Unit 1 Teenage life-【同步写作课】高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第一册）

必修第一册Unit1单元写作指导与演练WriteaLetterforAdvice单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就某个问题提出自己的看法或建议。建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分：第一部分：说明目的；第二部分：提出建议；第三部分：表达祝愿。常用表达1.Yousaidinyourlastletterthat...2.Knowingfromyourletterthat...3.Youhaveaskedformyadvicewithregardto...4.Iamwritingtotrytomakesomesuggestionson...5.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...7.Iwouldliketosuggestthat...8.Thereareseveralthingswecoulddo.9.Maybeitwouldbebetterto...10.Whydon’tyou...?11.Haveyouconsidereddoing...?12.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.单元话题真题展示高考链接建议信2023年全国新高考I卷建议信是高考应用文的热点话题。可以是对某个人的问题的建议，也可以对学校，政府及特定团体和组织的建议。Usewhatyouhavelearnttowritealetterofadvicetooneoftheteenagersbelow.假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1.说明问题；2.提出建议。本单元写作要求是对几个青少年的求助信做出回复，给出相应的建议。首先要对他们的问题进行归纳，并提出相应的建议，然后说明相应的建议的内容。nameProblemsSuggestionsReasonsEric,15,ChicagoMyparentswon’tlistenwhenItellthemthings.Iguessit’sbecausethey’readultsandcan’tunderstandme.Trylisteningtoyourparents.Invitethemouttoeatsomething.Maybetheyaren’tlisteningtoyoubecauseyoudon’tlistentothem.Thiswillgiveyouachancetospeaktothemwithoutdistractions.XuJing,14,HangzhouIalwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemyparentsworkinanothercity.Joinavolunteergroup.Connectwithyourparentsonline.Thiswillgiveyouachangetobearoundotherpeople,andhelpyourealisethatotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.Justbecausetheyarefaraway,itdoesn’tmeanthatyoucan’ttalktothem.MinHo,15,SeoulThereisagirlIlikeinmyclass,butI’mtooshytotalktoher.Askamutualfriendtointroduceyoutoher.Findchancestogettogetheringroupswheresheisagroupmember.Yourfriendwillbeabletohelpyoubreaktheicewithherandprovideencouragementtoyou.Ifyouareinagroup,ittakesallthepressureoff,andyoucaninteractwithherinarelaxingsetting.段落内容句子设计第一段明确问题和写信的目的Youwroteinyourletterthat...Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Iamwritingtooffermysuggestions.第二段提出建议Ithinkyoucantry...Thiswillgiveyouachance...Itwillalsohelpyou...Youcanalso...because....I'msurethat...第三段祝愿和问候Ihopemysuggestionsofhelptoyou.【小试牛刀】参考范文1:10September,2023DearEric,Fromyourletter,Iknowthatyourparentswon’tlistentoyouwhenyoutellthemthings.Youguessit’sbecausethey’readultsandcan’tunderstandyou.Itispitytohearthat.ButIthinkwehavealottodotochangethat.Maybetheyaren’tlisteningtoyoubecauseyoudon’tlistentothem.Whynottrylisteningtoyourparentsfirst.Ibelievebylisteningtotheirwords,youcanknowthereason.Anothersuggestionisinvitingthemouttoeatsomething,whichIamsurewillgiveyouachancetospeaktothemwithoutdistractions.Trytodosomethingfirst.Onlyinthisway,canyouchangeyourparents.Ihopemyadviceofsomehelp.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua参考范文2:10September,2023DearXuTing,Youwroteinyourletterthatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Iamwritingtooffermysuggestions.Itiscommonforteenagerstofeellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparents.Ithinkyoucantryjoiningavolunteergroupthathelpsotherpeople.Thiswillgiveyouachancetomeetandbearoundothers.Itwillalsohelpyourealisethatyouarenotaloneinhavingproblemsandthatmanyotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.Helpingotherpeoplealsomakesusfeelbetter.Youcanalsoconnectwithyourparentsonline.Justbecauseyourparentsarefaraway,itdoesn'tmeanyoucan'ttalktothem.I'msurethatyou'llgetachancetospeaktoyourparentsmoreoften.Thiswillhelpdriveawayyourloneliness.Ihopemysuggestionsofhelptoyou.Bestwishes,YoursSusanLuo.