2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+遛狗风波：家庭合作的成长故事+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习遛狗风波：家庭合作的成长故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwasakid,myparentsandIlivedneartheforest.Theyoftentoldmethatourfamilywasateamthatneededtoworktogetherforthehouseholdtofunctionsmoothly.Therewasalwaysanabundanceofworktodo—cooking,cleaning,andwalkingdogs.Ivolunteeredtowalkourdog,Max,whohadbeenadoptedonemonthbefore.Ineverdaredletthisgiantdogoffthelead(牵狗绳),justincasehetookoff.Onemorning,wewerewalkingalongintheforestwhenMaxstartedpullingonthelead.Atfirst,Iwasabletoholdondespitethewetgroundfromarecentshower.ButthemoreItriedtostophimpulling,themoreitturnedintoatugofwar.Andthankstotheslipperyground,Ilost.Pullinghislead,Maxshotofflikeabullet,leavingmescreamingbehind.Ichasedhimbutlostmyfootingandfellface-firstintosomemud.Istumbled(踉跄)tomyfeet,butlookingahead,Ifoundhimrunningbacktowardsme.Ithoughthewasgoingtostopandgivemehis“Sorry”look.Butinstead,thedogshotpastmeandreturnedafterawhile.4续写原文Assoonaswegothome,mymotherimmediatelyattendedtoMaxwithawarmtowelandadoggytreat.Ithoughtseeingmestumblingandcoveredinmud,Iwouldalsogetawarmcupofteaandamotherlykiss.Instead,Igotaveryloudlectureaboutlettingthedoglooseintheforest.Ifeltfrustrated.Itwasn’tfairthatshedidn’tunderstandhowdifficultitwastocontrolMax.Ifoughtback,“Stoplecturingme!Whyiseverythingmyfault?”Withthesewords,Istormedintomybedroomandslammedthedoorshut.Intheevening,IheardmymothercallMaxandtakehimout.Itwasn’tlongbeforeIheardmymotherscreamingandthedooropeningagain.5段首句Paragraph1：Iwalkedoutofmyroom.Paragraph2:Dadsteppedin,suggestingthatweworktogethertotrainMax.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了小时候，“我”和父母住在森林附近，“我”负责遛狗。一次在森林里，狗狗Max突然挣脱牵引绳狂奔，“我”摔倒在泥里，回家后妈妈不仅没安慰“我”，反而大声指责。“我”委屈地回房。晚上，妈妈带Max出去，传来尖叫。通过这次经历，“我”和妈妈互相理解，在爸爸提议下，全家一起训练Max，明白了家庭合作的重要性。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Iwalkedoutofmyroom.我走出房间，眼前的景象让我惊呆了。妈妈浑身沾满了泥，头发凌乱，狼狈不堪，就像我上午那般。Max耷拉着尾巴，畏畏缩缩地站在一旁，仿佛知道自己闯了大祸。我和妈妈对视了一眼，她眼中的愧疚与无奈清晰可见。妈妈先开了口：“宝贝，我现在才知道控制Max有多难，早上不该冲你发火，对不起。”我眼眶一热，心里的委屈瞬间消散，忙说道：“妈妈，我也有错，不该跟您顶嘴，还跑回房间。”在这一刻，我们的误会彻底解开。10续写思路分析Para2：Dadsteppedin,suggestingthatweworktogethertotrainMax.爸爸见此情形，适时提出一起训练Max的建议。我们一致赞同。从那以后，每天放学后，我们都会来到后院。爸爸耐心地向我们演示正确牵狗绳的方法，讲解训练技巧。我和妈妈则轮流按照爸爸教的方法，带着Max进行练习。一开始，Max还是会有些调皮，但随着训练的深入，它逐渐变得听话起来。在这个过程中，我们不仅拉近了和Max的距离，更深刻体会到了家庭合作的力量。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Iwalkedoutofmyroom.Whatgreetedmewasashockingsight.Mymomwascoveredinmudfromheadtotoe,herhairamess,justlikeIwasinthemorning.Maxstoodbesideherwithhistailbetweenhislegs,lookingextremelyguilty.MymomandIlockedeyes,andIcouldseetheguiltandhelplessnessinhereyes.Shespokefirst,“Honey,InowrealizehowdifficultitwastocontrolMax.Ishouldn'thaveyelledatyouthismorning.I'msorry.”Myeyeswelledup,andthegrievanceinmyheartvanishedinstantly.Iquicklyreplied,“Mom,Iwaswrongtoo.Ishouldn'thavetalkedbacktoyouandruntomyroom.”Atthatmoment,ourmisunderstandingwascompletelyclearedup.13范文呈现DadsawthissituationandtimelysuggestedthatweworktogethertotrainMax.Weallagreed.Fromthenon,everydayafterschool,wewouldgatherinthebackyard.Dadpatientlydemonstratedthecorrectwayofhandlingthedogleashandexplainedtrainingskills.MymomandItookturnspracticingwithMaxaccordingtowhatDadtaught.Atfirst,Maxwasstillabitnaughty,butasthetrainingwenton,hegraduallybecamemoreobedient.Inthisprocess,notonlydidwegetclosertoMax,butwealsodeeplyfeltthepoweroffamilycooperation.14升级版范文呈现Iwalkedoutofmyroom.Whatmetmyeyeswasadisheveledmom,mud-splatteredfromheadtotoe,herhairindisarray,mirroringmyearlierstate.Max,withtailtuckedbetweenhislegs,cowerednearby,clearlyawareofhismisdeed.Oureyesmet,andinhers,Idiscernedguiltandregret.“Honey,”shebegan,“I'vecometounderstandhowchallengingitwastomanageMax.Iwaswrongtoscoldyouthismorning.Forgiveme.”Touched,Ireplied,“Mom,I'msorrytoo.Ishouldn'thavestormedoff.”Withthat,ourriftdissolved.15升级版范文呈现Dadsteppedin,proposingwejointlytrainMax.Wereadilyagreed.Post-schooldaily,we'dassembleinthebackyard.Dadmeticulouslydemonstratedproperleash-handling,sharingtraininginsights.MomandI,takingturns,appliedhisteachings.Initially,Maxresisted,butasdayspassed,hegrewmorecompliant.Thise