江苏省扬州市江都区2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题英语读后续写贫寒之家的圣诞讲义密谋爱的礼物

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsChristmasdecorationsappearedintown,ourparentscalledmytwoyoungerbrothersandmetogether.Atfirst,Ithoughtsomeonehaddied,becauseIhadneverseenmyparentslooksosad.MybrothersandIstoodwaitingfortheawfulnews.Momhuggedmeasshemurmured,“Christmasisgoingtobedifferentthisyear.Wewon'tbehavingatreeorpresents.Wecanbarelyaffordfood.”Dad,restingonthecouch,beckoned(招手示意)theboysintohisarms.“ThingswillchangewhenIgetbacktowork.”Myfamilywaspoorerthandirt.Dad,theonlybreadearnerinourfamily,workedinacoalmine.However,soonafterreturningtoworkattheendofalongstrike,Dadwashurtinarockfallthatbrokebonesinhisfoot.Lyingonthecouchwiththeswollenfoothighonpillows,hedidn'ttalkorsmilemuch.Therewaslittletosmileabout.Nowork,noine.Atnineyearsold,Imotheredmyyoungerbrothers:Rodney,agedsix,andStevie,three.Wesharedasmallbedroom.Thatnight,afterourparents’announcement,wetalked.Rodneybegan.“Em,didyouseehowsadMommyandDaddylooked?IthoughtMommywasgonnacry.“Me,too.Daddy'sfoot’s…thisbig”whisperedStevie,holdingouthisarms.“Yeah..We'reinhardtimes,"Isaid.“ItmakesMommyandDaddysad."“Butwedon'thavetobesad,"Iadded,hopingtobrightenthemood.“Sincetherearestillseveralweekstogo,maybewecandosomethingtocheerthemup,"Isaidwithoverdoneenthusiasm.Theboysproposed,“Wecantakethemoneyfromourpiggybank...earnsomemore..andsurprisethemwithgifts!"“Icanrunerrands(跑腿)forAuntEmandneighborstoearnmoney,"Ioffered.“Yeah,"Rodneyadded,“IandSteviecanreturnbottlesandsavethedepositmoney...insteadofbuyingcandy!"HepushedSteviegentlywithhiselbow.“Yeah!”Stevieclutchedhishandstogether.Wehadaplan!Untiltheynoddedoff,Icoachedmylittlebrothers(especiallyStevie)inwaystoguardoursecret.“Don'ttalkaboutitduringtheday."注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意圣诞节将至，父母却告知“我”和两个弟弟今年没钱买圣诞树和礼物，连食物都快负担不起，因为家里唯一挣钱的爸爸在煤矿工作时受伤，没了收入，家庭陷入困境。“我”作为9岁的姐姐安慰弟弟们，随后大家一起想出通过存钱、跑腿、捡瓶子卖钱等方式攒钱给父母买礼物的计划，还约定要保守秘密，准备悄悄执行这个让父母开心起来的重要任务。5处伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔：父母告知今年圣诞节的艰难处境，一家人都很难过。回应：孩子们积极想办法改变现状，在续写中通过努力准备礼物，让父母的心情从悲伤转为惊喜与感动，实现情绪上的转变。伏笔：爸爸受伤没了工作，家里没收入。回应：正因如此才有了孩子们为改变家庭氛围努力攒钱的情节，后续他们用自己辛苦攒的钱买礼物，让家庭重新有了温馨快乐的感觉。伏笔：孩子们商量好各自挣钱的办法，如“我”跑腿、弟弟们捡瓶子存钱等。回应：续写中可以体现出孩子们通过这些方式一点点积攒资金，最终有能力购买礼物，将计划付诸实践。伏笔：“我”叮嘱弟弟们要保守秘密。回应：在后续情节里，秘密一直没被泄露，直到圣诞节当天送出礼物，给父母带来十足的惊喜，使情节更具戏剧性和温馨感。伏笔：大家怀着期待又紧张的心情制定了计划。回应：后续就围绕着计划的执行以及最终成功给父母送礼物展开，展现孩子们努力的过程和父母收获惊喜的温馨画面。