专题01 观点看法类-备战2022中考英语六大类作文高分秘笈

写作指导一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头，"承"就是承接，"转"是转折，"合"是综合或总结。1.用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,lately等。2.用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second,inaddition,besides,then,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse,forexample,certainly,obviously,inotherwords,still,atthesametime,nodoubt等。3.用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,otherwise,while,despite,inspiteof等。4.总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。一、写作方法——十句作文法第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。三段之间的衔接要灵活运用＂启、承、转、合＂的过渡手段。二、应急百宝箱遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，＂一代，五加，一扩＂帮你轻松解决问题。＂＂具体说来就是：1.以实代虚——写实2.增加限定语——定语、状语等3.增加例子——forexample,suchas4.增加原因——进一步说明5.加套语（词块）6.加格言、谚语等——进一步说明7.扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可三、注意事项1.观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。2.层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。3.最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。4.通常采用一般现在时。5.语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。常用表达一、开头句型As

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how...写作模板观观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板Thetopicof主题isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavourite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof理由一.What’smore,理由二.Moreover,理由三.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.First,理由一.Second(Besides),理由二.Third(Finally),理由三.Frommypointofview,Ithink我的观点.Thereasonisthat原因.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformer(later)issurelyawisechoice.典例一（2021•广西中考）正值中国共产党（theCommunistPartyofChina）建党100周年，“感党恩、学史力行”。作为中学生，我们应该怎么做呢？请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。内容要点：1.学习党史，了解红色文化，弘扬（carryforward)共产党精神；2.尊敬师长、团结同学、刻苦学习；3.积极参加各项有意义的活动：唱红歌，讲红色故事等；4.你的感想。参考词汇：（仅供参考）要求：1.内容完整，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥。2.80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名称。Itisthe100thanniversary（周年纪念）ofthefoundingoftheCommunistPartyofChinathisyear.WemustgivethankstothePartyandpracticewhatyouhavelearnedfromhistory.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【优秀范文】Itisthe100thanniversary（周年纪念）ofthefoundingoftheCommunistPartyofChinathisyear.WemustgivethankstothePartyandpracticewhatyouhavelearnedfromhistory.Weshouldstartfromthefollowingaspects.Firstofall,weshouldstudythehistoryofthePartytounderstandtheredculture,andthencarryforwardthespiritoftheCommunistParty.Second,weshouldrespectteachers.Weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmatesandstudyhard.Finally,weshouldtakeanactivepartinallkindsofmeaningfulactivities,suchassingingredsongs,tellingredstoriesandsoon.UndertheleadershipoftheCommunistPartyofChina,people’slifeisgettingbetterandbetter.Wemustloveourmotherlandandourpartyevenmore.Weshouldmakecontributionstothecountry!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，介绍作为中学生，我们应该做的事情：学习党史，了解红色文化，弘扬共产党精神；尊敬师长、团结同学、刻苦学习；积极参加各项有意义的活动：唱红歌，讲红色故事等，最后表达自己的感想等。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容全面，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。典例二（2021•辽宁中考）根据有关部门调查，我国部分青少年每天劳动时间过少。假如你是李华，请根据表格的内容提示，说一说你平时参加劳动的情况，谈一谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。提示词：社区志愿者服务communityvoluntaryservices；生活技能lifeskills；责任感asenseofresponsibility要求：1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2.根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥；3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；4.词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。