2025年八省联考读后续写试题解析及写作指导讲义

八省联考读续凶悍外表机车党的铁汉柔情读后续写题目2025年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试英语试题（八省联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(纪录片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen—allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub—standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Para.2Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.语篇分析据分析，2025八省联考卷读后续写文本难度等级为标准，大致对应美国七到八年级学生阅读水平，三音节以上的复杂单词，2024新课标卷读后续写中有19个，而2025八省联考该部分则多达32个！材料出现选修或课标以外词汇，诸如：conferencen.会议animalshelter动物收容所abandon遗弃urgen.强烈欲望fundraisingevent募捐活动resignoneselfto只好接受restlessadj.坐立不安的bravev.勇敢面对desertedadj.荒凉的neverthelessadv.然而故事梗概一位热爱动物的女士，被募捐活动广告吸引，天黑黑孤身一人从宾馆出发，穿过几条无人街，电影院前撞见一群身材魁梧、佩戴徽章的摩托车手，这时主人公开始担心自己的安全……人物分析“我”:原文的叙述者，一个普通人，因爱动物而勇敢面对内心恐惧，最终经历了一次从误解到感悟的转变。摩托车骑士:外表“粗犷”，但实际上是富有爱心的动物救助者，他们的反差成为推动故事发展的关键。情节分析开端：叙述者计划参加动物救助纪录片放映，却因夜晚街道的寂静与骑士的外表而感到恐惧。发展：叙述者鼓起勇气进入剧院，发现更多的骑士也在场。高潮：纪录片揭示骑士是动物救助者，叙述者从恐惧到敬佩的情绪转变。结局：叙述者反思自身的刻板印象，感悟到善良可能隐藏在意想不到的人群中。情绪发展开端情绪：犹豫、害怕——因陌生环境与骑士的外表而充满警惕。发展情绪：惊讶、好奇——逐渐发现骑士的真正身份与用意。高潮情绪：敬佩、感动——通过纪录片感受到骑士的善意与奉献。结局情绪：平静、反思——从误解到自我成长，对人性和外表有了新的认知。主题分析不要以貌取人：外表并不决定一个人的品质，真正的善良往往藏在不经意之中。续写方向以及难点1.第一段描写进入剧场看到的画面以及波动的心情与所给句衔接，描写作者进入剧场看到更多bikers时的心情，同时应适当推动情节发展（不能整段就在描述恐惧的心情）：寻找座位，观察环境，以及bikers，心中疑惑渐增。最后与第二段衔接，可以是等待电影开场或者灯光变暗，电影即将开始。1.我看到更多骑手，愈发恐惧；2.寻找座位，观察周围环境；3.恐惧和困惑夹杂，我等待电影开场。2.第一段描写误判的心情，纪录片画面以及最后的感悟本段描写作者知道bikers原来是动物营救组织后的心情，以及观看documentary，了解到tough-lookingbikers背后的故事，到最后作者受到的震撼以及感动，升华此次经历给自己带来的影响。1.我恍然大悟，心生羞愧；（下降）2.影片徐徐展开，我惊叹不已；（下降）3.收获感动以及人生教训。（结局）伏笔foreshadowing文中提到“thereweretwentyorsoverylargemen–allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub”，以及“warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,myheartwaspounding等描写，都为后文揭示这些骑手的真实身份埋下伏笔，让读者也跟着“我”一起好奇他们到底是怎样的群体,同时让tough-lookingbikers和warm-heartedrescuevolunteers形成强烈的反差。PossibleVersionIhurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Ifeltlikeescapingfromahellandthenfoundmyselfinanother.MyuneasegrewasIsqueezedpasttheirleatherjacketsandintimidatingtattoos(可怕的纹身),searchingforanemptyseat.However,mynervousnessbegantowaver(动摇)asIoverheardsnippets(零星的话)oftheirconversations—wordslike“rescue,”“fostering,”and“adoption”floatedtomyears.Confused,Iglancedattheirjacketsagainandnoticedpawprintsandwordlike“Rescue”.Mypreviousfearslowlywaned(减弱)andturnedintokeencuriosity.Whoweretheseintimidatingmen?Whyweretheyhere?Thosequestionskeptwhirlinginmymind.Thoughstillnervous,Itriedtocalmmynervesasthetheatrelightsdimmed.(109words)Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Revealingbeforemyeyesweresceneafterscenewherethesetough-lookingbikersnavigateddangerousareastosavestray(流离失所的)animals,bringingthemtoshelters,andevennursedthembacktohealthintheirownhomes.Gonewasmyinitialfear,replacedbyoverwhelmingadmirationandshame.Whenthelightscamebackon,Ifinallygotaclearlookattheinsigniaontheirjackets——asimplepawprintwiththewords"RideforRescue"boldlydisplayedunderneath.Walkingoutofthetheater,Iwasfilledwithaweandguiltmingled.Inotonlywitnessedthebeautyofcompassionbutalsolearnedtoseebeyondstereotypes—alessonIwouldcarrywithmeforalifetime.(109words)一些“不要以貌取人”的语料积累主题句1."Don'tjudgeabookbyitscover,asthosewhoseemintimidatingmighthaveakindheart."不要以貌取人，那些看似令人生畏的人或许有着善良的心。2."Appearancescanbedeceiving,andunexpectedkindnessmaycomefromthemostunlikelypeople."外表可能具有欺骗性，意想不到的善意或许来自最不可能的人。3."Oneshouldnevermakeassumptionsbasedonlooksalone,forthere'softenmore