作文21 辽宁卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英语满分作文解读+素材积累

作文21辽宁卷2021年辽宁中考英语书面表达美好生活，健康同行。如何丰富校园生活，促进同学们的身心健康？目前，你校英语网站"VOICEOFTEENS"正在征集同学们的建议。请你结合自己的经历和感受，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享你的建议。要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；（3）词数80词左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Healthisthebaseofeverything.Thenhowcanwekeephealthy？Thefollowingtipsmayhelpyoutoreachthis.First，eathealthilyandregularly.Eathealthilymeanshavingabalanceddiet，whichincludesmeat，fish，chicken，duck，vegetablesandfruit.【高分句型一】Youshouldhavevariouskindsoffoodratherthanfocusonsomeparticularone.Eatregularlymeansyoushouldeatonfixedtimeandmissnoneofthemeals.Second，exerciseeveryday.Exercisecanhelpgrowstrongandkeepillnessaway.Third，haveenoughsleep.Onemayeasilygetsickwithoutenoughsleep.（经历）Followingthesetips，youwillsurelybeingoodhealth.【高分句型二】（感受）【分析】【高分句型一】Eathealthilymeanshavingabalanceddiet，whichincludesmeat，fish，chicken，duck，vegetablesandfruit.健康饮食意味着饮食均衡，包括肉、鱼、鸡、鸭、蔬菜和水果。定语从句【高分句型二】Followingthesetips，youwillsurelybeingoodhealth.遵循这些建议，你一定会健康。条件状语从句【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。2020年辽宁中考英语书面表达人生的道路上我们总会因为遇到各种问题而感到烦恼，越是烦恼时越需要用积极、乐观的心态去面对。假如你是初三学生李华，收到了笔友Paul的来信，在信中他提到了自己生活中的烦恼，并想知道你的类似经历。请你用英语写一封回信，结合你自己的生活经历谈谈你对烦恼的认识，并给予他鼓励。内容提示：（1）Talkaboutyourproblem.（2）Givehimencouragement.要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。（3）词数80词左右，信的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPaul，Ireallyunderstandyou.Infact，everyonehasproblemsinhisorherlife.SodoI.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Ihopethisishelpful.Haveaniceday!Love，LiHuaDearPaul，Ireallyunderstandyou.Infact，everyonehasproblemsinhisorherlife.SodoI.IamsorrytoknowyouarguedwithyourmotheraboutwhetheryoushouldsurftheInternet.HereIamwritingtoexpressmyopinionsandgiveyousomeadvice.（点题）Ihadasimilarexperiencetoyours.Iusedtobe crazy abouttheInternet.Ithasseriouslyaffectedmylifeandstudy.（我的问题）Asisknowntoall，surfingtheInternetisagoodwaytorelaxourselvesandincreaseourknowledge.What'smore，wheneverwehavedifficultywithourhomework，wecangoonlineforhelp.【高分句型一】However，manyofussometimescannotstopusingtheInternetbecausetheyhavesomuchfunsurfingit.【高分句型二】Butitisveryharmfultooureyesightifwespendtoomuchtimeonitanditisawasteoftimeifwejustuseitforfun.（多上网的认识）SoIhopeyoucanreachanagreementwithyourmother.MaybeyoucansurftheInternetonweekends，whileonweekdaysyouneedtofocusonstudyandkeepawayfromit.Whydon'tyousitdownandhaveacommunicationwithyourmother？I'msureyou'llgetalongwell.（建议和鼓励）Ihopethisishelpful.Haveaniceday!Yours，LiHua【分析】【高分句型一】What'smore，wheneverwehavedifficultywithourhomework，wecangoonlineforhelp.还有，每当我们的家庭作业有困难时，我们可以上网寻求帮助。whenever无论何时，引导时间状语从句。havedifficultywithsth.做某事有困难。【高分句型二】However，manyofussometimescannotstopusingtheInternetbecausetheyhavesomuchfunsurfingit.然而，我们中的许多人有时无法停止使用互联网，因为他们上网很有趣。because因为，引导时间状语从句。stopdoingsth.停止做某事。havefundoingsth.做某事有趣。【点评】提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作．这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定．因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏．