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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Bobhadbeenjoblessforthepastfewmonths,andhisfamilycouldhardlymakeendsmeet.Buttodayitwashischancetoturnanewpage.Bobwaswaitingforthebus,readytoattendtheinterviewatZaneLawpanywithhisonlysuiton.Heknewallhehadtodowaspasstheinterview.Suddenlybigraindropsstartedfallingfromthesky.Boblookedupinsadness.Peoplehurriedlysoughtforshelter.Givinguphisinitialplanofwaitingforthebus,hefollowedthem.Pushinghiswaythroughcrowdsofpeople,Bobrantothenearesttrainstationtoshelterfromtherain.“Mypreviousplandidn’twork,butperhapsIcouldstillmakeitifItakethetrain,”hethought.Anelderlyladyaccidentallyknockedintohim,causingthecontentsofhisbriefcasetofallout.“I’msorry,Ididn’t…”shesaid.Bobcutheroff,signingitwasfineandhurriedlygatheredhisthings.Whenhereachedtheplatform,hewasdisappointedtoseethatnoticeshadbeenputupeverywhereinformingofatenminutepostponement.What’sworse,thefloorwasflooded.Panicbrokeout,followedbyadisorderedrushtotheexitswhereabottleneckhadformed.AsBobmadehiswaytotheexit,hesawtheelderlyladyMarywhohadknockedintohimearlier.Shewashobbling(蹒跚)amongthecrowds,holdingherwalkingstickwithherweakhands.Fearwaswrittenclearlyonherfaceasshedidn’tseehergrandsonDavidwhohadpromisedtopickheruptovisithisnewlyestablishedZaneLawpany.Tomakemattersworse,herphonewasoutofpowerandcouldn’treachDavid.“Auntie,letmehelpyou,”Bobsaidandwithoutwaitingforareply,heplacedherhandonhisrightarm.Aftersometime,theymadeitoutofthefloodedplatform.NotwantingtoleaveMaryalone,hedecidedtostaywithher.Afterall,therewasnowayhecouldmakeitforhisinterviewnow.Hewassadatthethoughtofmissingtheinterview.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:Bob失业数月,家庭经济困难,他身着唯一的西装准备去ZaneLawpany面试。途中突遇大雨,他改乘火车,却遭遇列车晚点且站台被淹。在混乱中,他遇到之前撞到他的老妇人Mary,她因与答应接她去参观孙子David新成立的ZaneLawpany的David走散而惊慌失措,Bob出于善良决定帮助她,放弃了面试机会,因此十分沮丧。伏笔与回应:伏笔:Bob要去ZaneLawpany面试。回应:后来发现Mary的孙子David正是ZaneLawpany的相关人员。伏笔:Mary提到David要接她去参观其新成立的公司。回应:表明David在公司有一定地位,为后文帮助Bob埋下伏笔。伏笔:Bob因帮助Mary错过面试而沮丧。回应:后文David为他提供新机会,让他心情转变。伏笔:站台被淹人群慌乱。回应:凸显出Bob在这种混乱中仍能帮助Mary的善良品质。伏笔:Mary没电无法联系David。回应:使得她只能依赖Bob的帮助,也让故事得以进一步发展。续写要点:第一段:Bob向Mary诉说错过面试的难过,Mary安慰他,两人交流中逐渐熟悉。突然Mary惊喜地发现David公司的一些独特之处(如公司标志在附近建筑上),Bob也被吸引,暂时忘却烦恼。第二段:David赶来,看到Bob照顾Mary很感激。了解Bob错过面试后,被他的善良打动,决定给他在公司一个机会。Bob喜出望外,深刻体会到善良总会有回报。情感线:Bob从最初对错过面试的极度沮丧,到帮助Mary过程中的无奈与平静,再到与Mary交流时的舒缓,最后因David给予机会而转为惊喜与感恩。故事线:Bob准备面试遇雨改乘火车受阻,帮助Mary,与Mary交流,David赶来,Bob获新机会。主旨升华句:Kindnessislikeaboomerangthatalwaysreturns.(善良就像回旋镖,总会回报自身。)Inthejourneyoflife,helpingothersispavingthewayforourownblessings.(在人生旅途中,帮助他人就是为自己的福泽铺路。)Agooddeedtodaymayopenanunexpecteddoortomorrow.(今日的善举可能开启明日意想不到的大门。)Truekindnessnevergoesunrewarded,thoughtherewardmayeinunexpectedforms.(真正的善良总会得到回报,尽管回报可能以意想不到的形式出现。)Theseedsofkindnessweplantwillsurelybearthefruitsoffortuneinduecourse.(我们种下的善良种子必将在适当的时候结出幸运之果。)写作示范一:Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”Bobtoldherabouthisunemploymentandthemissedinterview.Marypattedhishandandsaid,“Don'tloseheart.Theremustbeabetterplan.”Astheywaited,Marypointedtoalogoonanearbybuilding,sayingitwasfromDavid'spany.Bobwasintriguedandstartedaskingaboutthepany.TheirconversationmadeBobforgethissadnessforawhile.Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.Davidwasworriedsickabouthisgrandma.WhenheheardwhatBobhaddone,hewasdeeplytouched.HesaidtoBob,“Yourkindnessisreallyprecious.Ihappentohaveapositionavailableinmypany.Wouldyouliketojoinus?”Bobwasoverjoyed.Herealizedthathisactofkindnesshadbroughthimanewopportunity.Itwasareminderthathelpingothersislikesowingseedsofhope,whichwillbloomintobeautifulsurprises.写作示范二:Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”Bobexplainedhissituationwithaheavyheart.Marysmiledgentlyandsaid,“Dear,everycloudhasasilverlining.”Theyfoundabenchtositon.MarysharedsomestoriesaboutDavid'sstruggletoestablishthepany.Boblistenedattentively,hismoodgraduallylifting.Hebegantothinkthatmaybethissetbackwasnottheend.Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.DavidembracedMarytightlyandthankedBobprofusely.LearningthatBobhadsacrificedhisinterview,Davidsaid,“Yourselflessactshouldberewarded.IcanofferyouajobinZaneLawpany.Weneedpeoplewithakindheartlikeyou.”Bob'seyeslitupwithgratitude.Thisexperiencetaughthimthatkindnessisacurrencythatalwayshasvalueandcanbuyunexpectedtreasuresinlife.参考答案1Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”Bobheavedasighandrecountedhismisfortuneoflosingthejobinterviewduetohelpingher.Maryfeltapangofguiltbutthensaid,“Youareagoodsoul.I'msuresomethingbetterawaits.”Astheysatwaiting,MaryrecollectedthatDavidhadmentionedthepanywasclosetothestation.Bob'searsperkedup,hisinterestsomewhatpiqued.Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.Davidwasvisiblyrelievedtofindhisgrandmasafe.AfterhearingBob'sstory,hesaidwithadmiration,“Yourkindnessinthischaoticsituationisremarkable.Wehaveanopeninginourpany,andIbelieveyou'dbeagreatfit.”Bob'sfacebrokeintoawidesmile.Henowunderstoodthathisactofkindnesshadledhimtoanewandpromisingpath.参考答案2No
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