2025年八省联考高考英语读后续写写作指导课件（含范文）

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judgeabookbyitscover.2025届八省联考读后续写的评分标准综述

评分:主要从续写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。1.创造情节的质量、续写的完整性及与原文情境的融洽度。2.词汇、语法的准确性、恰当性及多样性。3.上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。201解读文本写作步骤过滤出有效信息，把握文章要素。02缜密构思文章中心内容、段首句相结合。情节发展是主体，细节描写是关键。03打磨写作快速初步成稿，然后升级词汇与丰富句式，最后规范誊写。3读什么？情节(plots)语言(language)伏线(clues)41.解读文本，奠定续写基础who;when;where;what;why;how语言风格；体现主题事件或推动情节发展的keywords推动情节发展，体现主旨的句子。52.构思情节——依据两段首句推理情节发展（1）研读、翻译好两个段首句。两个段首句是重要的续写提示，在很大程度上指明了情节的发展方向。对段首句分析，可有效地推理续写的主要情节。（2）写好三个衔接句（3）写好升华句。关注与文章开头的遥相呼应（线索/意图），根据具体语境体现正能量。第一段段首句后的衔接句第一段尾句第二段段首句后的衔接句63.打磨写作*适当升级词汇、句式*在不影响主要情节的前提下，可合理地增加部分次要情节*可依据需要增加适当细节描写（环境，心理，外貌等）替换高级词汇、短语、句式表达使用adj/adv/with复合结构/非谓语/复合句等丰富表达使用积累的地道短语和名人名言注意不要添加新角色7阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段话。第一步：通读全文，理清脉络，把握语言特色和叙述风格。Iwas

in

Philadelphia

for

a

conference

when

I

saw

an

ad

in

thehotel.

A

nearby

theater

was

showing

a

documentary(纪录片)

aboutseveral

local

animal

shelters

that

were

helping

to

save

abandoneddogs

across

the

country.

I

love

animals,

and

I

felt

an

urge

to

go

tothis

fundraising

event.

However,

none

of

my

co-workers

would

gowith

me,

and

Iwas

worried

about

walking

on

the

street

alone

atnight.Iresigned

myself

to

spending

the

evening

in

my

hotelroom,

but

as

soon

as

Igot

back

to

my

room.I

felt

restless

andbored.The

theater

where

the

event

was

taking

place

wasonly

about

five

blocks

from

the

hotel,

and

the

area

around

thehotel

didn’t

seem

particularly

dangerous.

So,

I

decided

to

brave

it.Igathered

up

my

wallet

and

room

key

and

set

off.whenatthenightwherehoteltheater,InPhiladelphia（费城）why（起因）I,ananimal-lover,wantedtoseeadocumentaryaboutsavingdogsatanearbytheater,butnobodywentwithme.Consideringmysafety,Ishouldhavegivenupit.Butafteramentalstruggle,Idecidedtogoalone.8Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers——verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen-allwearinginsigniathatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub-standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?who:I(awoman);agroupofbikers(big;tough-looking面露凶狠的)空无一人的；废弃的环境描写；心理描写9AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.上文的环境描写和此处大量的心里描写，包括地点的变换，表现出主人公“I”一路上对这群“bikers”的紧张和害怕

。Where:从street到了theaterUsefulexpressions:neverthelessadv.然而insteadof代替；而不是bythetime到…时候

10第二步：依据首句，构思框架。Paragraph

1:

I

hurried

into

the

theater,

only

to

find

there

were

even

more

bikersinside.

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2:

When

the

film

began,

I

realized

that

the

bikers

were

an

animalrescue

group.

____________________________________________________我匆匆冲进剧院，却发现里面甚至有更多车手。当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。注意：（1）翻译完两个段首句可发现，误会是在第二段才解开，因此第一段续写内容不能写解开误会。（2）主人公的心理变化是提示写作的重要线索。11写好三个衔接句。Paragraph

1:

I

hurried

into

the

theater,

only

to

find

there

were

even

more

bikersinside.

___________________________________________

我匆匆冲进剧院，却发现里面甚至有更多车手。（1）第一段首句后的衔接句：_________________________________________________注意原文最后通过环境描写和心理描写，可以看出主人公已经非常害怕和紧张，觉得进入剧院更安全，但她进入剧院后看到更多的车手，此时她的心里应该是…Atthatmoment,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes,withmymindimmediatelygettingblankandmymouthopeningwide.With的复合结构，更进一步惊慌，到茫然无措。12写好三个衔接句。（2）第一段尾句（必须能和第二段首句合理衔接）：_________________________________________________Paragraph

2:

When

the

film

began,

I

realized

that

the

bikers

were

an

animalrescue

group.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。Afterawhile,thelightsinthetheaterdimmed,thecurtainopened,andthepeopleinthetheaterbecamequiet,whichmeantthatthemoviehadbegun.细节描写——灯光变暗；幕布拉开；人们安静；电影开场13写好三个衔接句。Paragraph

2:

When

the

film

began,

I

realized

that

the

bikers

were

an

animalrescue

group.当电影开始时，我意识到这些车手们是一个动物救援小组。（3）第二段首句后的衔接句：______________________________________________________第二段开头误会解开，本文以“I”的遭遇和心理感受并行展开，此处已有情节发展，那么我们的续写随之则应写…?Withofstartrecallinghowridiculousmyoverreactionhadbeeninstantlyhelpedmenolongerfeeldangerous.14写好结尾句：①结局性：________________________________________________________________________________②启示性：________________________________________________________________________________故事的结局，“I”作为一个喜爱小动物的人，发现了这样一个group,可能会捐款？加入？…？“I”前文一直以为bikers很可怕，因为他们big，toughlooking，结果却发现他们是爱护动物的好人，这说明?15Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Atthatmoment,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes,withmymindimmediatelygettingblankandmymouthopeningwide.SofrozenandstillatthetheatergatewasI,whichmadethebikersinsideallthrowcasttheirgazesonmethatIfeltnothingbutmyheartpoundingevenmorestrongly,completelyunawareofwhatactionIwouldadopt.Iwasnotsurehowmuchtimehadpassed,butonlygreetedbyeachofthebikercominginfromtheoutsidewhoIhadencounteredinthedesertedstreet.....Afterawhile,thelightsinthetheaterdimmed,thecurtainopened,andthepeopleinthetheaterbecamequiet,whichmeantthatthemoviehadbegun.我匆匆走进电影院，却发现里面还有更多骑机车的人。那一刻，我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛,我的脑海里顿时一片空白，嘴巴张得大大的。我一动不动地站在剧院门口，里面的车手们都向我投来异样的眼光，我只觉得我的心跳得更厉害了，完全不知道我将采取什么行动。我不知道时间过了多久,只看到我在空荡荡的街道上遇到的每一个从外面进来的车手都向我打招呼....不一会儿，剧院里的灯光变暗，幕布也随之拉开，剧场里的人也安静下来,这意味着电影开始了。16Whenthefilmbegan,|realizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Withofstartrecallinghowridiculousmyoverreactionhadbeeninstantlyhelpedmenolongerfeeldangerous.Naturally,bythelightfromthefilm,Ifoundaseatandsatnexttoatough-lookbiker.Afterashortconversationwithhim,Iexpressedmywisht