读后续写-从病床到希望之路信念支撑下的艰难复健与心灵启迪讲义-河南省信阳市2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题

河南省信阳市20242025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题六、书面表达47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thepowerofbelief“Youwillneverwalkagain.Youwillhavetouseawheelchair.”Unpreparedforthedoctor’sjudgment,Iheardhiswordsfallheavilyonmyears,numbingmysoul.Myseriouscaraccidenthadleftmeunconsciousandincriticalcondition.Iawakenedtofindbothleg:wrappedincasts(石膏).Lyinginmybedmotionlessandrelyingonprayer,IwonderedhowIcouldgivemytenyearoldsonhopethatMomwouldheal.He’dbeencheerfuloneveryvisit,butIsawthefearinhiseyes.Thethoughtofhavingatotallyhandicapped(残疾的)motherwasweighingheavilyonhislittleshoulder.HeneededtherayofhopethatIwouldnotbeinawheelchairforever.Justmaybe,Ithought,Icouldusethisexperiencetoteachwhattodowhendisastersstrike.IneededsomethingbesidesmyphysicalhealingtosinkmyIrishstubbornnessinto—it’sthatpersonalitythatkeptmegoingthroughthetoughestchallengeofmylifeItdidn’ttakemelongtobeeimpatientwiththepacethedoctorswerewillingtogowithme.Ideterminedtolearneverythingtheyshowedme.Ineededtomakethingshappenmyway.Andbeingconfined(限制)toawheelchairtherestofmylifedidn’tfitintomyplans.Atfirst,Itaughtmyselftomovefromthebedtothewheelchair.Imadetinymovementsforweeks,afraidoffalling,butmoreafraidtojustlieinbed.Ireachedapointwheremyarmswerestrongenoughtocarrymeintothechair.Gettingoutofthechairandbackintobedprovedmoredifficult,butIsoondevelopedamethodofgrabbingthesheets.Ioftenwonderedwhatthenursesanddoctorswouldhavedoneifthey’dseenmestrugglingonmyown.OncesureIcouldreturnmyselftothebedfromthewheelchair,Ibegantouseawalkerthathadbeenleftinmyroombyaformerhospitalroommate.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打扰),Iwouldstarttotrain.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者遭遇严重车祸后双腿被石膏包裹，医生判定可能无法再行走只能坐轮椅，这让作者内心痛苦，同时也担心给十岁儿子带来心理负担。作者凭借自身的倔强，决定不依赖医生的缓慢进度，自行学习从床上移动到轮椅等动作，尽管过程艰难且充满危险，但依然坚持训练，希望能改变现状并给儿子树立榜样。伏笔以及回应：伏笔1：作者提到要用这次经历教导儿子面对灾难时该怎么做，为后文与儿子分享成果并给予他精神激励埋下伏笔，续写中儿子会从作者的努力中获得力量与成长。伏笔2：作者不满医生的治疗进度而决心按自己的方式行事，暗示后续训练会遇到更多困难但也会更坚定地克服，续写中会详细描述独自训练的艰辛与坚持。伏笔3：作者害怕永远坐在轮椅上影响儿子，这推动着她努力训练，续写中她的成功会给儿子带来希望和改变。伏笔4：从床上到轮椅的移动练习成功后，又尝试使用室友留下的助行器，预示着她会不断挑战自我，续写中训练难度会继续增加且她会持续突破。伏笔5：作者提到爱尔兰人的倔强性格支撑自己面对挑战，这一性格特点会贯穿她的训练过程，续写中她会凭借倔强克服重重困难取得更大进步。续写要点：第一段：情感线：孤独却坚定，充满对恢复行走的渴望，在训练过程中有对失败的恐惧但又不断自我鼓励。故事线：借助助行器在病房内缓慢挪动，每次只前进一小步，汗水湿透衣衫。尝试沿着病房走廊行走，不断摔倒又爬起，膝盖和手肘布满淤青。逐渐增加行走的距离和时间，尽管疲惫不堪但依然咬牙坚持，心中默念要给儿子希望。第二段：情感线：自豪与期待，希望儿子看到自己的努力和成果后能变得坚强勇敢，对未来充满信心。故事线：邀请儿子来到病房，在儿子面前自信地使用助行器行走。向儿子讲述训练过程中的艰辛与坚持，鼓励儿子在面对生活困难时也要勇往直前。儿子被作者的精神感动，紧紧拥抱作者，两人都对未来充满希望，家庭关系也更加紧密。主旨升华句：“Beliefistheunwaveringpassthatguidesusthroughthedarkeststormsoflife,leadingustoshoresofrecoveryandhope.”