高考英语复习读后续写练习+兽医+April+的暖心善意谎言+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习兽医April的暖心善意谎言1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Aprilhasbeenavet(兽医)formanyyears.Throughoutherpractice,therehavebeenmanyunusualcases.Somewerequitesadandsomewereevenfunny.Butmostofallsherememberedonetimeonarainydayalittlegirlcametoherwithherlittleguineapig(豚鼠).ShewasintearsandaskedApriltosaveherbelovedpet.“Thisismyonlyfriend.IreallylovemyDorothy,”thegirlsaid.Aprilexaminedtheanimalandrealizedthatitwasveryill.Thepiglookedyoung.Probably,itwasalreadysickwhenitwassoldtothegirl.Thevetsawmanychildren’stears,andeachtimeshefeltawful.Butshealwaysfoundstrengthtosaythatshecouldn’tsavethepet.4续写原文However,thistimeshelookedatthegirlandcouldn’tsayanything.Aprilsawhowsimplythegirlwasdressedandthoughtthatherfamilydidn’tmakealotofmoney.Therefore,thepigwasn'tjustapetforher,butarealtreasure.“Tellmeyourphonenumber,soIcancallyouaftertheoperation,”Aprilsaid.“I’llgiveyoumygrandmother’sphonenumber,becauseIlivewithher.Myparentsweregone.Grandmasaidthattheyhadgonesomewherefarandforalongtime.Bytheway,theygavemethepigbeforeleaving,”thegirlsaid.Aprilwrotedownthenumber,andwhenthegirllefttheclinic,sheburstintotears.Sherealizedherparentshaddiedandthegirldidn'tknowthetruthyet.Howcouldshetellherthatherguineapigwasgoingtodie?Aprillookedattheanimalhelplesslyandwonderedwhatshecoulddo.Suddenlyshecameupwithanidea.Butbeforedoingitsheputtheguineapigtosleep,andwenttothenearestpetstoreduringlunchtime.Shewantedtobuyexactlythesameguineapigandgiveittothegirl.5段首句Paragraph1：However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.Paragraph2：Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了兽医April从业多年，见过众多病例。一个雨天，小女孩带着病重的豚鼠Dorothy来找她，请求救治。April发现豚鼠病情严重，本欲如实相告，但看到小女孩穿着简朴且父母双亡，便决定设法救治。手术前，她让豚鼠安乐死，然后去宠物店买了一只相似的豚鼠。虽寻找过程不易，但最终买到。女孩来领宠物时，April把新豚鼠给了她，女孩未察觉，开心离开，April的善意之举令人感动。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.然而，找到一只一模一样的豚鼠并非易事。April在宠物店里徘徊许久，眼睛不停地在各个笼子间扫视，却始终没有发现与Dorothy极为相似的那只。她询问店员是否有新进的豚鼠，店员无奈地摇头。正当她心急如焚时，角落里一只躲在食盆后的豚鼠引起了她的注意。这只豚鼠的毛色和斑纹与Dorothy有几分相近，April赶忙叫店员将其取出，仔细端详后，虽然不是完全一样，但也只能如此了。她带着这只豚鼠匆匆赶回诊所，心中默默祈祷女孩不会察觉出异样。10续写思路分析Para2：Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.女孩的奶奶明白了一切，但女孩并未注意到豚鼠已被调换。当女孩满心欢喜地来到诊所接走“Dorothy”时，奶奶眼中闪过一丝复杂的神情，她轻轻地叹了口气，什么也没说。女孩紧紧地抱着豚鼠，不停地跟它说话，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容。April看着女孩离去的背影，心中既欣慰又有些许酸涩。她知道，这个善意的谎言或许能让女孩在这段艰难的时光里感受到一丝温暖和安慰，而这也是她作为兽医，所能给予的不仅仅是医疗上的救治，更是心灵上的呵护。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.Aprilwanderedaroundthepetstoreforwhatseemedlikeaneternity,hereyesscanningeachandeverycagemeticulously,yetaguineapigresemblingDorothywasnowheretobefound.Sheinquiredoftheshopassistantiftherewereanynewarrivals,onlytobemetwithahelplessshakeofthehead.Justasshewasonthevergeofdespair,aguineapighidingbehindafoodbowlinthecornercaughtherattention.ThecolorandmarkingsofthispigboresomeresemblancetoDorothy's.Hastily,sheaskedtheassistanttotakeitout.Afteracarefulexamination,thoughnotanexactmatch,itwastheclosestshecouldget.Sherushedbacktotheclinicwiththepig,prayingsilentlythatthegirlwouldn'tnoticethedifference.13范文呈现Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.Whenthegirlarrivedattheclinic,overjoyedtopickup"Dorothy",aflickerofmixedemotionspassedthroughthegrandmother'seyes.Sheletoutasoftsighandremainedsilent.Thegirlhuggedtheguineapigtightly,chattingawaytoitwithabeamingsmileonherface.Watchingthegirl'srecedingfigure,Aprilfeltasenseofbothreliefandatingeofsadness.Sheknewthatthiswhiteliemightofferthegirlaglimmerofwarmthandcomfortduringthisdifficulttime.Andthiswasherway,notonlyasavettoprovidemedicaltreatment,butalsotooffersolacetoayoungheart.14升级版范文呈现However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.ThereAprilwas,pacingbackandforthinthepetstore,hergazedartingfromonecagetoanotherwithunwaveringintensity.Alas,aguineapigthatcouldpassforDorothywaselusive.Itwasasifthefateswereconspiringagainsther.Sheinterrogatedtheshopassistant,desperationcreepingintohervoice,onlytoreceiveadishearteningnegativeresponse.Butjustwhenhopewasallbutextinguished,aglimmerofpossibilityemerged.There,inthefarcorner,coweringbehindafoodbowl,wasaguineapigwithasemblanceofDorothy'sfeatures.Withbatedbreath,shehaditretrievedandscrutinizeditclosely.Thoughnotaperfectreplica,itwouldhavetosuffice.Hurriedly,shemadeherwaybacktotheclinic,herheartpoundingwithamixtureofanxietyandanticipation.15升级版范文呈现Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.Whenthegirlbouncedintotheclinic,hereyesalightwithexcitementtoreclaim"Dorothy",hergrandmother'seyesbetrayedawealthofunspokenknowledge.Abarelyaudiblesighescapedherlipsassheheldherpeace.Thegi