作文 10 吉林卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英语满分作文解析

作文10吉林卷2021年真题在线在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请以“SelfProtection”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。2.列举生活中的安全问题（至少两个方面），并分别提出合理化建议。3.发出自我保护的号召。写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。2.词数80-100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!考题解析【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“SelfProtection”为题写一篇关于自我保护的文章。题目已给出三个方面要点提示，学生应对几个要点进行叙述。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用一般现在时或在叙述过去发生的事情时用过去时。文章包含三个要点提示，第一个是结合生活实际来讲述自我保护的重要性，第二个是关于自我保护的一些建议，第三个是号召大家进行自我保护。文章应要点齐全，层次分明，条理清楚，不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。满分范文SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.Asstudents,wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedgoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough,wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Also,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Thesethreesuggestionsaregoodforustoprotectourselves.Weshouldadoptthesesuggestionstoprotectourselves.Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!2020年1．请以"ASpeechattheNationalFlagRaisingCeremony"为题，根据以下要点与要求，用英语写一篇国旗下的发言稿。要点：1.讲述一件事；2.写出你的感受。要求：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；2.不少于80词。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ASpeechattheNationalFlagRaisingCeremonyHelloeveryone,Iamhonorabletogivethespeechatthenationalflagraisingceremony.Iwatchedthenationalflagraisingceremonyonthemorning,markingthe68thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople'sRepublicofChina.IwassoexcitedandproudthatIalmostcried.WatchingthenationalflagraisingceremonyattheTian’anmenSquareonthecountry'sbirthdayhasbeenawayofChinesecelebratingtheNationalDay.Somejoinedthegatheringforsight-seeing,andotherscametoexpressthefeelingofpatriotism.Atthatmoment,ItookprideinmyselfasaChineseandwassurprisedattherapiddevelopmentofourcountry.Thanksforyourlistening.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿。要求将题目要求叙述清楚，写一篇国旗下的发言稿。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，在写作时第一段主要叙述自己观看升旗仪式的经历并表达自己的感受；第二段感谢大家收听。写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、语意完整。2．假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。内容包括：1.列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响；2.提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议；3.发出争做文明中学生的号召。写作要求：1.词数80—100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名；3.可以适当发挥。Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Nowadays,peoplecaremoreaboutourgrades.Infact,goodbehaviorisasimportantasgoodgrades.However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ibelievewe'llbebetterstudentsaslongaswebehaveourselves.That'sall.Thanksforlistening.【答案】例文一：Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Nowadays,peoplecaremoreaboutourgrades.Infact,goodbehaviorisasimportantasgoodgrades.However,somebadbehaviorcanbeseenaroundus.Forexample,somestudentsthrowrubbisheverywhere,whichmakestheenvironmentworseandworse.Somestudentsarealwaysshoutingbackangrilytotheirparentsgraduallytherelationsbetweenthemhavebecomedifficult.Howcanwebehavewell?First,Ithinkweshouldbepoliteandkindtoothers.Bereadytohelpothersinneed.Second,trytobehonestandkeeppromises.Themostimportantthingistofollowtherulesatschoolorinpublic.Let'spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.Ibelievewe'llbebetterstudentsaslongaswebehaveourselves.That'sall.Thanksforlistening!例文二：Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Nowadays,peoplecaremoreaboutourgrades.Infact,goodbehaviorisasimportantasgoodgrades.However,wecanhearsomestudentstalkloudlyonthebus.What'sworse,somestudentssmokeinpublicplaces.Thesemaymakeothersuncomfortableandsmokingisharmfultopeople'shealthtobebetterstudents.Weshouldthinkofothersandkeepthevoicedowninpublic.Andweshouldfollowthetrafficrulestomakesurewearesafe.Besides,weshouldtrytobehoneststudentsandweshouldn'tlietoothers.Let'spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.Ibelievewe'llbebetterstudentsaslongaswebehaveourselves.That'sall.Thanksforlistening.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响，提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议并发出争做文明中学生的号召。2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述争做文明中学生的建议分成三点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：caremoreabout;infact;forexample;throwrubbish;shoutingback;behavewell;inneed;tryto;keeppromises;followtherules;pulltogether;takeaction;fromnowon；what'sworse;isharmfulto;thinkof;keepthevoicedown;inpublic;makesure;lieto。句型：Ithink…宾语从句；which引导的定语从句；aslongas引导的条件状语从句；weshoulddo表示建议的句子。2019年3．提问是获取知识、形成能力的重要途径之一。请以“KnowledgeComesfromQuestioning”为题，结合你的一次经历，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。(文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)KnowledgeComesfromQuestioning【答案】例文KnowledgeComesfromQuestioningItiswellknownthatquestioninginoneofthemostimportantwaystolearnknowledgeanddevelopabilitieswhichprovestrulyinmyexperiencelastyear.Onedaylastspring,myfatherandIwentouttoflyakite.Withthestringinhand,myfatherstartedtoflythekite.Soon,itwashighupinthesky.Iwonderedifitcouldflyhigherwithoutthestring.SoIcutthestring.Suddenly,thekitebegantogohigh.However,afterawhile,tomysurprise,thekitewascomingdownandfellontothegrassfinally.Ifeltupsetandasked,"Ithoughtthataftercuttingthestring,thekitewouldflyhigher.Whydiditfalldown?""Myfatheranswered,"Thestringwasnotstoppingthekitefromlyinghigher,buthelpingitstayinthesky,becausethekiteitselfcan'tflyup.Itistheairthatmakesitfly.Byusingthestring,youhelpthekitegoupintherightdirection.Whenyoucutthestring,itcouldnotsupportthekite.""That'sit!"Icriedwithjoy.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnednewknowledgebyquestioning.Howwonderfulitwas!【详解】1.题干解读：提问是获取知识、形成能力的重要途径之一。请以“KnowledgeComesfromQuestioning”为题，结合你的一次经历，这是一篇叙事的作文。2.例文点评：根据题目要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：短语：oneofthemostimportantwaystolearnknowledgeanddevelopabilities；wentouttoflyakite.；romthenon；dayafterday；dependon；comefrom。句型：Iwonderedif加从句；becausethekiteitselfcan'tflyup.；Byusingthestring,youhelpthekitegoupintherightdirection.Whenyoucutthestring,itcouldnotsupportthekite.""That'sit!"Icriedwithjoy.。三、书信作文4．假如你是李华，想参加ChinaDaily举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr.Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括：1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划写作要求；1.词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。DearMr.Smith,It'smypleasuretointroducemyselftoyou.Idohopetojoinintheactivityandlookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!YoursSincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMr．Smith，It'smypleasuretointroducemyselftoyou．MynameisLiHua．Ilikereadingandwriting．Ispendlotsoftimereadinginthelibrarywithmyclassmatesafterschool．AndIhaveahabitofkeepingadairy．Iwanttobeawriterwhen