作文05 福建卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英语满分作文解读+素材积累

作文05福建卷2021年福建中考英语书面表达假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“EnglishDay”活动，请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。NumberofParticipants(参加者)EnglishDayTime:2:00p.m.-4:30p.m.June18thPlace:IntheschoolhallLearningbyDoing*SingingCompetition*CookingShow*Storytelling,Joinus!注意事项：1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。OurSchoolEnglishDayOurschoolEnglishDaywasagreatsuccess.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OurSchoolEnglishDayOurschoolEnglishDaywasagreatsuccess.Ittookplaceintheschoolhallfrom2:00p.m.to4:30p.m.onJune18th.Threeactivitieswereincluded.Halfofusstudentstookpartinthesingingcompetition.30%ofuswenttothecookingshow.Andtherestofusenjoyedourselvesinthestorytelling.WespokehighlyoftheEnglishDay.Welearntalotthroughpractice.Italsomadeuscometorealizetheimportanceofteamwork.Wehopetherewillbemorecolorfulactivitiesinourschool.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周开展的英语日的活动情况。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段介绍活动的地点和时间；第二段介绍学生参加活动的情况；最后一段介绍这个活动给同学们带来的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。2020年福建中考英语书面表达假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。DearDavid,I'mpleasedtoknowthatyou'reinterestedinChinesemedicine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearDavid,I'mpleasedtoknowthatyou'reinterestedinChinesemedicine.Now,I'dliketosharewithyousomeinformationaboutTraditionalChineseMedicineDayinourschool,whichisgoingtotakeplaceonJuly31,2020.Onthatday,afamousdoctorwillgiveusatalkonChinesemedicine.Andtherewillbeashowaboutitsdevelopment.Also,thefilmLiShizhenwillbeon.I'msuretheactivitieswouldbeveryhelpfultoyou.Ihopeyoucanvisitwww.intelschool.comandhaveabetterunderstandingoftraditionalChinesemedicine.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，并说明推荐理由。2.例文点评：本文主要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。3.高分亮点：短语：sharewithsbaboutsth与某人分享某事；takeplace举行；behelpfultosb对某人有帮助。句子：therewillbeashowaboutitsdevelopment句中用的是therebe句型；I'msuretheactivitieswouldbeveryhelpfultoyou句中由that引导的宾语从句，引导词that已省略。2019年福建中考英语书面表达假定你是李华，收到英国笔友Harry的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数80左右。DearLiHua,I’mgladtotellyouthatI’vejustwonthethefirstplaceinarobot-makingcompetition.Iloverobots!Theybringmegreatfun.Whatdoyothinkofrobots?Doyouwanttohaveyourownrobot?Why?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,参考词汇：congratulation祝贺注意事项：1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。DearHarry,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHuaDearharryCongratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways.Andinthefuturethey’llplaymoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.Plus,I’mdyingtohavearobotofmyown.Icanhaveittakecareofmygrandparentswhenwearenotathome.Yousee,mygrandparentsareoldandcannotmoveeasily.Itcanhelpthemdosomehouseworksuchascooking,cleaningthehouseandsoon.【详解】本文属于应用文体，就英国笔友哈利在机器人制作比赛中获奖写一封回信。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如playrolesin,dailylife,bedyingto,takecareof,helpsbdo,suchas,andsoon以及howgladIam中how引导的感叹句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。2018年福建中考英语书面表达假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry对武术感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节，感受中华武术文化。词数80左右。TimeJuly7to9,2018ActivitiesCompetitions,showsHistoryofWushuThousandsofyearsBenefits（益处）ofWushu…注意事项：1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。参考词汇：practiceWushu练武DearHenry,IamgladthatyouareinterestedinWushu.