参考范文3:10September,2023DearMinHo,I’mverygladtohearthatyoulikeagirlinyourclass,butitisapitythatyouaretooshytotalktoher.Heremyadvice.Whydon’tyouaskamutualfriendtointroduceyoutoher.Withthehelpofothers,yourcommunicationwillbecomemorenatural.Yourfriendwillbeabletohelpyoubreaktheicewithherandprovideencouragementtoyou.Ialsosuggestthatyoufindchancestogettogetheringroupswheresheisagroupmember,inwhichallthepressurewillbetakenoff,andyoucaninteractwithherinarelaxingsetting.Hopemyadvicewillbehelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua开始部分Youwriteinyourlastletterthat...Knowingfromyourlastletterthat...Itisapitytoknowthat...Itisquiteunderstandablethat...Iquiteunderstandthat...Ihaveheardthatyouareaskingforadviceon...Knowingthatyouarecollectingsuggestionson...Iamwritingtooffermysuggestions/advice/on...Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...建议部分Therearemanythingswecoulddo.Maybeitwouldbeusefulto...Iwouldliketosuggestthat...Haveyouconsidereddoing...?Youcouldconsider...Haveyouthoughtabout...Irecommend...Iwouldliketoseggestthat...Considering....,Iwouldsuggestthat...Ifpossible,couldyouplease…?Ifeelthatitisbeneficialif…/isofgreatbenefitto...Inorderto....,itcouldn'tbebetterifyoucan…(Maybeitwouldbebetterto...)It'shighlyrecommendedto...Themostimportantthingyoushouldbearinmindisthat…Irecommendthatyou....Thereareseveralthingswecoulddo.Whatneedstobeimprovedisthat…Whynot...Howabout...Whydon’tyou...?结尾部分Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Wishmysuggestionscanhelpyou.Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionsintoseriousconsideration.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyoumakeawisedecision.Ifyouhaveanyquestion,pleasedon'thesitatetoletmeknow.假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试(ChineseProficiencyTest)，对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子件，内容包括:1.表达关切；2.备考建议；3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数80字左右；2.可适当加细节以使行文连贯。注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头已给出，不计入总词数；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua.审题1．文体：应用文。2．时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3．人称：第一人称（表达你的建议），第二人称（陈述确认对方的问题）。谋篇第一段：明确问题和写信的目的。第二段：提出建议。第三段：祝愿和问候。遣词造句【核心词汇】1.nervous2.takingtheChineseProficiencyTest3.express4.concern5.sharemyadvice6.reciting7.fantasticcompositions8.beofgreatbenefit9.improve10.beneficial【连词成句】1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyconcernandsharemyadviceonpreparingthetestefficiently.2.Inmyopinion,readingloudlyevenrecitingsomefantasticcompositionsisofgreatbenefittoyou.3.YoucanhavebetterunderstandingofChineselanguagebyit.4.Inordertoimproveyourlisteningskills,youmustbebravetospeaktoChinesenativesaroundyouasmuchaspossible.5.Ontheeveofthetest,you’dbettertohaveagoodsleep.6.Youwillhaveenoughenergyforthetest.【句式升级】1.将2、3句合成一个句子：Inmyopinion,readingloudlyevenrecitingsomefantasticcompositionsisofgreatbenefittoyou,bywhichyoucanhavebetterunderstandingofChineselanguage.2.将5、6句合成一个句子：Ontheeveofthetest,you’dbettertohaveagoodsleep,sothatyouwillhaveenoughenergyforthetest.组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。