作文17湖南卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英语满分作文解读 素材积累

作文17湖南卷2021年湖南中考英语书面表达最近,你班召开了一次以“WhatAreGoodParentsLike?”为主题的班会。请你综合以下同学的观点，并发表你自己的看法，写一篇短文，向学校校刊投稿。要求：(1)80词左右（标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数）；(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。SamGoodparentsareunderstanding.Theyneverpushustoohardwhenwegetpoorgrades.Myparentsaresupportive.Theyalwaysbringoutthebestinme.BobAmyGoodparentsarelikestarsinthesky.Sometimeswecan’tseethem,buttheyarealwaysthere.WhatAreGoodParentsLike?Recentlywehavehadalivelydiscussionaboutwhatgoodparentsarelike.Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhatAreGoodParentsLike?Recentlywehavehadalivelydiscussionaboutwhatgoodparentsarelike.Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.Samthinksgoodparentsareunderstanding.Theyneverpushustoohardwhenwegetpoorgrades.Bobsaysgoodparentsalwaysbringoutthebestinus.Amyagreesthatgoodparentsarelikestarsinthesky.Sometimeswecan’tseethem,buttheyarealwaysthere.Inmyopinion,goodparentsshouldbegoodteachersaswellasgoodfriendsofus.Theyshouldalsosetgoodexamplesforus.

【详解】1.题干解读：文章要求以“WhatAreGoodParentsLike?”为题写一篇作文，谈谈好父母是什么样的，综合已给出的同学们的观点并发表自己的观点，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和第一人称相结合，使用一般现在时讲述大家的观点，要做到概括全面、语句通顺，无单词拼写和语法错误。2020年湖南中考英语书面表达在日常学习和生活中,我们经常需要与人合作（cooperate）。假设你是李华,请你就如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括：（1）合作的技巧（如耐心倾听,礼貌建议……）；（2）合作的意义（如相互学习……）。要求：（1）80词左右（标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数）；（2）可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。BeaGreatPartnerHello,everyone!Asweallknow,cooperationisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BeaGreatPartnerHello,everyone!Asweallknow,cooperationisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.Thosewhocancooperatewithotherswellarecalledgreatpartners,sothequestionremains:howcanwebeagreatpartner?

Therearecertaintechniqueswecanlearntohelptobebetter.Firstofall,weshouldalwayslistentootherspatientlyandcarefully.Onlybylisteningcanweunderstandourteammembersandbemoreeffective.Inthemeantime,weshouldalwaysbepolitewhenwegiveadvice.That’showweshowrespectandit’stheonlywaywecanmakeprogress.Bycooperatingwithotherpeople,wecanimproveourcommunicationskills.Bycooperatingwithotherpeople,wecanlearnaboutnewperspectivestowardsthings.Bycooperatingwithotherpeople,wecanmakeprogressinboththeprojectandself-improvement.Thankyouforyourlistening.【详解】1.题干解读：该书面表达主要围绕如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。2.例文点评：本文采用四段式，第一段开篇引出如何成为优秀的合作者；第二段是合作的技巧；第三段是合作的意义；第四段以感谢结尾。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，条例清晰。多种句式交替使用，使文章增色不少。3.高分亮点：短语：asweallknow；beofgreatimportance；cooperatewith；firstofall；listentosb.；inthemeantime；makeprogress；learnabout；both…and…；thanksb.forsth.。句型：as引导的非限制性定语从句；who引导的限制性定语从句；how特殊疑问句；that（可省略）引导的限制性定语从句；only位于句首的倒装句；when引导的时间状语从句；Bycooperatingwithotherpeople…排比句。2019年湖南中考英语书面表达假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。要求：（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.It'snoteasybeinginyoursituation,andit'snormaltohavethesefeelings.Anyway,don'tbetoohardonyourself.Youknow,basketballisaboutteameffort.It'sneverjustoneperson'sfault.Whatmattersisthatyoushouldlearnfromthegamesaswellasyourmistakes.Besides,youneedtothinkabouthowyoucandobetternexttime.Asawhole,teammatesshouldsupportandbelieveineachother.Whydon'tyousitdownandcommunicatewiththem?Andyoucouldpromisethatyouwillsparenoeffortstobetteryourskills.Ifallofyoupulltogether,you'resuretowinthenextone.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【详解】这是一篇给材料的书信作文。假如你是李华，就输球事件安慰Henry，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。人称为第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，补充两条个人的观点并提出建议。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型一：Whatmattersisthatyoushouldlearnfromthegamesaswellasyourmistakes.重要的是你应该从比赛中吸取教训，也要从错误中吸取教训。Whatmattersisthat重要的是，that引导的是表语从句。aswellas常用来连接两个并列的成分，作“也，还”讲。高分句型二：Andyoucouldpromisethatyouwillsparenoeffortstobetteryourskills.你可以保证你会不遗余力地提高你的技能。that引导的是宾语从句，sparenoeffortstodosth.不遗余力做某事。高分句型三：Ifallofyoupulltogether,you'resuretowinthenextone.如果大家齐心协力，你们一定会赢得下一场比赛。此句是if引导的条件状语从句；besuretodosth.必定做某事。2018年湖南中考英语书面表达假如你是李华，于4月13日星期五这一天参加了学校组织的郊游活动.请你以schooltrip为主题，写一则英文日记，内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等.要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名.Friday，April13thItwassunnytoday.Wewentonaschooltrip.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowinghisrubbishinthepublicplace.Theotherwomanisstoppinghimandtellinghimtoputitintothedustbin.Thecityisourhome.Weshouldprotectit.Therefore,whenweseesomeonelitterlikethis,weshouldactlikethewoman.Theenvironmentshouldbeprotectedbyeverybody.Weshouldbecivilizedcitizens.【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如inthepicture，inthepublicplace，theotherwoman，putitintothedustbin，likethis。而Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture./Weshouldprotectit./Weshouldbecivilizedcitizens.等多种情态动词句式itisimportantforeveryonetoprotectthem.的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2017年湖南中考英语书面表达为了庆祝同学们顺利毕业和感谢老师的辛勤培育，你班将于下周五晚上在教室举行毕业晚会（graduation party）．假如你是班长李华，请你就晚会的活动安排、需要协助的具体事项等给全班同学写一个邀请函．