2019年辽宁中考英语书面表达在我们的生活中，规则无处不在，从个人、家庭、班级、校园到公共场所……规则时时约束着我们的言行举止．你认为遵守规则有必要吗？为什么？近日，你校英文网站正在开展以"Isitnecessarytofollowrules？"为主题的大讨论．请你写一篇英文短文，结合你的经历和感受，谈谈你的看法．内容提示：（1）Isitnecessarytofollowrules？（2）Shareyourexperienceandfeeling．要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；（3）词数80左右．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therearemanyrulesinourlife，suchasfamilyrules，trafficrules，schoolrules，andsoon．Butisitnecessarytofollowrules？【高分句型一】Ithinktheanswerisyes．（我的观点）Takemyselfforexample．WhenIwasfifteenyearsold，IthoughtIwasoldenoughtoneglectthetrafficrules．SoIoftenrodeabikeontheroadwearingheadphones．Oneday，whenIwasenjoyingthemusiconmybike，atrucksuddenlyappearedandseemedtolosecontrol．Unfortunately，Iwasbadlyhitandgotintoacoma．However，Iwasluckyenoughtorecoverinayear．【高分句型二】（我的经历和感受）SothatwastheresultIgot．Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromthataccident，thatis，followalltherules．（我的看法）【分析】高分句型一：Butisitnecessarytofollowrules？但有必要遵守规则吗？句子考查句型It'snecessarytodosth表示做某事有必要．高分句型二：However，Iwasluckyenoughtorecoverinayear．然而，我很幸运在一年内康复．be+形容词enoughtodosth表示有足够…做某事．【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．2018年辽宁中考英语书面表达作为新时代的青少年，在实现中华民族伟大复兴中国梦的进程中，你心中是否也有自己的梦想，如规划自我、服务社会、关爱自然、发明创造…某英文杂志"Teenlife/花季生活"栏目正在举行征文活动，本期的话题是"Allaboutdreams/有梦想就去追"．请你写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你的梦想．内容提示：（1）Whatisyourdream？（2）Howspecialisittoyou？（3）Whathaveyoudone/willyoutodomakeitcometrue？要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名；（3）词数80词左右．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihavealwaysdreamedofbecomingascientist，sincethegreatscientificpioneerStephenHawkinghasinfluencedmesomuch．（梦想是什么）Frommiddleschool，Ishowedgreatinterestinphysicsandchemistry．【高分句型一】FromthenonIdevotedmyselftotheamazingphysicalphenomenaandchemicalreactions．（有什么特别的）Inordertoachievemydream，Istudyhardandoftendoexperimentscarefullywiththehelpofmyteachersandparents．Besides，Itakesometrainingclassesoutsideschoolandreadmanybooksaboutgreatscientistsandtheirinventions．（如何实现梦想）IbelievemydreamwillcometrueonedayifIputmyheartintoit．【高分句型二】（总结全文）【分析】【高分句型一】Ishowedgreatinterestinphysicsandchemistry．我对物理和化学表现出极大的兴趣．showgreatinterestin对……表现出极大的兴趣．【高分句型二】IbelievemydreamwillcometrueonedayifIputmyheartintoit．如果我用心，我相信我的梦想总有一天会实现的．Ibelieve+宾语从句．if引导条件状语从句．【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．2017年辽宁中考英语书面表达假如你是图中的发言者初三学生学华，请根据图示内容，完成你的发言稿．Dearteachers，parentsandfellowstudents，hereIwouldliketogivemythankstoforteachingmethat要求：（1）先将空自处补充完整，再完成发言稿；（2）发言稿内容要中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，体现真情实感；（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名，如需要请用Betty或Tony代替；（4）词数80词左右．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                  