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearHenry,IamgladthatyouareinterestedinWushu.HereI’vegotgoodnewsforyou.ThefirstWushufestivalofourschoolisgoingtobeheldfromJuly7to9,2018.I’dliketoinviteyoutothefestival.YoucanwatchmanyWushucompetitionsandenjoywonderfulshows.ChineseWushuhasahistoryofthousandsofyears.PracticingWushuisagoodwaytoimproveourhealth.Besides,ithelpsustodevelopstrongwills.Mostofuslikeitverymuch.IhopeyouwillcomeandexperienceChineseWushuculture.Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.YoursLiHua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据图表提示，介绍武术节的时间、内容、武术的历史以及练习武术的益处等。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成时。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。2017年福建中考英语书面表达你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ中给他留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡福建，词数80左右。要求：1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。Hi，John,I’mgladtohearthatyou'replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I'dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit.Fujianlies__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!Hi，John,I'mgladtohearthatyou’replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I，dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit,FujianliesinthesoutheastofChinawithFuzhouasitscapitalcity.Ithasapopulationofover38million.Becauseoftheniceenvironment,it’sknownasRefreshingFujian,whichattractsmillionsoftouristsfromhomeandabroad.Ifyoucome,youcanenjoyfreshair,blueskyaswellasbeautifulmountainsandclearrivers.ManyfamousplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyiandGulangIslandarewellworthvisiting.Besides，youcantastevariouskindsofdeliciousfood.I'mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!【解析】这是一篇看图作文。根据图示可知主要介绍福建省的位置，省会城市，人口，名胜，环境及其他的相关内容。根据内容可知主要采用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致性。在组成文章时注意语言的逻辑性，词汇要合适丰富。这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了一般现在时，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章中高分作文比较多，如：Becauseoftheniceenvironment，it'sknownasRefreshingFujian．句中使用短语有："becauseof因为"、"beknownas作为…而著名"．Ifyoucome，youcanenjoyfreshair，blueskyaswellasbeautifulmountainsandclearrivers．句中"Ifyoucome"为条件状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。3.检查核实，确保无误。中考作文素材中考英语作文考查学生综合语言运用能力，分值比重大。考生根据提示信息（图片或文字），运用所学词汇、句型和语法知识针对目标话题进行语言输出（书面表达）。

建议考生在日常学习中做好以下三点：1、积累相关话题的好词佳句（建立作文素材本）。2、至少每一周写一篇作文，达到训练常规化。（学以致用）3、注重让老师指导修改，反复推敲，打磨完善。（精益求精写作标准（一档作文20字方针）要点齐全，通顺连贯，语言丰富，表达准确，卷面整洁。写作布局（三段文10句）开头（1—2句）；正文（6—8句）；结尾（1—2句）写作步骤（五部曲）审题—构思—草稿—修改—抄写审题五要素：人称，时态，格式，内容，字数。经典连词作用：使文章有整体性、连贯性.连词分为并列连词和从属连词并列连词的作用连接具有并列关系的词、短语或句子，常见的并列连词有4种：表示联合关系的连词：and和both…and………和……都notonly…butalso…不仅……而且……neither…nor…既不……也不……，两者都不；aswellas也注意：both…and…连接并列短语时，谓语动词要用复数。notonly…butalso…连接并列主语时，谓语动词遵循就近原则。neither…nor…连接并列主语时，谓语动词也遵循就近原则。表示选择关系的连词：or或者否则either…or…要么……要么……，或者…或者…（它连接并列主语时，谓语动词符合就近原则）whether…or…是……还是……ratherthan而不是表示转折关系的连词：but但是while然而（表示对比）however然而（4）表示因果关系的并列连词：so因此for因为2、从属连词的作用：引导从句（1）引导时间状语的连词：when当……的时候while当……的时候as当……的时候assoonas一……就……after在……以后before在……之前since自从……until直到……when从句后的谓语动词可以是瞬间动词也可以是延续性动词；while从句后的谓语动词必须是延续性动作；当主句是一般将来时或祈使句时，且表示一般将来时的意义，assoonas引导的从句用一般现在时表将来，即符合“主将从现”结构。（2）引导条件状语从句的从属连词：if如果unless除非，如果…不… if引导的条件状语从句，当主句是一般将来时或祈使句时，从句用一般现在时态表将来，即遵循“主将从现”原则。（3）引导原因状语从句的从属连词：because、since、as（因为）这三个词所表示的语气由because到as逐渐减弱。但回答由why提问的句子，只能用because来回答。because和so不能同时使用。（4）引导目的状语从句的从属连词：sothat,inorderthat以便，为了……（5）引导结果状语从句的从属连词：so…that…，such…that…如此…以至于…两者的区别如下：so+形容词/副词+thateg.ThisboxissohearythatIcan’tcarryit.such+a/an+形容词+名词单数+thateg.It’ssuchaheavyboxthatnobodycancarryit.such+形容词+名词复数/不可数名词+thateg.It’ssuchgoodadvicethatI’llacceptit.so+形容词+a/an+名词单数+thateg.Sheissolovelyagirlthatwealllikeher.