要求：

（1）注意邀请函的写作特点；

（2）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名．

Dear classmates,

How time flies!It's time to say good-bye.

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I'm looking forward to hearing from you all!

Yours,

Li Hua.Dearclassmates,

Howtimeflies!It'stimetosaygood-bye.Thegraduationdayisjustaroundthecorner.Youknow,wedovalueourschooltime.Wehavehadgreattimeheresharingourjoysandsadness.Inordertocelebrateourgraduationandexpressourheartfeltthankstotheteachers'hardwork,weareplanningtoholda

graduationpartyinourclassroomat7：00p.m.nextFriday.（举行毕业派对的原因和时间地点）【高分句型一】Atthepartywe'lldosomesinging,dancingandguessinggames.Besides,we'lltakesomephotostohelprememberthesweetmoment.（派对内容）

Isitpossibleforyoutocometotheparty？Ifyouareavailable,canyouhelpwithanyofthesethings？Pleaseletmeknowassoonasyouhavedecided.【高分句型二】

（1）Thingsofgamestoplay.

（2）Preparethingslikeballoonsweneedforgames.

（3）Buyfoodanddrinks.（需要协助的具体事项）

I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyouall!                                                                                                            

Yours,

                                                                          LiHua.【解析】高分句型：句型一：Inordertocelebrateourgraduationandexpressourheartfeltthankstotheteachers'hardwork,weareplanningtoholdagraduationpartyinourclassroomat7：00p.m.nextFriday.为了庆祝我们的毕业，并向老师们的辛勤工作表示衷心的感谢．我们计划在下周五晚上7点在我们的教室举行毕业派对．Inordertodosth为了做某事thankstosb谢谢某人plantodosth计划打算做某事句型二：Pleaseletmeknowassoonasyouhavedecided.一旦你决定了，请告诉我．assoonas一…就…中考英语背好句计划与安排活动计划与安排Wearegoingtotheoldpeople'shomeonFriday.MyfamilywouldliketogotoBeijingtovisitthePalaceMuseum.Wedecidetoclimbthemountainattheendofthisterm.新学年计划I'lltakepartinsomeafter­classactivitiestomakemorenewfriends.It'simportanttodevelopgoodstudyinghabits.Forexample,wecanaskteachersforhelpifwehaveanyproblemsonoursubjects.I'mgoingtodomoreexercise.Itcanhelpmetogrowstrongerandstayawayfromillness.Iwilllistentotheteacherverycarefullyinclassbecausetheteacherwillexplaintheproblemsveryclearly.行为规范如何做文明中学生Remembernottothrowrubbishhereandthereindailylife.Suchbadmannersaswastingfoodshouldberemovedfromourschool.You'dbetternottalkbacktoyourparentsandteachers.介绍公共场所的文明行为Wearesupposedtohelpotherswhoareintroubleinsteadoftroublingtheminpublic.Weshouldwaitinlineanddon'tpushwhilewaitingforabus.Whenwegoouttoeatinarestaurant,wearenotexpectedtospeakloudlyorwastefood.We'dbettercommunicatewithotherspolitelyandhelpthosewhoareinneed.It'snecessaryforallofusnottospitanywhere.介绍校规及对校规的建议Studentsarenotallowedtospeakloudlyinclass.Wehavetohandinourhomeworkontime.Weshouldfollowtheserules:Don'teatintheclassroom.Don'trunaftereachotherorfightwithothersinandoutsidetheschool.It'sarulethatstudentsshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlytoclassmatesinourschool.Theserulescannotonlymakesureofoursafetybutalsocreateagoodlearningenvironmentforus.