高考英语复习读后续写练习+独自在家时的恐惧与意外转折+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习独自在家时的恐惧与意外转折1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Oneday,Iwasaloneathomebecausemyfamilyhadallgonetoanothercitytoattendawedding.Althoughitwasmyfirsttimestayingathome,Istillrefusedmymother’ssuggestiontogototheneighborJenkins’shouse.Thatoddoldman,wholookslikeabadguyinafairytale,isoftenlaughedatandtalkedaboutbynearbychildren.Itisobviousthatheisapersonwithoutfriends,exceptformykindparents.Asinstructedbymymother,Ilockedthedoor,didmyhomeworkfirst,andthenturnedontheTV.JustasIwasenjoyingmyfavoriteanimatedseries,athunderoussoundrangout,andthentheTVwentout.Evenworse,thelightswentoutandeverythingwentdark.Itriedtopullmyselftogetherandfindasourceoflight.Icouldhardlyseeanything,soIhadtowavemyarmsinfrontofmetoavoidhittinganyfurniture.ImovedtowardsthekitchencabinetwhereIcouldremembermymotherstoringsomecandlesforemergencies.4续写原文Suddenly,Iheardfootstepscomingtowardsmyhouse.Myheartwasfilledwithtension.Whocouldthatbe?Itcan’tbeMomandDad,theyhavebeensettingoffforhalfaday,andbynowtheymayhavearrivedattheirdestination.That’sthethief!Iconfidentlytoldmyself.Myheartracedasthefootstepsgrewcloser,andInervouslygraspedakitchenknifetodefendmyself.ButbeforeIcouldevengraspit,agentleknockcameonthedoor,followedbyafamiliarvoice.“Hello?Iseverythingalrightthere?”ItwasMr.Jenkins.Howwasithim?Didhewanttostealthingswhilemyparentsarenotaround?Despitemyinitialfear,somethingabouthistonefeltreassuring.Ihesitatedforamoment,andthencautiouslyapproachedthedoor.“Mr.Jenkins?Whatareyoudoinghere?”Iaskedthroughthelockeddoor.5段首句Paragraph1：“Canyouopenthedoor?”herepliedinasteadyvoice.Paragraph2：Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了“我”独自在家的经历。家人去外地参加婚礼，“我”拒绝去邻居詹金斯先生家，因为他常被孩子们嘲笑议论，看起来像坏人。“我”按母亲指示锁门、做作业后看电视，却遭遇停电，屋内一片漆黑。正摸索找蜡烛时，听到有人朝家走来，“我”以为是小偷，心提到嗓子眼，还紧张地拿起菜刀准备自卫。结果是詹金斯先生敲门询问情况，这让“我”十分意外，也打破了对他的固有偏见，后续可能会改变对他的看法，故事在此留下悬念，引发读者对邻里关系的思考。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：“Canyouopenthedoor?”herepliedinasteadyvoice.在门后，内心十分纠结，一方面还是有些害怕，毕竟之前对他印象不佳；另一方面，他的声音又让我觉得或许他没有恶意。犹豫了好一会儿，我才小心翼翼地将手搭在门把手上，缓缓转动。门开了一条缝，我警惕地看着他。只见詹金斯先生手里拿着一支手电筒和一盒火柴，他轻声说：“孩子，我想着你可能需要这些。停电了，一个人在家会害怕吧。”看着他真诚的眼神，我心中的防备渐渐放下，把门完全打开，让他进了屋，同时为自己刚刚的胡乱猜测感到有些不好意思。10续写思路分析Para2：Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.当我们坐在厨房的桌子旁，詹金斯先生开始讲起他小时候的趣事。他的表情变得生动起来，眼睛里闪烁着光芒，绘声绘色地描述着他和小伙伴们在田野里奔跑嬉戏，如何偷偷地在邻居家的树上摘果子，还有一次不小心掉进泥坑却哈哈大笑的经历。我听得入了迷，跟着他一起欢笑，刚才的紧张和恐惧早已烟消云散。摇曳的烛光映照着我们，在这温馨的氛围里，我突然意识到自己之前对他的看法是多么狭隘和错误。他根本不是我想象中那个孤僻古怪的人，而是一个有着温暖内心、充满生活智慧的邻居。这次意外的交流，让我彻底改变了对他的印象，也让我明白了不能以貌取人的道理。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现"Canyouopenthedoor?"herepliedinasteadyvoice.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIstoodfrozenforamoment.Iwasstillfilledwithdoubtsandfears,buttherewasalsoaglimmerofcuriosityaboutwhathereallywanted.Afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,Isummonedthecouragetomoveclosertothedoor.Withashakyhand,Ireachedforthelockandslowlyturnedit.Asthedoorcreakedopenslightly,Ipeekedoutthroughthenarrowgap.TherewasMr.Jenkins,holdingaflashlightinonehandandaboxofmatchesintheother."Ithoughtyoumightbeinneedoftheseinthedark.Itcanbescarybeingaloneduringapoweroutage,"hesaidsoftly,withareassuringsmile.Hiswordsandthekindnessinhiseyesmademefeelabitguiltyformypreviousunfoundedsuspicions.Itookadeepbreathandopenedthedoorwider,allowinghimtostepinside.13范文呈现Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.Hisfacelitupwithanostalgicglowasherecountedtalesofhismischievousadventures.Hetoldmeaboutthetimeheandhispalstriedtobuildatreehouseandendedupwithawobblystructurethatbarelyheldtogether.Andthentherewastheincidentwhentheyattemptedtomaketheirown"secretpotion"usingvariousingredientsfromthekitchen,whichofcourse,turnedouttobeagooeymess.Icouldn'thelpbutlaughalongwithhim,completelyengrossedinhisvividnarratives.Thewarmlightofthecandlesflickered,castingacozyambiancearoundus.Inthatmoment,IrealizedhowwrongIhadbeenabouthim.HewasnotthestrangeandunfriendlypersonIhadperceived.Instead,hewasakind-heartedneighborwithawealthofinterestingexperiencesandabigheart.Thisunexpectedencounterwastrulyaturningpoint,andIknewthatfromthenon,myviewofhimwouldbeforeverchanged.14升级版范文呈现"Canyouopenthedoor?"herepliedinasteadyvoice.Tremblingwithamixtureoffearandhesitation,Istoodrootedtothespot.ItwasnotuntilIheardthesincerityinhistonethatImusteredthecouragetoapproachthedoor.Withahandthatshookslightly,Iunlockedit.TherestoodMr.Jenkins,holdingaflashlightandaboxofmatches."Ithoughtyoumightbeinneedofthese,"hesaidgently.LittledidIknowthatthisencounterwouldchangemyperceptionofhim.Embarrassedbymypriorunfoundedjudgment,Ilethimin.15升级版范文呈现Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.Wi