李华参加劳动的情况养成良好劳动习惯的重要性在校打扫教室……✧提高基本的生活技能✧学会照顾自己✧拥有责任感在家清洗餐具，洗衣服，做饭……社区做社区志愿者服务，如去养老院看望老人……I’mLiHua.Asateenager,Iamsupposedtoformgoodworkinghabits.It’sgoodformydevelopment.Atschool,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【优秀范文】I’mLiHua.Asateenager,Iamsupposedtoformgoodworkinghabits.It’sgoodformydevelopment.Atschool,Icleanmyclassroomregularlyandkeepourclassroomcleanandtidy.Athome,Idothedishesandwashmyownclothes.Ialsohelpmyparentscookanddothehousework.BecauseIamamemberofthisfamilyandtheyaremyduty.Atcommunity,Ioftendocommunityvoluntaryservicesatweekends,likevisitingoldpeopleintheoldpeople’shouse.Itisimportantforustoimproveourbasiclifeskillsandweneedtolearntolookafterourselves.What’smore,weshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示内容，介绍平时参加劳动的情况以及谈一谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己平时参加劳动的情况；第三段介绍养成良好劳动习惯的重要性。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。典例三（2021•江苏中考）公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。你们准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife的演讲稿。Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife健康包括身体（physical）健康和心理（mental）健康。身体健康1.健康饮食；2.适当锻炼；3.充足睡眠。心理健康1.积极乐观；2.与人为善；3.……（至少一点）希望……（至少一点）注意事项：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【优秀范文】HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearandclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?Firstly,weshouldkeepourbodieshealthy.Notonlydoweneedtoeathealthyfood,butwealsoneedtoexerciseinaproperwayeveryday.Forexample,wecanrunfor30minuteseverymorningorplaysportsafterschool.Meanwhile,westillneedenoughsleepeveryday.Secondly,mentalhealthisalsoveryimportant.Weneedtoloveourlifeandtrytobeactive.Weneedtogetalongwellwithothersaswell.Whenwe’resad,wecancommunicatewithourparents,teachersandfriendsfrankly.Inaword,Ihopeeveryonecanhaveahealthybodyandmind,andthenwecanhaveahealthyandhappylifeeveryday.That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife为题写一篇文章，发表一下自己对“健康”这一话题的看法。题目中用表格列出了文章应包括的内容：首先介绍健康的分类；然后分别介绍如何保持身体健康和心理健康；最后提出自己的希望。学生们可以联系自己的日常生活，根据表格中的提示，再增加一些细节信息，用正确的英语进行表达。2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称为主叙述。写作时应主语：首先文章要点全面，应包括题目中列出的所有要点，并对心理健康和希望进行补充。其次应注意英语句式结构的特点以及与汉语表达方式的不同，使用正确的词汇和句型，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句和其他句式的使用，提升文章档次。最后应注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。典例四（2021•河南中考）水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“OnethingIkeepdoingeveryday”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。1.要点：1）你每天在坚持做什么；2）你坚持这么做的理由；3）它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【优秀范文】OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.IloverunningandIhavekeptrunningforthreeyears.WhenIwasinGrade7,Iwasnotgoodatsportsandrunningwasalwaysmyweakness.Ioftenfailedinmyrunningtest.Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.Sometimes,IwassotiredthatIreallywantedtogiveup.ButIkepttellingmyselfthatIcouldmakeit.NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttokeeprunning.NowIdomuchbetterinrunning.I’mveryproudofmyselfandI’mreadyforanychallengeinthefuture.That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“OnethingIkeepdoingeveryday”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己坚持做的事、这么做的理由以及给自己带来的影响和改变；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。预测一【题目要求】Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"Iamnolongeralittlechild"（以"我不再是一个孩子"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）背景：如今，我们的父母一方面对我们百般呵护，一方面又时常抱怨我们长不大.