高考英语复习读后续写练习+雪山孤影中的别样圣诞

高考英语读后续写语篇练习雪山孤影中的别样圣诞1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Decemberstrode(阔步走)intothemountainsofColorado,shootingsnowflakesandblowingthemintoathickblanketofwhite.AsChristmasapproached,thefarmerstherecloseddownmostwoodenhousesforaholidaycheer.Notallwereclosed,however.Therewasstillworktobedone,andsomeonehadtostay.ThatsomeonewasSlimCarter.OldJake,anotherfarmerthere,hadofferedtokeephimcompany,butSlimshookhishead.“Afterall,ayoungmanlikemehasgotplentyofChristmasesahead,”Slimjoked.BeforeJakeofferedtostayagain,Slimhurriedon.“I’lljusthaveaprivateChristmasthisyear,andthat’sthewayIwantit.”Sohewasleftaloneatthehouse.Alone,withhishorseinthefarmandthewolvesroaringintheforestnearby.4续写原文Truthwas,SlimhaddecidednottocelebrateChristmasatall.Itwasn’tthathedidn’tlikeChristmas.Infact,hisChristmasmemoriesweregoodones.Hismotherwouldfilltheirhousewiththelightofcandlesandthesmellofcandy.HisfatherwouldmaketheirChristmastreehuntanall-day,men-onlyaffair.Slimsmiledasherememberedsittingonthebroadbackoftheirhorsewiththefreshlycuttreealongbehind.Backhome,theywouldcoverthetreewithpapersnowflakesandhomemadedecorationsandsingalltheChristmassongstheyknew.Andthat’sthewayhelikedit.Thosewerethememorieshepulledoutonnightswhenhewasworkingalone.Suchmemorieswarmedhiminside,evenifhisoutsideswereachingwithcold.5续写原文ThiswasSlim’sfirstyearawayfromhome.“Christmasisnothingifnotspentwithfamily,”Slimdeclaredtotheemptyhouse.Thatwastherealreasonhe’dsentJakeaway.HefiguredhewouldhandleChristmasbetterifhejustpretendeditwasanordinarywinterworkday.ButonChristmasEve,asSlimheadedbackwithsnowbeneathhisfeetandstarsoverhead,hisheadhunglow.ItwasChristmas,evenwithoutthetreeandthegifts.Christmas,andhewasallalone.6段首句Paragraph1：Thenheremembereddecoratingthetreewithhisfamilyagain.Paragraph2：WhilesingingtohisdecoratedChristmastree,Slimheardaknockonthedoor.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了Slim独自在科罗拉多山区过圣诞，尽管这里白雪皑皑、寒风呼啸，但他内心仍回忆着过往和家人共度圣诞的温馨画面。尽管他一开始拒绝了老杰克的陪伴，打算独自熬过这个节日，但在圣诞夜，当他回忆起和家人装饰圣诞树的情景时，孤独感愈发强烈。就在此时，老杰克带着礼物前来，两人围坐在火炉边分享故事，让这个原本孤寂的圣诞夜充满了温暖与情谊，Slim也体会到了不一样的节日欢乐。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thenheremembereddecoratingthetreewithhisfamilyagain.Slim沉浸在回忆中，愈发觉得孤单。他想起往昔与家人温馨的画面，心中满是思念。此时，外面寒风呼啸，屋内寂静清冷，他的心情愈发沉重，不禁开始怀疑自己独自过节的决定是否正确，思念之情也愈发浓烈。11续写思路分析Para2：WhilesingingtohisdecoratedChristmastree,Slimheardaknockonthedoor.Slim满心疑惑地打开门，看到老杰克站在门口，身上落满雪花，笑容温暖。他又惊又喜，连忙将老杰克迎进屋内。炉火旁，老杰克递上礼物，两人愉快地交谈起来，分享着各自的故事。屋内的气氛逐渐变得欢快，笑声和温暖驱散了之前的孤独，这个圣诞夜因这份意外的情谊而变得格外美好。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Slimwassinkingdeeperintotheoceanofmemories,feelinglonelierthanever.ThescenesofpasthappyChristmasdayswithhisfamilyflashedbeforehiseyes,fillinghisheartwithlonging.Outside,thewindwashowlingbitterly,whileinside,thesilenceandcoldnessseemedtomagnifyhissolitude.DoubtscreptintohismindabouthischoiceofspendingChristmasalone,andthesenseofmissinghisfamilygrewstrongerandstronger.14范文呈现Fullofcuriosityandsurprise,Slimopenedthedoor.StandingtherewasOldJake,coveredwithsnowflakes,withawarmsmileonhisface.Overwhelmedwithjoyandgratitude,Slimquicklywelcomedhimin.Bythefireplace,OldJakehandedoverthegift,andtheybeganchattingmerrily,sharingtheiruniquestories.Gradually,theatmosphereintheroombecamelivelyandwarm,withlaughterandfriendshipdrivingawaythepreviousloneliness.ThisChristmasEveturnedouttobeextraordinarilybeautifulbecauseofthisunexpectedbond.15升级版范文呈现ItwasonChristmasEvethatSlim,drownedintheseaofmemories,feltanoverwhelmingsenseoflonelinesscreepinguponhim.TheheartwarmingscenesofcelebratingChristmaswithhisbelovedfamilyinthepastwereplayingvividlyinhismind,whichwasnowfilledwithintenselonging.Outside,thewindwaswailingasiflamentinghissolitude,andthechillysilencewithinthewoodenhouseonlyservedtodeepenhisisolation.Itwasatthismomentthathestartedtoquestionthewisdomofhisdecisiontospendthisspecialoccasionalone,withthehomesicknessgnawingathisheart.16升级版范文呈现Suddenly,aknockonthedoorjoltedSlimoutofhismelancholyreverie.Withamixtureofanticipationandbewilderment,heopenedthedoor.Loandbehold,therestoodOldJake,whosefigurewasdustedwithsnowflakeslikeamessengerofwarmth.Overcomewithasurgeofdelightandgratitude,Slimusheredhiminwithouthesitation.Bythedancingflamesofthefireplace,OldJakepresentedacarefullywrappedgift,andthenensuedadelightfulconversationwheretheyexchangedtheirtalesofyore.Littlebylittle,theroomwassuffusedwithmerrimentandcamaraderie,theonce-predominantlonelinessbeingcompletelydispelledbythemagicoffriendship.Truly,t