthvisitingagain.(定语从句)

②ThereweresomanydifferentkindsoffishesthatIcouldn’tbelievemyeyes.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)③Thenwehadlunchinarestaurantwhereweenjoyedourselvesalot.(定语从句)13．（22-23八年级下·浙江温州·期中）来自英国ForestSchool的师生们想了解中国学生的志愿者(volunteer)活动情况。你校将以“我的一次志愿服务经历”为主题推出一期英语版公众号。假如你是李华，请积极投稿，谈谈你的一次志愿者服务经历以及收获。要求：（1）不能出现真实的个人信息。（2）词数约90词，开头不计入总词数。参考词汇:做社区义工workasacommunityvolunteer，敬老院oldpeople’shome，帮助贫困群众helpthepoorHello,I’mLiHua.I’mgladtosharemyexperienceasavolunteerwithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Hello,I’mLiHua.I’mgladtosharemyexperienceasavolunteerwithyou.It’sgreattobeavolunteerandhelpothers.IhavetakenpartinmanyvoluntaryactivitiesthesedaysandIhavelearntalot.

Iworkedasacommunityvolunteer.Ihelpedsortoutwasteinourcommunitythiswinterholiday.Itaughtmyneighborstoputtherubbishintocorrectrubbishbins.LastSunday,Iwenttotheoldpeople’shome.Icleanedtheoldpeople’sroomsanddidsomewashing.Afterthat,Isangsongsfortheoldandcooksomedeliciousfoodforthem.Realhappinesscomesfromhelpingothers.WhenIsawtheoldpeoplelaughhappily,Ihadastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.Ihopemyvolunteerworkcanmakeadifferencetomorepeople.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：根据主题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，介绍自己的一次志愿者服务经历以及收获；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②voluntary自愿的③sortout分类④comefrom来自⑤satisfaction满足⑥makeadifference有影响[高分句型]WhenIsawtheoldpeoplelaughhappily,Ihadastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.(when引导时间状语从句)14．（22-23八年级下·浙江温州·期中）假如你是李华，为了感受和传递正能量，学校在三月已经开展了学雷锋系列活动，现请你为学校英语推送专栏VoiceofSchool写一篇关于本次活动的报道。选择至少两个活动简要介绍过程并分享自己的感受。注意：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。2.词数：100词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。小词典community

n.社区

culturen.文化

curl

n.卷发flower-girln.花童

intangibleculturalheritage非物质文化遗产

oxygen

n.氧气radiationn.辐射

“stone-boiled”tea围炉煮茶

snackn.零食/v.吃零食straightenern.直发棒

ultra-modernspacesuit超现代宇航服

weddingn.婚礼InMarch,ourschoolheldlotsofactivitiestolearnfromLeiFeng________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：InMarch,ourschoolheldlotsofactivitiestolearnfromLeiFeng.WehavediscoveredmanypeoplelikeLeiFeng.PeterandTomsawelderlypeoplewhohaddifficultywalkingontheirwayhome,andtheycarefullyhelpedthemcrosstheroad.OnSunday,MaryandIwenttothecommunitypark.Wefoundalotofjunkfoodbagsinthepark.We