请给你的父母写一封信，证明你不再是一个孩子了（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数）.Thefollowingisforreferenceonly：Dearparents____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursxxx【参考范文】IamnolongeralittlechildDearparents,Iama16-year-oldgirlnow.Iamnotalittlechildanymore.So,dearmomanddad,pleasedon’ttreatmeasalittlebaby.Ihavechangedalot,Iusedtobeweakandshort.Butnow,Iamstrongerandastallasyou.ThemostimportantthingisthatIhavelearnedtounderstandandcareaboutothers.SinceIhavegrownup,Icandoalotofthingsbymyself.Forexample,Icandohousework.Icanworkinthefield.Ialwayshelpoldpeoplewhentheyareintrouble.AlltheteachersandstudentsthinkI’magoodgirl.Thereisnoneedforyoutoworryaboutme.Dearmomanddad,pleasetrustme.It’stimeformetobeindependentnow!Yoursxxx预测二【题目要求】你校设想在"英语周"期间进行一次英语演讲比赛，为此你对部分同学进行了问卷调查，了解他们参与比赛的意愿，请你根据下面的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你的想法。要求：1.文章必须包括以上所有的信息，可适当增加细节；2.你的想法必须在两个句子以上；3.词数：90左右，文章开头已给出(不计入总词数)。参考词汇：演讲比赛speechcontestIhaverecentlydoneasurveytoknowifstudentswouldliketojoinintheEnglishspeechcontest.Herearetheresults.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】IhaverecentlydoneasurveytoknowifstudentswouldliketojoinintheEnglishspeechcontest.Herearetheresults.Moststudentssurveyedwouldliketotakepartinthecontest.Theythinkitwillhelpthemimprovetheirspeakingskillsandbecomemoreconfident.Besides,theycanlearnfromothers.However,27%ofthestudentswon’tjoininthecontest.Someofthemarenotbraveenoughtospeakinpublic,whileothersareafraidthattheywillfail.What’smore,theyhavetospendalotoftimepracticing.Asforme,I’dliketojoininthecontest.Icanmakesomenewfriendsandchallengemyselfatthesametime.预测三【题目要求】某英语报开展“HowtoDealwithOurStudyProblems”征文比赛。请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:1.虽然我们时常感到压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解决压力。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；2.我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；3.也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡；4.任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会实现自己的梦想。5.有问题时，我们...要求1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数90个左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话HowtoDealwithOurStudyProblemsWestudentsalwayshavealotofproblemswithourschoolwork.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadviceisvaluable.【参考范文】Westudentsalwayshavealotofproblemswithourschoolwork.Althoughweoftenfeelstressed,weshouldfindsuitablewaystodealwithstress.Wecanwearcalmcolorslikeblueandwhitetomakeusfeelrelaxed.Weshouldbecarefulenoughbecause“amissisasgoodasamile”.Weshouldalsoachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.Trytoplanyoursparetimewell.I’msurewecandoalmostanythingifwenevergiveup.Moreover,wewillmakegreatprogressthroughhardwork.However,whenhavingproblems,wecanaskpeoplearoundusforhelp.It’snotwisetokeepourworriestoourselves.Ihopemyadviceisofgreatvalue.预测四【题目要求】给Mr.Know先生写一封信，关于你学校的规矩太多啦，比方说，必须穿校服，不能打耳洞，不能抽烟喝酒打架等。课堂上认真听课，不能迟到，不能乱丢垃圾，等等。不允许你做这个，不允许你们做那个，并提出你的看法。你认为你们应该被允许做一些事情，并希望得到他的帮助。要求：1.语言通顺、流畅。2.80词左右。3.可适当发挥。参考词汇：listentotheteachercarefully,keepeveryrule,breaktherule,weshouldbeallowedtodosomething,notjustbetoldtodoeverything.DearMr.Know,Ihavetoomanyrulesinmyschool.Ican’tstandit.SoIamwritingtoaskforhelp_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________FromastudentLiLei【参考范文】DearMr.Know,Ihavetoomanyrulesinmyschool.Ican’tstandit.SoIamwritingtoaskforhelp.Firstofall,Ican’teatfoodinclassandthrowlittereverywhere.Secondly,ImustlistentotheteachercarefullyandIhavetobequietinclass.ThenIcan'tbelateforclass,andIcan'tsmoke,drink,fightandsoon.ButIthinktheserulesarewhatImustfollowbecausetheyaregoodforus.What’smore,IhavetowearauniformandI'mnotallowedtopiercemyearsorfightwithmyclassmates.Oh,Idon’tlikethematall!Ineedyourhelp.Ithinkweshouldbeallowedtodosomething,notjustbetoldtodoeverything.FromastudentLiLei预测五【题目要求】关于学生减负的话题已经争论很长时间了，但是仍然不