续写要点第一段：写孩子们醒来后就开始按计划行动，“我”去邻居家帮忙跑腿，两个弟弟到处收集瓶子换钱，过程虽辛苦但大家都充满干劲，为给父母准备礼物默默努力，每天都期待着能攒够钱。第二段：描述圣诞节早上，孩子们把用辛苦攒的钱买的礼物送给父母，父母先是惊讶，随后十分感动，一家人紧紧相拥，沉浸在幸福温暖之中，这个特别的圣诞节让大家感受到了浓浓的亲情和爱的力量。情感线从最初得知圣诞节艰难时的悲伤、担忧，到制定计划后的期待、充满干劲，再到送礼物时父母的惊讶以及一家人收获的感动、幸福，整体情感是从低落向温暖、喜悦转变。故事线家庭因爸爸受伤面临拮据的圣诞节，孩子们制定计划挣钱，努力执行后在圣诞节送出礼物，让家庭重归温馨。主旨升华句Loveinafamilycanturnhardshipintoaheartwarmingcelebration.（家庭中的爱能将艰难困苦变为一场暖心的庆祝。）Intoughtimes,theunitedeffortsofafamilycancreatethemostpreciousgiftsofall.（在艰难时刻，一个家庭齐心协力能创造出最珍贵的礼物。）Thepoweroffamilyloveshinesbrightestwhenfacingdifficulties.（面对困难时，家庭之爱的力量最为闪耀。）Afamily'sbondisstrengthenedbythesharedeffortstobringjoyinhardtimes.（在艰难时期为带来欢乐而共同努力会使家庭纽带更加牢固。）Eveninpoverty,thelovewithinafamilycanmakeChristmastrulymagical.（即便身处贫困之中，家庭内部的爱也能让圣诞节变得无比神奇。）写作示范一Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Iimmediatelywenttotheneighbors’housestoaskiftheyneededanyerrandsdone.RodneyandSteviescouredtheneighborhoodalleysforemptybottles.Everylittlebitofmoneyweearnedwascarefullysaved.Despitethetiredness,ourheartswerefullofexcitement,knowingthatoureffortswouldbringsmilestoMommyandDaddy'sfaces.OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.Theystaredatusinastonishmentatfirst,thentheireyesfilledwithtearsofjoy.Theyhuggedustightly,sayinghowproudtheywereofus.Inthatmoment,ourlittlelivingroomwasfilledwithloveandhappiness,makingthisaChristmaswewouldneverforget.写作示范二Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!IstartedrunningerrandsforAuntEm,carryinggroceriesanddoingsmallchores.RodneyandSteviewerebusycollectingbottlesfromeverycornertheycouldfind.Daybyday,wewatchedoursavingsgrow.Thoughitwastoughworkforouryoungselves,wedidn'tplain,ourmindsfixedonthebigsurpriseforourparents.OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.MommycoveredhermouthinsurprisewhileDaddy'seyeswidened.Thentheybothbrokeintobigsmilesandpulledusclose.Theirhugswerewarmandfulloflove.ThisChristmasbecamespecialnotbecauseoffancygiftsbutbecauseoftheloveandunityweshowedasafamilyinthefaceofhardship.【答案】参考范文Weawokeinthemorning，transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Thefollowingweekssawmedashinghomefromschooleachdaydeterminedtoearnapenny.Iwasusuallygreetedbysecretwinksandgrinsonewithamissingtooth,andtheotherwithtiny,straightteethbothassuringmeoursecretwassafe.AfewdaysbeforeChristmas,wegleefullywentshopping.WeboughtMomanewapron,andforDad,apairofleatherslippers.ThenightofChristmasEveseemedendl