DearPeter,I’msosorrytoknowthatyouarenervousabouttakingtheChineseProficiencyTestsoon.Iamwritingtoexpressmyconcernandsharemyadviceonpreparingthetestefficiently.Inmyopinion,readingloudlyevenrecitingsomefantasticcompositionsisofgreatbenefittoyou,bywhichyoucanhavebetterunderstandingofChineselanguage.Besides,inordertoimproveyourlisteningskills,youmustbebravetospeaktoChinesenativesaroundyouasmuchaspossible.Ontheeveofthetest,you’dbettertohaveagoodsleep,sothatyouwillhaveenoughenergyforthetest.Idoexpecttheabovetipsarebeneficialtoyourtest.Wishyougoodluck!Kindestregards,Yours，LiHua.1.假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。1．表示问候和慰问。2．提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)你的同学遇到麻烦时，去帮助他们；(3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】DearJenny，I’mreallysorrytohearthatyouhavetroublemakingfriendswithothersafterenteringseniorhighschool.I'dliketooffersomepersonaladvicetoyou.Infact，thereissomethingyoucandotoimprovethissituation.Inmyopinion，itisagoodsolutionforyoutoinviteyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiesafterschool.Then,trytohelpyourclassmateswhentheyarefacedwithtroubleintheirlessons,whichwillhelpyoumakemorefriends.Andyouarealsosuggestedtoturntoyourclassmatesbravelywhenyouarestrugglinginyourlessons.Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.Bestwishes!Yours，LiHua2.你的美国好友Tom即将升入大学，他想选择学习历史，但是又对计算机很感兴趣。请你给他写一份邮件，对他提出建议。注意：1.字数80字左右。2.可以增加细节，使行文流畅。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】DearTom,Havingknownthatyouhavesometroublewiththecourseelection,Iammorethangladtoofferyousomepersonalsuggestionsaccordingtomyownexperience.Personally,Ifeelthatitwouldbewiseifyouconsideryourhobbiesandstrengths,whichmayplayavitalroleinyourfuturestudy.Besides,themostimportantthingyoushouldbearinmindisthatyouruniversitytrainingisapreparationforyourfuturecareer.Thereisnodoubtthatthefieldofcomputerscienceoffersfarwiderjobopportunitiesthanhistory.I'mfirmlyconvincedthatintheforeseeablefuture,itwillbeessentialforeveryonetobeequippedwithcomputerskillstoearnaliving.Iwouldrecommendthatyoukeepupyourreadingofhistoryinyoursparetime.Thanksfortrustingme.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyoumakeawisedecision.YoursLiHua3.假如你是李华，你对朋友王琳即将面临高考选科，请你帮忙给她建议。请你根据你对理解对她提出建议。注意：1.字数80字左右。2.可以增加细节，使行文流畅。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】DearWangLin,KnowingthatyouareconfusedaboutselectingcoursesforCollegeEntranceExam,Iamwritingtogiveyousomepersonalsuggestions.Firstandforemost,youaresupposedtopayenoughattentiontotheuniversitiesrequirementsandyourfuturedevelopment.Moreover,it’sofequalimportancetochoosewhatyouareinterestedinandexcelat.IfIwereyou,Iwouldchoosescience,becauseIthinkitismoreusefulandhelpfulinfindingjobsinthefuture.Hopemysuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.Shouldyouhaveanyproblems,dorememberthatyouarewelcomedtosharethemwithme.Bestwishes!YoursLiHua【链接高考—经典诵读】（2023高考全国新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1.说明问题；2.提出建议。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏1】DearRyan,

I’mLiHuafromClass3.IhavebeentoldthatyouwillrandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass,butIhavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudenttoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,

LiHua【佳作欣赏2】DearRyan,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.IamwritingtoshareaconcernIhaveregardingtherecentdecisiontorandomlypairstudentsforthepost-classoralpracticesessions.WhileIappreciatetheintentiontoencouragespeakingpractice,Ibelieverandomgroupingmighthavecertainissues.Firstly,somestudentsmightfeeluncomfortableoranxi