Dearteachers，parentsandfellowstudents，hereIwouldliketogivemythankstoyouforteachingmethatlotsofthings（开篇点题）Howtimeflies!Ourjuniorhighschoollifewillcometoanend．（高分句型一）Inthepastthreeyears，we'vehadabeautifulschoolanditprovidesuswithagoodstudyplace．Teachersareourfriends．They'vegivenusinterestinglessonsandwealllovethem．（回顾过去）We'velearnedalotfromthem，notonlyknowledgebutalsothewaytosolveproblemsinlife．（高分句型二）Thanksforourteachers'training，parents'supportandthehelpfromclassmates．Withoutthem，wecouldn'thavesomuchwonderfultime．（感谢老师，家长和同学）Atlast，wehopeourschoolwillbecomebetter，ourteacherswillbehealthyforever．（表达祝愿）Thankyouforyourlistening．【分析】高分句型一：Ourjuniorhighschoollifewillcometoanend．我们的初中生活就要结束了．这是一个一般将来时的句子，同时考查短语cometoanend．高分句型二：We'velearnedalotfromthem，notonlyknowledgebutalsothewaytosolveproblemsinlife．我们从他们身上学到了很多东西，不仅仅是知识，还有解决生活中问题的方法．这是一个现在完成时的句子．同时考查短语notonly…butalso…不仅…而且…．【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．中考英语写作满分标准1.结构要清晰阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内批阅上千份作文，而清晰的结构，会让阅卷老师一目了然，自然就会喜欢你的作文。最常见的结构便是”三段式“。第一段，要开门见山，直接拿出主题。给大家举个例子，比如，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说Mymotherisaworker.Sheisbeautifulandsheisagoodmother.明确自己的观点。第二段，说明她为什么是一个好妈妈。1.Sheworkshard.2.Sheisverystrictwithme.3.ShealwaysencouragesmeandhelpmewhenIamintrouble.详细说出妈妈的优点。第三段，得出结论。大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。如，Ilovemymother.Ilovemyfamily！2.时态、语法要准确1.英语作文除了结构，时态这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时；对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时；过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。2.语法和拼写错误每个扣0.5分，重复错误一般不计。低级的语法错误不仅影响分数，更影响老师对你英语水平的总体评判。低级的语法错误包括男女不分，时态错误，语态错误，单数复数等等。3.短语运用要灵活写作文的时候，尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关键的时候用上一两个，会增添你文章的文采。在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语。这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。还有对关联词的使用，如firstofall，secondly，finally，last，sothat，inorderthat，not...but，notonly...butalso等。还可以使用更高级的词，如inaword，allinall（表示总结的），but，yet，however（表示转折）等。阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了整个文章的思路。4.写全要点近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多，也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示，通常都是3～5个提示点。这种作文，同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译，但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好，如果缺少了要点就会扣分的。所以要点也就是文章的第二段内容，同学们要把提示点写全，然后围绕提示点充分发挥，丰富自己所写的内容。5.书写要整洁作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁，同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有2到3分的差距。给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写，最简单的得分点就是我们的认真书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。中考写作万能句型【开头句】1.Ithink/AsfarasIknow/Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned/frommypointofview我认为…Inmyopinion/Frommypointofview,weshouldknowmoreaboutgoodmanners.在我看来，我们应更懂礼貌。2.Itisclearthat/Clearly显而易见...Itisclear(that)thiscityneedsmoreschools,busesandhospitals.显然，这个城市需要更多学校、公车和医院。Clearly,peoplewholaughmorearehealthier!显然，笑得更多的人更健康！3.Asanoldsayinggoes...俗话说…Asanoldsayinggoes,“Goodhealthisworthmorethanwealth.”俗话说：“健康比财富更重要。”4.generallyspeaking一般来说；总的来说Generallyspeaking,Ithinklifeisbettertoday.总的来说，我认为如今的生活更好了。5.Thetopicof…isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.最近…话题越来越流行Thetopicofshoppingonlineisbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.最近，网购的话题越来越火热。6.itisbelieved+(that)从句人们认为ItisbelievedthattheInternethasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.