2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+高中挚友：从疏离到重聚的情谊+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习高中挚友：从疏离到重聚的情谊1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Friendstotheend!”Breanahadsignedthepictureofusthathungonmybedroomwall.Herhandwrittenpromisecarriedthejoywehadshared,andlaughterfilledtheroom.ItfeltlikeBreanaandIhadbeenbestfriendsforever.Sincethedaywemetonthefirstdayofseniorhighschool，wehadbeeninseparable.Sheenjoyedoutdoorsports,andIloveddancing.Wedidalmosteverythingtogether.Whenthetryoutnoticeforthecheerleadingteamcameup,BreanaencouragedmetogiveitashotInitially,Iresistedhersuggestion,callinghercrazy,butdeepdown,Itrustedherandsecretlywantedtogiveitatry.Breanasawmyhiddendesireandpromisedtosupportmefully.Sheattendedallthepracticesandevenspenttwoweekscoachingmeinherbackyard.Finally,withaperfectperformance,Isuccessfullymadeitontothecheerleadingteam.Regrettably,Breanafailedtomaketheteamduetophysicaldiscomfort.4续写原文However,thingsbegantochange.After-schooltrainingtookupmostofmytime,andourusualalget-togethersweredelayedorcanceled.Slowlybutsurely,webegantogrowapart.AheatedargumentfinallyeruptedwhenIrefusedBreana’sinvitationtogohiking.“I’msotired,Breana.Please,letmehavesomealonetime.”“You’realwaysbusy.Wehaven’tspentmuchtimetogether!It’sallbecauseofyourexcessivetraining!”“Stop,Breana!Youdon’tunderstandmeatall!Idon’tneedafriendlikeyou!”Withthosemeanwords,Iputanendtoour“friendstotheend”promise.Overthefollowingdays,despiteatightschedule,theargumentlingered(萦绕)inmymind,distractingmefromtraining.Itwasamorningwhentherewaschaosontheplayground.Someonecriedout,“Breanaisinjured!”Shockedandworried,Irushedtowherethesoundcamefrom,foroncenotcaringaboutanything.5段首句Paragraph1：AsIarrivedatthescene,IsawBreanasittingthereinpain.Paragraph2：Atmywords,shehuggedmetightly.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了“我”和布雷娜从高中第一天起便是挚友，性格爱好不同却形影不离。布雷娜鼓励“我”参加啦啦队选拔，她全力支持，最终“我”入选而她因身体不适落选。之后因训练繁忙，“我”与她渐生嫌隙，一次争吵后友谊破裂。但在她受伤时，“我”抛开一切赶到现场，真诚道歉，两人重归于好，并再次承诺珍惜彼此友谊，明白了友谊经得住考验。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：AsIarrivedatthescene,IsawBreanasittingthereinpain.当我赶到现场，看到布雷娜痛苦地坐在地上，我内心充满愧疚与担忧。我急忙询问她的伤势，周围同学七嘴八舌地说着事情经过。我小心翼翼地查看她的脚踝，一边回忆着我们曾经的美好时光，一边为刚刚争吵时的冲动而后悔不已。我向她道歉，说自己不该那么自私，忽略了她的感受，承诺以后会平衡好训练和朋友之间的关系，希望她能原谅我这一次。10续写思路分析Para2：Atmywords,shehuggedmetightly.听到我的话，她紧紧地抱住了我。她哭着说其实她也有错，不应该那么冲动地指责我，这些天没有我的陪伴，她很孤单。我轻拍着她的后背，安慰她一切都会好起来的。在同学们的注视下，我们就那样紧紧相拥，仿佛周围的一切都不存在了，只有我们重归于好的友谊。此时，阳光洒在我们身上，暖暖的，就像我们的友谊再次绽放出光芒。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现AsIarrivedatthescene,IsawBreanasittingthereinpain.Myheartwasfilledwithguiltandworry.Hastily,Iinquiredaboutherinjurywhilethesurroundingclassmateswerechatteringaboutwhathadhappened.Gently,Iexaminedherankle,recallingthebeautifulmemorieswehadsharedandregrettingmyimpulsivebehaviorduringthequarrel.Iapologizedtoher,sayingthatIshouldn'thavebeensoselfishandignoredherfeelings,promisingtobalancetrainingandfriendshipbetterinthefutureandhopingshecouldforgivemethistime.13范文呈现Atmywords,shehuggedmetightly.Shecriedandsaidthatshewasalsowrongandshouldn'thaveaccusedmesoimpulsively.Withoutmycompanythesedays,shehadfeltlonely.Pattingherbackgently,Icomfortedherthateverythingwouldbeokay.Underthegazeofourclassmates,weheldeachothertightlyasifnothingelseexistedaroundusbutourrestoredfriendship.Atthismoment,thesunshineshoneonus,warmandbright,justlikeourfriendshipshiningagain.14升级版范文呈现Onreachingthescene,whatcameintomysightwasBreana,seatedtherewithevidentpainetchedonhercountenance.Apangofguiltandapprehensionimmediatelygrippedmyheart.Hastily,Imademywaytowardsherandinquiredanxiouslyabouttheextentofherinjury,whilethecacophonyofvoicesfromthesurroundingclassmatesfilledtheair,eachrecountingtheincidentintheirownwords.Withtheutmostcare,Ibentdowntoexamineherankle,allthewhilememoriesofourbygonedaystogetherfloodedmymind,andIreproachedmyselfbitterlyformyhastyandthoughtlessoutburstduringourquarrel.Iofferedherasincereapology,statingthatnevershouldIhavebeensoself-centeredastooverlookheremotions,andvowedtobetterjugglemytrainingcommitmentsandourfriendshiphenceforth,prayingthatshewouldfinditinherhearttopardonmyfolly.15升级版范文呈现Attheutteranceofmywords,sheflungherarmsaroundmeandembracedmetightly.Tearsstreameddownhercheeksasshesobbed,confessingthatshetoohadbeenatfaultandoughtnottohavelashedoutatmesoimpetuously.Thedaysbereftofmycompanionship,shelamented,hadbeenfilledwithaprofoundsenseofloneliness.Gentlypattingherback,Imurmuredwordsofsolace,assuringherthatallwouldbewellandthatourfriendshipwouldemergestrongerfromthisordeal.Amidthestaresofourpeers,weclungtoeachother,asiftheentireworldhadfadedintoinsignificance,leavingonlytherekindledbondofourf