2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+花园里与母鹿的奇妙心灵对话+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习花园里与母鹿的奇妙心灵对话1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Onespring,IwashiredasgroundskeeperataCountryInn,afamousbed-and-breakfastlocatedinWashingtonstate.Thegrandhouseisinabeautifulplace.Manyfamouspeoplehavevisitedandevenhadtheirownroomsthere.Theowners,PhilipandCecelia,havedoneaperfectjobforthehouse.However,thegardenswereveryovergrown.Worseyet,therewasanotherproblem:averypersistentdoe(母鹿).EverydaywhenIcametowork,therewasnewevidenceofthedeer’sbigappetite.Itriedmanypreventives:spray,humanhair,soap,younameit-butnoneofthosethingshadeffect.OftenwhenIwasweeding,I’dlookoverandthereshe’dbe,munchingsometastypieces.Worstofall,shefeastedontheroses,inwhichCeceliatookgreatpride.IbecamesofrustratedthatInamedher“Dinner”—andwantedtoserveheronplates.4续写原文Onemorning,IwasonmyhandsandkneespullingoutvinesandbusheswhenIcaughtamovementoutofthecornerofmyeye.TherewasDinner,notfivefeetaway,munchingalargeleafandstaringatme.Ifeltaconnectionwiththisanimal.Wedidhavesomethingincommon-wewerebothmothers.Igotthecrazyideaofcommunicatingwithheranditseemedshewantedthesamething.What’sup?Iaskedinmyhead.I’mherebecauseIfeelsafe,wasthegentlereplyIfeltIheard.Ihavemyfawns(幼鹿)beddeddownnearby,andthereisplentytoeat.Whenthetwinsareolderaftersummer,Iwillmovethemdeeperintotheforest.5续写原文Iunderstandthat,Iassuredher.Peoplecomeheretoo,fromfaraway.Iguessthey’llbeinterestedtoseeyou.Ipromisethatnobodywillharmyouoryourchildren.Idon’tmindsharingthevegetationbutCecelialovesroses,too.Sheisveryupsetwhentheyarealleaten.Aloudcrashbrokethemagic.Oureyesmetagainbrieflybeforesheleapedoffacrossthedriveway,disappearingintotheforest.HasIreallycommunicatedwiththedeer?6段首句Paragraph1：IwentintothekitchenwhereCeceliawaspreparingtheeveningmeal.Paragraph2：Everyday,IenjoyedwatchingDinnerwiththetwinsandmypresenceneverbotheredthem.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了作者受雇于一家乡村旅馆做园丁，旅馆花园虽美却杂草丛生，还有一只贪吃的母鹿“Dinner”常来破坏，尤其是吃掉了塞西莉亚心爱的玫瑰，让作者头疼不已。一次除草时作者与母鹿“对视”，竟仿佛与它有了心灵交流，了解到它来此是为了幼鹿安全和食物。作者将此事告知塞西莉亚，她不仅未生气，还提议划出一块区域供母鹿进食。此后作者每天看着母鹿和幼鹿，相处和谐，这段奇妙经历也成为了作者难忘的回忆。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：IwentintothekitchenwhereCeceliawaspreparingtheeveningmeal.我走进厨房，塞西莉亚正在准备晚餐。我鼓起勇气向她讲述了与母鹿“Dinner”的奇妙交流，心中忐忑不安，担心她会觉得我荒谬。然而，塞西莉亚却没有丝毫责怪之意，反而陷入了沉思。片刻后，她提出一个想法，我们可以在花园的角落开辟一小块区域，专门种植一些母鹿爱吃的植物，同时用栅栏将玫瑰丛围起来，避免再次被破坏。我对她的宽容和智慧深感钦佩，我们立刻着手准备。11续写思路分析Para2：Everyday,IenjoyedwatchingDinnerwiththetwinsandmypresenceneverbotheredthem.每天，我都愉快地看着“Dinner”和它的双胞胎幼鹿在我们为它们准备的区域里进食、玩耍，我的存在似乎丝毫没有打扰到它们。随着时间的推移，母鹿和幼鹿变得越来越大胆，有时甚至会在我工作时走到我身边。而我也会轻轻地和它们说话，仿佛我们是亲密的朋友。旅馆的客人们偶然看到这一幕，都惊叹不已，这也成为了旅馆一道独特的风景，让这个地方更加充满生机和温暖。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现IwalkedintothekitchenwhereCeceliawaspreparingtheeveningmeal.Musteringupmycourage,Itoldherabouttheamazingencounterwiththedoe,"Dinner",myheartpoundingwithapprehension,fearingshemightthinkIwasbeingridiculous.However,tomyastonishment,Ceceliashowednosignofreproach.Instead,shefellintodeepthought.Afterawhile,shecameupwithanidea.Wecouldsetasideasmallcornerofthegardentoplantsomeofthedoe'sfavoriteplantsandfenceofftherosebushestopreventfurtherdamage.Iwasdeeplyimpressedbyhertoleranceandwisdom,andweimmediatelysetaboutmakingpreparations.14范文呈现Everyday,Itookgreatpleasureinwatching"Dinner"andhertwinfawnsgrazingandplayingintheareawehadpreparedforthem,andmypresenceseeminglydidn'tdisturbthematall.Astimewentby,thedoeandthefawnsgrewbolder.SometimestheywouldevencomeuptomewhileIwasworking.AndIwouldgentlytalktothemasifwewereclosefriends.Theguestsattheinn,whohappenedtowitnessthisscene,wereallamazed.Ithadbecomeauniquesightoftheinn,addingmorevitalityandwarmthtothisplace.15升级版范文呈现Withahintoftrepidation,IsteppedintothekitchenwhereCeceliawasengrossedinthepreparationoftheeveningrepast.Summoningeveryounceofcouragewithinme,Irecountedtheextraordinaryencounterwiththedoe,“Dinner”,half-expectingaskepticalresponse.Tomyutteramazement,Cecelia‘scountenancebetrayednosignofreproachordisbelief.Instead,herbrowsknittedin.Asmallsectionofthegardencontemplation.Afteramoment'sdeliberation,sheproposedabrilliantsolution.couldbededicatedtocultivatingtheplantsfavoredbythedoe,whiletherosebusheswouldbesafeguardedbyasturdyfence.Deeplymovedbyhermagnanimityandsagacity,wepromptlyembarkedontheimplementationofthisplan.16升级版范文呈现Daily,Ireveledinthesightof"Dinner"andhertwinfawnsfrolickingandgrazinginthedesignatedarea,seeminglyoblivioustomypresence.Asthedaysslippedby,thedoeandheroffspringgrewincreasinglyintrepid.TherewereoccasionswhentheywouldapproachmeunhesitatinglyasItoiledaway.Inthosemoments,Iwouldengagethemingentleconversation,asifwewerekindredspirits.Theguestswhochanceduponthisidyllicscenewereinvariablyspellbound.Thisunique