人们认为互联网有利也有弊。7.itissaid(that)...据说…ItissaidthatabouthalfofthepeopleinChinasmoke.据说在中国大约有一半的人吸烟。【衔接句】1.though虽然；尽管Thoughweareyoung,wecanstilldosomethingtohelp.虽然我们年轻，但我们还是可以做点事来帮忙的。2.eventhough/evenif即使；虽然Eventhoughtheyarebusy,theyarealwaysthinkingofme.即使很忙，他们也总会想着我。3.however但是；不过；然而Hewasfeelingbad.However,hewenttoschool.他感觉不舒服，但他还是去上学了。4.not(that)…but(that)…不是……而是……Lifeisnotacompetition,butatrip,stepbystep.生活不是竞赛，而是一场一步接着一步的旅行。5.Ononehand,…;ontheotherhand,…一方面，……；另一方面，……Ononehand,Iwanttogototheparty,butontheotherhandIoughttostudyfortheexam.一方面我想去参加宴会，但是另一方面我又得复习迎考。6.reasonfor(doing)sthOnegoodreasonforreadingisthatitisuseful.要读书的一个很好的理由就是它很有用。7.reason+(why/that)从句ThereasonthatIaskforleaveisthatIhurtmyleftfootintheP.E.classthisafternoon.我之所以请假是因为今天下午在体育课上伤了左脚。【结尾句】1.inshort/inaword/inconclusion/tosumup/allinall总之；简而言之;一句话Inaword，weshouldmakeourownhappinessbyourselves.总而言之，我们要自己来创造幸福。2.finally最后；最终Finally,thankyouallforyourhelp.最后，感谢你们所有人的帮助。3.Personally,Ibelievethat就我个人而言，我相信…Personally,Ibelievethatthebetterwetakecareoftheenvironment,themorebeautifultheworlditwillbe.4.Fromabove,wecanpredictthat...从以上情况，我们可以预测...中考英语作文万能句型必备句式一:Itis+adj.forsb.todosth.对某人来说做某事是怎样的1.写人物Itisluckyformetobemyparents’son/daughter.Itisluckyformetomakefriendswithhim/her.2.写学习ItisimportantforustolearnChinesewell.Itis…toimproveourlearningskills.Itis….tolistentoteacherscarefullyinclass.Itis…tosharewitheachother.3.写健康Itisnecessaryforeveryonetokeephealthy.Itis….toeatmorevegetablesandfruits.Itis…toexerciseeverydayandkeepagoodmood.（保持好心情）4.写计划Itisexcitingformetogosomewhereinteresting.ItisrelaxingtovisitBeijingwithmybestfriends.Itisnecessaryforustoknowsomethingaboutforeigncountry’scustomsandhistory.5.写环保Itisveryimportantforustoprotectourenvironment.Itis…tolivealow-carbonlife.（低碳生活）Itis….tokeepair/watercleanandfresh.Itisusefultoturnoffthelightwhenweleavearoom.6.写安全Itisveryimportantforustoprotectourselves.Itisdangeroustoswimalone./playwithfire.Itis….toeathealthilyandsafely.句式二:V-ingis+adj.(动名词做主语)以上句子均可变成此句型！句式三:notonly…butalso…不但……而且……1.写人物Myfatherisnotonlyagoodfatherbutalsoagoodfriend.Inotonlylikeplayingfootballbutalsolikereadingbooks.2.写学习Readingisnotonlygoodforourstudybutalsoforourgrowing.Studyingingroupsisnotonlyhelpfulbutalsogivesmechancestoimprovemyself.3.写健康Doingexerciseisnotonlyagoodwaytorelaxourselvesbutalsokeepsourbodiesingoodshapes.Havingbreakfastisnotonlyveryimportantbutalsoprovidesuswithenergyandpower.4.写计划Travelingcannotonlyopenupoureyesbutalsomakeusfeelhappyandrelaxed.Givingagiftcannotonlymakeherhappybutalsoshowyourlovetoher.5.写环保Takingataxiisnotonlyawasteofmoneybutalsomakesourenvironmentworse.Wecannotonlyplantmoretreesbutalsocallpeopletoprotectourenvironment.6.写安全Followingtrafficrulesisnotonlyveryimportantbutalsokeepsourselvessafe.Weshouldnotonlyobeytherulesbutalsotellotherstodoso.句式四:besupposedto+V.应该做某事…1.写人物Wearesupposedtoexpressourlovetoourmothersheartedly.Youaresupposedtocommunicatemorewithyourparentsandteachers.2.写学习Iamsupposedtostudyhardandmakeprogresseveryday.Wearesupposedtotakenotesinclass.Wearenotsupposedtoeatinclass.3.写健康We