节假日活动传统节日基本信息TheSpringFestival,theChineseNewYear,fallsonthefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonth,andendsonthefifteenthday.TheDragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChinesecalendar.Mother'sDayisonthesecondSundayofMay.Itisatimetoshowourlovetoourmothers.TheLanternFestival,atraditionalfestivalinChina,fallsonthefifteenthdayofthefirstmonthoftheChineselunarcalendar.TheDoubleNinthFestival,animportantfestivalinChina,iscelebratedeachyearontheninthdayofSeptemberaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.TheMid­AutumnFestivalisonthefifteenthdayofAugustinlunarcalendar.Itisatimeforthefamilytogettogetherandcelebratetheharvest.庆祝传统节日的方式及活动Nomatterwherevertheyare,peoplecomehometocelebratethefestivalwiththeirfamilies.WhentheLanternFestivaldrawsnear,Chinesepeopletakepartinallkindsofactivities,likesinginganddancing.OntheLanternFestival,weoftenwatchlanternshowsanddragondancestomakewishesforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear.Amongallthefestivals,theSpringFestivalismyfavouriteone,becauseIcangetluckymoneyfrommyparentsandrelatives.OntheEveoftheNewYear,thewholefamilygettogetherandhaveabigdinnertowelcomethecomingnewyear.谈论节日的意义及感受TheSpringFestivalisatimeforfamilytostaytogether,whichhasaspecialmeaningtoeveryoneofus.Traditionalfestivalsareapartofculture,soIbelieveitiseveryone'sdutytopassthemon.环境保护目前的环境问题Ourenvironmentischangingfortheworse.Itistimeforustogogreen.Theriverwasreallydirty.Eventhebottomoftheriverwasfullofrubbish.Somepeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere,andwecanevenseerubbishinthesea.如何保护环境Tocutdownairpollutionweshouldtakethebusorsubwayinsteadofdriving.Wecanreduceairpollutionbyridingbicycles.Weshouldseparatewasteintodifferentgroupssothatitcanberecycled.It'sbetterforustoputrubbishintorubbishbinssothatwecankeepourcitycleanandtidy.保护环境的意义Sotogether,ouractionscanmakeadifferenceandleadtoabetterfuture.Natureisourgreatesttreasure.Wedependonitsrichresourcestolive,soitisimportantforustoprotectitwisely.Protectingenvironmentwillbenotonlygoodforourhuman'shealth,butalsogoodforanimals.Ifeveryoneplaysapartinprotectingtheenvironment,ouractionscanmakeadifferenceandcreateabetterfuture.中考英语作文分类好词好句1.学校生活及学习成绩putone’sheartinto…一心扑在…上befondof…喜欢/爱好……makeprogressin…在……方面取得进步begettingonwellwithone’sstudy（某人）学业进展得很好workhardat…努力学习liveuptoone’shope不辜负某人的期望beactiveinclass（work）在课堂上（工作中）表现积极takeanactivepartin…积极参加……learnsth.byheart谙记某事，牢记在心workoutaproblem解决一个问题improveoneselfin…在某方面提高自己haveagoodcommandof…精通……layagoodfoundationin（languagestudy）在（语言学习）方面奠定一个好的基础2.师生关系getonwellwithsb.与某人相处得很好raiseaquestion提问liketobewithstudents喜欢与学生相处begentlewithus对我们很友善bestrictwithone’spupils对学生要求严格bestrictinwork对工作要求严格helpsb.withsth.用……帮助某人praisesb.forsth.由于某事赞扬某人blamesb.forsth.为（某事）责备某人givesb.adviceonsth.在方面给某人建议besatisfiedwith…对……满意develo