（6）引导让步状语从句的从属连词：though/although虽然，尽管evenif/eventhough即使though/although引导的从句不能与but连用。（7）引导宾语从句的连词：that.if/whether是否when什么时候why为什么where在哪里（8）引导定语从句的从属连词：thatwhowhichwhomwhenwherewhy和whose中考英语背好句人物介绍1)外貌Heusedtobethin,butlookhowbigandstrongheisnow！Myfatherisatallmanwithapairofglasses.HehasthemostbeautifulblueeyesIhaveeverseen.I'mnotverytallandIhavecurlyhairthatlookslikeblackwaves2)性格特征Iknowshecaresaboutmebecauseshe'salwaystheretolisten.Mr.Liisstrictaboutourstudies,buthealwaysencouragesusandgivesussupport.Heissokindthatheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Nomatterwhoaskshimforhelp,heisalwayswarm­heartedandgenerous.Shestudieshardandalwaysgetsgoodgrades,butshenevertakesprideinherself.Helenissofriendlythatallherclassmateslikeherverymuch.Nomatterwhathappens,myfatherisalwayscalm.3）个人喜好IlikewatchingthenewsbecauseIhopetofindoutwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld.Oneofmyfavouriteclotheswassentbymyfriend.Thisnotebookremindsmeoflotsofwonderfultime.Thismodelplanealwaysremindsmeoftheloveandcarefrommygrandpa.Myhobbyisstudyingstars.Ifinditveryinteresting.Davidhasbeenveryluckybecausehishobbyhasbroughthimpleasureandsuccess.I'mseriousaboutrunning.Itcanmakemehealthierandstronger.Iamveryfondofsinginganddancing,andinmysparetimeIoftenlistentoEnglishsongs.IcansinganddancesowellthatIoftengiveperformancesatourschoolparties.介绍个人梦想及如何实现梦想Everyonehasdreams.Butyou'dbetterthinkaboutwhatyoushoulddotomakeyourdreamscometrue.MydreamistobeanEnglishteacher.ThereasonisthatIwanttoteachthestudentsknowledgeandhelpthemsucceedinthefuture.Inmyopinion,thedreamwillbeturnedintoreality(现实)oneday.Iwanttobeapilot,butIknowtherearemanychallenges.介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感恩之情Thankstoyourkindnessandconsideration,I'vemaderapidprogressinEnglishstudy.Wearetrulygratefultoyouforwhatyouhavedoneforus.IwanttogivemysincerethankstoyouforcheeringmeupandhelpingmeoutwheneverIhavedifficulties.Iamtrulygratefultomyparentsfortheloveandsupporttheyhavegivenme.介绍个人优势或特殊之处Hehastheabilitytoorganizethecompany,andeverythingisingreatorder.Notonlydoesheworkhardbutalsoheisgoodatplayingbasketball.Mysisterhasmoreexperienceonhowtoplaytheviolinwell.闲暇活动介绍周末活动与感受OnSaturdaymorning,wewenttoabigfarmwherewelearnedaboutteaprocessing.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendmoretimeinreadingbooksinsteadofplayingcomputergames.Inaword,itwasreallyanunforgettableandmeaningfultripforus.介绍业余生活Whileothermembersinmyfamilygooutonweekends,Iprefertoreadsomegoodbooksathome.AlthoughI'mbusywithmylessons,mysparetimeisstillcolorful.Inmyfree/sparetime,Iliketolearnsomeaboutdifferentformsofart.It'sagoodwaytodevelopmyabilitytoenjoythebeauty.校园生活介绍校园课程Thenat9:00Ihavescience.Itisdifficultbutinteresting.Myfavouritesubjectsaregeographyandmath.Icangetthemostpointsineveryexam.OurschoolstartsateightinthemorningfromMondaytoFriday校园活动及兴趣小组Schoolactivitiescannotonlymakeourlifecolorfulbutalsoletusrelax.Therearemanykindsofout­of­classactivitiesinourschool,suchasballgames,playingchess,singingandsoon.Hehasbecomemoreoutgoingandmadesomegoodfriendsinschool.Inthefirstyear,Ididn'tworkveryhardinclass,butIjoinedmanydifferentschoolclubsandhadalotoffun.介绍学校基本情况Myschoolisverybeautiful,andtherearesomeshopsaroundit.Infrontofthedininghallisthesportshallandthebuildinginfrontofthatisforscience.It'sveryluckyforustohavesuchagoodlearningenvironment.假期与旅游.介绍假期活动Ireadsomegoodbookstoopenupmymind.I'lltakepartinsomevolunteeractivitiesbecauseIcans