（信念是坚定的罗盘，引领我们穿越生命中最黑暗的风暴，抵达康复与希望的彼岸。）“Inthefaceofadversity,thepowerofselfbeliefcantransformlimitationsintosteppingstonesforextraordinaryachievements.”（面对困境，自我信念的力量可以将局限转化为取得非凡成就的垫脚石。）“Thejourneyofrecovery,fueledbybelief,notonlyhealsthebodybutalsokindlesaflameofinspirationintheheartsofthosewelove.”（由信念驱动的康复之旅，不仅治愈身体，也在我们所爱的人心中点燃鼓舞的火焰。）“Whenbelieftakesrootinoursouls,wecandefytheoddsandrewritethenarrativeofourlives,evenintheaftermathofalifealteringaccident.”（当信念扎根于我们的灵魂，我们可以挑战命运，改写人生故事，即使在经历改变人生的事故之后。）“Truestrengthliesnotintheabsenceofsetbacksbutintheunyieldingbeliefthatpropelsusforward,onedeterminedstepatatime.”（真正的力量不在于没有挫折，而在于推动我们一步一个坚定步伐向前的不屈信念。）写作示范一：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted,Iwouldstarttotrain.Igrippedthewalkertightlyandtookmyfirstshakystep.Itwasastruggle,butIrefusedtogiveup.Iinchedalongthecorridorofthehospital,mylegstremblingwitheachmovement.Ifellseveraltimes,buteachtimeIgotbackup,thefireofdeterminationburningbrighter.Ipracticedforhours,ignoringthepainandexhaustion.Iknewthateverystepwasastepclosertowalkingagainandgivingmysonthehopeheneeded.Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Iaskedmysontoetothehospital.Whenheenteredtheroom,Istoodupwiththewalkerandwalkedtowardshim.Hiseyeswidenedinamazementanddisbelief.Itoldhimaboutallthehardworkandperseveranceittook.Herantomeandhuggedmetightly.Icouldfeelhistearsonmyshoulder.Fromthatmomenton,Iknewthatmybeliefandeffortshadnotonlychangedmylifebutalsogivenmysonavaluablelessonaboutnevergivingup.写作示范二：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted,Iwouldstarttotrain.Iusedthewalkerasmysupportandslowlymademywayaroundtheroom.Ifocusedonmybalanceandtooksmall,cautioussteps.Iwasconstantlyonthevergeoffalling,butIkeptmymindset.Iextendedmytrainingtothehallway,whereIfacedthestaresofotherpatientsandnurses.Ididn’tcare.Iwasonamission.Ipracticeduntilmylegscouldnolongerholdme,andthenIrestedandstartedagain.Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Iarrangedformysontovisitme.Ashewalkedin,IshowedhimhowIcouldmovewiththewalker.Isharedwithhimthestoryofmytraining,thefalls,thepain,andthehope.Hewassilentatfirst,andthenasmilespreadacrosshisface.Hesaidhewasproudofme.Itoldhimthatheshouldalwaysbelieveinhimself,nomatterwhatchallengeshefaces.Webothknewthatthiswasaturningpointinourlives,andourbondgrewstrongerthroughthisexperience.【答案】Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn'tbeinterrupted(打扰),Iwouldstarttotrain.Witheachpassingday,Ibecamemoreskilledatmovingmyselfintothechairandsoughtgreaterprogress.Holdingawalkingstick,Islowlyputmyweightonmyfeetandrosetomyfeet.Difficultasitwasattheverybeginning,thephrase“"giveup"neverpoppe